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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Everyone I am new here and before this I'd write a ff on another couple due to force of my friend but today I thought of writing one on #ArShi so below I am posting Prologue for it. Please do read it and let me know whether I should continue or not????

PROLOGUE
Tense Payal enter in Raizada mansion with her daughter Aanchal and she is about to rush to her room to discuss something with Aakash but in midway Anjali and Nani stop her and due to her tensed expression Anjali asked her
Anjali: What happened Payalji??? Why are you so much tensed???
Payal: Di I found something regarding Khushi...
But before Anjali can ask anything a strong and firm voice come from door side which send shiver to Payal's spine...
Voice: What did you find Payal????

So Whose voice is??(I guess almost of reader knows) and what is that something that I'll reveal in first part so let me know should I continue or not????

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting
Let me guess khushi left rm and they were searching her everywhere
But why did she left ?
And hy was payal tense ??
Is khushi ok ?
Waiting for your updates
Ps like button isn't working don't know why but I loved your plot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for all your comments...
But I am not continuing this as I do not get proper response...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice pro
Update soon
Add me to ur PM list plz
simmi-arshi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear,
nice beginning.

Please do continue..
the prologue seems good😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
intriguing
so wht did Payal found out
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting and intriguing dear ! Please continue soon .

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