Left Right Left Returns

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Posted: 9 years ago
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left right left returns
part 1

ye kahaani h unn kuch khaas cadets ki jinhone best cadets hone ka saboot diya sabhi ke background alag...life standard alag...par finally ek doosre ki kamzori ban baithe...NDMA- national defense military academy... in Bhopal...ek time tha ki ye India ki best academy hua krti thi par aaj...Sab kuch badal gaya hai...isiliye shayad sau me se koi ek hi true soldier ban pata h...yaha BC chandlok...bahut hi strict hua karte thy par training ke vakt ek cadet ki maut hone ki wajah se inhe apni strictness kam karni padi jiska faida cadets ne bahut uthaya...shayad yahi karan h ki aaj academy aisi ho gai h...is academy ko jarurat inn logo ki jinme kuch kar guzarne ka junoon ho... na sirf cadets ki balki ek complete faculty kii aur finally aise hausle se bhaare cadets aur faculty ne NDMA me entry le li hai...so here I introduce my characters...
faculty member...
1...BC CHANDLOK
NDMA ke principal...
2..MAJOR NAIR- ye h new vice principal of NDMA.he really loves his country..unke training dene andaz bhale hi bahut strict h par Jo bhi karte h sahi hi karte h...par haa ye ladkiyo ko bilkul nahi pasand karte...
3..NAVEEN SINGH ALHUWALIA
he is a captain...very determine captain...jab usse pata chala ki NDMA ki kaisi halat h to any ne fauran apna transfer karva liya...
4.CAPTAIN SHALINI SINGHAL...
she also came with naveen to join NDMA as docter to give physical training to cadets...
5..SUBEDAR SURI JI
ye mess ke saath saath rifle ki taiyari katvaate thy..
cadets introduction...
6.NAINA SINGH
very beautiful and determined girl...she joins academy kyuki iska dada ek colonel thy aur apne dada ji ko isne promise kiya tha ki vo unki tarah ek true soldier banegi...
7.POOJA GHAI
she joins the academy kyuki iske sheher me ladkiyo ki koi izzat nahi hoti thi issiliye vo academy join krti h taaki vo in logo ko karara jawab de sake Jo ladkiyo ko paer ki jooti samajhte h...
8.RAJVEER SHEKHAWAT
very handsome charming and determine cadet.he joins academy because he want to serve his country
9..AALEKH SHARMA
fully tapori type boy. ye suri ji ke care taker ka beta h bhale hi thoda tapori type ka h par banda bada nek h issiliye suri ji BC se request karte h aur academy join karate h
10.ALI BHAIG
inke academy join krne ki inspiration h inke papa Jo army me shaheed ho gaye thy aur inke babu ki yahi khwahish thi ki unka beta army join kare...
11.YUDHWANSH SAHNI
well...inki inspiration khud inki kamzori h aur college ke kuch nalakyak dost Jo hamesha uski personality par comments karte rehte thy.
12.AMARDEEP HUDA
bilkul sahi pakda h ye to apne haryanvi huda sahab h but 2 year cadet.usme ego bahut h par dil ka bahut accha h...
baaki ke agar koi character agar aayege to ussi vakt introduce kar dongi
love anshika

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Posted: 9 years ago
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left right left retuns part 2 pichli baar mai ek character ka into karana bhool gai thi its laulita sen so scene start in ndma jaha par faculty ki meeting chal rahi thi bc - meri special request par mujhe aap jaise kaabil officers bheje gai h...mai chahta hoon ki jis tarah ndma ka grade neeche gira h usse kai guna tezi se iska grade upar jana chahiye naveen - yes sir...aap chinta mat kijiye sir...hum poori mehnat karenge aur cadets ko behtar soldier banayege bc - exactly captain... this is what i need...iss saal cadet ki bharti ke vakt hame 6 aise cadet mile h jinki performance kabil e tareef h...this is the file...go through it ... ( shalini looks at the file) shalini- you r right sir nair- dr. shalini may i see it.. shalini - sure major ( shalini handover the file to nair he looks at the file and reads the information) nair- cd. rajveer singh shekhwat... cd. ali baig ...cd. aalekh sharma ...cd. Yudhwansh Sahni ...cd. naina singh... cd. pooja ghai...( then to bc ) par sir kya aapko lagta h ki ye ladkiya is kabil h bhi ya nahi... naveen- kyu naha major nair...aaj ke jamane me ladkiyo ko underestimate karna bevkoofi h...is time me ladkiya kisi se kam nahi h aur ndma ki rule book bhi yahi kehti h ki ladka aur ladki me koi difference nahi suri ji- bilkul sahi captain... aur vaise bhi is jamaane me kaun ladka kaun ladki...jo apne aap ko behtar sabit karle vahi damdaar h... shalini- bc mujhe ye nahi samajh me aa raha h ki aaone apne hit list me cd. sahni aur cd. aalekh ko kyu rakha h jabki cd. sahni ke physical training me marks kam h aur cd. aalekh ke written test me.. bc - yahi to challenge hota h dr shalini... ki hame best ko " the best " banana hota h ...baaki ke cadet ki performance outstanding h par in dono cadets me thoda sa defect h aur aap sabhi ko inki kamzori khatm karni hongi...so ab aap mujhe apne subject ka introduction de ...major nair nair-sir mai cadets ki drill ke saath saath rifle trainindonga from 1st year to 3rd year... bc - par major mai chahta hoon ki pehle aap 3rd year ko takeover kare...aur haa strictness itni jyada na ho ki koi bada nuksaan ho jaye... nair - don't worry sir ...par mai 3rd year ke saath saath 1st year ko bhi takeover karna chahta hoon bc - are you sure major... nair- yes sir. naveen - sir mai cadets ko drill ke saath hi unhe strategy communication aur cemograde and counsilment ke bare me baatauga bc - good ...dr shalini.. shalini- sir mai cadet ko physical training dongi aur unhe zakhm ko sahi karna sikaugi... bc - subedaar suri ji suri ji- sir mai mess in charge ke saath unhe rifle ki additional training donga BC - and miss laulita sen laulita- come again bc - mera matlab aapke subjects laulita- sir mai girls ki care taker hone ke saath unhe army ke subjects padhaugi bc - perfect... aur mai chahta hoon ki aap sab aapas me discuss karke ndma ke kuch khaas aur new rule banaye aur academy ke har notice board me paste ho jaane chahiye... nair- sire sir ( scene moves to naina .vo apni bikedrive kar rahi thi.roads ke dono side ghane jungle thy.naina dhekti h ki aage do raste h front and right vo confuse thi she stops her bike) naina - oh fo ...aage to do raste h kis taraf jana h...ekkaam krti hoon dadu ko phone kar leti hoon...shit Naina tere paas toh phone hi nahi h...i think right hi jaana hai. ( saamne se ek tempo aa rahi thi. Naina starts her bike vo jaise hi right side ko apni bike turn krti h usi vakt jungle se Rajveer vo road me pahuchta h aur dono ki aapas me takkar ho jati h dono beech road me girr jaate h aur ussi vakt vo tempo Jo unke paas pahuch gayi thi issiliye liye vo tezi se apna rasta vapas turn karte h jisse uss tempo me ladde huesaare phool raj aur Naina pe gir jaate h ...dono phoolo me ladde hue thy both gets up... ) Naina- what the hell... dekh ke nahi chal sakte kya...ya phir suicide karne ke liye tumhe meri hi bike mili thiii... ( raj angrily looks at Naina)... TO BE continued love anshika plz like and comment..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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left right left returns part 3 raj aur naina dono phoolo me ladde hue thy both gets up... naina- what the hell... dekh ke nahi chal sakte kya...ya phir suicide karne ke liye tumhe meri hi bike mili thiii...( raj angrily looks at naina)... raj- excuse me... dekh ke to aap nahi chal sakti aur kya kaha aap ne suicide...bhala mai kyu suicide karne laga...ek to apni galti nahi manti aur blame mujhe kar rahi h... naina- galti meri nahi tumhaari h...is tarah achanak jungle se aata h kya raj- kyu...kya aap ne kabhi jungle me saer nahi ki h kya naina- whattt...saer...vo bhi jungle me how foolish of you... raj - mind your language... vo to aap ladki h aur mai ladkiyo ki bahut izzat karta hoon varna mai aapko batata ki kaun fool h aur kaun smart hai... naina- mai ladki hoon to kya...batau kya kar loge... tumhaari batoon se to yahi lagta h ki awara gunde lagte ho... raj - mujhe lagta h ki aap mentally disturbed h...mai ek izzatdaar ghar ka shareef beta h naina - oh really... raj - dekhiye ...mai aapse behed nahi karna chahta aap jana jaa rahi thi kripa karke vaha jaye... ( naina gives raj an killing look and left) raj - thank god ...chali gai... (raj too left) (pooja jo ndma ke bahar apne samaan ke saath khadi thi...uske haath me chot lagi thi jiski vajah se vo apna samaan nahi utha pa rahi thi...aas paas koi tha bhi nahi...thodi derr baad ek auto vaha pe rukti hai...usme se ek ladka bahar aata h vo autowale ko paise deta hai aur academy ki taraf jaane lagta uski nazar pooja pe padti h aur uske haath me bhi jisme chot lagi thi...he comes near her...) ladka - kya hum aapki madad kar de pooja- thanks... par tera network toh already busy h... ladka- (confuse hokar)..jiii pooja - arey mera matlab h ki tumhaare paas to already khud ka samaan h toh mera samaan kaise utha pauge ... ladka - aap chinta na kare him manage kar lenge... ( phir vo ladka kisi tarah pooja ka bhi samaan utha leta h aur pooja uska chota wala bag leti h...dono academy me jaate h aur apni hazari lagvaake vo dono girls hostel me pahucte h vo ladka hostel me kadam rakhne hi wala thi ki pooja chillai...) pooja- rukoo.. ladka - kya hua... pooja- teri call waste hone wali thi ( boy again in a confused manner- jiii) ladka-oh ho..mera matlab yedekh is board me like hua boys not allowed... tum to k kaam karo...samaan yahi chod do mai kisi tarah manage kar longi...help ke liye thanks... ladka - Jii sukriya...( vo pooja ka samaan rakh ke Jane lagta h... pooja building ke andar Jane wali thi vo ladka usse rokta h) ladka- Jii suniye... pooja- kya hua ladka- vo hamara bag.. pooja- oh sorry ...(she gives his bag to him...pooja Jane lagi h toh vo ladka usse phir se rokta h ) ladka- ek minute jara rukiye ( vo ladka apne bag se antiseptic tube nikal ke deta h ) ladka- ye aap apne jakhm me laga lijiye...ghav raat tak bhar jayega... (pooja takes it) pooja - thanks ( phir vo ladka Jane lagta h tab pooja usse rokti h ) pooja - tumne meri itni help ki aur apna naam bhi nahi bataya ladka- ji hamara naam h Ali ...Ali Baig ... pooja- nice name...mera naam pooja h ...pooja Ghai...OK chal bye kal milte h... vo ladka I mean ali- jii ( Ali left phir pooja kisi tarah ek orderly ko lekar aati h vo uska samaan le jata h aur pooja bhi apne room ki taraf jaati h ...pooja ke jaane ke baad Naina bhi hostel me kadam rakhti h vo bas teen char hi kadam hi chali thi ki achanak ek room ka ek darwaza khulta h jisme se ek ladki ek ladka ko apne room me se dhakka dekar nikalti h...vo ladka seedhe jaane Naina se takra jata h ) ladka- oh mummy ji aaj toh lottery hi lag gai ek ne dakka diya to doosri ne haath thaam liya... Naina- kyaaa... ladka- oh Jii kuch nahi...vise my self huda...amar deep huda...ji aapka kya naam h... Naina - tumse matlab... huda- chal accha na bata ...par aaha Teri aadaiye bilkul phoolan type wali... naina- accha ...vaise tum girls hostel me me kya kar rahe ho...tumhe pata nahi h kya ki boys ka girls hostel me aana allow nahi h huda- oh vo kya h ki... ki mai apna rasta bhatak gaya tha 1st year cadet hoon na naina- oh really to uss ladki ke room me kya kar rahe thy aur uss ne tumhe apne room se dakke dekar kyu nikala... huda- tu to bahut sawal jawab karti h. ...vo kya h na kii mai uss se rasta poochne gaya tha par tha par vo to meri peeche hi pad gayi...jab Maine usse mana kiya to usne mujhe dakka de ke nikaall diya...par koi nahi mai jaa raha hoon...vaise bhi Ab to milna bana hi rahega miss phoolan...( naina raises her eyebrow looking at huda and giving an irritating look). vo meri mummy Jii kehti h kii jab do ajnabi yoon apas me takraate h to unka dobara milna pakka h...chalta hoon ...bye... ( huda left and Naina too) andhera ho gaya raj academy me pahucta h aur dhekta h kii academy ke gates band ho chuke h ) Raj- uss batmeez ladki ki wajah se mere paer me chot lag gai aur mai late ho gaya..Ab to deewar se kood ke Jana padega ... ( phir Raj kisi tarah academy ki deewar se kood ke andar pahucta h) Naina bhi apne room me pahuch jaati h..room me pooja apna samaan unpack kar rahi thi vo Naina ko dekh kar kehti h... pooja- hii to tum meri room partner ho Naina- haa pooja- I am pooja naina- i am Naina pooja- finally ...handset me dual sim fit ho hi gaya Naina - kya matlab pooja- mera matlab ki finally mujhe meri roommate mil hi gai...vaise tum thak gai hongi na ...jau fresh ho jau...mai ja rahi hoon sone tum fresh hoke so Jana ...OK good night... Naina- yaa...good night... ( Naina apna samaan rakh ke washroom ke andar chali jaati h...udhar raj chupke se BC ke office ke bahar Jo notice board laga tha usme apna room no dekhta aur hostel ki ye taraf jaane lagta h par uska poora dhyan Naina par ) raj - agar vo ladki mujhe dobara mili na to usse chodhuga nahi...kitni acche mood ke saath mai academy ja raha tha par us ne Sab spoil kar diya... (he enters the hostel .apne khayalo me uss ne dhayan hi nahi diya ki vo boys hostel ki jagah girls hostel me aa gaya h .vo apne room me aata.lights off thi. raj ke paer me chot lagi thi aur chalen ki wajah se vo bahut thak gaya issiliye vo seedhe bed me late jata h aur so jata h ...usse is baat ka Zara bhi andaza nahi tha ki vo girls hostel me h vo bhi Naina ke room me...thadi derr baad Naina washroom se bahar aati h jaise hi vo apne bad me baithi h vo dhekti h ki uske bed me already koi so raha h... Naina- ye mere bed me kaun so raha h ...pooja to USS bed me so rahi h phir is me kaun h ...andhera hone ki wajah se usse kuch dikh bhi nahi raha tha .Naina kas ke usko dakka deti h Jo uske bed me so raha tha...raj bed se gir jata h Naina tyrant light on krti h aur jaise hi mudti h ... Naina - tum ... raj- tum...( both give a killing look to each other recalling their first encounter and fight) TO BE CONTAINED LOVE ANSHIKA...plz like and comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for reading this.
Edited by AnShiKa1234 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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left right left returns part 4 raj bed se gir jata h naina turant light on krti h aur jaise hi mudti h ... naina - tum ... raj- tum...( both give a killing look to each other recalling their first encounter and fight) naina- tum yaha kar kya rahe ho ...vo bhi girls hostel me .. raj- ye girls hostel nahi boys hostel hnaina- zara nazre ghuma kar dekho...its girls hostel (raj realized that its actually girls hostel) naina- mera peecha kar rahe thy bolo varna abhi jaakar warden ko bula kar laati hoon ( tabhi vo dono kisi ke footsteps ki aawaz sunte h.naina tezi se chillane wali thi par raj apna haath tightly uske muh par rakh deta h...both look at each other for sometime ...then naina tries to free herself but fails aur raj uska dhyan un footsteps pe yha ...jaise hi aawaz aana band ho jaati h..vo apna haath hata leta h) naina- ( tezz aawaz me)tumhaari himmat bhi ( raj intrupts ) raj- dheere bolo...sabko bulwaugi kya... naina- wahi to chahti hoon main...abhi jakar warden ko bula kar lati hoon ( naina was about to go but she is stopped by raj's words ) raj- theek h jau ...bata do...phir mai bhi poori academy ko batauga ki kis tarah tumne mujhe jaan se maarne ki koshish kii... .( naina is totally stunned) naina- maine tumhe jaan se marne ki koshish nahi kii...ok .raj- haa nahi kii...par ye baat sirf tum aur mai jaate h aur koi nahi ( pooja jo so rahi thi par shor gul hone ki wajah se wo utha jati h and shocked to find a boy in their room) raj- so...agar mai academy se bahar nikala gaya to tumhe bhi apne saath bahar nikaal kar rahonga... ( pooja is all confused lekin phir vo apni hockey stick nikalti h air chillati hai)pooja- oyeee ( raj turns...pooja is totally shocked to see him) pooja- (in mesmerized tone) shahrukh khan... ( raj naina confused) raj- dekhiye mai janbujh kar girls hostel me nahi aaya...vo bas galti se... (naina intrupts) naina- galti se...galti se tum meri bike ke neeche aa gaye...galti se tum girls hostel aa gaye ..aur na jane kya -kya tum galti se kitni galtiya kar baitho ge...mujhe to ye nahi samajh me aa raha h kii iss academy ne tumhe admission de kaise diya... raj- kyu??? jab tum jaisi batmeez aur careless ladki ko admission de sakte h to phir mujh jaise mannered aur caring ladki ko to de hi sakte h naina- vo to dikh hi rah h ki kitne mannered insaan ho (raj isse pehle kuch bolta kii tabhi door pe knock ki aawaz aati h) laulita- cd. singh and cd. ghai... open the door...ye kaisi aawaze aa rahi h ( naina door open hi karne wali thi ki raj dheere se bolta h.- yaad rakhna agar mai academy se out hua toh tumhe bhi bahar karke hi niklunga...understand...( raj apna samaan leta h aur window se kood jata h.naina opens the door)laulita- cadets...lights out hone ke baad ye rooms me se kaisi aawaze aa rahi thi.. naina- pata nahi mam.. laulita- come again.. naina- mam..actually voo... (naina remembers raj warning) vo mam...hum bhi aawaz sun kar uth gaye thy...aawaz hamare room se nahi kisi aur jagah se aa rahi hai... laulita- are u sure cadets... pooja- yes mam...mujhe lagta h ki academy me koi chor ghus aaya h...is liye maine apni hockey stick bhi nikaal lii h.. laulita- academy me chor...impossible... aur ye windows kyu khuli h ( laulita window ki taraf jaane lagti h..par naina turant window band kar deti h) naina- mam hum bas check kar rahe thy ki aawaz kahi baharse to nahi aa rahi thilaulita- fine cadets...ab tum dono so jau aur agar dobara aawaz aage toh mujhe inform karna..khud investigation mat karne lagna... ( laulita left phir naina aur pooja bhi so jaati h) TO BE CONTINUED...LOVE ANSHIKAplz like and comment ...,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi.. its different bt its good.
continue it n pls update soon.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story line
Now both raj naina are cadets
Interesting
Bt fir se ye hudda aa gya dono ke bich mai
Do update soon
Nd pm me too

Luv milleee 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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LEFT RIGHT LEFT PART 5 BOYS HOSTEL ...jaha par ek room me char cadets reh sakte thy as room were very large... (Yudi so raha tha...Aalekh khidki me baitha hua tha aur daaru pee raha tha...aur Ali Jo bed pe leta tha aur sone ki koshish kar raha tha par Aalekh ki wajah se so nahi paa raha tha...kaafi derr ignore karne ke baad vo gusse se Aalekh ke paas jata h...) Ali- dekhiye aap ko hum pehle bhi samjha chuke h ki hamare saamne ye shaarab na piye... (Aalekh ignores him )...aapko samajh me nahi aa raha h kya ki hum kya keh rahe h...hum abhi jaakar BC se aapki complain kar denge... Aalekh- tu kyu khaali fokat apun ka dimaag kyu kharab kar raha h...tu apun ko do baar pehle bhi ye dhamki de chuka h ...agar tere ko BC ko batana hi h to jaa na aur agar tere ko mere se dar lag raha h to tension na le apun tere ko kuch nahi karega... Ali- hum chup isliye nahi h ki hum aapse darte h balki isliye kyuki hum aapki complain kar aapko academy se bahar nahi nikalwana chahte jisse aapka carrier barbaad ho jaye...aur hamare abbu ne hame sikhaya h kii koi agar galat kaam kare to apni aakhe nahi band kar leni chahiye balki unki aakhe kholni chahiye Jo galat kaam karte h...aur apna na sahi to kam se kam apne pariwar walo ka to lihaaz kijiye... ...( Aalekh angrily throws the bottle.. But raj comes and catches it...) Raj- academy me sharaab ...interesting... Aalekh- ( khud se )ek kam tha Jo doosra aa gaya ...ab inka bhi pravachan sun na padega... Raj- vaise inta risky bhara kaam h kiska... Ali- inka...( Yudi ki bhi neend tut jaati h ...he gets up) Yudi- tum dono phir se shuru ho gaye...come on yaar ...raat ke ek baj rahe h... Ali- subah ke... Yudi- oh yaa...( his eye falls on raj) heyyy you... Raj- I am Rajveer Singh Shekhwat... Your room mate... Yudi- hii Rajveer... Raj- just raj... Yudi- OK raj...( they all give their introduction) Raj- vaise abhi hamari training start bhi nahi hui aur yaha Jung bhi chidd gayi... Aalekh- mere ko kyu bolta h usko bol na ...jab dheko tab shuru ho jata h... Ali- humne kya kiya ...( Yudi intrupts) Yudi- stop it guys...tum dono ke beech me mai piss raha hoon ...just leave this...aur hame so Jana chahiye ...subah 6 baje BC ko report karna h... Aalekh- chinta khahe ko karta h...jab tak Mann kare so Lena ...yaha bhale hi aalarm 4 baje ko bajta h par koi 7 baje se pehle hilta bhi nahi h... Yudi- sorry chief par academy ke changes ke baare me tumko nahi pata... BC ne phir se strictness ki patri pakad li h...new faculty team ne bhi kuch new rules nikale h and its going to be tough ... Raj- correct and most important kii har rule strictly follow hona chahiye...varna hame seedhe academy ke bahar ka rasta dikhaya jayega...So let's go and take some rest kyuki kal se hamari left right left shuru ho jaeygi... ( finally every one retires to their bed.. ...) NEXT DAY Its 4am aalarm baj chuke thy...orderly room me ja ja kar cadets ko utha rahe... Its 5 pm sabhi cadets uth gaye thy because of BC's strictness... Shalini aur naveen dono apne apne room se nikalte h and both met in midway ... Shalini- good morning captain... Nav- good morning u too captain... Shalini- aapki aadat nahi gai na captain... Call me doctor shalini... Nav- yaa...Dr shalini... Shalini- cool...vaise captain aaj hamara first day NDMA me aapko kaisa lag raha... Nav- interesting question... Well... If so true ...I am feeling so excited...and for this academy... I can see a big challenge for us to deal with... Shalini- I agree... Seriously captain...is academy ne bahut kuch dheka ...pehle jeet then haat...ek vakt tha jab ye academy India ki best academy thi par Ab Sab kuch badal chuka...and only we can Change it ... Nav- right... But ye tabhi ho sakta h jab cadets bhi hame support kare...( shalini nods in yes then both left with determined expressions...) 6 baj chuke thy...sabhi cadets ground me pahuch chuke thy...jab raj Naina ki nazar ek doosre me padti h to dono bhuke sher ki tarah ek doosre ko dhekte hai ...maano mauka mile to turant khaa jaye... Pooja admires raj as shahrukh khan...faculty members bhi aa chuke thy ...BC bhi aate h..and goes towards the stage...) BC- firstly I want to welcome all new cadets in my academy... Aap Sab yaha bahut ummeedo ko saath aaye h...ek true soldier banne ke liye...desh ko serve karne ke liye ...aur jis determination aur spirit ke saath yaha aaye h mai chahta hoon ki yahi determination aur spirit aapki aakhiri saas tak rahe...and secondly... Jo bahut hi important h ki is saal 1st year aur 2nd year cadets ki training combine ki jaati h kyuki pichle saal aapki training aache we nahi hui thi and I want all cadet to support me. ... (Huda and other 2nd year boys smile... Huda' s eye are just on Naina...he stares at her...Naina ki bhi nazar uss pe padti h par vo usko irritating sa look deke mu pher leti h...) BC- and cadets ...I want you all to follow new as Well as previous rule strictly... I don't want any issue or mess up other wise u will be out of the academy... Are you getting my point... huda's friend- huda bhai ...lagta h BC ko pehle wali bimaari ho gayi h...strictness kii... Huda- sahi bolta h...bilkul mere khadoos tau kii tarah...tujhe pata h jab bhi vo mere ghar aate thy to mai apna room lock kar leta tha ya phir bhaag jata tha aur tab tak nahi laut ta tha jab vo chale jaate thy... BC- silence cadets... Major nair aap 3rd year cadets ko le jaaye aur unki drills start kar de...( major nair left with 3 rd year cadets) BC- well...kal hamare paas ek girl cadet ki complain aayi h kii ek boy cadet girls hostel me ghus gaya thaa..,... ( all are shocked and raj the most) Jo bhi vo cadet h saamne aaye... Raj thinks- toh usne meri baat Nahi maani...koi baat nahi...mai fas gaya to Ab tumhe bhi fasa ke hi jauga... BC- fine...mai hi uss cadet ka naam batata hoon..( raj gets tensed he looks at Naina and Naina she also looks at him and gives a mischievous smile... Raj is super tensed... TI BE CONTINUED PLZ LIKE AND COMMENT Love anshika*****************
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PART 6
Sorry for updating late ...i was busy these days i hope u all will understand...so here is the next part...in ground jaha par BC lecture de rahe thy...Aur USS cadet ke baare me baat kar rahe thy Jo girls hostel me Gus gaya tha...
BC- fine...mai hi uss cadet ka naam batata hoon..( raj gets tensed he looks at Naina and Naina she also looks at him and gives a mischievous smile... Raj is super tensed...raj apna paer aage rakhne hi wala tha ki BC kehte h...
BC- 2nd year cadet ...amardeep huda...
(Huda is totally shocked...)
BC- cadet huda...step out...
Huda' s friend- lagta h aaj tu gaya...par chinta kyu karta h...lecture hi to sunna h...ek kaam se sunn ke doosre se nikal Lena...
( raj looks at Naina who is continuously smiling seeing raj tensed face...raj samajh jata h ki Naina usse daraana chahti thi...huda bhi aage aata h...)
BC- cd. huda...aap to 2nd year boy cadets ke head cadet h ...humne aapse ye umeed nahi ki thi... aap shayad bhool rahe h kii girls hostel me kisi boy cadet ka Jana pehle se hi restricted h ... Aur jaisa Maine abhi kaha h ki koi bhi rules todega...usse punishment milengi and it starts from u...jab sabhi cadets chale jaeyge tab aap akele ek bunker banaeyge vo bhi sirf 10 minutes me...understand..
Huda- yes sir( then thinks) oh Teri aaj to achhi khasi watt lag gayi...is phoolan ne to mujhe clean chit hi kar diya...
BC- and cadets aap apni text copy me daily ka secdule note karenge ...Jo ki him pehle a notice board me likh denge...and most important thing for 1st year cadets ki theek do hafte baad hum 1st year ke liye ek head boy cadet aur ek head girl cadet choose karenge..jisse bhi isme intrest h ...vo prepare rahe...now u all dismiss ...
( all left except huda and suri ji...phir huda apna task poora karna shuru karta h)
MESS MEIN...
( Raj Ali Yudi Aur Aalekh ek saath ek table me baithe hue thy aur breakfast kar rahe thy...raj ke dimaag me aaj subah vali baat ghum rahi thi...then he thinks- samajhte kya h vo apne aap ko...ek to batmeez hi Aur attitude to aasman se bhi upar...us ne janbujh kar mujhe darane ki koshish ki...I will not leave her...( then he controls himself) calm down raj...calm down...tum kyu us ladki ke baare me soch rahe ho... Tum is academy me ladkiyo se jaghda karne nahi balki apne desh ke liye aaye ho...apne mission ke liye aaye ho...apne desh ko serve karne ke liye...so just focus on your goal...( he then start eating his break fast)
Aalekh ke dimaag me bhi kuch chal raha tha ...vo idhar idhar dekhta h ki koi uski taraf dekh to nahi raha h...phir vo apni pocket se daaru ki bottle nikalta h...Ali ko daaru ki smell aati h ...he sees the bottle in Aalekh's hand...)
Ali- ( dheere se) ye aap phir se shuru ho gaye...vo bhi subah- subah...
Aalekh- ye daaru apun ki dawa h uske bagaer apun hil bhi nahi sakta...
Yudi- chief...ye kya kar rahe ho...kisi ne dekh kiya to gadbad ho jayegi...seedhe academy ke bahar hi jaeyge...
Aalekh- tu tension kyu leta h ...apun ke paas har cheez ka solution h...
( Aalekh mix the alcohol with milk...)
Aalekh- dekha Ab kisi ko nahi pata chalega...
( raj smiles and shakes his head like ye kabhi nahi sudherenge...ussi vakt pooja vaha unke paas aa jaati h )
Pooja- hii Ali ...
Ali- Jii aap yaha...kyu...
Pooja- vo tujhe kal ke liye thanks bolna tha kyu ki tune bina signal ke mera network catch kar kiya tha Aur ye medicine lautani thi na issiliye...( Ali takes the medicine from pooja...Aalekh ka dhyan apni sharaab pe tha kyuki sharaab ki smell aa rahi thi...)
Pooja- aacha mai chalti hoon (pooja Jane lagti ... Aalekh get relieved but suddenly pooja stops)
Pooja- ye ajeeb si smell kaisi aa rahi h...( all get tensed...pooja ki nazar ussi glass me padti h...vo usse haath me leti h...)
Pooja- ye kya h...
Aalekh- kuch nahi ...milkshake h...( pooja usse smell karti h and is totally shocked...)
Pooja- ye toh...( Aalekh turant uske haath se glass cheenta h Aur bagal wali chair me baithata h...)
Aalekh- ssshhh...
Pooja- tu kya mujhe budhu samajhte h Jo milkshake Aur sharaab me fark nahi samajhti..
Aalekh- ek to yaha Sab ko samajhna padta h...meri maa dheere bol...Aur vaise bhi ye apun ki dawa h...fit rahne ke liye peena padta h...pooja- dawa Aur vo bhi ye sharaab...chal ja kisi Aur ko bevkoof banana...
Ali- pooja aap yaha se jaeyge...hum yaha par Sab dekh lenge...
Yudi- and please kisi se kahiyega mat...
Pooja- theek h nahi kahongi..
Yudi- thanks...well I am Yudi..( and introduction jab raj ki baari aati h )
Pooja- isse to mai jaanti hoon...kal raat jab...(raj Jo juice pee raha tha vo khasne lagta h ...pooja realised that what she is saying...)
Yudi- kal raat kya.
Raj- arey vo...kuch nahi bas aise hi kal raat mulakaat ho gayi thi...
Pooja- ha yahi to mai bhi kehne wali thi...( raj is relieved...Naina enters in the mess...both raj Naina look at each other...Naina smiles recalling the morning incident especially raj tensed face...)
Raj- mai chalta hoon...actually kuch kaam h...( raj jaane lagta h ...Aur Naina bhi ussi direction me aa rahi thi both come face to face...
TO BE CONTINUED
LOVE ANSHIKA... Plz like and give big wala comment*********** ***************************

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