New Arshi SS : Teri Aankhein --- Part 4

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Hi Dearies

I wished to post this in my page but Recently i had some problems with FB Page so Posting this SS here ...

Arshi SS :Teri Aakhein


Index

CS , Plot and Teaser 1 -Below

Part 2 - Page 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SS: Teri Aankhein

Genre: Love

Plot: Khushi and Arnav meets accidently; and spends a whole day with each other, in other words - they were forced to travel together. What happened to them? What changes come into their life? Good or beneficial to someone else? The fate/ Destiny mischievously played with them.


Character Sketch

Khushi Gupta: Doctor by profession. She lives alone in Delhi city; Her family stays at Lucknow . Payal is not her sister.

Arnav Singh Raizada: A businessman. He has born to live for his family. His life revolves around his Di and family. He is not rude like IPK1

Payal Farooqui - Friend of Khushi . Payal and Akash loves each other.

These are the character changes I made; all other characters are the same as the show.

|| Teaser 1||

Khushi took a deep breath but her heart is still bouncing with some mixed feelings . What's going in her life ? Is it a sign of change in her life ?

Khushi : What he thinks about himself ? He can't do this with me ! He should have think about his own brother at least . He is troubling his own brother for getting me in his web ! This can't be good ! I have to stop him at any cost !

-Pinky

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Curious!! Waiting for the update
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Note : In this SS you will find ASR in a different mode ; I think it's very different from ASR . I am little confused if you guys like him in this or not .

Here you go for the first part of this SS .

Arshi SS: Teri Aankhein

Part 1

Gupta House , Shashi Gupta is reading newspaper ; it's his daily routine. Shashi is enjoying his retirement with his family. He is smiling a bit now because his eardrums felt the musical sound of his wife Garima . He kept his specs properly over his nose then folds the newspaper. Shashi found the same expression on Garima but today she is little excited.

Shashi : What happened ?

Garima : I think Khushi is hiding her boyfriend from us [Shashi narrowed his brows ] Its not my doubt ; see this [She showed a silver expensive wrist watch to her husband ] I found this from her drawer. Should I ask her about him ?

Shashi : Garima , don't you know your daughter ? If she loves someone then she will let us know. I discussed it many times! And this watch! Its might be gift to her friend or someone. Garima , we should not doubt her like this ! [Shashi gave a blank look to Garima and walked from there]

Garima : you will say this ! I am her mother , I will ask her [ Garima walked towards Khushi's room while Madhumati sees Garima and she wondered why she passed without acknowledging her ... Garima entered khushi's room ; F.M is on . Khushi is drying her hair while listening the morning F.M . Garima turned it off ]

Khushi : mom ? [She smiled the continued drying her hair ] what happened ? you wanna say something ?

Garima : haan ! [She smiled then seated on khushi's bed] We all thinking about you marriage ! [Khushi rolled her eyes ] Everytime you gives excuses for marriage , why ? [Khushi sighed ] do you like someone ? [Khushi's eyes widened . She turned off the hair drier and turned to her mom ] you can tell us if you loves someone ...

Khushi : mom ! There is nothing like that ... I just don't want to get married now ! [ Khushi quickly picked her stuffs once after she put a clip on her hair ] please mom I don't want to discuss this topic once again ... [Khushi was going to leave while Garima stopped her holding her arm ]

Garima : What is this ? [She showed the Silver Wrist watch] It's not yours! [Khushi's eyes widened seeing the watch; many images come into her mind seeing that watch. This watch will reveal a story ; khushi's voice stammered ]

Khushi: It's! ... I found this in my cabin [It's a true lie ...] It's an interesting model, won't you think? [Khushi snatched it from her mother while pasting a fake smile and kept it inside her cupboard]

Garima: yeah! [She passed a smile as she found something cheesy behind khushi's reaction] I know you are hiding something. [Khushi glanced at her detective mom]

Khushi: I am getting late [She ran from there to escape from her mom]

Garima: Khushi , I am your mom ! I will get you married to your boyfriend! [She smiled to herself . Garima is not a rude mother ; She just want to see khushi getting married ]

In Raizada Mansion

The whole family is doing their daily routine ; Anjali noticed her brother , Arnav Singh Raizada is early at Dining Table . Anjali noticed a glint of blush on her brother ; She eyed at Shyam and NK to check Arnav who is concentrating on his breakfast but his heart wasn't there .

Anjali : ahmm [she cleared her throat ] Chotte ? [Arnav passed a smile] you look handsome today

Arnav: today? [NK's eyes widened; did his Nannav talking like this ]

Anjali : You are handsome my Brother , but today, you look different . Anything special? [Arnav finished his breakfast so got up from chair]

Arnav : Good Day ! [ He walked from there while talking over phone with Aman ] Appointment fixed ? [pause] great ! I will be there ... No No ! you don't have to come with me . I am fine ! [ Arnav stopped walking as Nani approached him with morning Arti ... Usually he gets irritated by these but today he patiently allowed his nani to do her wishes ... ] haan Aman , I'll be there after meeting doctor . I am sharp in punctuality You knows it ... Ok Bye ! [He cuts the call ]

Nani: chotte ? Are you ok ? Why are you going to meet doctor ? [Arnav realized he is caught now .. he pressed his lips together then passed a smile ]

Arnav: Just a regular check up ... [Nani nodded ... Arnav walked out from there while the rest of the family become alert knowing Arnav going to hospital ]

Anjali : Hospital kyun ?

NK : Di , Nannav usually calls his doctor here . I think he is hiding something from us !

Akash : one minute [Akash called Aman to know about Arnav's meet with doctor ... Akash turned to his family once after finishing the call ] Bhai went to City Hospital ... Aman doesn't know more than this

Anjali : he might know everything ... chamcha hai na chotte ke [she pursed her lips ] is he unwell ?[ Worry lines formed on her forehead ]

NK: Di ... don't worry ! We will find it...

****************

At City Hospital

Khushi called her next patient , she checked the file name ; She raised her lashes while calling the name " Arnav Singh Raizada" ... Arnav took the seat in front of her while khushi's eyes widened seeing him . She felt her heart will come out right now!

Arnav: Hi [She swallowed hearing his voice ... Khushi tried to be normal then checked the initial checkups]

Khushi: Arnav you are perfectly fine!

Arnav: No! Doctor! Neither I am getting proper sleep nor am I able to sleep. My heart beats are getting irregular nowadays... [Khushi rolled her eyes then held his wrist to check his pulse rate . Arnav's gaze were making her little uneasy ; Khushi noticed his wrist has a fine thread only , his watch is with khushi .Khushi looked at his eyes then at her watch to count the beats while Arnav were adoring her each and every move . Her hair strands fall on her cheek as she tilt her head ; he wanted to tuck it behind her ear but it's not the moment or atmosphere to do that . He smiled at his own changes ]

Khushi : you are perfectly fine ... I think you should go to a psychiatrist

Arnav: What the!! [ She glared at him ] I want a thorough check up [He demanded in cool manner]

Khushi: see I am just a physician ... I am transferring your file to Dr.Mehta , he is a cardiologist [She called the nurse ] Roshini ... take him to Dr. Mehta [ Arnav smiled at Khushi then left from her cabin with the nurse ]

Khushi [in mind]: uff! Is he crazy? [She sighed a bit then pressed the bell for next patient]

*****************************************

Arnav walked towards his car while sees his sister and NK. He stopped seeing them there.

Anjali : Chotte ? Are you fine? tum tik toh ho ?

Arnav: haan Di ... just did a regular check up! [Arnav convinced his sister and NK then went to AR but his heart was with Khushi who is living in his heart. Arnav recollected how she looked at him; he admired her sharp gaze.]

Arnav [in mind]:I will be near you khushi ... [Arnav was in the conference room while Aman cleared his throat to get his attention ]

Aman : Sir , how is these designs ?

Arnav: beautiful! [Aman's eyes widened as it was not at all good in his sense and his boss saying it's beautiful. What happened to his sense? Aman blinked his eyes while the client's face glowed in joy]

Aman: ASR, won't you check it once more? [Arnav realized what he had said just now ... He mentally tapped his brain for this stupidity]

Arnav: See , Mr.Raj ... These designs are beautiful but not much trendy . This deal is not meant for AR [Arnav walked out from there while calculating something for his future ... Aman followed him once the clients left ...]

Aman: ASR are you ok ?

Arnav: No! Aman ... I have to do something very fast otherwise this Khushi will carve my brain forever ...

To be continued

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update waiting for your next update
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awe he is so cute😳
heart beats huh???😆😆///naughty boy
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Arnav is love sick :D loved it
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Good to see Arnav so lovely dovey...awesome update..
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start dear next part soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well well well
A perfect start!

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