Storm's Of Silence reincarnate

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I m here again writing a story which i left long ago ... coz of lots of buzy ness and less of timing ... 😕😭

but i promise to all that i will surely doing it... 😛

my old story in new version ...😉

''Storm's Of Silence reincarnate" 😊

tell me if u want to change D name.

lord Krishna's promise👍🏼 i will not disappoint u all this time. 👍🏼😊

bye all TC Love U 😉

i will update this new story at on Monday evening...

till than lots of love n kiss ❤️

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Storm of silence'

I m the bigget madest Fan of Kumar Amarjeet" Rajat Tokas" & Faisal Khan" they R D lead on Man's in T.V industry right now. These Are D Best of Best in every skill of Acting + Fighting & Romance.

&

I m a big fans of D Female leads Are Vrinda Dawada ..,, Mugdha Chapekar & Roshni Walia these R D beautiful & lovely Girl of TV industry .

This concept is not based on Movie Yaariyan So Chill

So Sorry i Do not have Banner for this Story . coz dn't no how to make

K.Amarjeer. S. = D heartthrob & Dammm Hot we all know that, his Dance & his look unmatched-up in TV industry no dough. N his perfect 6 ABS hottest body. Love it. He is D Man every girl Dream about> ;) &

Virnda Dwada =I came to know about her in D3 only I loved D acting of hers & I loved it so much .. Amar & vrinda Are d best in couple's

Rajat Tokas = for Prithviraj chauhan & Veer in his historical serial & other 1's & now he is coming in Jodha Akbar As Akbar it gone blast now.

Mugdha Chapekar= so nice & care person super Actress .

Faisal Khan = whom start His fame with Dance India Dance Stage & D winner Of DID little master season 2 & D Perfect Actor As well which he show in D Historical Saga Maharana Pratap ...he has very bright future.

Roshni Walia = she a very superb Actresss I saw her in so many show she has very bright acting future. Rest of character I tell u all later...

Now no more introduction & explain to... now D story's Character Sketches

Character Sketches with Concept in Charecter Introdution for now 6 main lead 3 boy & 3 girl .
**** The Couple's are ...

Vrinda.D. for K.Amarjeet.S.

Mugdha.C. for Rajat.T.

Roshni.W. for Faisal. K.

A. Rajat Tokas (Boy Main Lead)= Veerat As Veer Singhania. The rishest of all. The 2nd youngest Son of business tycoon Dhanraj Yashwant Singhania of Steel's & Shipping (CRUISES) Industry in Spain Europe...But Veer leave's in Mumbai India... 22 yrs old.. Fair, Hot & Handsome, he is Very smart & Intellignt & sharp. Naughty & very well known for mishchivness & at the some time very kind person. 1st yrs of MBA of Management A Dashing & hearthrob of college his look kill any kinda girl of this world. He has perfect dark brown eyes & 6 ABS perfect Body like a fighter. Yeah he is a fighter. It his love & passion. Also a dancer but hide is from world. But he love's fight & only for truth & justice. No kinda bad 1's mess with him. His only angry glare give the man shiver for rest of life. Who know him very well & his friend is also support him in his decision. he hate love totally..he has a most of reason'd for that'. 1 lty Offcourse his parent's he think love only give's pain.. He love his elder brother & younger brother so much, can't say no to them & can't listen a single wrong word for them even from his friends & family. His best frined is Karan & Armaan. His best buddy from School. His best BDCF is Nandini.

BDCF = means' Best Dushman come Friend :P

B. Kuwar Amarjeet Singh (Boy Main Lead) = Aka Reyaansh Dhanraj Singhania. 3 yrs elder than Veer & 5 yrs Elder than Aiditya... 25 yrs old ..A very well known Dancer & choreoghrfher of hollywood Industry in USA. Yes he live's in USA from 3yrs After his Education. Still single. With Fair complexion the Hearthrob & hottest person IN TOWN . He love his Family. He hide is All hot skill under his so call formal cloth. Only for this seriousness for his employees in his company. he love his younger brother's more than himself. Reyaansh is little short temper n anry man. But very soft from heart. He know'S the reason of his Father & mother marriage & how they survive for this huge industry. He also handle his dad company in office. In USA. His best friend is Swayam & Sharon. His best buddy from School.

C. Faisal Khan (boy main lead) = D youngest of all ... most Cute & honest boy in house..so adorable & most active in work very sharp in study..20 yrs old love his brother's a-lot in this whole world. lives in Spain with his Dad & Mom. He finish his 12t th so soon he join his brother Veer in college in Mumbai India.{More about him revil ltr when I made his entry in story }

D. Mugdha Chaphekar (Girl Main Lead) = Nandini Sumitra Shekhawat. Very beautifell & gorgouses Girl. 22 yrs old girl. Fair complexion every part of her body revealed the beauty of its own...she looked mesmerizing When she dance. Yes she is a Ball Room Dancer she has a long curled hair till her knee's she love her hair a lot . Her fair, soft & skin Shine's so beautifully n anybody could easily fall for her. Very caring n soft from heart & as well naughty to she simply hate men...she never liked talking to the opposite gender...if any 1 try to mess with her she get more angry she teach a good lesson to them which no 1 can't forgot in his life. ..she was strong girl who could face all the difficulties alone without taking anyone's help...her best buddy are Sia & Riddhima. & BDCF is Veer & his friends. From days 1 when they join college. She & her sister's Hate their father a lot. She love only 1 man in life her Cousin brother "Swayam".

E. Vrinda Dwada (Girl Main lead) = Taaniya Sumitra Shekhawat. 3 Yrs Elder than Nandini & 5 yrs elder than Aditi. 24yrs old girl..Beautifull & very adorable from nature & heart. Gorgouses & lovable for all. Her fair, soft & skin Shine's so marvelously. She is lawyar from 2 yrs. After Collage she becomes famous in 2 yrs of her work she is in now top 5 layer in mumbai City. & A kathak Dancer like her Mother. Love her younger sisters very much She live's for Nandini & Aditi only. Every day she goes to Old & childern orfhange. All 3 sisters face very tragic incidence in past Taaniya, Nandini & Aditi lost their mother when they are small. & the reason behind is their father. As they thought. It revel latr. Taaniya, Nandini& Aditi left home when her mother died. They lives' with their Mama home in Mumbai from that time. Has Cousin brother "Swayam" who work with Reyaanh in USA.

F. Roshni Walia = ( Girl Main Lead ) = Aditiyani Sumitra Shekhawat (short Aditi) Youngest Daughter & Sister in Shekhawat Family .. 19 yrs old girl,.. love herself & life so much very filmy & so much talkative but only in front of her sister & mamaji ... out of house very quite & less making friends .. but once some 1 become her friend she is so good in making relation of friendship loves her sister & mamaji so much .. Very cute & same beautiful as her Sister's {More about her reveal ltr when I make her entry in story ...}

Other Lead's

Swayam = Taani Nandini & Aditi's Cousin Brother & Rey Best friend. Sharon 's BF from 5 yrs. So sweet & Cute & so so so Posessive for Taani, Nandini, Aditi, Rey & sharon. HE, Sharon & Rey didn't hide any single thing in world. Best friend forever.(BFF).

Sharon = The diva from the college time beautiful & carring. Love of her life is only swayam. Best friend of rey from childhood. BFF. Sharon also know abut Swayam sister's. She also love them. Mostly Aditi coz she is the youngest in all. She also know about the past. When swayam tld.

Karan = Best friend of Veerat" (BFF).

Armaan= Best friend of Veerat" (BFF).

Sia = Best friend of Nandini" (BFF).

Riddima = Best friend of Nandini" (BFF).

Sharad & Rachana = Taan's Best Friend's & colleague's in office.

Ajmaan = Best friend & Buddy of Aditya.

Jannat = Bestest friend of Aditi.

{{ Vicky, Nil, Amar, Neha,Simmi & Rinni are employees of Reyaansh Company As a Dance teasher. For different kind of Dance.}}

Dhanraj Singhania = Rey Veer & Aditya's Father.

Gayatri Singhania = Rey Veer & Aditya's Mother

Sushant Shekhawat = Swayam's Father Sharon's F.I.L (sasurji )& Taani, Nandini's & Aditi's Mama (mean's Mother's real brother. Live's in mumbai.)

Chap 1

It a beautiful & pure winter Season. The city of Mumbai was waking up to get ready for yet another day of work & struggle. The sweet chirping of birds accompanied by a rainy cloud, Black & blue sky were adding to the enchanting & little refreshing of the approaching day.

The beach had always been a spectacular sight to witness beautiful surrounding and it was the only place perhaps where the beauties approaching morning could be relished to its utmost height. Many fishermen were engrossed with their daily business and quite a few people were out on the beach with the sole purpose to nurture their health as well as relish the beauties of the morning. Some old as well as young people were jogging on the beech.

Little far Behind some aged people, there was two young girl's who was jogging at a slow pace with the headphones of an ipod attached elegantly to there ears. 1 of them was humming a song and was clutching the ipod in one hand and her cell phone in the other.

& other 1 is simple jogging. 1st one who humming song she was clad in a blue jogging suit with white and blue sneakers. Is look younger than other 1 & 2nd girl was clad in a black trouser jogging suit. All of a sudden both heard some giggle and chirpy voices of some kids coming from behind. Both stopped and turned back to find out the source of the noises.

As soon as she turned back, cold and soothing breeze come's directly from the sea pass through from them, blowing their silky black hair off their face and providing a clear view of an exquisitely beautiful faces-es. The enchanting view of the most beautiful girl's both opened their eyes which both had closed as the breeze touched their beautiful face.

1st one's eyes were hazal green & 2nd her has a dark hazel brouwn-eyes in color containing the depth of ocean within them. As their gaze fall on the two kids sitting just few steps away from her and engrossed in building their very own sand castle, a smile crept onto their glossy, pink lips, they shook her head's smiling and turned again to walking.

These two a the most divine & Beautiful angel on earth. God make them is very carefully & dellicatly. The Shekhawat Girls the best in best of all. Elder 1st one is Taaniya Sumitra Shekhawat & 2nd 1 is Nandini Sumitra Shakhawat.

Nandini = Di we have to run fast because I have to reach early in college. I have to submit my project. So ( but when she trued her side to look at her di she is not their. Nandu (( Nandini's nik name ))stop & look bi-hid her sister is playing with that two kid. She smile on her di childishness. (( nandu think )) "look at her who will said she is 1 of the bestest Lawyar of mumbai." Than she suddenly regain & call her di,

DiDi ((Shouting)) come on we have to go soon u can play tomorrow with them come on fast.

Taaniya ( Taani ) = look at her sister & say good bye to her small cute friend she kiss their forehead & come to Nandu & said. Le agai chal aab.

Nandu smile & said.

Nandu = Di u know u r so sweet.

Taani = I know , I know come we have to go now.( both reach At Shekhawat Mansion ) Nandini went to her Shower & Taaniya went to wake up Aditi. She woke her up & go to her room to get ready for Office... ))

At Singhania Mansion.

A beautiful morning sunrise come to a big room of mansionit's disturb sleep of two young guys who was sleeping on Bed. & than a bathroom door open & a two fair & masculer leg come out, he has a towel in his waist & with other one he dripping his hair & he has so well tone body & he has D Hazal green eyes. Short but well thik hair's 6 pak Abs ... he is looking breathing taking handsome ...he is Veerat D Veerat Dhanraj Singhania ... ( hash Dead I m ) suddenly his ears hear some sound on sniffing .. than he look At to lazy block's laying on bed he took of a jug off Water thorough it on them All of a sudden both was jolted out of their sleep & open their eye totally. they look @ veer who is smiling & combing his hair.

Veer = guy come on get up fast we have to reach at college.

Karan = Yaar Saturday hai aaj kyon tuje itne jaldi College ke lecture se hamri vat lagani hai.

Armaan= Han yaar pls sone de thodi der ( both abut to sleep again when veer said)

Veer = ok than I m going to submit my Project on time u go n sleep pecesfully & @ Monday Miss jolly will surely convert u in so many pieces .both Karan & armaan get up fast & rush towards the washroom.leave behind laughing Veerat.


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Chap 2

Shakhawat mension.

On D dining Teble 2 girls are sitting & having BRKFST silently this two R Taani & Aditi ... Nandini is still not yet ready for College . After 5 min she came ruining fast from her room with a big folder in hand & her purse & started shouting for her breakfast to janki ma ( lady made & cook for girls )

Nandu = JM (janki ma) my breakfast jaldi.

Aditi = lo agai "express"

Nadini = ( glare at Aditi & Janki maa ) JM fast I m getting late. ( Aditi Chuckle on it)

Janki Ma ( JM )= han ready hai choti madam.

Nandu = JM how many time I told u ke don't call me choti madam.it look like I m 100 yrs old & she sit on table & continues her talk meanwhile Aditi & Taani are smiling on her blabaring ...

Aditi = JM my lunch box is ready ?

JM = yes ready but cho ( insdet of Aditi it's Nandu glare at JM to calling again Choti madam) Taani giggle) I mean Aditi beta yes ur tiffin is ready take here it is ..& do share with ur friends ...

Aditi = yeah I will thanks ... ok guys m going getting late bye. All bid bye to her.

JM = I m making for u Nandu beta ur favoraite bondi Raita. But chandu didn't get bundi yet so u go now I will send ur tiffin with chandu ok.

Nandu = (her mouth fill with water) yummmuuuBundi raita ok than jaldi bhejna & jyada bhejna. Ls agar mere friend ne dekh liya tho muje nai milega. & she get up from table & heading towards the door but stop & turn & come to Taani & said.

Nandu = Di vooo muje ( in a very next moment Taani bring out money & give it to Nandu.) Yeh kya paise kyon derai ho aap.

Taani= so tumko kya chaiye?

Nandu = voh di aaj mai mamu ki car le jao pls. ( taani look At nandu & than JM)

Taani = y Mamu ki car kyon & u have ur car na than ?

Nandu = Aclty di after college we all going to beach for party coz aaj hamara assignment bhi complete hojayega & sia ka birthday hai aaj so hume badi car chahiye.

Taani = no nandu Mamu ki car lene ki jarurat nai hai. Mai office pohochake apani car bhej dungi driver ke sath our voh tumhari car leayega ok. & yeh le paise Sia ke liye mere taraf se bhi koi gift lelena.

Nandu = in a sad face she take money n said ok. & leave.

JM = Taani bitiya apne mama kyon kiya unka face dekha kesa utar gaya tha(making sad face)( taani look at Jm & said )

JM = pls Jm apne na usako sar chada rakha hai bohot & mamu ki car dena mean's apne face ko Lion ke home mai through.. oh no ways so pls aap apana face thik karo & jake usaka bundi raita banao & mera tiffin bhi ok.( and she get up from table & head towards her room.& after 15 min she leave for her office.

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Both Armaan & karan stay in veer home when they have to complete Project or assinment .

Veer took of his bag & project file & went down.both Armaar & karan also come fast their they do Breakfast soon & left.

In car.

Armaan (Amy) = veer where is ur dadi. Aaj dikha nai di.

Veer = she went for temple early morning.she do prayer for me Adi ( aditya) & Reyaansh Bro she didn't miss any Day.

Karan = ohhh she is so sweet & u r very lucky Veer u have such a sweet Dadi

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A car stop in college campus Volkswagen Jetta Nandu reach college in here car every one look at her & her car. Boy of the college everyday wait for the three most beautiful girl of college. Nandini, Sia & Riddima. The trio get-ff from car & the boy heart fainted & girl get jealous from this & NSR ( Nandu, Sia& Riddima = NSR) walk towards college in hurry coz they are late & they have to submit project on time & tiro ignore all look & went in side for class.

Chap 3

Walking towards D college in hurry coz they are late & they have to submit project on time & trio of D girl's ignore all look & went in side for class.

Other side off the college there is a Basket ball match practice going on. After 15 days it a BB match in ST. marina college verse St. Louis.( Reyaansh Ex.college).

Boy are practicing very hard but their face are dull coz of the main center attraction & best player & most tough player is not yet come.

1 boy = yaar Atul kaha rehe gaye yeh tino. Yese mai hum kese time manaje karenge.

Atul= yaar unko aaj shayad koi Project submit karna tha tho voh log class mai honge ajayenge..& or vese bhi unko practise ki jarurat nai hai..bas unke karna humain strenth milti hai & voh tino best player hai so pls tum log practise continue rakho mai unko dekhakar ata hun.ok& he headed towards to college.

The black BMW entered in college with a full speed & shrink in parking lot & hold in a jolt. Now it turn to gril go faint ways in they are floating in a dreamland with these trio.

The trio the most handsome hunk of college get off from car. Armaan & Karan get of from car with a big file in hand & they rush towards the class to submit their project. than a driver sit get open n a most dashing n A most handsome & hotty guy get of from car Veera . Neek name is Veer for his friends & BDCF , He look around now all girl totally go faint in ground a small cripy smile come on that boy face. He took off his goggals. Look aroung & bend down to take off his file but his friend already take it he give the key of his car to peon to park the car n he went in. All boy get jealous.

BOY's trio heading towards the class & Girls are coming out from class, girl are going to canteen after their project Submitting thing get over & boy are coming from canteen's left side & girl are coming from Right, Armaan & Karan, Riddhima & sia properly get thrugh but our own Nandu & Veer are totally unaware of front sight .

. Both are bizi in their mobile..n..n...nn...

...n..n..n closer

. ...N..n..n more closer

N they dashed. both fall on ground Nandu is upon Veer. Both shouted.

Nandini + Veer = Aaah shit wat the.( & when they saw each other they shout louded) helll.

Veer = u u blind. Dekha kar nai chal sakti.

Nandu = Veer pl stop it not yet I m late...

Veer = yeh as usual .. chasmis.

Nandu = what ... than Y didn't u see ashol ..

Veer= U did not saw it ...

Nandu == Wow.... ...tho tumhari eyes kya hot cheek dekhane gai thi jo tum ne nai dekha.

Armaan & Karan = they strted again

Veer = u listen... I have no time to fight with u girls' come on guys..but (sia interuped.)

Sia= what do u mean by that ? ((before Veer again blast Karan said.))

Karan= listen Sia we talk about it later ok come on veer we have to get hurry come & both Armaan & Karan Drag Veer with them to class.

Veer = wild cat. (He mummured but Nandu heard it & repeat reply.

Nandu = Ranch brat '' & turn towards the canteen.

Riddima look at Armaan back & smile. & trun to cantee

Riddima = kya Yaar Nandu y u always fight with him y?

Sia & Nandu hit their head Nandu says.

Nandu = Lo yeh shuru hogayi..devdas ki devdasi..

Sia = Han Rids ek bat bata tu kese use Armaan se pyar kar bethi.

Nandu= plsss sia not again she will start again her fairytale..Pls (( Sia laugh & rid's pout.)

Atul come in canteen & find trio setting chatting & cracking joke's he goes to them & sit nxt to Riddima & says

Atul= hey guys WATS up & Rid's aaahhh woh.. Anji nai aai aaj? Trio girl look at atul & smile N Sia asks.

Sia = kyo kya hua? (smile) )

Atul = bas yese hi pocha She always come early Na that y.

Rids= Are atul di aaj nai ayegi use papa ke sath kuch kam that tho usane aaj leave le hai.(atul face drop meanwhile Boy trio come in canteen saw girl's are talking with atul.

Armaan= I think Atul Anji ke baremai poch raha hoga & he look @ Riddhima & smile n walk to them.

Karan = loh yeh tho gaya..Chal hum bhi chale.

Veer= veer is looking @ nandu & than to his mobile & said)) no u go I have to go for BB Practice.

Karna = oye chal bhav mat kha koi 3rd world war nai hua tha tum dono ka jo tu use avoid karega chal aab.

Both sit & say hey to all only Veer & nandini is not looking @ each other.

Nandini = look at veer in angry coz he is avoiding her & she got angry more n get up from chair & said.)) Guys I have some work in library so u guys carry on I have to go & she took her bag & leave. All look @ veer in narrow eyes & he is looking at nandu. Then he looks at their friend.

Veer = ( he rolled his eyes )i know I know I started 1st so I have to apologies going ((.& he also leave & run towards the library.)

Karan = yeh dono bhi na pehele ladte hai fhir ek dosare ko manate rehete hai.

Sia= but that is their BDCF sign.

All = ri8.

Veer sees her @ lobby & shouts her Name...) Pariii wait ..(But she didn't stop but quickly he grabs her hand & pulls her in empty class.

Nandu= Veer ...Wat r u doing let me go & don't try to smart u r not gonna forgive today.

Veer = I know (& he smile cutely looking @ her. U knows Na pari that we are best BDCF ever so y r u angry @ me.

Nandu= se u spoil brat... ( Pointing her index finger .. )

Veer = pari pls don't strt It n i saying sorry na & u r fighting ..(pout in puppy face)

Nandu = don't show me ur pout's got it .(stare him in anger)

Veer = Sorryyy Pls.

Nandu = no way & she push him on banch & get off D Class...

Veer = oh god kuch jyada hi bhadak gai hai (agar Taani Bhabhi ko pata chala Tho mai gaya) ..manana padega ..( an than a idea come in his mind.

What will veer do to monofy Nandini. Watch out for Nxt update..

(Here Taani is Veer's Bhabhi ... Nandini's elder sister... Taani ... D only Love of Reyaansh ) & it all reveal Latr.)

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Chap 4 ...

After 1 Hr He manage to skip from college & went to A Studio for checking what he order to plan her a surprise to monofy her is done or not he reach D place which is preparing event organizer. as of her taste everything she love.

Veer = Everything is set it's time to call her here .but how . idea yes...( He call her ...)

Nandu = Angrily ) ...What? & Y r u not in college ... We where searching for u .

Veer =We ? Means u to? Smirking

Nandu = no me .. no I mean ur friends is ... hell I m cutting D call.

Veer = Oh dear wait I call u for emergency... pls I m stuck in this stupid studio where u dance & here I didn't't know any one .

Nandu = (shocked ) what D hell r u doing there.

Veer = are yaar pls u can shout me on ltr but now pls help me pls ...

Nandu = ok I sent Karan & Armaan their ... thinking Y he is their)

Veer = they already left for home & I called them but they r not picking up my call ...Pls Nandu...

Nandu = Nandu left a thinking Breathe ...) o.k. I m coming..

Veer = smiled ) thanks fast pls. ( Yeah now u can't ..run away from me .. smiling to himself... suddenly he feels wired ) what .. I m thinking .. shit.. "not Away from me making ...mean ..." Veer Focus. ... on... Focus ... Focus... Focus veer..( he did not recognized abut D feeling for nandini)

After 10 min of drive Nandu reach in studio.. & as she open D Studio .. coz she always has a spear key with her , so When she entry in room it's pitch dark in their so .. She turn on the light ...

she saw no one their but Decorated room with White balloon's everywhere & white roses & Sorry return card & banners everywhere . she is to shocked to react... that she did not heard the step behind her ... &

Veer said = So liked it . ( she turn giving fake angry... ) razing An eyebrow to her he thought she did not like it so he's face dropped in sad & he said..

Veer = I knew it... I ask Taani di & she tell me everything of ur taste.. But look at u ... u did not like it... ( taani smile when veer trun & start to tell her that ) ...is this u r dam so angry on me ...

Nandini= veer .. I ..

Veer = pls let me complete u no u are so mean... + plus u r so damn manly with ur feeling ...

Nandini = Veer stop it will u?

Veer = no u listened to me ...u always thinks that u r so toughs & strong as boys & behave that u are a but not a girls...& I saw that today ... me .. """ D Veerat Singhania except defeat in monofy a girls whose behave like Boys''' huff's. nnn

Nandini Shouted = VEERRR STOP IT ..WHAT R U SAYING... & WHO SAYS DID NOT LIKE IT ...SO PLS ...STOP... BEHAVING LIKE A CHILD...

Veer= I m behaving like a Chileddd ... Happly Shocked..) wait what u said...

Nandini = I like it .. ( but again in angry mood )& u ask this all to Taani di so u take help of of her to monofy people.. wow ... so pls nxt time think on ur own nnn by D way what did u say I always behaved like a boy & so mean to u & other .. ( pointing a finger to veer)

Veer = errr .. Aclty I wont lie u know me .. yeah u are not a girly type for ... u know like loving & Dating things so ... Werrr ... Chuck that ...so u like it yeah,..

Nandini = yes it so beautiful... & I m sorry to I m so mad at u which's not matter .. but I m so much in tension for D submitting D project & ..

Veer = ohk oh I knew That ... u fight with vishal again & that to for me ... ( smiling)

Nandini ... yeah aclty ... He is arrogant & ruthless guys..

Veer = leave it ...Pari so ... now u r happy & forgive me ... so can U dance with me ...

Nandini = ( gasped) what no not at all veer .. come on we are geeting late ...

Veer = so u did not forgive me yet ( sad face)

Nandini = oh so u want forgivness so ...ok ...ahhh .ok so for that u have to help me in my project coz I knw u have so much free time.

Veer = wat no pls ...I can do any thing but not that..Mere khud ke project mai baki student karte hai, yaar no pls. ( gripping her hand for pray )

Nandu = (smile) tell me jab tum project khud nai karte tho tumko practical mai & exam mai ache mark kese milte hai? Leave her hand & sit on chair.)

Veer= areee yaar u know na muje ek bar read karne mai hi yaad rehe jata hai exam se ek month pehele jo tum sab mere mai serious ness dekhate hona bas vai.

Nandu = usase kya tum... Oh god/... pls veer agar tum chaho na tho (but Veer cut her in between)

Veer = Come on nandu yaar kya karna hai ache mark lakar.vesse bhi Dad ka khud ka Office company s hai hai tho hum sab ko jyada problem nai hogi so chill.

Nandu = Sab ko matlab?

Veer = Are tum & baki sab mere office mai hi join karoge yeh mane Bhai se boldiya hai usane Authorities se baat ( Now Nandu cut him offf )

Nandu = no veer I want my job in my own basis not from any praises & yes 'sifharis se mila kam kabhi nai fhalta.' Tumhara khoud ka office hai tho kya hua? U have to be ur own Veer. Think about it .(veer give her a approvinglook & smile n she trun to left from there)

( but stop) but u r going to help me & it is ur punishment to get panga with GS off this college, got it.

Veer = ya ya I know ( rolled his eyes).Both leave the D place & reach college & goes to their leature.

In the class all r sitting in window side chare's. Nandu & veer Enter in class. All look @ them. ( Class is not yet started )

Karan = lo agaye BDCF .. So guys all well set .

Veer = han all set.. My life is gona in dunk & if u wana call this well set... than u have to wait for ur body got off some mark to show case.

Karan= (confused) wat on the earth is happen to him nandini?

Nandu = nothing chill. N ya guys hamari trip jane wali hai next week coz hamare practical khatam hojayenge so jis jis ko apana nam dena hai voh is paper pe dede & Rids

( than she look & love bird who r engross in then own world .( All see n smile @ them)

Veer = rolled his eye's)) inka kuch nai hosakta. (than veer took off a chock from desk & throw it on Armaan.it hit him on head)

Karan = laugh) wat a throw veer nice, ( veer & karan give hi5)

Armaan = ha ha not funny. ((A Boy come in running & said ke professor is coming all student sit on their places. ))

Veer & Karan & Nandini & Sia Sit with each other Professor come & lecture strt..) Boy are lest intersted in that so they are making weired faces meanwhile a peon come & Say's

Peon = Sir VP sir ne GS & AGS ko bulaya hai. meeting ke liye..( Nandin & Veer leave for VP 's cabin.)

Karan = Aab kya hogaya VP sir bhi na koi na koi attack dete rehete hai.

Sir = Karan keep quite & concentrate.

Karan = sorry Sir ,(in his mind ))concentrate karne ke liye chemistry honi chahiye sir botany nai lolsss.)

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Chapter 5


In VP sir's Cabin.. & VP Sir's said.

VP= Nandini & Veer jese ke aap jante hai ke Har sal hum Free Medical Check up & usake sath Orphange ke bacho ke liye kuch game & Intertenment ke sight organisses karte hai Ri8

VEER & Nandini = Yes sir ...

VP = so is sal mumbai ke top 5 college ke sath Hamara college & Teresan Law company ne usake liye donetion diya hai..

Nandini = What Teresan Law Company. ? Shocked)

VP= Yes nandini n yes usake hi vajese hum is sal Ek Dance Concert Bhi Rakhenke. But.

Veer = but what sir ?

Vp= But we Have to choose best Dancing troop off india. & we don't have any 1 to appoint. all are book for next month.

Veer= ( smile ) don't worry Sir I manage that.

VP = really who's that ?

Veer = Sir it's My Brother's Dancing Company in New York. I will call my brother he will do it.(Nandini is shocked more) But Didn't say anything there.

Vp = oh Veer Great so do that now & if they Agree & tell them to prepare. but Veer Bollywood Dance is important.

Veer = yes sir sure they are All Indian & mostly Performce Indian Dance.

Vp= oh nice ... good ok so u both can leave now & strt the Process. Ok

Nandini = But sir jo trip jane wali thi usaka kya hoga..

VP sir = oh ya sorry I forgot to tell u guys notice laga do ke Next month concert hai usake vajah se jo trip jane wali thi use postpond kardiya gaya hai...

Veer= ( Think some thing)..& say's ) = sir I have an idea...

VP = yeah tell me Veer .

Veer = Sir Y did not we include that trip as a prise for winner in cluding Dance trop & Terenes law company's employees... but we only select hard working person's from them... so we can also enjoy with them ...

VP sir = nice idea veer u r very intelligent boy ohk then I will talk to authority for this & I will let u know after that u put notice.

Veer & Nandini = ok sir.

VP = ok so u both can leave now .

V & N = ok sir ...Both leave.towards canteen.

Nandini = Veer are u mad tum ne kese boldiya Sir.. Ko ke...ke ur Brother will do the that . U know he will not Not come to india n n .from long time & u also include that trip .. Y ??

Veer= Pariii chill tum itna hiper kyon horai ho .& yeh hi time Hai sab kuch thik karne ka.... tho tum yese react kar rai ho jese tum par koi bom pheka hai. Chill sit here.(he call waiter to get 2 orange juice).

Nandini = Veer r u mad voh dono ek dosare se nafrat karte hai & tum twister & Thunderstorm ko Amane samne lane ki bat kar rahe ho.

Karan. Armaan, Riddima & sia entry in Canteen.

Armaan = hey guys kya kaha Vp sir ne ...

Nandini Veer= Hamari Trip cancel hogai hai becoz ...

Karan = Becoz khadus VP ne koi New Test rakah hai ...( angrily)

Veer = no guys next month ek Dance concert hai (All sit down.)

All {shocked Excpt) Veer & Nandu..} = what Dance concert ??

Nandini = Veer pls think abut it don't do that warna ur bro & meri sis dono hum dono ko chop karke fry karke khajayenge...

Karan = Aab yahan Taaniya Di & Reyaanh Bro bich mai kaha se agaye.(confuesd)

Veer = main Dance concert ke liye Vp sir ko Bro ke Daning company ka performance Rakhane ko bola hai & .

Sia = tho isamai itna hyper hone ki kya jarurat hai. (thinking)

Nandini = Are hamare sath sanjivani medical college & Teresn Law company jo iss organisation KA PART HAI ISS SAL .& agar Rey bhaiya & Di amne samne ajaye tho.

Karan = wat mean's..tumhare Di ki compamy

Armaan = & Reyaansh bhai ke dance troop...

Sia = Shit mean's Taani Di &...

Riddhima = Reyaansh bro...

All together = (shout's) EK SATH AMNE SAMNE...shit panga ..

now i will give update on every sunday...

So here it is guys ... 😃



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Chap 6 😊

Veer & Nandini + Gang...Taani & Aditi all Are in India its 12 in after noon so ... But long away from here ... in Newyork on same day (USA is -8 hrs back from us ...) here D morning is just started...here in winter season snow is everywhere in the street & house the Churches... playground... water fall's & tree are mostly covered by Snow ...in in here people working time are very less in winter's & they work from home so u can say the road & street are very less in num of people in winter here...

so we went Direct the richest area of Newyork it where D world rich & richest people lives... some of are business man in constructions .. Some of R investors.. some of R player actor & many more ...they all live in far way from main city on Newyork. here also is one particular person leaves N ...in here from 2/3 yrs he establish his reputation & company in Newyork in the age of 25 ... very well .. Incredible.

All the youngster follow his dedication in work ... coz he has so many different type of company in Newyork ...like Construction ... Hotels ... shipping's & his favorite & D love of his life is ..." Dancing... so we present u all D heartthrob of billions & D idol for his family & friends.. with his all well wisher's ... D Reyaansh Singhania...<3

Reyaansh Singhania's has a Mansion called is "Singhania's ". but he did not leave their... coz he live in D main city ... by beach side ... D Mansion we told u in short that it has big ... Lawn's/ gardens / fountains / Back pool sides ... front porch ...Back porch... Entrance gate...cars & bikes...

When we enter in A mansion from main door ... right side is D idol of Krishna..& left side is hall ... wooden style kitchen ... Study room ... Music room ...Rehearsal hall ... Own Gym ... own theater.. Own Spa ...Backyard ... Barn's ... Store room's in undergrounds.. Servant quarters ...security statues ...down stair it's 3 bedroom for outsider...& 1 waiting room & rest room & a office for the meeting if there is some IMP meeting is held so he come to the D mansion... only that part of the mansion is open ... rest of the mansion he did not put his feet..

In other area of D mansion ... upper part of it has in 5 master bed room in right side & 6 mass master bedroom... on left side ...from them 3 r for queen sized & 3 for king sized. Above on D 3rd floor is a garden in whole 3rd floor is a garden.. There are mostly roses & zarbera's from different verities u called it as a castle is as well.

We will let u know everything in brief later.. Now we move their where he uses to live daily ... It a beach side area... Away from his all messy work's he get time for another love of his life..& with her all memories ...he is living her wish & her dream..Without knowing her

A soft music is playing in D music room + studio room & middle of it A person is ready for his daily routine of dance... Plsss Imagine D move on D word of song & lyrics )

hummm hum hummm hum hum hummm hum hum,...

Suddenly he get's up & started dancing... His favorite style Lyrical hip hop...

Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshani

Kuch Kum Gili Hai Barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati Hai Hawa
Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Khawishein

Tham Sa Gaya Hai Yeh Waqt Aise
Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaiisee

Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm

*** (( he put his hand on D mirror & while sliding down ...his hand's he imaginary feel her love's presence's ) )

Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshani
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati Hai Hawa
Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Khawishein

Tham Sa Gaya Hai Yeh Waqt Aise
Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaiisee

*** (( He then hold of a curtain & round it on himself ))

Kyun Meri Saaans Bhi Kuch Feeki Si Hai
Duriyon Se Hui Nazdiki Si Hai

Kyun Meri Saaans Bhi Kuch Feeki Si Hai
Duriyon Se Hui Nazdiki Si Hai

Jaane Kya Yeh Baat Hai
Har Saba Abb Raat Hai


Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshani
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati Hai Hawa
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Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Khawishein

Tham Sa Gaya Hai Yeh Waqt Aise
Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaiisee

*** ((Than he hold of a roses which he take out from the vase which is on side table ))


Phool Meheke Nahi Kuch Gumsum Say Hai
Jaise Roothe Hue Kuch Yeh Tumse Hai

Phool Meheke Nahi Kuch Gumsum Say Hai
Jaise Roothe Hue Kuch Yeh Tumse Hai
Khusbooien Dhal Gai Saath Tum Abb Jo Nahi

***(( When he did not get the fragrance of her in ( which smell's like rose) that rose he feel like to die every second to get it...)))


Kuch Kum Roshan Hai Roshani
Kuch Kum Gili Hai Barishien

Kuch Kum Lehrati Hai Hawa
Kuch Kum Hai Dil Mein Khawishein

Tham Sa Gaya Hai Yeh Waqt Aise
Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaiisee
Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm
Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm Hmmm
((( Song ends & he drop's on his knee & grab his hair in pain.. Tear are striking down on his cheeks...))

End of Part 6 here nxt update on next Sunday so sorry for delay ... good night Take care u all .. love u all a lot J

read it ...it's a Note

Guys like D promo as well ... & pls let me know ur thing if u want to change in my story or want to add with ur favoraite couple

1. Taani & Rey = Taarey

Taarey Meaning is to play the most important role in a each other life ((even for their close one's) berth after berth's no one change them & apart them .. but just for some reason they have to go through from tough time for betterment... that Y they are ...

A Star = Taarey

2. Veer & Nandini ( Prince & pari ) = Veerdini

VeerDini = meaning is a Granter's Or wish-granting people's

love one's who brings joy & peace & happiness ...

they R Great, broad minded, full of vast as well...

that y they are...

A Granter's = Veerdini

3. Aditya & Aditiyani = Adyani

Name "Adyani"origins for life partner

Ruling Planet: Mercury & Venus
Gemstones combination : Diamonds & Pushkaraj
Qualities: Extroverted, Adventurous & lovable
this two personality traits to life path with this nature of them called ... "Angel's" ( God gift)
Progressive, pioneering, innovation, adventure, rebellion, opportunist... kind & pure heart couple..That y they are...

An Angels = Adiyani 😳

Chap 7 😊

Song end ...&...

He drop his hand from D mirror slowly sit down by support of D mirror ...All D memories from D past are giving so much pain & hate to his fate ...his life is filled with lots of ups & Down when he left India with nothing in hand just all alone...he only had her memories & her hate ... (It's all a misunderstanding)

He can't leave with that hate so he left India & them yrs back... to promise he will never come back... but now D time has come ... he is now so conform & adamant to his decision... that he will do only his work related thing... ...Coz one call changed his life & now he do not have any way out ... his family need's him his brother's needs him ...

sply Aditiya. He only see him twice when he was 5 yrs old now he only saw him on pic's on newspaper...or in FB.. That's it...from His business & dance work thing Reyaansh didn't get time to talk on net or in "skype" with his family & his brothers...

When Veer call him & told him about D concert which his college is going to organize for Newyear Eva ...so his Dance company has to take part in it.. & Veer also told him about d situation in India that in New Year Eva ...there is no avalaiblation of any India's great & best music band or dance company... so veer insist him to come help him.

So now he is so affected by this ...going after long time ... What if he saw her? ...What if she is still hates him or more ? ...what will happen if bad things happened again... He droped his head ...

( still Veer Did not tell him about Taani coz... if he tell that taani company also taking part for organized ...this show than Reyaansh will not come to India )

Rey is drinking water & pouring it some on his face than suddenly a servant come in studio running & call Reyaansh ...than Rey looked at him & he saw his phone which his servant giving to him he took it & servant went to his work.

He told it to his ear & heard a very familiar voice ...

Voice = Dada ...( Dada mean here is Brother)

( he recognize it no time)( it's his younger brother Aditiya)

Rey = Adi... Hey my boy hows u ?

Adi = Dada ... pls do not call me in that way pls ... it's sounds that I m still in age of 5 when I saw u last time yrs back...( sad tone )

Rey = ok ok fine so hows U & all in home.

Adi = all fine ...Arrrh I want to tel u ...SOMETHING

Rey = yeah tell me ...do u need any help to monofy dad...

Adi = no no all ok just I ...m ACLTY ...M going to India...

Rey = what? (Shocked) but Y? /

Adi = I asked Dad to send me for further studies ...& I want to go to India ... Because I want to meet Veer Dada & he also want me their ... here in winter all school ever ended ... I passed 12th now... next I want to join Veer Bhai college ...but in India it all a mid tram s are going on ...so I decided that I will help Veer Dad in his concert so I get to know D work on management ...Before studies & later I join class for it ...till THE college starts.. What do u say?...

Rey = oh like that ... good boy.. Sure u can do that... I m proud of u ...THAT U choose India for Further studies.. or else other child's wants to go USA OR LONDON ... go help Veer & I m also coming for D concert so I will meet u soon ...

Adi = yeah Veer Dada Told me that ... I going to see u after long time .. missed u so much .. u better come soon dada .. ok..

Rey = yeh ...ok now tell me when is ur flight .. ?

Adi = Day after tomorrow ...m all set to go ... .

Rey = ohk ..so see u their & call me before leaving India & as well when u reach .. ok take good care of urself give love to mom ...

Adi = only Mom ?

Rey = stop that drama I love u a lot & Veer so much ... .

Adi = love u to Dada ... pls try to come soon ...

Rey = yeah sure ...bye TC ..

Adi = Bye...

Here it is .. So Sorry For Short Chap guys ...

thks for love & care for my story & me .before ... love u all

& 1 more thing later in D chapter i m going to put some part in hindi & so it's give a little bit Indian Touch to it...

here is my old story part which i post before and people read it before as well so now i m continuing the story from here for next chap' iwill post it on after monday 👍🏼

love u all😛🤗❤️ 👍🏼

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Chap 8 >

Veer = ( in his bedroom) main ne bhai se bat karke unhe india ane ko mana liya hai ... Par...Taani bhabhi se jab unki mulakat hogi tab kya hoga...(thinking little scared)😕

Nandini = tum darr rahe ho ( shocked)😲


Veer = nai pari mai unke gussa se lunga... but agar kuch galat hogaya yaa na ...ya ..unki fhir se fight hogai tho yeah life mai shayad mai kabhi unhe sath nai dekh paunga.😕


Nandini = are U? really R Veer Singhania? Y r u thinking like this... chill nothing wrong is going to happen now.😒


Veer = yeah yeah I know but still it's... (jerked his head...)chill we won't let it go like that...😉


Nandini = good 😛...so what time u r going to Airport tomorrow?

Veer = Confused) 😕 tomorrow Airport Y ...?

Nandini = oh god 🤢..Veer .. Adi is coming u idiot.😆


Veer = oh god .ohhh god 😲...oh I totally forgot..hell I m an idiot.


Nandini = yeah u R...smirking😉😆... It ok veer ..(caring his hair).


Veer = (holding head ) no it's not... we have meeting for our Show with Vp sir and authorities... ...remember😡


Nandini = ohh ...( thinking) so...😊...no worry I ask Taani Di for help she will go get him from Airport . don't worry.


Veer = Are U sure? I need to talk to Taani di.😕


Nandini = no need of that she will happily do that after all she to love him... a lot...! So now I have to go I have to arrange Sia Birthday Party ..Tomorrow...!😊


Veer = Pari ...(Nandini Stop's ) thanks' for coming ...😉(smiling)


Nandini = OMG...😲 Veerat Singhania is Thanking me...👏WOW ..congratulation Nandini ..wow I m so lucky 😉( wink).


Veer = 😡stop up ur drama. come I will drop u.


Nandini = veer... If u r forgetting... I bring my Car today ..so chill I will ok.. u sleep well tomorrow is a very busy Day. Ok GN.😊

Nandini leave's & veer watching her car disappearing from corner of the road.)

Veer = she is one and only girl.. 😛.. know me very well..inside and outside.. I will never ever break our friendship.My pari.😳 (what D hell I m thinking 🤣)...Come on Veer sleep or the GS of the college will kill me.

( in Filght Adi is very happy about going India he is meeting his veer bhai... and Taani Bhabhi...😛( yeah he also know's everything when veer tell him everthing on his 16th birthday. )

Adi = in Filght ) finally I m free... Now I can live on my turm's ... and soon I will meet Veer bro and my would be Taani Bhabhi & Nandini Bhabhi ...! Waiting to arriaval of brother Rey... And im sure veer bhai have made some plan for bringing together the love bird ... Rey bro & Taani Bhabhi ...Hummm let see...what will I get in India. GN Mom... Rey bhai ..Veer bhai .. And Bhabhi's..😊

Nandini Reached Home - Taani is waiting for her in living room.

Taani = Nandu where were U ? Veer home?


Nandini = yes Di ... he was little nervous about D Dance event and all.

Taani = Nervous and Veer...😲 no way he is very smart kid rather than u ( Nandini roll her eye).than y r he Nervous.


Nandini = nothing Di it's about Re...y... (shit bitting her lip)😵


Taani = shocked) Rey did u just say Rey'.😲


Nandini = oh ho Di not Rey its his representation on new assays... So... that's it I went to help him u know he can't do anything without my help ...I m so smart u know ( Nandini cleverly change D topic)


Taani = ha ha bas bas badi aai Einstein ki bachi. Chal abhi ja soja..😆


Nandini = yeah ok bye GN... Quickly going towards her room but stop and turn) Di wait ...


Taani = yes what is it...?


Nandini = Di Aditya araha hai kal finally apni junior college ki studying ke liye yahan .. but I & Veer have meeting with college authority so please can u pick him up from airport .. veer request about it.


Taani = oh wow... finally I will meet him.. I only talk to him on phone and that to every less.. sure dear I definitely go pick him up... and I will also take Aditi ( Aditiyani) with me both are D same age they will be friends soon.😊


Nandini = yeah great idea... but di careful with Aditi she is an devil...😆. when it's come to Boy's except Veer and...( Taani cut her in)


Tanni = no she will not ...go now sleep. (Turning her face from Nandini hiding her pain)😆


Nandini = Thinking) di soon u too will be so so so happy ...i promise ...

(and she went to her room hoping and praying to god) .

Next morning ..

Taani = Aditi come we are getting late.😡


Aditi = (comedown from her room) = Di I don't understand y should I have to go to receive him.. in any case he is coming home till veer bhaiya will come back ...😔


Taani= He is our family ... veer little brother...u have to come with me no excuse ... And will u please change ur outfit..😲(Aditi looking at her shorts and top..)


Aditi = I will come like this ... if u have a problem than I Won't come... it's a deal ..Take it or leave it (smiling to herself)...⭐️


Taani = I dn't think so .. u r coming and that final...go change it or forget about the party which u r going today with Nandini. (aditi face drop)😕


Aditi = ok ok I m changing my outfit... (Talking to herself) oh god pleases help.


Aditi change her outfit .. She were wearing blue jeans and Pink floral top With slightly high heels. Taani And aditi reached airport...😊

Taani = oh god we are late I think his flight is landed ... he will be waiting.. or he will gone by his own...


Aditi = than y Did u get down to buy this rose bouquet ...😆


Taani = aditi will u gets off from the car... We have to check on him... come on..( aditi get off from the car n walk behind Taani..( taani give her d bouquet n said)Aditi u stand here I check bout his flight...😊


Aditi = come soon..Please...🤢


( Aditi getting bored so she took out her phone and started chatting with her friends... ) here from arrival gate Adi came out and looking for his attainder...he found no one.. He was about to turn but his eyes fell on a girl... very beautiful Girl...😉 ❤️his scanned her face featured Totally engross in her phone.. And got lost in her beauty...❤️


so this is the new chapter .. i know very short but i m buzy i will update soon.. till Enjoy... love u all 😛😃

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Faisal Khan As Aditya😳

here goes D real name And pic's of main Lead's Character's


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❤️Roshani Walia As Aditiyani

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