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Chapter 27 (A):

Hello guys... missed me?? well i am back and that to before time... i told you i won't be able to update at least for 10-15 days, but see here i am...I couldn't control myself from writing after reading all the updates of other lrl writers...Their updates motivated me also to give you guys update of my ff... Before every time i used to be late from my promised time, but see this time i am way too early before i promised you... So shouldn't i deserve some reward or something??

well for me your appreciation only is my reward, so if you want to give reward to me then just vote And comment...

And this beautiful cover is made by one of my beautiful reader neha12056...Tqqq neha for this beautiful cover... I just loved it and loved your gesture too...

And this and the nxt part, both updates are dedicated to my two readers neha12056 and riya11dhanuka... I am dedicating it to them not because neha made cover for my story, but because, their comments motivated me soo much... and i am not talking about their comments on my ff but on other stories too.. i know they don't like their name to be mentioned specifically... but i couldn't control myself... If readers need to appreciate their writer by vote and comments then i think writers too need to appreciate their readers for their constant support and motivation... and i am doing that only... So once again guys thank you soo much... and enjoy the update...

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Chapter 27:

Recap:

All four of them shout: Naina...

While Rajveer was standing there like a statue, his gun still pointed in front, but his eyes were wet with tears...

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Naina was lying on the floor...and beside her was laying the goon... There was blood on the floor... Rajveer was still standing there with gun in his hand, which was pointed in the same direction, where Naina was standing... Smoke, caused by the shot, was coming out from his gun... Tear drop came out from the corner of his eyes...

Fast Rewind of the scenes...Rajveer's tears, he standing there motionless, everyone rushing towards Naina... Naina falling down on the floor, everyone shouting Naina, Gun shot, Rajveer looking into Naina's eyes...

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Now lets play...

Rajveer was still looking into Naina's eyes... He doesn't want to shot... Once again he was facing the same problem, where he doesn't want to shot but have to, due to circumstances... He is again forced to do something which his heart is not allowing him to do... By seeing Naina there, he just remembers Naveen standing there in front of his eyes...And then he closes his eyes... He decided he have to do this... Then he opens his eyes... And fire a shot from his gun... Before anyone can realize what happened, he fire one more shot... and Naina fall down on the floor, her head hitting the ground... Everyone except Rajveer shouts her name and then they rush towards her... Gunny, Huda, Ali, Alekh reaches near her.. Alekh hold her from her shoulder and turns her face... There is a scratch on her forehead, which she got due to falling on the rough and concrete floor and its bleeding little... ...

Alekh whispers: Naina...

Naina then looks at him and then looks at Rajveer who was still standing there motionless, with a blank face and his gun in his hand... She then turns to see her side and found the goon lying there, his eyes wide open,... his lips parted...blood oozing out from his forehead due to the bullet which hit him directly on his forehead... Then Naina remembers what happened...When Rajveer fired first shot, it hit that goon's hand which was holding gun... Due to this Gun fall down from his hand... That bullet crossed her ear from few mille centimeters distance, which made her ears numb for some seconds... The hold of that goon after getting hit by the bullet, on Naina's neck became loose ... And before he could do or understand anything, he was shot point blank on his forehead... This shot also missed Naina by only few mille centimeters... Agar goli jara si bhi idhar udhar hoti, to us admi ki jagah wo Naina ke forehead pe lagti... Because of that shot's intensity and it hitting him on his forehead, Naina got jerked by that goon, her ankle got twisted and she fall down with that goon beside him... ... She falls on her left side and her head hit the ground, resulting her to get scratch on her forehead... Naina saw that man lying beside her dead... She didn't have any doubt on Rajveer,... She knew Rajveer won't let anything happen to her... She knows that Rajveer is one of the best shooter of Indian army... She knows and trusted Rajveer... Its just she was worried for him... She knows that how much difficult it was for him to shot, when he knew that even a small mistake can take Naina's life... How much difficult for him to fire that shot, which could have hit her, if it would have been little misplaced... And moreover, she knew that how much difficult it was for him to shot, when once again someone close to his heart is in front of his gun... Standing there at his gun point... When she looked in his eyes before the gun shot, she knew that Rajveer was not seeing her, but he was remembering that moment when Naveen was standing in front of his gun, asking him, begging him to shot him... She knew that in how much pain Rajveer is,...how much difficult it is for him... And today one more thing she realized that during faculty appraisal when Rajveer missed his last shot, it was not because he was being Abhimanyu's true friend by letting him win... No... Though He is abhimanyu's friend... But he is a true friend which anyone can get... And thus he wants his friend to win fairly, by their hard work, by their skill, not by his favors... That was the reason that Rajveer and Naveen were not only each other's friends but competitors also, because by competing fairly with each other, they made each other to realize their true skills and use their full potential and thus help each other to bring their best out... ... At that time she didn't realize all this, because she didn't understand him completely... But now, now she understands him completely, understands him more than anyone else... Understands that how much difficult it is to see someone his own his gun point, after Naveen's death... Naveen's death not only shattered him badly but also shattered his confidence on him, that whenever someone comes on his gun point he doesn't have full confidence on him that he will save that person... And when it comes to Naina, standing on his gun point then his confidence falls down little more, his pain increases little more... And same happened today also...

Huda: Phoolan tu thik to hai na...

Huda's voice brings her back from her chain of thoughts...Naina turns to look at them and then looks at Rajveer... By seeing him she can clearly see that in how much pain he is...

Naina calls him out to bring him back from his trance, from his painful memories: Rajveer...

But he didn't hear her.. She once again calls him, this time little louder: Rajveer..

Her voice brings him out of his trance; he looks at her and found her sitting on the ground, with her forehead bleeding... Naina tries to get up, but as her ankle got twisted while falling, she hisses in pain and was about to fall down but Alekh and Huda holds her... Rajveer by seeing that comes hurriedly towards them... He then lifts Naina swiftly in his arms... Naina being lifted suddenly, places her hands on his shoulders...She looks at Rajveer but Rajveer was not looking at her...His face was blank, without any emotions...

Rajveer: Alekh I am taking Naina to infirmary... Get Shalini there...

He then starts moving towards infirmary... ... Huda, Ali and gunny follows him, while Alekh rushes to bring Shalini... Rajveer finds Huda and Ali following him...He stop and says...

Rajveer: Huda, Ali, Naina is fine; first you take care of that body... If cadets found it they will get afraid... and mostly I don't want anyone to know about this right now... Ball is not over yet... and I don't want it to get disturbed...

Huda: but sir Phoolan..

Rajveer: Capt. Huda, its an order... Naina is fine and Major Randhawa and I are here with her... You just go and do as I say... He says seriously..

Huda and Ali saw the seriousness...

Both: yes sir...

They then leave from there... And Rajveer started walking again... He was once again looking in front... He not even once looked at Naina... while Naina was looking at him continuously...His grip was tight... He was holding Naina tightly, as if he was afraid that the moment he will lose his grip, she will be gone... Apart from Naina, gunny too was looking at Rajveer... He knows that how much Rajveer loves Naina... He also knows that why Rajveer is disturbed right now, he too knows that while shooting Naina, Rajveer remembered Naveen and the way he was shot by Rajveer ... He knows... He knows everything... After all he is Rajveer's friend, a kind of friend which Abhimanyu was never able to become...

Gunny places his hand on Rajveer's shoulder: Relax Rajveer... Naina thik hai...

Rajveer who stopped walking when Gunny places his hand on his shoulder, first looks at him and then looks at Naina, who now also was looking at him... His eyes met with hers and as always they both felt each other's pain and the pain which they were feeling by seeing the other in pain... After seeing Naina for a good minute, he closes his eyes and sighs...

Rajveer whispers: I know... I know she is safe... I am just making myself to believe this... he then opens his eyes and looks at gunny... He found him little injured... His face and hands are bruised a little... His clothes were smudged by the dirt...

Rajveer: tu thik hai?

Gunny smiles: I am absolutely fit and fine... as you can see..

Rajveer: haa wo to dikh hi raha hai..

Gunny: hey come on.. Didn't I thought you to not to judge someone by looks, as looks can be very deceiving..

Rajveer raises his eyebrow: lagta hai waqt ke saath tumhari yaaddasht kamjoor ho gayi hai... isliye tum bhool rahe ho ki yeh line tumhari nahi merit hi, jo main humesha tumhe aur naveen ko bolta tha, as tum dono hi kisi bhi ladki ko dekh kar us par latto ho jate the...he by saying this started walking...

Naina who till now was looking at Rajveer and tries to understand his emotions, gets surprised to hear this... As from the time she knows Gunny, she always found him serious, who keeps his feelings, his emotions with himself and who behaves with others formally... Though he helped her in proving Rajveer and Naveen's innocence, but he didn't interact with them much... he talked with them as much as was necessary and only things which were related to the mission... And also she didn't know till today that Gunny knew not only Rajveer but Naveen too..

Gunny while walking beside them: Come on Raj, ab agar tumhe ladkiyon me koi interest nahi tha, iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum mujhse aur Naveen se chido... Ab aap to there maryadapurshotam Ram, one women man, but that doesn't mean everyone else need to be like you too.. ab agar tum Ram the, to kisi ko to Krishna bhi ban na tha na, warna saari gopiyon ka kya hota... Unka dil jo ki aap pehle hi tod dete the, wo aur toot jata na... Main aur Naveen to bas un dilo ko thoda jod dete the...

Rajveer shakes his head but a small smile appears on his face, which Naina adores him at this moment... Right now she is feeling relieved to have Gunny with them, as due to gunny, Rajveer came out from his painful memories and were smiling, though she knows that still he didn't forgot whatever happened moments ago, completely, but he was not that much lost as much he was... .. She was now calm down little by seeing Rajveer getting calm...Also she was enjoying Rajveer's this side, which was hidden due to all the past happenings and his sufferings...

They reached the infirmary... Rajveer places Naina on the bed carefully... He then places a pillow behind her back and one pillow below her leg, to make her comfortable.. While doing this he didn't look at her... he was just doing all that without glancing at her... While walking when gunny told him that Naina is fine, was the only time when he looked at her... Rajveer was making Naina comfortable on the bed, when infirmary door gets open and a frantic Shalini comes inside along with a little disturbed Alekh..

Shalini: Major what happened to...

Her rest of the words didn't come out of her mouth by seeing the person standing in front of her eyes... Gunny, Rajveer were facing there back towards the door when Shalini entered and by hearing her voice both turned immediately.. One in relief, as Shalini came and another because after hearing her voice he was unable to control himself... He knew that she is here in KMA, he knew that he will be facing her once again, He before coming prepared himself for all this, but the moment he heard her voice, after years, he just couldn't control himself,... For that one moment his heart overpowered his mind and Maj. Gunnraj Singh Randhawa who always listen to his mind and never let his emotions to overpower him, gave in to his heart...

He was staring at her... His eyes looking into her eyes, once again... He looks at her completely... For him she is still the same, she didn't change but still changed a lot... Shalini too was lost in him... She didn't know that he is here, didn't know that he came back once again... Last time when he was in KMA, she with great difficulty controlled herself and she knew that why she was able to control her last time, because last time she was still Capt. Dr. Shalini Singhel, but now how will she control herself?...now how will she keep her heart in control?...when now she no longer is Capt. Dr. Shalini Singhel but Capt. Dr. Shalini Kapoor...

Rajveer: Doc, thank god you are here... Naina ko chot aayi hai, so you please treat her fast..

Shalini and Gunny who were lost in each other's came out of their trance... Shalini then shifts her gaze from Gunny to Naina.. And then move towards her... Though her heart is beating fast but she keeps herself in control, as now first she needs to treat Naina...

While Shalini was treating Naina, Yudi, Pooja, Ali, Huda came to the infirmary...

Rajveer gets angry by seeing them: Capt. Alekh did I tell you to bring Capt. Sahani and Capt. Ghai along with Dr. Shalini?

Alekh: no sir..

Rajveer: then what they all are doing here?

Pooja: sir wo Naina ko chot aayi hai, to hum kaise na aate..

Rajveer: Naina ko chot aayi hai, to aap sab yaha aa gaye, unse milne, apna mission bich me chodkar... great just great,... Kal jab aap sab border pe war me honge, aur aapke saathi ko chot lag jayegi, tab bhi aap dushman se ladne ki jagah aapne dost ke paas aa jayege nahi? Kyunki aapke liye war ladne se jayada jaroori apne saathi ko dekhna hoga... m I right Capt. Ghai... He ask them sternly..

Yudi: wo sorry sir.. But wo NAina..

Rajveer: Naina thik hai... And didn't you know ki Naina akeli nahi hai... Maj Randhawa and I are here with her.. Then what was the need for you to come here leaving your duties, and ur mission in between...

Abhi bhi yeh ball khatam nahi hui.. Abhi bhi army ke senior officers and humare defense minister KMA me hi hai.. Aur hume nahi pata ki sabhi dushman pakde gaye ta nahi, lekin phir bhi aap sabke sab, sab kuch chod kar yaha aa gaye... Is this how a soldier behaves? Is this what I taught you all?

Pooja: we are sorry sir..

Rajveer: I don't want your sorry... Capt. Ghai.. ladai me aapki sorry ki koi jagah nahi hoti.. Aapki ek bhul dushman ko jeet dila sakti hai,... Kya aapke sorry bol dene se tab sab thik ho jayega... Now I want you all to move out from here... Capt. Sahani, aap control room me Chaubey ke pass jayege and wahan se sab kuch monitor karenge... Capt. Ghai , Capt. Huda, Capt. Beg aap sabhi assembly hall me jayenge aur waha sab pe nazar rakhenge... Abhi aur bhi kayi dushman KMA me chupe ho sakte hai... Mujhe kisi bhi tarah ki koi galti nahi chaiye... Main khud bhi waha aa raha hu.. Capt. Alekh yaha Naina ke pass rahege... Now all of you move out..

Huda, Ali, and Pooja move out from there reluctantly...Meanwhile Shalini did Naina's dressing...

Shalinii to Naina: all done.. You are now as fit and fine as before...

Naina: thanks doc...

Shalini: Well you are not welcome, Naina... You are not welcome here in the infirmary as a patient... ok... so take care of yourself...

Naina just nods at her with a smile..

Shalini then turns to Rajveer whose back was facing Naina: Major, your naina is now perfectly fine... so now you can relax... The scratch on her forehead was not that deep... And on her ankle I applied the spray and bandaged it... It will be fine soon... for now she just need to be little careful and not to put pressure on her feet...she just need to come to change her bandage once, on day after tomorrow... Other than this nothing happened to her... So ab aap chain ki saans le sakte hai...

Rajveer who turned the moment Shalini called him, listened to what Shalini said... Rajveer just looks at Naina... and then turns to Shalini..

Rajveer: Doc, you just stay here with her and make sure she takes rest... I will go, I need to be there till the ball ends, also I need to inform to BC about everything which happened... And Alekh will be here with you... I will just go... He turns to move out but stops hearing Naina's voice..

Naina: I am fine, I don't need rest... I also need to be there to do my duty...so I will come out with you...

Rajveer: stop being stubborn every time Naina...You are supposed to take rest and that's what you are going to do... You are not moving from here till the time I won't ask you.. Is that clear?

Naina: But I don't want to take rest... And besides Doc said na I m perfectly fine.. So what's the need to take rest...

Rajveer: Shalini also said that you shouldn't stress yourself and put pressure on your foot.. If you are going to come with me then you will be hurting your feet more, you can't walk properly, you can fall down...and it will pain more...

Naina while looking into his eyes: to kya hua aap ho na mujhe sambhalne ke liye... aur aapke hote hue mujhe dard nahi ho sakta...

Rajveer while saying sarcastically: aapko humesha zid karni hoti hai nahi... aapne to kasam khai hai meri baat na ,man ne ki... You want to go outside na, you want to come with me, fine... then...

He then come towards her and lifts her in his arms with a swift moment and starts going out... Shalini, Gunny and Alekh were shocked to see that...Alekh was supposed to be here with Naina, but now what can he do by standing here, when Naina only is not here... So he too moves out of there... Gunny too starts moving out... when he heard...

Shalini: Aapko bhi chot aayi hai... Aapko bhi dawa lagane ki jarrorat hai warna aapke zakhm jaldi thik nahi honge...

Gunny while turning to her: mere zakhm itni aasnai se nahi bharte doctor... Aur kamal hai mujhe zakham dene wala aaj mere zakhmo pe dava lagane ki baat kar raha hai...

Shalini: gunny please tum...

Gunny: its Major Gunraj Singh Randhawa for you Capt. Dr. Shalini Singhal, or should I say Mrs. Shalini Singhal...mujhe gunny bulane ka haq aap bahut pehle kho chuki hai...he then leaves from there...

Shalini sees him leaving and tears comes in her eyes... She whispers: Its not Shalini Singhal, Its Shalini Kappor now...She just closes her eyes and tears flows from her eyes...

Here Gunny after coming out of infirmary takes out his phone and sees a photo in it...

He then kept his phone in his pocket and left from there...


(guys don't mind but i didn't see lrl after rajveer left, so i have no idea about Gunny and Vidya's love story... I am pairing Gunny with Shalini because i saw their serial jeet and i loved their pairing... In that show even after being together, they couldn't be together because of Gunny's past, who came in his life once again... So moral of the story is their love story couldn't get complete in that serial which i didn't like... So here i am gonna complete it... and as my ff name is Second chance to their love... So why should only Rajveer and Naina get this second chance... Let others also get second chance to complete their love story... So i hope you will like this pairing and i am not disappointing you guys...)

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Rajveer-Naina:

After coming out of the infirmary, Rajveer started moving towards the hall..

Naina: Aap kya kar rahe hai Rajveer.. Please mujhe niche utariye...

Rajveer: ab aapko meri iss baat se bhi aitraaz hai... Mujhe ache se pata hai ki main kya kar raha hu...

Naina keeps her hand on his cheek and make him to looks at her.. She just takes his name with full of Love: Rajveer ...

Rajveer looks at her and whispers her name like a prayer: Naina...And one tear fall down from his left eys... Naina removes that tear and Rajveer closes his eyes.. He then keeps his forehead on her by bringing her closer... Naina too closes her eyes...

Their trance was broken by a cough...Rajveer turns to find Gunny standing there and having a teasing grin on his face...He has washed his face... and dusted his clothes... his condition was looking better now, except some scratches, which were now not that bad, he was fine...

Gunny: jis tarah se tum infirmary se nikle the, mujhe to laga tha ki kahi yaha world war 3 na ho jaaye... Par yaha to nazara hi kuch aur hai... aisa lag raha hai ki Karan Johar ki koi romantic movie ka scene chal raha hai...

Rajveer rolls his eyes and gave a glare to him, while Naina starts blushing...

Rajveer: Gunny ji agar aapki bakwas ho gayi ho to chale...

Gunny: Bakwas aur main, come on Major you know I am always the sensible one.. Aur chalna to hai, but are you sure aap aise jaayenge, I mean Naina ko apni baahon me lekar... No, I mean I am not having any problem with this, as she is totally yours and you can do anything with her, I don't mind you lifting her in your arms, but I am sure lot of other people will mind and tumhare saare cadets yeh sochenge ki unke faculty yeh konsi nayi drill sikha rahe hai unhe??...

Rajveer stars coughing, like fake cough, to hide his embarrassment... and Naina, If Naina was blushing before, we can say now she completely turned into a tomato, where as Gunny was having a smirk..

Rajveer controlled himself: if you are forgetting, then let me remind you Shalini said ki Naina ko apne pair pe pressure nahi dalna hai, so I was just helping her..

Gunny: help to aap unko sahara dekar bhi kar sakte hai, baahon me utha kar hi help nahi ki ja sakti... But its okk.. I completely understand your emotions...

Rajveer after getting frustrated: ohh stop it gunny... He then make Naina stand and says: here, now happy both of you... ab chale..

Gunny: Sure Major...

Rajveer then very carefully make naina to walk.. His one hand is on her waist and other is on her shoulder... Naina smiles seeing rajveer concern... Though she is not getting pain, because she is habituated to it, she got injured more than this many times, and she can walk properly herself without any help, but she doesn't want to do that, because she is enjoying Rajveer's concern, his care... And she is also aware that if at this moment she will say to Rajveer that she is fine and can walk herself then he will get angry and that only because he cares for her and is worrying abt her...

They come inside the hall, where the celebrations are going on... After Defense Minister's speech, music started once again, and everyone was enjoying ... As everyone was busy they didn't see Rajveer, Naina and gunny, but still some people or cadets saw them and were having curious expressions on their faces... Rajveer made naina sit on a chair, which was beside a table, in the corner of the hall...

Rajveer: aap yaha aana chathi thi, main aapko yaha le aaya... lekin ab aap yaha se bilkul bhi nahi hilegi... Is that understood?

Naina nods at him and with a small smile says: okk sir..

Naina then turns to gunny: waise gunny sir aap yaha achanak?

Gunny: wo unofficially mere yaha aane ka reason hai ki aaj KMA ke 25th celebration me KMA ke ex students bhi aaye hai, aur main bhi unme se ek hu... aur mere yaha aane ka official but secret reason hai ki

Rajveer: Major Randhawa joined us in our mission... And now he will be teaching in KMA gorilla war techniques... He then turns to look at Gunny, I think hume BC se mil lena chaiye... Chale... And then turning to Naina, aur aap yaad rakhiyega ki maine aapse kya kaha tha,...

He then leaves from there along with gunny and go to meet BC, who was busy in having a conversation with Defense Minister...

Rajveer to Bc: sir...

Bc turns and then he looks at Gunny... Gunny salutes him...

BC: Major Randhawa, welcome back to KMA... In the morning only I came to know about your posting...I will make the announcement tomorrow, for now enjoy the ball... But what happened to you?? You seem to be injured...

Gunny: I am perfectly fine sir, Soldier ke liye Ghayal hona jaise pani peene ke barabar hota hai... I am perfectly fine..

BC: well you are absolutely correct Major... Soldiers ka injuries se bahut gehra rishta hota hai...

Bc then turning to Defense Minister: Sir aap Major Gunraj Singh Randhawa ko to jaante hi hai, as for sometime he was appointed for your daughter's safety... .. and while pointing towards rajveer, he says... Aur yeh hai Major Arjun Rathore... I was telling about him only... ...

Defense Minister (Sameera's father, I am not able to remember his name.. so sorry guys... you have to mange by Defense minister only..): Of course Brigadier I remember Major Randhawa very well, after all its difficult to forget such an brilliant and courageous soldier..How are you Major? He said while giving his hand for shaking..

Gunny while shaking his hand: I am perfectly fine sir.. And its nice meeting you again..

D. M while moving his hand towards Rajveer: And Nice meeting you Major RAthore... Brigadier Chandok was telling me about you... well if you don't mind then I will like to meet you after sometime, in Brigadier Chandok's office..

Rajveer while shaking his hand: Its pleasure meeting you also sir.. And sure I will meet you Sir...

D.M: well, then see you soon, Major... I will go with Brigadier Chandok and will be in his office for sometime... You can come and meet me after sometime... Till then enjoy the ball... You too Major Randhawa, enjoy the ball..

Rajveer/Gunny: Sure sir..

Then D.M and Bc leaves from there...

Gunny: kya lagta hai Raj yeh tujhse kyu milna chahte hai?

Rajveer: Jaroor Bc ne kuch kaha hoga... well we can only guess for now, will have to wait till I meet him...

Gunny: hmm yeah...By the way wo..

Abhimanyu: Hello Captain Randhawa... Its nice to see you here again..

Gunny was cut by Abhimanyu, who saw Gunny talking with Rajveer...

(okk, so in my story, Abhimanyu and Gunny knows each other, but only because guuny came to KMA before, and helped Naina and her friends in proving Naveen and rajveer's innocence... Gunny knows Rajveer and Naveen how and when, that you will come to know soon... But yes Gunny shares a friendly bond with Rajveer and Naveen, while with Abhimayu its just formal bonding, nothing else, as I don't think Abhimanyu deserves any friend, if it would have been in my hand I would have never made Rajveer his friend, but I can't do anything, as my story's background is same till the time of Rajveer's jeep blast scene...)

Gunny turns to looks at Abhimanyu: well its good to see you again Major Chauhan, but just a correction, now its not Captain Randhawa, but its Major Randhawa.. I think aap apne aap me kuch jayada hi khoye rehte hai, isliye aapko aapke aas pass kya ho raha hai kuch pata nahi chalta..

Abhi gets embarrassed: ahh I m sorry Major, its just..

Gunny: arey main to bas majak kar raha tha, aap to serious ho gaye,,... Don't worry I didn't mind you calling me Captain.. As Main chahe Captain hu, ya major, mujhe iss baat se koi fark nahi padta kyunki mere liye mere desh ki seva aur suraksha karna hi mera kaam hai aur yahi meri asli pehchan...

Abhi: well you said absolutely correct.. Ek soldier ke liye uska desh hi uski pehchan hota hai, na ki medals aur uski army me position...

Gunny: well I am glad that you understood me correctly...He says sarcastically... hmm well its nice to meet you again, but now I will take your leave, as I have to meet my fav cadets who have now become reputed soldiers of army.. So see you soon.. And then turning to Rajveer, Ahh Major chale...

Rajveer: sure.. ..

They then start moving from there...

Abhi pov: Iss Major Rathore me aisa kya hai ki Naina, unke friends aur ab Gunny bhi inke saath itne comfortable hai, jabki yeh inhe pehle se jante bhi nahi... hmm may be gunny inhe jaante ho, but jaha tak humne search kiya hai, yeh apne missions ke liye jayada tar india se bahar hi rahe hai, as yeh India ke secret missions ko lead karte aaye hai... par phir gunny inhe kaise... hmm.. Pata to lagana padega major Arjun Rathore ke bare me, hum jab se inse mile hai, hume yeh lag raha hai ki yeh kuch to chupa rahe hai, yeh jaise dikhte hai waise hai nahi... ...

Gunny and Rajveer were walking when Rajveer gets a call.. he asks Gunny to go and told that he will come...

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Meanwhile Naina was sitting alone, with a sad face... She knew that Rajveer is not perfectly fine and is worried because he is not ready to share his pain also even with her too.. She can't see rajveer in pain and all this serious type... She was thinking what she should do make Rajveer calm and to give him peace.. .. She was made to come out from her trance by Alekh...

Alekh: aise mooh latkake kya soch rehli hai... yaha baithe rehne se Sir ka mood thik nahi hone wala...

Naina: To main kya karo Alekh? Wo to thik se baat bhi nahi kar rahe... Agar apna dard wo mujhse baatenge nahi to main unka dard kam kaise karongi? Their conversation was disturbed by a voice...

: "agar wo apna dard tumhe nahi dikha rha to tum apni feelings use dikha do, I am sure tab wo apna dard tumse chupa nahi paayega..."

Naina and Alekh turns to look and found Gunny standing there...

Naina: aap bolna kya chah rahe hai gunny sir?

Gunny: Main yeh kehna cha raha hu Naina, ki dekho aaj KMA ki achievements ko hum sab celeberate kar rahe hai,... KMA ne humare desh ko pichle 25 saalo se itne jabaz officers diya hai, uske like hum KMA ko ek chota sa thanks bol rahe hai right... But KMA ke soldiers me sirf ek yahi talent to nahi hai na...Aur tum apne ussi dusre talent ko use karke ek tir se do nishane laga sakti ho... Pehla nishana sabko yeh bata karke ki KMA ke officers kisi bhi field me kam nahi hai,.. aur dusra tum apne Rajveer se apni feelings share kar paogi...

Naina still doesn't understand anything and gives him a confuse look...

Alekh: Abhi bhi tere dimag ki batti nahi jali... Gunny sir ke kehne ka matlab hai ... He says something in her ear... Samjhi yedi...

A smile comes on her lips... and then she nods at them...

Gunny: so lets set the stage for Naina... and naina all the best.. he shows her a thumbs up... And goes...

Suddenly the music stops and everybody starts woofing for being disappointed... And then they hear gunny's voice...

Gunny: I know I know guys you all are disappointed because the music is stop...but trust me its just done to make this celebration, this atmosphere more interested... So guys as you know that today we are celeberating KMA's 25th anniversary... And as our Brigadier sir and DM must have said that ki KMA ne inn pichle 25 saalo me humare desh ko behtarin aur jaanbaaz officers diye hai, jinhone humare desh ke dushmano ko jung ke maidan me naako tale channe chabvaye hai...,, but guys KMA's officers have some other talents too... They are not only expert in war field but other fields too... And as today we are celebrating here, so I would like all of you to see those other talents... So now I am not going to waste your more time... .. So be ready guys... And then we see the lights off...and then suddenly voice comes...

Hmmm, hmmm, hmmm, hmmm,

Hmmm, hmmm hmmm.

Hmmm, hmmm, hmmm, hmmm,

Hmmm, hmmm hmmm.

Kabhi yaadon mein aaun

Kabhi khwabon mein aaun,

And then center lights fall on someone, and we can see Naina standing in the middle...

Kabhi yaadon mein aaun,

Kabhi khwabon mein aaun,

Naina then lifts her eyes and sees Rajveer standing in the corner... Rajveer who was on phone, after ending the phone was about to move towards the Gunny, when he heard his voice... He was curious to know what he is up to...

He started moving towards him, when lights got switched off... He stood at the place where he was standing, and then he heard the voice, the voice who always reaches to his heart... He knows that voice so very well that he doesn't need to wait for the lights to come and see her face, like others are waiting.. The moment he heard humming sound he knew it's her, it's his Naina who is singing... And then light comes and he found her standing in the middle singing with her eyes closed... By her words he knew she is singing for him... and then Naina lifts her head and opens her eyes and their eyes gets locked with each other...

Teri palkon ke saaye

Mein aakar jhilmilau

Main wo khushbu nahi jo

Hawa mein kho jaun...

Hawa bhi chal rahi hai

Magar tu hi nahi hai...

She sings this line and Rajveer was able to feel her pain.. He knows that Naina is disturbed for him, disturbed from his behavior, disturbed from him not being here from his heart... he knew that She knows that he is here because he wants to do his duty.. Otherwise his heart is not here.. as his heart is not calm and disturbed ... though he is physically here, but emotional he is till stuck on the moment when Naina was at the gun point... So Naina is just trying to bring him back from his painful state...

Fiza rangeen bani hai,

She sings this line while moving her eyes around her..

Kahani keh rahi hai,

She once again locks her eyes with his...

Mujhe jitna bhulaao

Main utna yaad aau...

By now Rajveer stars moving towards her... It was as if he was in some kind of a trance and was getting pulled by it...

Haa.. jo tum na milte

Hota hi kya dhoondh laane ko...

Haa.. jo tum na milte

Hota hi kya dhoondh laane ko...

Jo tum na hote

Hota hi kya haar jaane ko

Now Naina too starts moving towards him...

Meri amaanat ho tum

Meri mohabbat ho tum

Tumhe kaise main bhulaun...

Naina's sandle gets stuck on this gown and she was about to fall, when Rajveer comes and holds her... Rajveer's one hand is on her waist and other is on shoulder...,... They were lost in each other, that they didn't realize that everyone was watching them.. But how can their friends let this happen... So when Rajveer holds Naina and was making her stand properly, the light which was till now on them move and fall on Alekh... Now Alekh starts singing...

Tu aasmaan mera jahaan lage mujhe

Tu raaston ki manzilein lage mujhe

Tu hi meri chandni wo

Raaton ko jo halki si jale

Tu hi meri sham-o-sehar

Jo mere sang chale...

(Rajveer and Naina both are lost in each other... Though it's Alekh who is singing, but the words clearly depict rajveer's feelings... And Rajveer and Naina both feel as if it's Rajveer who is singing...)

Hawa bhi chal rahi hai

Magar tu hi nahi hai

Fiza rangeen bani hai

Kahani keh rahi hai

Mujhe jitna bhulaao

Main utna yaad aau...

(Now Pooja sings this song, and you can assume it to be background music for both Rajveer and Naina... Rajveer then starts walking towards the sitting arrangement, while all the time looking into Naina's eyes... Naina too is lost in his eyes...)

Kabhi yaadon mein aaun

Kabhi khwabon mein aaun

Kabhi yaadon mein aaun

Kabhi khwabon mein aaun

Teri palkon ke saaye

Mein aakar jhilmilau

(Rajveer made her sit on the chair once again... He was about to move when Naina holds his hand... Rajveer looks at her and then sits beside her...Naina is still holding his hand... He starts caressing her hand with his thumb... He then brings his other hand towards her face and cups her face... Naina leans onto his touch... Both just kept staring each other...By this time, Song ends and everyone applauds... Music starts once again and everyone start dancing and enjoying once again... Lights were kept dim, so none was able to see Rajveer and naina clearly...Also because their table was hidden by the curtain...

Rajveer: Maine tumhe dubara khone ke liye nahi paya hai Naina... Jaanta hu ki mera aise react karna bilkul bhi appreciable nahi hai... Ek soldier hone ke naate, maut se humara saamna hona bahut hi aam baat hai... Hum soldiers' apni jaan ko humeahs apni hateli me lekar chalet hai Naine... Aur soldiers hone ke naate tum aur main, hum dono hi jaan dene se nahi darte... Main aaj bhi apni jaan apne desh ke liye deno ko tayar hu... mujhe meri jaan jaane ka koi dar nahi hai...

Lekin Naina, Jab aapki jaan, aapki zindagi koi aur ban jata hai na, To ek soldier bhi phir apni jaan ko kuch hote hue nahi dekh pata...Wahi aaj mere saath hua... mere saath hi aisa kyu hota hai Naina, kyu mere saamne mere hi apne khade hote hai... Kyu meri hi bandook ki goli unki zindagi aur maut ka faisla karti hai... .. Dushman pe goli chalana bahut aasan hota hai Naina, Par ussi goli ke lagne ka dar uss inaasn ko ho, jo aapko duniya me sabse pyaara ho, jo aapki zindagi ho, to wo dard bardasht nahi hota Naina... Ek baar pehle meri goli ke nishaane pe Naveen tha, aur aaj tum thi... Main pehle hi Naveen ko apne hi haatho se...He closes his eyes... Aur agar aaj jara sib hi chuk ho jati to main aaj tumhe bhi Naveen ki tarh kho deta, wo bhi apne hi haatho se...Kyu Naina...Why me?? Why me only?? ...

He then closes his eyes... Tears come out from his eyes... Naina's eyes too becomes teary by seeing Rajveer in that state... She takes her hand out from his hand and removes his tears and while cupping his face says...

Naina: Aapke saath aisa isliye hota hai , kyunki shayad bhagvan ko bhi pata hai ki aap apne apno ko kuch nahi hone denge... Uss din bhi aapne Bhaiya ko kuch nahi hone diya... aur aaj mujhe kuch nahi hone diya... Uss din aapne Bhaiya ko aazad kiya tha... aaj aapne mujhe uss aadmi se aazad karwaya... Pata hai Rajveer aaj mujhe sachem pata chala ki bhiaya ne kyu aapse kaha tha unhe aazad karne ke liye... Kyu unhine aapke hato se aazad hona behtar laga... Kyunki aaj jab jab main waha gun point pe khadi thi... Aur mere saamne aap the gun point kiye hue... Tab mujhe bhi wahi feel hua jo ta bhaiya ko hua hoga...

Rajveer looks at her after hearing this...

Aapne sahi kaha hum soldiers hai jo apni jaan dene se nahi darte... Par jab ek taraf aapka dushman ho aapki maut banker aur ek tarf aapka apna, tab aap dushman ke haato marne acha apne uss apne ke haatho marna chahege... Bahiya ne bhi wahi kiya tha... Apne dushmano ke haatho marne ki jagah unhone aapko chuna... Aur aaj jab main ussi jagah pe thi, mujhe pata tha ki aap mujhe kuch nahi hone denge... Lekin dil me ek khwaish yeh bhi jagi thi ki agar mujhe maut aaye to aapke haatho se aaye...

Rajveer becomes shocked to hear this...

Dushamn ki jagah kisi apne ke haatho marne se aapko sukoon milta hai, wahi sukoon bhaiya ko bhi mila hoga... aur wahi sukoon mujhe bhi milta agar aaj mujhe aapki goli lag jaati... Aura b main yahi chahungi ki agar mujhe kabhi maut aaye to wo aapke haatho... She was cut by Rajveer, who kept his hand on her mouth, stopping her from saying further...

Rajveer: please NAina, don't say this... Don't ever say this or wish something like that... Tumhe nahi pata ki main kitni maute mara hu, Naveen par wo goli chalane ke baad... Kitni taklif mujhe hui thi jab tum meri bandook ke saamne thi...

Kisi apne ke haatho markar hume to sukoon mil jata hai Naina, par uss apne ka kya, jise Zindagi bhar iss kadvi sachai ke saath jeena padta hai ki usne uss insaan ki jaan le li jo ki uska apna tha... jise wo had se zayada pyaar karta tha... Tum nahi jaanti uss taklif ko, uss ghutan ko, uss dard ko jo uss insaan ko hoti hai jo kisi apne pe goli chalata hai... Maine wo ghutan, wo dard, wo taklif sehen kari hai NAina... Aur kahi na kahi zinadagi bhar karta rahonga... Lekin mujme wo sab kuch dubara bardasht karne ki himmat nahi hai...

He then removes his hand from her face...

Tumne to keh diya ki tum mere haato se... Par kabhi tum apne aapko meri jagah dekh paogi... Akbhi mujh par goli chala paogi...

Naina lowers her head and whispers: Goli to chalai thin a maine aap par...Wo bhi bina kisi guilt, bina kisi taklif ke...

Rajveer understood about which she is talking... She mentally curse himself for making her remembering that day when she shot him... rajveer then lifts her head up and while cupping says...

Rajveer: Naina please tum bhool kyu nahi jati uss haadse ko... Maine tumse kaha than a ki hum ab uske bare me koi baat nahi karege... Us din job hi hua usme tumhari koi galti nahi thi...

Naina: to us din jo Naveen bhaiya ke saath hua usme aapki bhi to koi galati nahi thi na... Wada to aapne bhi kiya tha ki aap bhi apne atit ko yaad nahi karenge... To phir kyu wo sab yaad karke apne aapko kamzor bana rahe hai???... Kyu bewajh apne aapko taklif de rahe hai wo sab yaad karke... aapki taklif mujhe taklif deti hai... nahi dekh sakti main aapko dard me... phir kyu aisa kar rahe hai... Please aisa mat kijiye apne saath... please ...

Rajveer looks at her and feels her pain... He knew that his pain is giving her also pain... So he decides to end both of their suffering...

Rajveer: I am sorry Naina... It's just at that time while seeing you there, I couldn't control myself from remembering Naveen... and I promise from now on I won't remember that and gives you pain... I am sorry Naina... I am so sorry...

Naina hugs him tightly: I love you...i don't want to see you in pain...

Rajveer too hugs her tightly: I love you too Naina... and I promise I won't let our past effect out present... They stay like that for few minutes... Rajveer then breaks the hug and while looking at her place a kiss on her forehead... He then gets up and was about to move out when Naina again holds his hand...

Naina: ab aap kaha ja rahe hai???...

Rajveer smiles at her: don't worry main kahi nahi jar aha.. wo bas DM ne mujhe unse milne bulaya tha.. to main bas unhi se milne BC ke office jar aha hu... Tum yahi baitho... main jaldi unse milkar aata hu... ok...

Naina smiles too.. Rajveer then leave from there...

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BC office: Rajveer, BC and DF were present in BC office... The trio was sitting on the couches... There was discussion going on... Which for now, is not audible to us...

DM: The decision is yours Major... In my opinion the time has come when you should come out in open...

Rajveer: thank you sir... I too think that now the time has came when Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat should make his entry...But still I think we should wait for few days... First I want to find out that even after our tight security how they managed to come inside that too with all that bombs and pistols... There was surely some loophole, which we need to find first...

BC: that's fine major... Whenever you decide, your presence will be made to known to everyone...

Rajveer then stands up and salutes them and leave from there with a smile on his face...

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continued below...



Hi Arti m glad u updated soon
I.missed u allot
Actually d update 😆
For a fraction of second I was afraid
When uvrewind d scene
I always can see d pain in rajveers eyes when ever he remembers abt naveeb being sot by him
N this time again when Naina was in his gun point

Naina is understanding his condition
N finally she undersood d real reason behind his lost in appraisal with abhimanyu
Its true its really when u r fighting with ur enemies
But indeed its hardest to fight with ur close one or ur loved once
N all d time rajveer have to face this situation
But Naina is not much injured that's good
Akhir kar maj rajveer is 1of d best shooter
How can he let happen anything to.his Naina
But his inner emotions made him weak that is y he is not able to met his eyes with Naina
Bt she is understanding his turmoils
That's is d best thing BTW their relationship now
Which I actually wanted to see in d show
Which never happened
But m.glad u r covering these aspects very well
Infirmary scene is nice
They can't let d mission in danger just for a ghayal sipahi
Bcz country comes first

Naina is true stuborn
Now everything is OK as gunny is also back
One of d best thing
Gunny n Shalini pairing they look great together in d pic
N a sweet girl like Shalini deserves a real loving man who can love her fromhis soul


Loved d scenes BTW raj Naina gunny
Liked d scenes in ball
Abhimayu tum na hi samjho to achha h ki y everyone loves rajveet immensely
His din samjh jaoge tum.sudhar jaoge


Arti m liking gunny n raj frndship very much
Wowww
Wow
Wowww
U know what is song is one of my most fav from d time of abhijeet version perfect for d situation loved it

Convo between rains is emotional nal
N I loved it

But I hated Naina for her act of shooting rajveer in that truck I.know its past but I.can't forget that scene

But now happy their bonding


Wowww after a few days rajveers identity going to reveal woo
Loved it one




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continuation:

Meanwhile in the assembly hall:

After Rajveer left Naina was sitting alone and seeing everywhere... He found Ali and pooja on the dance floor... Though they were dancing, but still keeping eye on everything... Huda and Alekh were standing beside the bar along with Gunny talking about who knows what... She then shifted her gaze and found Shalini standing in a corner near to the bar counter and looking in one direction... She followed her gaze and found her looking towards Huda, Alekh and Gunny's direction... She found it little strange... But before she could think further she was disturbed by someone...

" ahh, Naina, aap yaha akeli kya kar rahi hai"...

Naina turns and found Sonia standing there...

Sonia: I hope you won't mind calling you by your name... Can I sit here...By saying that she was about to sit but stopped hearing Naina's words..

Naina: No... ...I won't mind neither you calling me Naina, nor for sitting here... She said with a small smile...

Sonia: ohh thank god... You know for one moment I got shocked by hearing your No...I must say you have a way with your words... By the way I didn't get my answer yet, aap yaha akeli yaha??

Naina: wo you must have saw gana gaate hue I got tripped and twisted my ankle, so I m just sitting here... And I am alone, because I don't want to spoil my friends' enjoyment...

Sonia: ohh I see... Well I must say aap gana bahut hi acha gaati hai... You know its my first time when I am attending any army ball... I always thought army balls to be formal and boring... But I must say army balls are anything but boring and army officers too have many talents besides being the great soldiers...

Naina: well I agree with you...Though we are soldiers but we too need to live our lives... and I think ek soldier ko zindagi jeena jayada ache se aata hai, kyunki use yeh pata nahi hota ki agle pal wo zinda hoga bhi ya nahi... Hume pata hai ki humari life sabse unsafe hai, to hum jitna bhi ho sake use jeene ki koshish karte hai... Kyunki kya pata kal ho na ho...

Sonia: you know after coming here and meeting you all, my opinion really changed about army officers... I mean I always respected army officers as they protect us, our country, but after coming here I really started liking army officers... I mean you all are brilliant... And by looks also you can give competition to any model... Ab Major Arjun Rathore ko hi dekh lo, he is so handsome... He can make any top model run for his money...I never imagined army officers to be this much dashing, well built, strong...

Naina who was drinking water started coughing hearing her words...Sonia pats her back to make her comfortable...

Sonia: are you alright Naina?...

Naina gives her a tight smile: yeah I am fine... tqq...

Sonia: That's good... Hmm waise Naina, I hope you don't mind me asking this, but can you tell me about Major Rathore??

Naina raises her eyebrow on this...

Sonia: wo kya hai na I really like him, so I want to know more about him... And I have seen him sitting with you and your friends.. so that means he is close to you people and today also he came with you... You people seems to be close... So you can tell me about him...

Naina: baithi to abhi aap bhi hai mere saath, but that doesn't mean ki main aapko ache se jaanti hu... Aur rahi baat ball me aane ki to Ball me aap bhi Capt. Huda ke saath aayi hai, jisne aap abhi kuch din pehle hi mili hai, does that mean you two are close to each other??

Sonia fumbles little: ahh.. no no.. I don't know Capt. Huda... wo to ball me couple entry thi to bas... And I am sorry I didn't mean it that way... As I am new here, and you people were here before I came, so I just thought that by now you must be knowing each other that's why...

Naina: waise app Major Rathore me itni interested kyu hai? I mean KMA me aur bhi army officers' hai... Jaise Capt. Huda, Capt. Sharma, Capt. Sahani, Capt Chahuan...

Sonial: wo sab to hai... par you know kab dil ko kon bha jaaye kya keh sakte hai... And Major Rathore is different from others, his personality, his looks coupled with his dimples, his muscular body; I think anyone can go fida on him...

Naina who was listening all this with wide eyes thinks in her mind: Yeh to aise bol rahi hai jaise isne unke looks ke upar puri Ph.D kari ho...Aur yeh Rajveer bhi na kya zaroorat hai itna handsome hone ki, sab ladkiyan inke piche pad jati hai...Pehle ek wo ritu thi, phir wo Nandini aa gayi, aur ab yeh... Saari duniya me sabko bas mere Rajveer hi milte hai line maarne ke liye...

Sonia: You know I just want to talk with him once... After that I know we will be great together... I think I am falling for...

"Naina wo.."

Naina who was seeing Sonia with wide eyes after hearing this, gets more frustrated by seeing Rajveer there... Because how much she wants to be with Rajveer, but at this moment she wants Rajveer to be miles away from there... Rajveer came after meeting DM and BC came in the hall and saw Naina sitting on the table where he left her... He was happy after his meeting with DM and wanted to share his happiness with her... So he directly went towards Naina's table and was about to speak with her... When he noticed Sonia too there...

Rajveer: ahh hello miss Sonia... I hope I didn't disturb you both..

Sonia : no no Major... you didn't disturb at all...aur aap khade kyu hai baithiye na.. You can join us... we won't mind having you here with us...

Naina in her mind: haa yeh kyu mind karegi, mind hoga to mind karegi na... Aur iski to jaise lottery lag gayi... Rajveer ko bhi abhi aana tha yaha

Rajveer was about to sit when Naina spoke..

Naina: ahh come on Sonia... He must be very busy... You know na aaj ki ball ki saari zimmedari inhi par hai... So he must be having many works... She then turns to look at Rajveer and gives him a look... Major we know that you are very busy, so you can continue your work...and now you don't have to worry about me, as I am not alone and having a very wonderful company here...

Rajveer sees Naina's reaction and lifts his left eyebrow...

Sonia: ohh come on Naina... Thodi der baithne se kuch nahi hoga... aur unhe bhi to thoda rest chaiye hoga na, afterall aaj ke celeberation ke liye kitne kaam karne pade hoge... So he also need to relax na for sometime... And abhi thodi der pehle tum bhi to yahi keh rahi thi na ki soldiers ko bhi enjoy karna chaiye...

Rajveer looks at Sonia and then looks at Naina... and then a smirk appears on his face, because now he got a hint that why Naina is behaving that way... he then sits on a chair beside Naina and opposite to Sonia...

Rajveer: you are absolutely right Miss Sonia... I actually need to relax myself... All this preparations made me tired...He said while sitting on the chair... While Naina glare at him...

Sonia: Ohh I can understand Major... And by the way you can call me Sonia... No need of formalities...

Rajveer: That's good.. I also don't believe in formalities... I must say we think in the same way... And now that u have given me permission to call you Sonia, I think you also should do the same... So stop calling me Major, you can call me Arjun, Just Arjun... Sonia... Ahhh,... he was flirting with her, when he suddenly yelp in pain... Because under the table, Naina kicked him hard...

Sonia: what happened Arjun? She asked showing her concern...

Rajveer: ahh nothing just mosquitoe... mosquitoe bitten me...

Sonia: mosquitoe... I m sure mosquitoe ne aapko bahut zor se kata hoga tabhi aap itni jor se chilaye...

Before Rajveer could reply, Naina replied: ofcourse SONIA, ab yeh hai hi itne swt ki mosquitoe ko inka blood kuch jayada hi pasand aa gaya, aur usne inhe zor se kaat liya... Aur agar yeh itne hi zaroorat se zayada swt rahe na, to I am sure uss mosquitoe ko inka saara khoon pine me zayada time nahi lagega... She said while greeting her teeth and glaring at Rajveer... While Rajveer get amused to see NAina reacting that way... By now he understood clearly that Naina is getting jealous and he is enjoying her new avatar...

Sonia: Yeh to tumne thik kaha, he is very sweet... and handsome too... She said while looking dreamily at him.. While Naina, clutched a fork tightly in her hand...

Rajveer saw her reaction...and thus while trying to be innocent: Ji aapne kuch kaha?

Sonia: ahh nahi... wo I was just saying that you are looking very handsome...

Though Rajveer was not liking all this and getting uncomfortable by Sonia's words, but to tease Naina, he continued his flirting...

Rajveer: ohh Thank you... I am glad that you found me handsome enough to praise me... And I must say you are looking gorgeous too... I am sure you are making many to loose their concentration...

Naina in her mind: What the... Yahi line inhone mujhe boli thi... aur ab mujhe diya hua compliment iss kale kapdo wali dayan ko de diya... Rajveer I am not gonna spare you...

Sonia: ohh you are praising me way too much Arjun ...But still thank you for the compliment...

Naina: ab tak ki saari baton me sirf ek yahi baat isne sahi kahi hai, ki Rajveer isse Zaroorat se kuch zayada hi praise kar rahe hai...

Sonia: ahhh... If you don't mind Arjun, can we dance? I mean see your partner is injured, I mean she sprained her ankle.. While my partner is busy in who knows what... And its my first ball... and I don't want it to end without having a dance... So if you don't mind can I have my first dance with you?

Rajveer was now in a fix... He was flirting with her just to see Naina's reaction, but dancing and all with her was not something he was ready to do...

Rajveer: ahh wo... But Naina yaha akeli...

Sonia: Ohh I m sure Naina won't mind me having one dance with you... M I right Naina...

Naina: of course why I would wind... When I didn't mind till now, then why would I mind now... And you know you shouldn't be asking me this... I mean its him with whom you wanna dance, not me na... so it should be his decision... and by judging by the conversation, I don't think he would mind having a dance with you at all... M I right MAJOR RATHORE...

Rajveer now knew that Naina was angry on him... Though he was enjoying Naina's jealousy till now, but now he was scared... because he knew Naina and her anger is not good for his health... ... But before he could think or say anything, Sonia came towards him..

Sonia: see I told you she won't mind... So shall we Arjun? She said while forwarding her hand...

Rajveer was not having any other option but to dance with her... So while looking towards Naina, he placed his hand on Sonia's hand and went to dance with her by glancing Naina one last time...

And here Naina was angry like anything... She thought RAjveer will refuse to dance with her, but no... He just went to dance with that kaali dayan... Already she was pissed with Rajveer's flirting with her and now to he is dancing with her...She got up from her chair and stood beside a pillar... She was seeing Rajveer dancing with Sonia... And she did not like this at all...

Here Rajveer was trapped in his own plan... He was not liking this and on the top the way Sonia was trying to be close with him was making him uncomfortable... He was dancing with her, but he kept his eyes on Naina and found her standing with a angry and frustrated look on her face...

Here Naina was standing alone when he heard Huda's voice...

Huda: yaar aaidi yeh galat hai... Sir ke hote hue koi hume bhaav hi nahi deta...

Alekh: to tujhe kya lagta hai ki unke aage koi tujhe ghass dalega...Yeh tera tabela nahi hai Huda...

Huda: yehi to bawal hai na qaidi... waise jo bhi keh in dono ki Jodi lag kamal rahi hai nahi?

Naina who heard this shot a glare to him...

Huda: ohh Phoolan mujhe aise gusse se naa dekh.. maine kaha kuch kiya... Yeh to sir hi hai jo sab kuch kar rahe hai...

Alekh: Sahi kaha Huda, Dekh kaise chipak ke dance karrele hai...

Actually Alkeh, Huda heard the conversation between Rajveer, Sonia and Naina and then they saw Rajveer going with Sonia for dance... So they knew that Rajveer was just making Naina jealous... So they thought why not to add ghee in this aag...

Huda: waise yeh galat hai qaidi... Sir har janani ko le jaate hai... pehle wo Dr. Ritu Mishra,... Huda ka kitna dil aaya tha uspe, usne bhi sir ki wajah se iss jatt ko ghass nahi daali...

Alekh: abbey sukhar mana ki usne tujhe ghass nahi dali, warna aaj tu narak me baitha yamraj ko ghas dal raha hota...

Huda: Kya bak raha hai be qaidi, main aur narak me... Na yeh jatt to sawrg jaane ke liye bana hai, aakhir waha ki apsarayon pe bhi to Huda ka charm chalana hai...

Alekh: teri innhi harkaton ki wajh se apun sure hai ki tu swarg nahi narak me hi jaayega, aur phir waha jalado pe chalana apna charm...

Naina who was already frustrated got more frustrated and shouted: tum dono apni yeh bakwas band karoge...

Huda: arey tu gussa kyu ho rahi hai phoolan, acha le ek maar le... Dekh tera sara gusaa dur ho jayega... he said while forwarding a peg to her...

Naina: Huda tujhe pata hai na main nahi peeti...

Huda: Haa yeh bhi hai... Waise Phoolan dekh tu sir ko kuch samjhati kyu nahi, ki kisi ko to humare liye bhi chod de... Dekh ab tere saath to main kuch kar nahi sakta, kyunki tu to tehri unki hone wali Mrs... par jiske saath dance kar sakta tha, aur apna charm chala sakta tha wo to use bhi le gaye... aur dekh kitna chipak ke dance kar rahe hai...ab yeh jatt kiske saath dance karega...

He said while pointing towards Rajveer and Naina.. Naina looked at them and what she saw made her eyes popped out... because she saw Sonia getting stumbled and falling on Rajveer and in this her lips touched his cheek...

Huda: ooo teri, yeh to sir ne mauke pe chauka maar liya yaar...

Alekh: sirf chauka nahi apun ko to puri ki puri century lagti dikh rahi yaar...

Naina who by now were out of control because of her anger and jealousy took that peg from Huda's hand drank that in a go...

Huda: phoolan tu yeh...

Alekh: aur yeh bol reli thi ki yeh pitti nahi hai...

Naina: bakwas band karo tum dono... aur Huda tujhe dance karne ka bada man kar raha tha na, apna charm chalana tha na tujhe... to chal aa chala apna charm... She said while catching his hand and then she started dragging him towards the dance floor..

Huda: phoolan, tu yek kya kar rahi hai.,... ruk to phoolna... dekh mujhe sir ke haatho saheed hone ka koi shauk nahi hai...

Naina: aur agar tu chup chap mere saath nahi aaya na to main tujhe yahi saheed kar dongi samjha... She said and dragged him... While going she took one more glass of drink from the waiter and drank that... Now both reached the dance floor...

Rajveer was shocked when Sonia kissed him on his cheek and automatically his eyes traveled to the place where Naina was standing... By Naina;s expression he came to know that he is in big trouble... .. And then he saw Naina snatching drink from Huda's hand and drinking it... By now he was sure that today he is dead... So he tried moving towards Naina, but Sonia stopped him by asking him to dance with her for few more minutes... Before he could reply he saw Naina on the dance floor with Huda... Now it was time for him to get shocked...

Here Huda was scared... he didn't know what to do... On one side it was Naina, who was not looking less than a wounded tigress and he was not having any intention to become a pray of her... Other side it was Rajveer, who was now looking towards them... If Naina was a wounded tigress, then of course Rajveer is not less than a lion... In normal situation only Rajveer is like a lion then now when Huda was with Naina, who made him to keep his hand on her waist and to dance with her, Huda can see getting himself becoming Rajveer's pray, or we can say his dinner... He was able to feel the burns by Rajveer's gaze...

Huda in his mind: kaha phas gaya mummy ji... mujhse galti ho gayi, jo main Rajveer sir aur Naina ke maza lene ke chakar mein Naina ke pass chala gaya... wada karta hu mummy ji aage se kisi ke fatte me apni taang nahi adaonga... bus iss baar mujhe bacha lo mummy ji... warna appka yeh jawan te papa ji ka kissan aaj saheed ho jaayega...

Gunny saw rajveer dancing with Sonia and Naina dancing with Huda... He also saw the way Rajveer was looking towards Huda, or to be precise on his hand which was resting on Naina's waist... He was sure that something is going on... Something very big and dangerous... He came towards Alekh..

Gunny: yeh kya ho raha hai Alekh? He asked while pointing towards the Rajveer, Naina and Huda...

Alekh: kuch nahi sir, bas aaj apna bakra, halal hone wala hai... Ab dekhna yeh hai ki iss bakre ki bali kon deta hai, Naina, Ya phir apne sir...

Gunny: By looking at Rajveer I can clearly say ki yeh bakra to wahi halal karega... lekin Naina ko dekhkar yeh lagta hai ki aaj to Rajveer ki bhi bali chadne wali hai...

Alekh: apun ko to isme bhi sir ka ich fayda dikh raha hai?

Gunny: aur wo kasie?

Alekh: Naina do peg down hai sir... aur jab botal ka nasha, pyaar ke nashe ke saath mil jaata hai, aur uspar jalan ka chakna saath ho, to phir kayamat hi hoti hai... aur wahi aaj apun ke sir ke saath hone wala hai...

Gunny: Wow Alekh... I mean tum kabhi apni daaru aur chakne se bahar nahi aate na?

Alekh: ab kya kare sir, Naina ne peena to band karwa diya, ab bas baat hi kar sakta hai apun...

Gunny: well I must say Naina has done a fantastic job... now lets c what she is going to do with our Major...

They then turn to look at Rajveer and Naina direction... Here Huda was sweating like anything by seeing Rajveer glaring at him... ... he was continuously praying to her mummy ji to save him... and Naina, well Naina wanted to take revenge from Rajveer... She wanted to make him taste his own medicine... So though she was not liking but still was dancing with Huda and forcing Huda to dance with her... And what should I say about Rajveer... He was burning holes in Huda's hand by his glare... By every passing second it was becoming harder fro him to control himself and not to go towards Huda and Naina and snatch Naina from Huda... But the moment Naina kept her both hands on Huda's neck, which resulted in Huda's second hand also to lend on Naina's waist, Rajveer couldn't control himself anymore... So he stopped dancing with Sonia abruptly... which surprised Sonia too.. He then marched towards Huda and Naina's direction... Huda by seeing Rajveer coming in his direction started chanting in his mind...

Huda in mind: Bajrangbali ji bachalo mujhe...

Jai hanuman Gyan gun sagar...

Jai kapis tihu lok ujagar...

Jai hanuman..aage kya tha mummy ji...

Well he was that much afraid that he forgot his hanuman chalisa too and started chanting:

Aaltu jalatu aayi bala ko taal tu,

Aaltu jalatu aayi bala ko taal tu...

Rajveer By now reached there and By seeing Rajveer, Huda himself removed his hand from Naina's waist and moved himself away from Naina.. Naina by seeing Huda's reaction turned and saw Rajveer standing there and glaring at Huda...

Rajveer while glaring to Huda: Capt. Huda, jab aap kisi ki zimedari lete hai to use pura karna bhi sikhiye... Aap yaha Miss Sonia ke saath aaye the, to jab tak yeh ball khatam nahi ho jati, tab tak aapko unka saath dena hai nahi.. lekin aap unhe akela chod kar pata nahi kaha busy hai...

Naina: ohh really Major... you know I have learnt in my school that preach what you practice, and practice what you preach... aap Huda ko uski date ko akela chodne ke liye daant rahe hai, and what about you?

Rajveer then looks at Naina: Aap ache se jaanti hai ki agar Huda ne Miss Sonia ko akela nahi choda hota to mujhe unke saath dance nahi karna padta...

Naina: ohh really... well I don't think so.. And by the way why are you calling her Miss Sonia... last I remember she was just Sonia for you...as you both don't like formalities...

Rajveer: Naina dekhotum...

Naina: Naina?? Excuse me aapne mujhe Naina bulaya... abhi thodi der pehle to main aapke liye Capt Thi...nahi... you know what mujhe aapse baat hi nahi karni... aap jaiye aur jakar apni Sonia ke saath dance kariye... Aur mujhe bhi dance karne dijiye... She turned to Huda by saying that...Huda.. chalo lets dance...

Huda curses himself again... Surely he don't want to make the same mistake again... If Rajveer was able to make him sweat from far, then he was sure that this time he will be burnt completely by Rajveer... And he doesn't want to do that not after seeing Rajveer, who was glaring at him and signaled him to leave from there... and Huda well Huda knew better to not to disagree with Rajveer... So Huda found it better to run from there... So he said to Naina..

Huda: phoolan wo... wo... wo mujhe na... mujhe na ek no.. aaya hai... to main abhi aata hu... and he ran from there to save himself while thanking his mummy ji and bajrang bali for saving him from becoming a bali from Rajveer's hand...

Naina: Huda, Huda sun to..

Rajveer: well wo ab nahi sunne wala...

Naina turns to Rajveer: mujhe pata hai wo yaha se aapki wajh se chala gaya... par aapko kya lagta hai ki agar Huda chala gaya to main dance nahi karongi, main dance karongi , karongi, karongi... Naina by now was getting tipsy...She never had drink before, so those two pegs were making her tipsy...because of her tipsy state and her sprained ankle, it was becoming difficult for her to stand properly... So she just stumbled, but before she can fall, Rajveer catches her by holding her from her waist...

Rajveer: tum thik se khadi bhi nahi ho pa rahi ho, aur tumhe dance karna hai... Chup chap chalo yaha se...

Naina: nahi main nahi jaongi... mujhe dance karna hai... Aur aap bhi kahi nahi jaayenge... Abhi to uss Kali dayan ke saath bada chipak chipak ke dance kar rahe the... ab kya ho gaya.. chaliye ab mere saath chipakiye, mera matlab hai dance kijiye...

Rajveer with wide eyes stares at her and then asks: kaali dayan?

Naina: haa wahi aapki SONIA... jab dekho kale kapde pehenke aa jati hai... aur pata nahi konsa kaal jaadu kar diya usne aap par ki aap mujhe chod kar uske saath chipak rahe the...

Rajveer gets amused to heard that... This Naina is surely new for him and quite interesting too...

Rajveer: acha aur wo jo abhi aap Huda ke saath kar rahi thi, uska kya?

Naina: arey wo to wo tha... wo kya kehte hai use... haa tit for tat... aapne uss kali dayan ke saath dance kiya, to maine uss bhainso ke masiha ke saath...

Rajveer was unable to control his laugh by hearing bhainson ka masiha... For sure, his Naina has unique name for everyone...

Naina: Aur ab aap apna yeh KBC band kijiye aur mere saath dance kijiye...She said while holding his hand...

Rajveer: Naina dekho abhi tum dance karne ki condition me nahi ho, hum phir kabhi dance kar lenge... abhi chalo yaha se...

Naina: nahi mujhe dance karna hai matlab karna hai... Kyu aapko mere saath dance nahi karna... Abhi to aap uss kaali dayan ke saath kar rahe the na... to ab kya hua... Usne aap pe aisa kya kaal jaadu kiya ki ab aapko mere saath dance nahi karna... Ab aap mujhe chod denge na... ab aap mujhse pyaar nahi karenge na... She said and by seeing her it was easy to guess that she will start crying anytime... And it will create a scene...And by seeing Naina reacting that way and thinking all negative, Rajveer got scared... So he tries to calm her down...

Rajveer: arey Naina, aisa kuch nahi hai... main tumhe kaise chod sakta hu... Koi bhala apni jaan ko chod sakta hai... nahi na...aur main sirf tumse hi pyaar karta hu...

Naina: Sachi..

Rajveer: haa meri jaan Sachi... ab chale... He said while turning and about to go with Naina by clutching her hand in his but Naina stops him..

Naina: to aap mere saath dance kijiye na... Please... (Guys I want you to assume this song being played in the background, but the words here will clesrly shows Rajveer's feelings and what he is feeling for Naina at this moment... I will try my best to explain his feelings, but if I won't be able to do justice then please forgive me...)

sun zaalima mere

saanu koi Dar naa

kii samjhega zamaana

tu vi si kamli

main vi sa kamla

ishqe da rog sayaana

ishqe da rog sayaanaa..

Naina's face, her smile, her innocence, the love in her eyes for him, makes him impossible for him to say no to him...He let himself to lost in her eyes... He then lifts her elft hand and keeps on his shoulder... He then take her right hand in his left hand and by placing his right hand on her waist, brings her close with a jerk ...

sun mere humsafar

kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar

ki teri saansein chalti jidhar

rahunga bas wahin umr bhar

He starts swaying with her on the music... Rajveer is lost in her eyes... He keep swaying her while looking all the time in her eyes... The words of the song were clearly depicting his feelings for his Naina...

jitni haseen ye mulaakaatein hain

unse bhi pyaari teri baatein hain

baaton mein teri jo kho jaate hain

aaun na hosh mein main kabhi

baahon mein hai teri zindagi, haaye..

sun mere humsafar

kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar...

Rajveer remembers their past... How they met, how they came close to each other... How he always lost himself in her, in her eyes, in her talks... How he always wished to stay lost in her...

zaalima tere ishq 'ch

main ho gayiaan kamli

haaye..

They continue dancing... Rajveer twirls her and again brings her close to him... NAina is totally lost in him... Already she is loosing her senses due to the alcohol she consumed, and now Rajveer is making her loose more by his immense love which she is able to see in his eyes... Their proximity, their dance, the song everything is making them to forget about their surrounding... For them in this moment nobody exists except them...

main to khaRa kis soch mein paRa tha

kaise jee raha tha main deewana

chhupke se aake tune

dil mein sama ke tune

chheR diya ye kaisa fasaana

Rajveer then remembers his life before he met with Naina... His was just living his life for the name sake... His life was full with pain, guilt, sufferings... And then she came...she came and he didn't even come to know when she started making her presence in his heart... When and how he started falling for her, he didn't even come to know...

Oo...muskurana bhi tujhi se seekha hai

dil lagane ka tu hi tareeka hai

aitbaar bhi tujhi se hota hai

aaun na hosh mein main kabhi

baahon mein hai teri zindagi, haaye

He then remembers that how he started smiling once again because of Naina only... in his efforts to make Naina smile, when he himself started smiling he didn't come to know...How he always used to forget about his pain whenever he used to be with her... She without knowing became his medicine... How he started to trust her... ..

hai nahi tha pata

ke tujhe maan loonga khuda

ki teri galiyon mein is kadar

aaunga har pehar

sun mere humsafar

kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar

ki teri saansein chalti jidhar

rahoonga bas wahin umr bhar

He never thought that one day she will become the most important person of his life, one day she will become his life... One day she will be his everything... But it happened... Now he can't even imagine his life without her... He never believd in god after whatever happened with him... But now for him She is only his god... And he wants to be with her... Wherever he goes but in the end he wants to come to her, be with her...Now he wants to spend his entire life with her... Now if he is living his life then because of her and for her...

zaalima tere ishq 'ch...

Rajveer and Naina both end their dance with the song... Naina is in Rajveer's arms... Both are lost in each other...

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Precap:

Naina under the effect of alcohol,

Naina-Rajveer's romance...

Someone getting jealous.. but who?

Rajveer- gunny friendship...

Someone is coming...

Note: okk guys... i am sorry but i couldn't show Rajveer and Naina's romance i mean hot romance in this update... as its already 13 k words... so you have to wait for the next update... which i hopefully gives u either by today midnight or by tomm... So you have to wait,... and also if you want me to update fast then give your votes and comments also fast... because i have already started writing the next part and wrote almost half of it... so i may update before midnight also... but that depends on you... so gives ur views abt this update... i wrote something new, which i always tries to do... But i have no idea whether u will like it or not... or is it up to your expectations or not... So plzz and kindly gives your honest views abt this update... i will appreciate every review even if it is negative then also...

so see you guys soon...

love you all

take care

and enjoy...


Back to ball
So all r having fun with watch too
Raj gave Naina a warning not to move she obeyed great
So Sonia made feel Naina jealous
Hieee such kha Naina
Kya jarurat h raj ko itna handsome dikhne ki
Yeh Sonia nhi na😡
BTW who is playing d character of Sonia ??
Loved d discussion BTW them
Naina ki jealousy to maza as gya
Raj b na flirt kar RHA that to make her jealous khud fas gya 😆

Yeah lo Ji yeh huda n allekh
ag me ghee dalne aaye h but great work by them
Naina ne pii li ab kuchh kaand hona h
But huda bura FASA
Ek taraf raj dusri taraf Naina
Hanuman chalisa great I was laughing too funny
Aaltu jalaltu hahaha
Bhaison ka masiha bhag gya ek no k bahane
Now Naina n raj convo
Kaali dayan is best word this part
Mujhse nhi chipakiye
Kya Naina kuchh b bol rhi h
All n all update is tooo good
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Aaj Maine kuchh jyada hi bad a commsjt kia dono parts me hope so boring na ho


U said u will update by midnight or tomm
M waiting abhi sent really excited to read their hot 😳
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Superb update...raj's emotions was very beautifully described n so was naina...raj already have lost so many things that he is afraid of losing naina...raj n gunny friendship was well written...wants to how they meet n how gunny known Naveen...naina was hurt but pain was felt by raj... .so minister and bc knows about rajveer...Sonia talking about raj n complementing him...n naina was getting jealous n to add fire raj started to flirt with her...raj toh gaya 😛 alekh n Huda started to tease naina but Huda khud hi fas Gaya apne jal me 😆 raj was getting jealous seeing Huda n naina dancing together but that was tit for tat...naina is drunk n is making demands of dancing...waiting for your next update...n thanks for updating early 😊
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Just read the last few parts...
They were just awesome...


Loving the fic

Waiting for more

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Superb
Jealousy game always works
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Chapter: 27 (B):

No proof reading, so avoid mistakes...

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After their dance, Rajveer led to Naina towards the table in the corner...By Now Naina was totally drunk...

Rajveer: naina dekho miane tumhari baat mani na, ab tum yaha baitho 2 minute... ok...

Naina nods at him smilingly... Rajveer was about to move but she caught hold of his hand...

Rajveer: Naina bus 2 minute... Mujhe chaubey se kuch baat karni hai... main bas abhi aaya...

Naina: aapko job hi baat karni hai aap wo yahi mere saath , mere saamne kariye... Ab main aapko akela nahi chodogi, agar phir se wo kali dayan aapke pass aa gayi, apna kaal jaado chalane to,... no no no... she said shile shaking her head... Aur wo kaali dayan hi thodi na hai, wo chipku chudail bhi to hai... Agar wo aake aapse chipak gayi to...

Rajveer: ab yeh chipku chudail kon hai?

Naina: arey wahi wo aapki Nandini... nahi aapki nahi... wo aapki nahi hai... aapki to sirf Main hu, main, aapki Naina, haina... boliye na main aapki hu na...She asked him cutely...

At this moment Rajveer found her innocent like a child...He was enjoying her stubbornness, her childish nature, because all of this very showing her immense love for him...

Rajveer while cupping her face: ji meri jaan aap meri hi hai, jaise main aapka... Aur na to koi kaali dayan apne kale jaadu se mujhe aapse door kar sakti hai aur na hi koi chipku chudail... ok...( surely he too liked the names given by Naina to Sonia and Nandini) ab aap bas 2 minute rukiye, phir hum yaha se chalege...

Naina asked him with excitement: hum kaha jayenge???

Rajveer: umm, jaha sirf hum dono honge, jaha na to kaali dayan hogi, na hi chipku chudail or na hi koi aur... Sirf aap aur main... Chalengi aap mere saath??

Naina:aap jaha mujhe le jayenge , main waha aapke saath chalungi... main humesha aapke saath rahongi...

Rajveer whispers: humesha...

Both smiles looking at each other... Rajveer then calls Chaubey... while Naina kepp sitting on the chair, holding his right hand in her both hands... She was continuously looking at him..

Rajveer on the phone: Hello chaubey... meri baat dhyan se sunno... DM and most of the senior army officials have left... Now only KMA cadets and faculty members are left... But still ball is not over... So you keep monitoring... Don't move in front of the screens even for one second... And send yudi here... Mujhe Naina ko lekar jana hoga, warna problem ho jayegi... samjhe..

Chaubey: ji sirji samajh gaya... Waise sirji aise parties me aapki to lottery lag jati hai na, I mean KMA ki freshers ball pe wo Dr. Ritu Mishra puri talli hokar aap par gir rahi thi, aur aaj Naina bhi madhosh hai... Tab to aap Dr. Mishra se pyaar bhi nahi karte the, par yaha to aap dono hi ... aaj to pakka aapki chaandi hi chaandi hai..

Rajveer: aur agar tumne apni yeh bakwas band nahi ki na to aaj tumhari sirf dhulayi hi dhulayi hai.. Samjhe... Yeh sab bakwas chod kar kaam pe dhyan do...

Chaubey: ji sirji... main apna kaam karta hu... aap apna kijiye... And sirji all the best...

Rajveer frustratingly: Chaubey... Will you shut up...

Chaubey: ok sirji... as you say sirji..

Rajveer: Chaubey just... forget it... He ends up the call frustraitingly...Lagta hai aaj mujhe pareshan karne ka theka sabne le rakha hai... ek baar yeh ball khatam ho jaaye, phir kal dekhonga in sab ko...He thought frustratingly... He then turns to look at Naina and found her looking at him with a cute pout on her face... By seeing her like that, Rajveer forgot his frustration...

Rajveer: Chale Naina... Naina noda at him smilingly... He then turns and about to move, while holding her hand in his... But he felt jerk in his hand and when he turned to look at Naina he found her sitting on the chair...

Rajveer: Kya hua Naina, chalo... Utho...

Naina nods her head negatively... Rajveer gets surprised...

Rajveer: kya, mana kyu kar rahi ho? Chalna hai na tumhe mere saath, he asked her lovingly...

Naina nods her head yet again but this time positively...

Rajveer: to chalo phir, khadi ho...

But instead of standing up she shows her hand to rajveer...

Rajveer looks at her confusingly: what??

Naina again shows her hands to him and says: mujhe uthaiye na... main chalkar nahi jaane wali...

Rajveer gets surprised to hear this...

Rajveer: Naina main tumhe... He then looks everywhere around them... Naina yaha sab hai... Main aise sabke saamne tumhe utha kar kaise le ja sakta hu?

Naina: kaise le ja sakte hai matlab, waise hi jaise aap mujhe tab le gaye the, jab mujhe uss mucchad nair ne ulti duniya ki punishment di thi..

Rajveer: par Naina uss waqt baat kuch aur thi... aur tab tum behosh thi, tumhari tabiyat kharab thi...

Naina: to tabiyat to meri abhi bhi kharab hai na... mujhe chot lagi hai na...pata hai mera pair kitna dukh raha hai... bahut dard ho raha hai mujhe... She said while making painful expression on her face... Rajveer knew that she is just doing acting... It's the after effect of consuming alcohol... .. And he was enjoying her playfulness...

Rajveer: acha to aapko dard ho raha hai... par abhi thodi der pehle to aap dance karne ki zidd kar rahi thi, tab aapko dard nahi ho raha tha? He asked while raising his eyebrow...

Naina: wo... wo to... wo main... she fumbles... wo sab mujhe nahi pata... Mujhe itna pata hai ki mujhe chot lagi hai, aur mujhe dard ho raha hai,... Ab aaki wajh se mujhe chot lagi thi, I mean aapne uss daaku ko goli maari thi, uski wajah se main gir gayi, aur mujhe lag gayi... ab jab aapki wajah se mujhe chot lagi hai, to aapko hi meri dekhbhaal karni chaiye na... ab main chal nahi pa rahi to aapko mujhe uthana chaiye na... mujhe kitna dard ho raha hai pata hai aapko... aap mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte...

Rajveer was surprised to see her emotional blackmail...He then mumurs: Naveen tu sahi kehta tha yaar Ki teri behen ek no ki drama queen hai... Dekh kaise mujhe guilty feel krwa ke emotional blackmail kar rahi hai...

Naina: aap na meri complaint bhaiya se karna band kijiye... Samjhe... aur mujhe jaldi se uthaiye...

Rajveer was shocked to hear that...and was thinking how she came to know that he was complaining to Naveen...But before that he can ask her he heard her next words, which made his eyes teary as those words showed her pain...

Aapko pata hai jab mujhe chot lagti thi na tab bhaiya bhi mujhe aise hi uthathe the... phir phir wo chale gaye... Mujhe chod ke... aapko pata hai unke jaane ke baad mujhe bahut chote lagi, kitni baar main giri...par koi nahi aaya mujhe uthane...koi bhi nahi... main bhiaya ka wait karti rahi par wo aaye hi nahi... phir mujhe pata chal gaya ki wo ab kabhi nahi aayeneg... isliye maine khud ko sambhalna sikh liya, aur phir jab kabhi main girti to khud khadi ho jaati... Because main to apne bhaiya ki strong princess hu... Jab bhi wo ghar se dur jaate the aur main roti thi na to wo humesha kehte the, ki meri gudiya to meri strong princess hai, isliye wo royegi nahi...isliye na maine rona band kar diya... aur main strong ban gayi... bhaiya ki strong princess...

Rajveer was able to feel her pain... He knew that till the time Naveen was their, he kept Naina as his princess... Though he irritated her, fought with her, teased her, but in the end she was his jaan... His gudiya, his princess, his first baby... More than her parents, Naina was brought up by Naveen... And because of him only, Naina's innocence was not affected... But what happened with Naveen, shattered her, forced her to become mature, to grow up instantly... She was alone... She was made to realize this bitter truth that now her Bhaiya is not here to protect her... what happened witn Naveen, snatcher her innocence too, and the place of her innocence was taken by her anger...

Though she was forced to grow up but still she is a child from inside, which Rajveer is seeing now and saw in past too, whenever they used to talk about Naveen... Her innocence was hidden but still it's there, which started to come out now because of Rajveer, because of his love, because of this fact that now someone is there for her to protect her, to take care of her, and to love her immensely...and Rajveer want to preserve her this innocence, this small kid in her for forever...he was made to come out from his thoughts by Naina's voice...

Naina: par phir aap aaye... Aapne mujhe support kiya, mujh pe trust kiya... aap har kadam pe mere saath the, phir mujhe laga ki agar main strong nahi bhi hu to kya hua aap hai na mere saath... Mere strong Rajveer sir...He gets overwhelmed by hearing Naina's words...

ohh .. shhh... She then whispers, yeh to humara secret hai na... hume abhi kisi ko nahi batana ... Shhh.. She said while keeping her finger on her lips... At this moment Rajveer found her very adorable...

Naina: abhi aap yeh sab chodiye na... aur mujhe uthaiye na... mujhe na dard ho raha hai... aur ab bhaiya bhi nahi hai, to aapko hi mujhe uthana padega... Pata hai main na bhaiya ko bahut miss karti hu, unki care, unka love, unki pampering everything...

Rajveer was hurt to see his Naina hurt... Today is the first time, when Naina is sharing her pain openly with him... These are some facts, or we can say her inner pain which she didn't show to anyone... not even to her parents... Because after Naveen, she have to become their son too... she not only have to fulfiiled her daughter's duties, but also have to play Naveen's role too...So by showing her apin to her parents, she didn't want to hurt them more or make then more week... To take care of them she had to forget her pain and show herself stronger...

He knew that nobody can replace Naveen in Naina's life... Though she now have Alekh in her life and Alekh has filled Naveen's place to a great extent... But Naina and Alekh bonding is different from Naina and Naveen relation... By seeing Naina missing Naveen's love, his care, his pampering, he vowed to himself to give everything to Naina which she misses... He will not only love give her his love, but will also give Naveen's love, care and pampering too... So for that even if he have to lift her in front of everyone he will do... Because for him, she matters the most, nothing and nobody else... When he can keep his everything on stake for her, then lifting her in his arms is not a big deal...

Rajveer knew that he has to lift her... It was not as if he was forced... Infact he was loving all this... And he also wanted to show Naina that, though Naveen is not here with her, but he is here and will always be... He then looked around and found everyone busy... Most of them were busy in dancing and drinking,,,... Though cadets were not allowed to drink, but who can stop them...Atleast not those faculty members, who too did this kind of mischief when they were cadets... He then turns to Naina...who was sitting there with a sad face, maybe because she was remembering Naveen...And he can't see her sad...He then lifts her in his arms... Naina keeps her hands on his shoulder...

Rajveer while lifting her: kya hua agar Naveen nahi hai to, main to hu na... Naveen ki tarah main bhi tumse pyaar karta hu... and then to divert her mind and to change her mood he said, though my love is different from his, after all he was your brother,... And I am your .., and he was successful as now her sad face is changed to a blushing one.

Naina: you are my ????

Rajveer started walking with her... He very carefully took her out from the hall without getting noticed by anyone: umm... for now lets say... Boyfriend...

Naina blushes hearing this and gets shy...

Rajveer: waise Naina tumne kaha tha ki main Naveen se tumhari complaints karna band karo, par tumhe kaise pata ki main Naveen se tumhari complaint kar raha tha... He asked..

Naina then very excitingly saya: dekha dekha mujhe pata tha ki aap bhaiya se meri complaint kar rahe the... Mujhe pata tha... mujhe na aapke bare me sab pata hai... Agar mujhe pata nahi hoga to kisko hoga? Bolo... bolo...

Rajveer: hmmm tumne sahi kaha... Ab agar me bare me meri jaan ko to sab pata hi hoga na...

Naina: aapne mujhe phirse jaan kaha... Kyu?? She asks him with a cute pout... Rajveer smiles seeing her... Surely she wasn't looking less than a baby to him..

Rajveer: ab aap humari jaan hai to hum aapko apni jaan hi kahenge na...

Naina with wide smile: sachi main aapki jaan hu?

Rajveer laughs a little by seeing her reaction: Sachi meri jaan... Ab bhala hum apni jaan se jhoot kyu bolne lage... Waise tumhe mera tumhe jaan bulana pasand nahi aaya?? Agar pasand nahi aaya to main tumhe jaan nahi bulaonga... He said while trying to look innocent and sad...

Naina by hearing this and seeing Rajveer's sad face says: nahi nahi.. mujhe to bahut acha lagta hai jab aap mujhe jaan bulate ho... Aur aap na ab se mujhe aise hi bulana aapki jaan...kuch aur nahi okk..

Rajveer: okk.. par iske badle mujhe kya milega?? I mean main tumhe abse jaan bulaoga... iske badle mujhe bhi kuch milna chaiye na nahi..

Naina with a shying face asks: kya chaiye aapko?

Rajveer: ab yeh to aapko khud sochna padega...Reward mang kar thodi na liya jaata hai...

Naina: hmm.. She then starts thinking, while keeping her head on his shoulder and one finger on her chin... Rajveer was enjoying seeing her like that... He was enjoying pampering her... treating her like a small baby... He came out of his trance by Naina's words...

Naina: soch liya... mujhe pata hai aapko kya dena hai...

Rajveer with a smirk asks: acha to kya reward dengi meri jaan mujhe...

Naina: main na... main na.. main na aapko bhi ek pyaara sa naam dungi... Jaise abse aap mujhe jaan bulayenge na, to main aapko abse ... "BABU" bulaongi... she said with excitement... while listening to her Rajveer's smirk flew away and he sees her with wide eyes... Surely this was not something in his mind when he asked her about reward thing,...

Rajveer with wide eyes: BABU???

Naina: haa Babu... kaisa laga aapko aapka naya naam??

Rajveer: Naina please na to main koi sarkari office ka koi sarkari karamchari hu aur na hi tum kisi gaav ki gori aur main seher se aaya sehri babu... so please don't call me babu... (No offence guys... I don't have any objection with this endearment... Infact my brother calls me babu... its just I want to make it little hilarious that's why I wrote this... So if any of you got offended the way I made Rajveer to react for this BABU thing, then I am extremely sorry...)

Naina gets sad after hearing this: aapko pasand nahi aaya??? Main aapko kabhi khush nahi kar pati...

Rajveer sees her sad and by hearing her words he came to know that Naina got hurt... The effect of alcohol was making her emotions haywire...

Rajveer: arey tum sad kyu ho rahi ho... mujhe bas yeh naam acha nahi laga... tum koi aur soch lo, I am sure mujhe wo naam bahut pasand aayega... Ok..

Naina after hearing this smiles: arey haa.. main aapko koi aur naam de sakti hu... hmmm. Hmm... kya do, kya do, kya do...haa... dekho aap mujhe jaan bulate ho na , to main bhi aapko JAANU bulaongi... main aapki jaan, aap mere JAANU... JAAN (she said while keeping her finger on her), JAANU(now she kept her finger on Rajveer)... JAAN ke JAANU (She once again keeps her finger on him, and then keeping her finger on her said)... JAANU ki JAAN... acha hai na... aur humare naam to same same bhi ho gaye...

Rajveer who was seeing her with wide eyes, the moment he heard Jaanu word, was now feeling dizzy by Naina's words and her actions...

Rajveer to herslf: seriously BABU, JAANU... Isse yahi naam mile the... Waise Rajveer iske Kaali dayan, chipku chudail, Bhainson ka masiha naam sunkar tujhe idea ho jana chiye tha ki iske naam kaise hone wale hai... Naveen,, thodi to akal de apni behen ko... BABU, JAANU... I mean seriously can you imagine Major Rajveer singh Shekhawat is called BABU and JAANU... I mean agar kisi ko pata chal gaya na to meri izzat ki dhajiya ud jayegi... Kaha fas gaya Naveen, maine kyu reward maang liya... mujhe laga tha reward me yeh mujhe...ek minute main tujhe kyu batau ki maine kya socha tha ki NAina se mujhe reward me kya milega... Waise main tujhse baat kar raha hu ya apne aap se... Ohh god... yeh ladki mujhe pagal bana rahi hai...

Naina: bataiye na Jaanu, aapko kaisa laga yeh naam acha hai na...

Rajveer: hmmm.. he clears his throat ... haa.. haa cha hai na... bahut acha hai... par Naina me soch raha tha kit um mujhe koi alag naam dogi hi kyu... I mean dekho mera khudka naam bahut bada hai... RAJVEER... to tum mere naam ko hi chota kar lo... jaise ki... tum mujhe Raj bula sakti ho...

Naina shouts: Nooo...

Rajveer closes his eyes due to her sudden shouting and stops walking: kya hua, tum chila kyu rahi ho??

Naina: Chialu to aur kya karo... Raj... RAJ... main aapko Raj nahi bulane wali kabhi nahi... Kyunki wo chipku chudail aapko Raj bulati hai... Jab dekho tab MERA RAJ, MERA RAJ karti hai... man karta hai ki uska khoon kar do, aur iss Raj ko ki maine use mara hai humesha humesha ke liye dafan kardo ... Aur aap... aapne agar dubara mujhe aapko Raj bulane ko kaha na to dekhna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga... She says while glaring at him and poking him with his finger continuously...

Rajveer gets shocked to see her all angry and shouting... : beta Raj... aaj to teri khair nahi... Yeh itni violent ho rahi hai... Waise hi iska gussa khatarnak hota hai, to aaj to yeh apne hosh main bhi nahi... Huda... Main tumhe chodonga nahi... Aaj tumhari wajah se hi main yaha fasa hu... Huda ko baad me kosna Raj... Nahi nahi Rajveer .. Haa Rajveer beta, par pehle apni iss jawalamukhi ko to shaant karle...

Rajveer: Naina main to bas aise hi bol raha tha... Tumhe mujhe Ra...He stops in the mid By seeing her glare getting intensified... mera matlab hai tum mujhe VEER bula lo.. VEER.. VEER me to koi problem nahi hai na...

Naina: aapka dimag to thik hai na... Yah uss kaali dayan ke kale jaadu ne aapka diamg kharab kar diya hai... Main aapko Veer kyu bulao... Aap kya mere bhai ho...nahi na... To phir...

Rajveer was feeling like to hit his head on some wall or something... Surely for everything Naina was having her own unique reasons...

Rajveer: acha okk. Okk.. see... No Babu, No jaanu, no RA...hmmm. No veer nothing... You just call me Rajveer the way you calls me.. OKna.. RAJVEER... waise bhi mujhe tumhare mooh se Rajveer sunna bahut acha lagta hai... Kyunki jayada tar sab mere naam ko chota karke hi mujhe bulate hai... Aur officially I was called as Capt. Shekhawat and now Major Shekhawat... So you see, ek tum hi ho jo mujhe Rajveer bulati ho... and I love hearing my full name from your mouth... So you just call me Rajveer okk.

Naina who was glaring at her now smiles after hearing his words: Sachi aapko mera aapko Rajveer bulana caha lagta hai...

Rajveer: sachi meri jaan sachi..

Naina: phir thik hai main aapko Rajveer hi bulaongi...

Rajveer sighs...: thank you...

He then again starts walking... after one or two second he feels some movement on his cheek... he then turns his head and found Naina caressing his cheek with her finger... Rajveer Raises his eyebrow...

Naina says huskily: aapko pata hai, aap kitne handsome hai...

Rajveer gets surprised hearing this...: Beta Rajveer, yeh ab kya karne wali hai... mujhe iske assar kuch sahi nahi lag rahe...

Naina: mujhe na aapke yeh dimples bahut pasand hai...

she says dreamily... But then her expressions changes and she narrows her eyes on his dimples... Rajveer gets scared by seeing her changed expressions... He knew Naina is seriously thinking something and whatever she is thinking is not good for his health...

Naina: nahi mujhe aapke yeh dimples ab bilkul pasand nahi... aapke inn dimples pe kitni ladkiyan aape marti hai aapko kuch pata bhi hai... Wo kaali dayan, wo chipku chudail ya phir wo sanaki darindi aatankwadi Dr.Ritu Mishra... nahi nahi mujhe nahi chaiye aapke yeh dimples... aap na apne yeh dimples hata do... haa hata do... hatao.. shooo shooo shoo..

she said while shoeing away his dimples with her fingers... But then she stops... and becomes sad..

Naina: nahi aap apne dimples mat hatiye... kyunki mujhe yeh bahut pasand hai... I love your dimples...She said while kissing him on his dimples, whereas Rajveer's eyes are wide open as saucers...

Naina: aap na ek kaam kijiye... Aap na apne yeh dimples na mere alawa kisi ko bhi nahi dikhana... Na koi aapke dimples dekhega, aur na hi aape line maarega... aapke yeh dimples sirf mere liye hai, jaise aap mere liye hai...ok...

Rajveer gets amazed to see her possessiveness and her damands: Ji jaisa meri jaan kahe... mere yeh dimples sirf aapke liye hai.. ok.., aur yeh dimples hi kyu main to pura ka pura aaphi ka hu...

Naina while making her hold tight on his neck: haa app sirf mere hai ... sirf mere... aur isiliye main kisiko bhi aapke pass nahi aane dongi... main na aapko uss kaali dayan ke kale jaadu se bhi bachongi aur uss chipku chudail se bhi... main aapko sabse protect karongi... sabse...

Rajveer hides his smile by hearing her words: ji... aap mujhe sabse protect karna... meri jaan ke hote hue koi bhala mujhe kaise kuch kar sakta hai... He said while kissing on her forehead...

They by now reached to Naina's room, for which Rajveer was thankful... His walk from that hall to Naina's room was quite eventful...He then tries to make Naina stand, but Naina clutched to his neck...

Naina: aap mujhe utar kyu rahe hai? Mujhe nahi utarna... mujhe aise hi rehna hai aapki baho me...

Rajveer: Naina dekho agar tum utrogi nahi to main darwaja kaise kholonga? Aur hum andar kaise jayenge? He said lovingly...

Naina: wo mujhe nahi pata... aap jo marzi kijiye par main nahi utarne wali...She said stubbornly...

Rajveer: NAina... He then sighs... He then very lovingly says, Jaan please maan jao... Main bas darwaza khol do, uske baad main aapko phirse utha longa, aur agar khogi to zindagi bhar apni baahon me tumhe utha ke rakhonga... But please abhi ek baar utar jao..

Naina : promise, aap mujhe phirse utha lenge..

Rajveer: promise meri jaan... promise... He said lovingly...

Naina: okk .. she said while moving her head...

Rajveer then make her stand, but she was being tipsy by now... and thus was not able to stand properly... he then make her stand properly by giving her wall's support...He then unlocked the lock fast and opened the door...He then turns towards Naina, who once again showed her hands to him... This time he knew what does she mean... So while shaking his head and smilingly he lifts her in his arms and enters inside... He then closed the door with his leg and by actions asked Naina to lock the door, which she did happily... He then took her to her bedroom and placed her on the bed...But Naina still didn't remove her hands from his neck... so he too had to sit beside her...Naina saw around the room and turning to Rajveer asked...

Naina: aapne to kaha tha ki aap mujhe kahi lekar jaayenge... lekin yeh to humara kamra hai...

Rajveer get amused to hear her calling her room, which was his before, "humara"... well surely he is planing to making this room as theirs...

Rajveer while keeping her strand behind her ear: Naina ache se yaad karo, maine tumse kaha tha ki main tumhe waha lekar jaonga jaha, koi bhi nahi hoga, sirf tum aur main honge... Aur dekho yaha sirf tum ho aur main hu, aur koi nahi... He said while looking into her eyes...

Naina looks around the room and said: arey haa, yaha to koi bhi nahi hai... sirf aap ho aur main hu... She said very innocently... Pata hai mujhe na abhi ek gana yaad aa raha hai main gao??? She asked him very excitedly...

Rajveer by seeing her excitement couldn't say no to her, that's the other fact that he can never can say no to her in any situation...:.. Also he thought by her song he will come to know about her feelings more...so he smilingly said: okk gao... But what she sang, he never expected her to sing that song in his life...

Because by keeping her hands on his neck, and swaying her upper body from left to right she sang: "Hum tum...ek kamre me band ho... aur... aur..." puchiye na aur...she asked Rajveer to asked her this question...

Rajveer was shocked to hear the song because he never thought her to sing this song... At this moment he was expecting something different song from het, but this was something out of his imagination... So when Naina asked her to ask that question he just simply asked while looking at her: aur...

Naina after hearing his question came near to his face slowly... Her face was barely an inch away from her... RAjveer was seeing her with wide eyes...

Naina then after blinking her eyes once said: aur... Aur chabbi kho jaaye... She sang this line by removing her right hand from his neck and waving it inside out and with a cute pout on her face...Rajveer was still in shock only..

Naina: ab aap gaiye?

Rajveer lifts his both eyebrows and asked her shockingly: hain?

Naina: what hain, ab aap gao na, song ko complete karo na please... she said while pouting...

Rajveer couldn't resist himself more; therefore he kept his hands on her waist and brings her close to him with a jerk... Naina's right hand which she removed from his neck, lends on his shoulder... Their face was close that their noses were almost touching each other...

While looking into her eyes deeply he sang: "Tere naino ki bhool bhulaiya me, RAJVEER kho jaaye..."

He then started caressing her waist... his hands were touching her bare waist, so his hands movements on her waist ignited sparks in both of their body... Naina too started caressing his nape by her left fingers...and both sitting in this same position and while looking into each other eyes sang simultaneously...

Naina: hum tum...

Rajveer: ek kamre me band ho...

Naina whispers near his mouth: aur chabi kho jaaye...

her lips movements were felt by his lips... and he closed his eyes... He was breathing heavily ... but he was trying to control himself... Because though Rajveer and NAina, both are in love and confessed their love to each other...they shared many kisses, but right now Naina is not in her senses...and Rajveer for sure doesn't want to do anything with her in this condition... Because as he thinks he can not take advantage of NAina's this condition... So he tries to control himself and his desires, which were increasing by every passing second due to their proximity...He then slowly removes his hand from her waist and moved his face little back so as to create some distance between their faces...

Rajveer: Naina...

Naina, who was sitting their with closed eyes, opened her eyes after hearing his voice...

Rajveer: Naina, tum fresh ho jao, change karlo, main tumhare liye lemon water lata hu.. ok...

He by saying that got up and was about to move when Naina stops him and pulls him with a jerk... due to the sudden pull he almost fell on her, but saved himself on time by keeping his both hands on her either sides...While his right hand was in NAina's hand, his left hand was lying flat on the bed..

Naina : Rajveer aapko aaj kya ho gaya hai?? Aap baar baar mujhse door ja rahe ho... aur abhi ... abhi aapne mujhe kissi bhi nahi di...She said with a sad pout... and then looking into his eyes she said, mujhse koi galti hui hai, aap mujhse naraz ho? Please agar mujhse koi galti hui hai to I am sorry, par please aap mujhse naraz mat ho na... mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta, jab aap mujhse naraz hote ho... She said almost sniffing...

Rajveer mentally cursed himself and more to Huda and Alekh... It's because of them Naina is in this condition and he has to bear this torture... Already it's very difficult to control himself, and then Naina saying all this while almost crying were making it more difficult for him... It was like shaadi ka laddo to him, agar khaya to bhi pachtaya, aur na khaya to bhi pachtaya...But right now he need to make Naina calm so he tries to make her understand..

Rajvee while cupping her face with his right hand: Naina aisa kuch bhi nahi hai... Main kaha tumse door jar aha hu, main to bas tumhare liye lemon water lene jar aha tha... Aur bhala main apni naina se naraz kaise ho sakta hu... Hum??

Naina: to aap mujhse naraz nahi hai...

Rajveer nods his head negatively...

Naina: to phir aapne mujhe kiss kyu nahi kiya...

Rajveer again closes his eyes frustratingly... He then opens his eyes and kiss her on her forehead... He places a long kiss on her forehead, not only to satisfy Naina, but also to calm him down too

Rajveer: see ab to maine tumhe kiss bhi kar diya na... ab main jao... he said and about to turn when Naina again pulls him towards her by pulling his tie with her left hand... This action resulted in falling of both of them on the bed... Rajveer's left hand lands on her waist... while his left hand is still on her right hand... Naina then left his left hand and brings her right hand near her face... She then stars tracing his face with her finger...

Naina: main iss kiss ki baat thodi na kar rahi thi... Mujhe na sab pata hai... pooja ne na mujhe ek movie dikhaai thi, usme na wo ladka, aur ladki room me akele hote hai... phir phir wo ladka uss ladki ke pass aata hai... She said while pulling his tie and bringing him more close to her.. Their lips just inch apart... Both starts breathing heavily due to their proximity...

Naina: phir...

Rajveer too gets lost in her eyes and whispers: phir...

Naina whispers: phir wo apne thumb se uss ladki ke lips ko trace karta hai.. aise... she said while caressing his ilps with her thumb and Rajveer gulps very hard...

Rajveer in his mind: Rajveer beta aaj to tu gaya... aaj tu nahi bachne wala... Aur Pooja, tumhe main chodne nahi wala meri NAina ko aisi adult movie dikhane ke liye... his thinking process came to halt when he heard NAina's voice...

Naina: phir wo uss ladki ke aur pass ata hai.. She said while coming closer to her..

Rajveer: Naina tumne kaha ki ladka pass aata hai, par yaha to tum aa rahi ho...

Naina looks into his eyes...and then blinks her eyes and then whispers: to phir aap aayie na mere pass...

It was as if she hypnotized him with her eyes, with her voice...He was so lost in her that he forgot his earlier not-taking-Naina-advantage-theory and started coming close to her... His hold on her waist becomes tight... While Naina's right hand travels towards his neck... There lips almost touching

Naina: aur phir wo usse kiss... But she couldn't complete her sentence, as her lips were locked with his...


Rajveer could no longer control himself and surrenderd himself to his passion and his Naina... The moment she said kiss Rajveer unable to control, captured her lips in his... He started sucking her lips, while Naina too reciprocated fiercely...Her hand travels in his hair and she started caressing his hair...Rajveer chews her lower lip, while she chew his upper lip and after sometime they changed their position... Now He was caressing her upper lip, and she his lower... Rajveer's hand which was fondling with her curve travels to her belly button and he started caressing it... It ignited something different in Naina, which resulted in her gasping... Rajveer got the chance to move his tongue inside her mouth... and he started tracing her mouth with his tongue... They sucked, chewed, and smooched each other's lips...


Inside Ball:

Gunny saw Rajveer taking Naina out from there... And he smiled... Afterall why won't he... Because he knows how much Rajveer loves Naina... and he also knows this his happiness lies in Naina... Naina makes him happy, calm, content and mostly gives him peace... Gunny was happy that finally Rajveer got his peace... He finally found his home, which is Naina... He was happy for his friend that at last his friend got his love...After facing everything, after crossing every hurdle, after being separated from each other for 5 years, finally, like finally Rajveer and Naina are together now, happy and in love with each other more than ever...

Really his friend is lucky to have the second chance to get his love... Not everyone is as lucky in getting second chance, that's what he was thinking... And not everyone like Naina wait for their love, fights with everyone even if their love is not with them... so for gunny if Naina is dam lucky to have Rajveer, who loves her immensely, irrevocably, madly, who can do anything for her, even can sacrifice his life and his reputation. His uniform too which is more precious to him than his life, than Rajveer was not less lucky to have Naina, who waited for him, even when everybody believed that Rajveer is no more and not going to come... She fought with everyone, she even distanced herself from her parents, from her friends, but never distanced herself from Rajveer, from his love, from his memories... She was ready to live her life with his memories, but was not ready to move on with someone else and make new memories...And for this he really appreciates her... Because in this case he saw himself in her, after all he himself too is not ready to move on and make new memories, even though he was hurt badly by the one whom he loved, or still loves...

Gunny was busy in his thoughts and was smiling because he was happy for his friend and Naina, when someone approached him...

Sameera: arey Gunny, aap yaha?

Gunny turns and found Sameera standing there with a surprised face... He smiles at her: Ji Sameera ji, hum yaha...

Sameera: don't tell me ki papa ne yah ape bhi aapko mujhe protect karne ke liye bheja hai...

Gunny: Well main yah ape aaya to hu protect karne, par sirf aapko hi nahi, balki sabko... After all cadtes ka teacher hone ke naate, unn sab ko protect karna meri zimmedari banti hai nahi...?

Sameera who was sad till now by thinking that he is here on her father's insistence, becomes surprised to hear him: really aap yaha as a faculty member aaye hai...

Gunny smiles too after seeing her smile: Ji, Hum yaya as a teacher hi aaye hai... But abhi ke liye yeh humara secret hai... aapk abhi yeh kisi ko nahi batayengi... Baki sab ko kal surprise milne do... whats say?

Sameera: I promise gunny, hum yeh kisi ko nahi batayenge... Promise...

Gunny: waise humne sunna hai ki aapne KMA join kiya hai, as a cadet... kyunki aap ek soldier banna chathi hai... Well I must say I m very proud on you and your this decision..

Sameera: really aap sach me humpe proud hai..

Gunny nods his head smilingly...

Sameera: tqq, bas ab hum ek acha soldier bana chathe hai, taki jaise aaj aap hum pe proud feel kar rahe hai, waise hi ek din humare papa, humara yeh desh hum par proud kare... Butyou know isme hume aapki madad chiye hogi... Aapki consistent guidance... Jaise Naina ko Capt. Rajveer guide karte the, support karte the, waise hum bhi chahte hai ki aap hume bhi wais ehi guide kare... kyunki ek student ke liye ek acha teacher milna bahut jaroori hota hai... To kahiye aap karenge humari help? Banege humare mentor?

Gunny: why not... it will be my pleasure to have you as my protege Sameera... but let me tell you I am a very strict teacher, and as I know you from before, so I m aware of your all the weak points too.. And I will be doing everything to make your weak points your strength...Aap pehle hi hume khados bulati thi... To ab to hume aapke saath aur bhi khadoos ban na padega... So are you ready to bear me and my khadoosnas??? He asked her playfully yet seriously...

Sameera: I am ready to bear anything gunny to become a good soldier... Aur ek secret batao, aap itne bhi khadoos nahi ho... And jo thode bhaut ho, I am sure usse bhi hum door kardenge...

Guuny raises his eyebrow: ahha.. very confident haa..

Sameera: aap hi se sikha tha, ki kisi bhi kaam me confident hona bahut zaroori hota hai, aur ab hum apne metor ki sikahi hui baat ko kaise bhool sakte hai...

Gunny laughs at her while she too smiles... They both were talking and laughing with each other, but there were two people who were not feeling good to see them together and laughing ... They were...

Shalini...

And...

And...

Any guess..?????

Huda...

Well for shalini she was happy to see him laughing heart fully and smiling, but this fact that she is not the one to make him smile and laugh pricked her heart... She always wanted to be the one,who could make him smile and laugh but in the end she became the one who gave him immense pain and hurt him very badly...

On the other hand it was Huda... well Huda was confuse...He don't know why he was not liking Sameera talking this much freely with Gunny and laughing with him...

Huda Pov: yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai... Mujhe itna bura kyu lag raha hai, Surajmukhi ka Gunny sir se baat karna... Par job hi hai Surajmukhi haste hue lagti bahut khoobsurat hai... Aaj to yeh waise hi bahut khoobsurat lag rahi hai, aur iske hassi, iski hassi iski khoobsurati pe char chand laga rahi hai... Man karta hai ki iski yeh hassi iske honthon se kabhi door na ho, aur main isse aise hi haste hue dekhta rahu... What the... abbey bawara ho gaya hu kya main... main main yeh kya soch raha hu, aur wo bhi Surajmukhi ke bare me... wo meri dost hai... aura b to meri cadet bhi... Nahi nahi... mera dimag hil gaya hai... Huda nikal le yaha se, isse pehle ki tu koi bawal kare...

He left from there, but still was not able to forget Sameer's smiling face...

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Naina-Rajveer's room:

Rajveer unable to control captured her lips in his... He started sucking her lips, while Naina too reciprocated fiercely...Her hand travels in his hair and she started caressing his hair...Rajveer chews her lower lip, while she chew his upper lip and after sometime they changed their position... Now He was caressing her upper lip, and she his lower... Rajveer's hand which was fondling with her curve travels to her belly button and he started caressing it... It ignited something different in Naina, which resulted in her gasping... Rajveer got the chance to move his tongue inside her mouth... and he started tracing her mouth with his tongue... They were kissing, smooching, chewing each other's lips passionately..

While kissing Rajveer adjusted him so that he was half lying on her and half on the bed... His hand started caressing her waist and then her bare stomach, which resulted in her moaning... They were so lost in their kiss that they didn't realize when Rajveer's coat was removed and thrown on the floor... Naina's hand travels on his back and she brought him more close by hugging him tightly...Rajveer's front pressed on her's... Rajveer was able to feel the movement of her breast under him... This made him come out of his trance... He then broke the kiss... Both were breathing heavily... Naina's eyes were closed...her lips were parted... her chest was moving heavily due to her heavy breathing... In short she was not looking less than a seductress to him and for Rajveer it was becoming very difficult to him to not to give up to his temptations... But he knew better than to loose himself... So to control himself he placed his forehead on Naina's...

Rajveer then whispers: You don't even have any idea Naina, how much difficult you are making me to control myself... I only know how I control myself everyday when you sleep in my arms, close to me, hugging me... And today , today you are making it almost impossible for me to control...he said all this while closing his eyes...But then he heard which made him to open his eyes instantly...Because he heard Naina saying...

Naina: then who asked you to control... you know you don't have to control...

Rajveer looks at her with wide eyes... But then he shakes his head smilingly and blushingly... He knows that Naina is not in her senses... By now her senses our overpowered by alcohol completely...

Rajveer while bitting his lower lip and blushingly thinks in his mind: abhi to yeh sab bol diya, par kal jab yaad aayega ki aaj kya kya kiya hai isne, to I am sure, mere pass ana to door mujhse nazar bhi nahi mila payegi...

He then gets up from her and sits beside her on the bed... Naina is still lying on the bed... He then cups her cheek with his right hand and start caressing it with his thumb... Naina keeps her hand on his and clutches it and then leans on to his hand...

Rajveer while caressing says: I love you so much Naina... You know na that..

Naina nods at him smilingly...

Rajveer: to ab meri baat mano... washroom me jakar change kar lo aur fresh ho jao... tab tak main tumhare liye lemon water bana lata hu... Hmm.

Naina this time nods at him... While Rajveer sighs in relief... He was about to get up when Naina throws her hand towards him and he closed his eyes once again frustratingly...

Rajveer: Naina please... Don't tell me you want me to take you to the washroom..

Naina nods at him smilingly and excitingly...While Rajveer catches his head in his hands...

Rajveer: Naina please tum washroom khud chali jao...

Naina: par main kaise chali jao... mere to pair me chot hai na... Aur ab to mujhe chakar bhi aa rahe hai... Main gir gayi to...

Rajveer murmers: iska to pata nahi par aaj main jaroor girne wala hu aur wo bhi badi buri tarh se...

Rajveer: dekho NAina tumhe kuch nahi hoga... I promise.. chalo kahdi ho... He then makes her to stand but the moment he moves away from him, she stumbles... because she was not lieing... Due to alcohol now she started feeling dizzy... Rajveer holds her on time...Naina was completely swaying...

Rajveer: Naina ... NAina are u okk..

Naina: maine kaha than a mujhe chakar aa rahe hai...

Rajveer: ohh god...acha okk.. main hi tumhe lekar chalta hu... He then lifted her and took her inside the washroom... He then made her stand with the support of slab...

Rajveer: ab tum change kar lo.. tab tak main bhi bahar change kar leta hu...

By saying that he was about to move when Naina caught hold of his hand...

Naina: aap kaha ja rahe ho? Agar aap chale jaoge to mujhe change kon karayega????

And after hearing this, Rajveer's eyes were ready to pop out from his socket... He felt as if someone threw cold water on him... He was not able to speak... he didn't know how to react or what to say... so he just whispers her name: Naina...

Naina brings him closer to her once again by pulling his tie: aapko pata hai na mujhe chakar aa rahe hai... main khud kaise change karongi????? Aap hi kar do na...Bhaiya bhi to mere kapde change karte the bachpan me... aaj aap kardo... She says very innocently... And after hearing this what could be Rajveer's expression, I don't think so I need to explain that, infact I can't even explain his expressions...

Rajveer in his mind: Naveen ke bache... .. Mujhe samjh nahi aa raha ki main kiska khoon pehle karo... Uss Sonia ka jiski wajah se yeh sab suru hua, ya phir uss Bhenson ke masiha Huda ka to make Naina drink, ya phir tera,,... Kya jaroorat thi tujhe iske kapde change karne ki bachpan me... Tu to chala gaya isse yeh adat daal ke, par ab bhugatna to mujhe pad raha hai na...

Suddenly he sees Naveen standing beside him: hey raj, jhoot mat bol... aise pretend mat kar ki tujhe yeh sab acha nahi lag raha... I m sure dil me to tere laddo photo rahe hai...

Rajveer: Kya bakwas kar raha hai... Tujhe sharam nahi aati aise baat karte hue... aur yeh mat bhool ki Naina teri behen hai...

NAveen: exactly Naina meri behen hai, islye main yaha aaya hu, to warn you... Mana ki main tum dono ko saath dekh kar bahut khus ho... Aur yeh bhi dekh kar ki ab meri behen aklei nahi hai, balki tu uske saath hai, har kadam pe, ... par iska matlab yeh nahi ki main tum dono ki shaadi se pehle yeh sab allowed karonga... samjha... to meri behen ke nashe ki halat ka fayda uthane ki sochiyo bhi mat samjha...

Rajveer getting frustrated and angry: main, main teri behen ka fayda utha raha hu, yaw o mera fayada utha rahi hai... Ek to pehle hi mujhse control karna mushkil ho raha hai... upar se yeh aise tempting idea de rahi hai... I mean tu iske kapde change karta tha, par wo bhi bachpan me... aur tu iska bhai tha... Par ab na to yeh bachi reh gayi hai, I mean by mind we can say ki yeh abhi bhi bachi hai, par baki kisi bhi tarh se yeh bachi nahi hai ab... aur sabse main baat... Main... main iska bhai nahi hu...do you even know how much difficult it is for me to think about changing her clothes..., I means I agree don't mind changing her clothes, infact I would love tooo... what the... Major tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai... kaisi baate soch rahe ho... wo bhi apni Naina ke liye... ek minute what do you . sorry.. what do I mean apni NAina ke liye... ab agar yeh sab Naina ke bare me nahi sochonga to kiske bare me sochonga...Ohh just shut up Rajveer... tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai... Kaisi batein kar rahe ho, wo bhi Naina ke bhai ke saamne... Bhai... ohh shit... I am so sorry Naveen... NAveen... Naveen...

He looks around and found no one...He then exhales audibly... Beta Rajveer ek din nahi ek hi raat me iss ladki ne tujhe pura pagal bana diya hai...pata nahi kya kya sochne aur dekhne lag gay hai...
He comes out from his mind talk and sees Naina and found her looking at him with cute angry face... Her eyes were narrowed to him and she was pouting...

Rajveer in mind: ab isse kya ho gaya?? Ab yeh aise mujhe kyu dekh rahi hai...pata nahi ab konsa bomb phodegi mujh par... Then coming out from his mind talk he said, Naina... Kya hua... Tum mujhe aise kyu dekh rahi ho??

Naina: aise na dekho to kya karo... Main kabse aapko bula rahi hu...par aap sun hi nahi rahe... Pata nahi kaha aur kin khayalo me gum hai... aapko pata bhi hai mujhe innkapdo me kitna uncomfortable feel ho raha hai... main aapko kabse mere kapde change karne ko keh rahi hu...

Rajveer in mind: aur yeh jo tumhari baatein mujhe itna uncomfortable feel karva rahi hai... uska kya...

Naina shouting: dekha... dekha aap phir se kho gaye... don't tell me ki aap uss Kaali dayan ya chipku chudail ke bare me soch rahe hai???

Rajveer gupls hard by seeing her shouting and angry: nahi nahi... Main bhala unke bare me kyu sochonga... main to... Main to... haa main to yeh soch raha tha ki tumhe change karna hai na to main... main... main tumhere kapde lekar aata hu... I mean change karne ke liye kapde to hone chaiye na... I will just bring your clothes ok... He said hurriedly and about to move, but couldn't... because once agin Naina didn't allow him to move and stopped him by pulling his tie which was still in her hand... And this time rajveer was cursing his tie and himself too for wearing that stupid tie...

Naina: arey mere kapde lane ke liye aapko bahar jaane ki kya jaroorat hai... Kapde to yahi hai na...

Rajveer: yaha ... yaha kha hai...

Naina: yeh rahe na... She said while keeping her finger on his shirt... And Rajveer felt as if he can't breath...

Naina: aap hi ne kaha than a ki main aapke kapdo me jayada hot lagti hu... She said while coming closer to him... Aur yeh bhi ki abse main aaphi ke kapde pehno...She said while giving him a hard kiss on his cheek... she then whispers, usne aapko yahi kiss kiya tha na... she said once again kissing him on his cheek...while Rajveer realized that she was talking about Sonia...

Naina: I so hate her... how dare she to kiss you... only I have the right to kiss you... She said while biting his cheek...While rajveer hisses a little... Naina then starts moving down while placing kisses on his jaw, and then she reached on his neck... But his shirt's collar and tie were coming in between his skin and her lips... So she removed his tie in a swift moment and opened his collar button... While all the time Rajveer was standing there helpless... I think this was the first time, when he felt so helpless... Surely only his Naina can make him helpless... .. Naina then place a kiss on his neck...and rajveer being lost in the kiss, kept his hands on her waist... She then kiss him on his collarbone and then move towards right to kiss him on the joint point of his neck and shoulder... While Rajveer couldn't help but bring her closer to him by clutching her waist tightly...Naina then slowly opens his first button and trace her finger on his collarbone...

Rajveer couldn't help but moan her name: Naina...

And that was his waking call... He came out of his trance... And then saw their position... While Naina was till busy in opening his second button and sucking his neck...Rajveer by holding her from her shoulders move her away a little, so as to make some distance between them...

Rajveer with great difficulty says: Naina kya kar rahi ho...

Naina says very innocently: kya kar rahi hu? Apne kapde le rahi ho... Mujhe change karna hai na... She said while opening his third button..

Rajveer in his mind: Beta Rajveer aaj to teri izzat khatre me hai... aaj tu nahi bachne wala... Aaj pehli baar aisa hoga ki, ek ladki ke nashe me hone ke bawjood bhi koi uska fayda nahi utha raha, balki wo ladki khud ladke ka fayda utha rahi hai... Woi bhi koi aisa waisa ladka nahi, balki ek reputed army officers ka...Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ka... Dekh NAveen, tu dekh raha hai na... nahi tu dekh na... Tu yeh kab kaise dekh sdakta hai... Tu bas sun... haa sun... to tu sun raha hai na, dekh main teri behen ka fayda nahi utha raha, teri behen mera fayda utha rahi hai... to tu ab mujhe kuch mat bol... Lekin ho sake to wahi se baithe baithe apni iss behen ko kuch akal de de yaar... Warna aaj mera rape hona tai hai... bacha le mujhe yaar...

He was talking with Naveen in his mind, that's why he didn't realize that Naina by now have opened his shirts every button...and now he was standing bare chest, with his shirt fully open...He came out of his trance when he felt Naina caressing his bare chest with her fingers...

Naina was seductively tracing her finger on his bare chest and whispers in hie ear: I hate to admit but I must say wo Kaali dayan sahi keh rahi thi, aap wakai bahut strong hai,... Aur aapki yeh muscular body, can give any top model a run for his money...While Rajveer couldn't help but groan by her hand moments... but he was also embarrassed by hearing her words and was blushing...But Naina's words and her seductive actions were making it hard for him to control... and that's what he did, loose control when Naina gave him a kiss on his heart...So unable to control himself he lift her face by keeping his hand in her hairs and then eyeing her lips said...

Rajveer: Tumhe nahi lagta ki tumhare inn lips ko ek time pe sirf ek hi kaam karna chaiye... And at this moment, I prefer the second work rather than talking... He by saying this caught her lips in his mouth... Naina moans in his mouth... Which ignites passion between them... Rajveer's one hand was in her hair, while other caught her waist and Naina's hand was moving on his bare chest... Unable to control himself, Rajveer's hand too started caressing her waist... His hand then reached the zip of her top on her left side and he opened the zip... His hand then started tracing her stomach , while his lips were tracing her mouth... NAina too was busy in tracing his back with her hands... Both were lost in their passion and in their kiss, that's why Rajveer didn't realize when his hand started to travel in upward direction from her stomach... His hand reached the hem of her top and then inside it...and then something unexpected happened...The moment his hand traced the bottom of her breast, he came out of his trance and break their kiss abruptly... He saw Naina and found her with her eyes closed... He couldn't dare to move his gaze from her face to down... So he hurriedly turned and took of his hirt and then without moving gave it to naina and said..

Rajveer: yeh lo meri shirt... ab please jaldi se change kar lo... main chalta hu...

But... But... But... how can he go...His Naina is not going to allow him to leave her today at any cost... so she again caught hold of his hand, ...Thank god it was not his tie, otherwise his neck would have got a cramp because of all that pulling by his tie... Anyways, so Naina caught hold of his hand while Rajveer shuts his eyes completely frustratingly...

Naina: Maine kaha tha ki aap mere kapde change karenge... To aap kaha chale abhi... abhi to aapne apni shirt uteri hai... abhi to mere kapde baki hai...

Here Naina have no idea what she was talking, but Rajveer for sure felt that he will die today... he knew that today nobody can save him, and by now he realized that it was unable to make Naina understand anything in her current condition... So he did what he thought was the best...

He turned towards her, took his shirt in his hand, and Closed his eyes tightly and then with trembling hands and while shivering he removed her top and then hurriedly made her wear his shirt... Naina's top was not that easy also to remove, so it took him 3-4 good enough minutes and in those minutes, his hands touched her at many places, touching which now he thought is forbidden for him...He then started buttoning his shirt... All the while he kept his eyes closed, because he didn't want to see her...

Obviously he want to see her, but not like this, atleast not now when Naina is not in her senses and don't know what she is doing... He wants to see her, love her with her permission, when she will be in her senses, when she will be aware of what they are doing and when he will have all rights on her... Though they both are in love but Rajveer is surely a Man of dignity, of principles... Though now too he have all the rights on her but he doesn't want to take advantage of his rights, of their love... he wants to make all this moments memorable to them, so that they both can cherish those moments all their life and not something for which they will have to regret later...

So after buttoning his shirt he opened his eyes and saw her in his shirt... While all this time NAina was looking at him lovingly... Though she is not in her senses, but still she was admiring him and fell more for him by seeing his this gesture...

Rajveer after controlling his breathing said: dekho ab maine tumhe change bhi kara diya na... maine tumhari saari baate mani, ab tum bhi meri baat mano... Chalo aur ache bacho ki tarh so jao...

Naina: arey aise kaise so jao... abhi to aapne meri sirf shirt change ki hai... but what about my skirt... Main isme nahi so sakti... Isme mujhe bahut khulla khualla lagta hai... Abhi aap meri skirt bhi change kijiye chaliye...

Rajveer in mind shout: Huddaaa... I will not leave you Huda... You are surely gonna be dead from my hands... He then found Naina looking at his jeans...and he gave the world's scariest expression... Ohh god... Ab yeh kahi meri pent bhi na utarwale... Meri bachi kuchi izzat bhi lut jayegi... lagta hai aaj yeh mera pura vastraharan karke chodegi...

Rajveer: Dekho NAina, jaisa tum soch rahi ho na...

Naina: Main kaha soch rahi hu, aap soch rahe hai... Ab sochna band kijiye, aur jaldi se mujhe wo trouser pehna dijiye...

Rajvver hurriedly: dekho NAina main kisi bhi kimat pe tumhe apni yeh pent nahi dene wala..

Naina: arey to maine kaha aapse aapki pent maangi... main to aapko mujhe mera trouser pehnane ko keh rahi ho... wo dekhiye, wo raha...

He then sees towards the direct where Naina was pointing and saw her trouser... He sighs in relief... But making Naina wear her trouser was surely a very difficult task for him... But he knew he have to do this... So he brought her trouser...and then kneel infront of her... He then removed her sandals one by one, all the time looking into her eyes... While Naina kept her hands on his shoulders to steady herself...He then while looking into her eyes, asked her to step inside the trouser... Naina did that happily... She first kept her right leg and then her left leg... Rajveer then started taking that trouser upward inside her skirt... In between his fingers touched her bare legs, which made him to suck his breath... He hurridly made her wear that... He then from her back opened her skirt zip, which resulted in falling of her skirt... He sighs in relief because he completed the world's difficult task...While Naina smiled fully... By seeing her smiling like that Rajveer forgot all his irritation and frustration... By looking at her he realized that NAina started to feel drowsy and sleepy... So,He then took Naina in his arms and came out of the washroom... He then make her lay down on the bed...Naina didn't leave his neck so he too have no other option but to lay beside her, after removing his hoes with his legs only...As soon as Rajveer lay down, Naina came top of him and lay down on him completely... By now rajveer has no more energy to get shock... So he just simply hold her tightly in his arms... He knew that now she will fall asleep very soon... So he just started caressing her hairs lovingly, while his other hand was holding her waist... Naina kept her both hands on his neck...She then gave him a kiss on his neck and whispers...

Naina: I love you Rajveer, Bahut saara... aap please mujhse kabhi door mat jaiyega...

Rajveer kissed her on her forehead and whispers in her ears: I Love you too Naina... and I ma not going anywhere... I m here with you that too forever...

He continued to caress her hairs... And as expected she was asleep within 2-3 minutes... Rajveer kept looking at her for few minutes...though it was a tough and tiring day for him, but he enjoyed very bit of it... He enjoyed Naina's all the tantrums, her jealousy, her childishness, her boldness, everything... Today he saw a very different NAina, which was hidden from everyone...And he was glad to saw this Naina... He enjoyed loving her, caring her, pampering her, bearing her all the tantrums, just to make her happy and smile... And he was ready to do all this for his whole life... With his this last thought, he too slept, in the same position, Naina being on top of him and he caressing her hair...

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Next morning:

Naina got up from her sleep and started moving her head... It was getting difficult for her to get up because her head was paining like anything ... But somehow she managed to open her eyes after blinking several times...when she opened her eyes, she felt someone caressing her hairs... She looked upwards and found rajveer looking at her with his cute smile... Actually Rajveer got up long back, but he couldn't get up as Naina was sleeping on him, hugging him tightly... Also he too didn't want to leave her... Today is Sunday, so there was no need for them to get up... Also because of yesterday's celebration, he knew their friends will also be sleeping... So he kept laying there and adored Naina in her sleep... After sometime he found her moving time and he knew that she will get up now... He knew she will be getting headache, so he started caressing her hair...

Rajveer then very sweetly says: Good Morning jaan...And kiss her on her forehead...

Naina gets surprised to hear Jaan from him, because obviously she didn't remember that last night she ordered him or we can say threatened him to call her Jaan only... She started blushing and then in a meek voice said: Good morning Rajveer... She was feeling shy so she couldn't look into his eyes and then she shifted her head down... But what she saw made her eyes pop out...She hurriedly got up and sat, (well obviously she sat on him, but she didn't realize it till now..)and closed her eyes with her right hand...

Naina: Rajveer... Aap .. aap aise... Aapki shirk aha hai? Aap bina shirt ke kyu so rahe hai?

Rajveer knew that Naina must forget what happened last night, and her shy Naina will be back the moment the effect of alcohol will subside... So he was expecting something this kind of reaction only from her... But after whatever happened last night, how much Naina troubled him, surely he didn't want to leave this chance... Now it was his Revenge time...

Rajveer: Arey Naina tumne apni aankhen kyu band kar li... He said innocently while trying remove her hand...

Naina: aap mujhse yeh puch rahe hai... Pehle aap mujhe yeh bataiye ki aapki shirt kaha hai... aap yaha bina shirt ke kya kar rahe hai???? She said while jerking his hand..

Rajveer raises his eyebrow: Acha matlab kal raat ko mera chirharan karne ke baad aaj tum khud mujhse yeh sawal kar rahi ho... Aur shrma to aise rahi ho, jaise tumne kal raat kuch dekha hi nahi...he said innocently...

Naina openes her eyes with a jerk after hearing his words but then again closed her eyes: kal raat... Kya kal raat... Aur maine aapka chirharan kiya... aap kya bak rahe hai Rajveer... Aur aur.. pehle aap miujhe yeh bataiye ki aapki shirt kaha hai... nahi nahi.. aap mujhe bataiye nahi, bas apni shirt peheniye pehle...

Rajveer: ohh to tum chathi ho ki main shirt pehen lo...

Naina: haa aur wo bhi jaldi...

Rajveer: thik hai phir...Rajveer saying this, kept his hand on her waist and brings her closer to him, with a jerk...

Naina lends staright on his chest and opened her eyes with a jerk...Now only she realized that all this while she was sitting on him, and may be she even slept on him... Naina was looking at him with her wide eyes... Rajveer then turns and changed their position... Now Naina was under him and he was lying on her...he then very slowly opened the first button of the shirt... and moved to the second... All this while both were looking into each other's eyes... He was about to open second button too, when Naina hold his hand in her..

Naina whispers: Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai rajveer...

Rajveer: Kya kar raha hu??? Abhi tumne hi to kaha ki mujhe meri shirt pehen leni chaiye... Ab jab tak main apni shirt tumpar se UTARUGA nahi, to main pehnuga kaise... he said innocently and stretching Utarunga word...He wanted Naina to remember the moment, when Naina asked him to remove her clothes...

Naina gets shocked to hear his words and then she look down to herself and found her wearing Rajveer's shirt... She then look more down and found her wearing her trouser... She was confused, because she didn't remember changing her clothes yesterday...She got up with a jerk, because of this Rajveer fell on bed beside her..

Naina: main... main aapki shirt me... Aur maine apne kapde kab change kiye...

Rajveer smirk and then sat beside too, but little back of her... He then shifts her hair from her shoulder and kept his head there and hug her from back... His hand rested on her stomach...

Rajveer: arey tumne apne kapde kaha change kiye... Tum bhool gayi kal tumne kaise pehle meri shirt open kari thi... Ek ek button dheere dheere open karke... He said while taking her earlobe in his mouth, while his left hand traveled to the second button and opened it...

Naina gulps hard... The scene of her opening his button fleshes in her eyes...

Rajveer: aur phir kaise tumne mujhe kiss kiya tha, yaha... He said while kissing her on her neck... Aur phir yaha... He moved his shirt little from her shoulder and placed a kiss on her neck shoulder joint point... aur phir tumne yeh bhi kiya tha... He said while sucking her skin hard...

As Rajveer was saying, Naina was remembering all that... All that scenes were flashing in front of her eyes... And her eyes where becoming more big bit by bit...

Rajveer while moving to the third button: aur phir tumne mere saare buttons open kiye the.. aise... he was about to open the third button, when Naina stopped him by holding his hand... Rajveer smiles but then hiding his smile said...

Rajveer: Phir tumne mujhe yaha bhi kiss kiys tha.. He said while keeping his finger on her heart, while Naina's breath stuck in her throat... Aur phir tumne mujhe tumhare kapde change karne ko kaha... Pehle tumne apna top change karwaya, aur phir apni skirt... Aur...He was about to say more but stopped because NAina started struggling in his hold, and was trying to move out...

Rajveer smilingly: Naina arey Naina kaha ja rahi ho... Abhi to aur bhi bahut kcuh baki hai...

Naina: Rajveer please...Naina said in slow voice... But By her voice Rajveer understood that something was wrong with her... So he turned her face to him... Naina was trying to not to look at him and to go from there... But Rajveer made his grip tight... He then once again turned her face to him...

Rajveer: Naina... Naina meri tarf dekho..

But Naina didn't look at him, instead started struggling to go...

Rajveer then holds her chin and lifts her face... But she still was not looking at her...

Rajveer: Naina... Naian please look at me... Meri Jaan please...he said lovingly...

Naina after hearing Jaan looked at him... But when she looked at him, Rajveer found her eyes becoming teary...He was shocked to see her crying... He then cups her face...

Rajveer: Naina... Kya hua? Why are you crying? He asked while removing her tear...But Naina didn't said anything and continued to cry while looking at him...

Rajveer: Naina..

Naina then whispers: Mujhe sab yaad aa gaya, maine kal job hi kiya aapke saath... And she ends up crying silently..

Rajveer was shocked to see her like that... He knew she was not in her senses yesterday and thus today when she will remember all that she will be feeling embarrassed, shy ... But he never expected her to cry like this... He knew his Naina is innocent...But this much innocent he didn't know...

Rajveer: Naina are you embarrassed for whatever happened yesterday between us??

Naina din't answer but shifts her gaze downwards... It was enough for Rajveer to know that he is right...

He then takes her in a side hug and while cupping her face said very lovingly...

Rajveer: Naina tum kiss baat ke liye embarrassed feel kar rahi ho? Apna bachpana, apni maasomiyat mujhe dikhane ke liye? Ya phir apna pyaar, apna haq mujh pe jatane ke liye? Naina kal humare bich aisa kuch nahi hua jiske liye tumhe embarrassed feel hona pade, wo bhi mujhse...

Naina: maine aapko kitna tang kiya kal...

Rajveer smiles: to wo to tumhara haq hai mujh pe jaan... Tum jaanti ho kal ka din mere liye kitna acha tha... I mean apart from that goons incident... Kal mujhe meri ek nayi Naina dekhne ko mili... Jo ki mere liye bahut hi possessive hai, itni possessive ki agar koi ladki mere karib bhi aane ki koshish kare to wo meri jaan ke liye ya to Kaali dayan ban jaati hai, ya phir chipku chudail... ya phir wo sanaki darini attankwadi... He saying that started laughing like anything... Naina was embarrassed like anything... But she too couldn't stop herself from smiling... so she too was smiling in her tears and biting her lips being embarrassed...

Rajveer: ohh god... tumhe pata hai kal maine kaise apne aapko hasne se roka hai... He said in between his laugh... Ohh god and the epic one was Bhianson ka mashia... Hahaha... he said laughing loudly...

Naina gets more embarrassed: Rajveer please...

Rajveer tries to control himself but ends up laughing again... but finally he managed to control his laugh, by seeing Naina getting embarrassed more..

Rajveer: acha ok... haa... to... he said, while still he was laughing little in between... He then with great difficulty control his laugh... Main yeh keh raha tha ki kal mujhe ek nayi Naina dekhne ko mili, jo andar se bilkul bachi hai, bacho jaise gussa ho jati hai, unke jaise zidd karti hai... aur sabse jarrori baat jo mujhse bahut bahut bahut pyaar karti hai... Tumhe pata hai iss Naina ko dekhne liye main kuch bhi karne ko tayar hu... Phir chahe mujhe dubara mera chirharan kyu na karwana pade tumse... He said laughingly...while Naina looks at him while blushing and with a cute pout...

Rajveer: Aur Naina jo kuch bhi kal humare bich iss room me hua, wo bhi galat nahi tha... Tumhara mujhpe pura haq hai, Maine kal apne aapko bahut mushkil se control kiya, isliye nahi kyunki hum kuch galat jar rahe the, balki islye ki wo situation galat thi... Tum apne hosh me nahi thi, tumhe yeh pata nahi tha kit um kya kar rahi thi... Aur main humari zindagi ka sabse important step iss tarh se nahi lena chatha Naina... Main tumhe apna bana chatha hu Naina, har tarah se, par tumhari permission se, tab jab tum pure hosh me ho, tab jab hum dono ko pata ho ki hum kya kar rahe hai, tab jab hum dono uss moment ko mehsoos kare, pure sil se jiye, tab jab hum uss moment ki yaadon ko humari zindagi bhar yaad kar sake, na ki subah hote hi bhool jaaye... Hmmm... he said lovingly to her... While Naina was blushing like a tomato hearing his words... She knew about what he was talking... She is not that innocent too... She was feeling very shy because of Rajveer's gaze and his words and thus she hides herself in his arms, while Rajveer too hugs her back tightly... He knew she will be doing something like that...

Rajveer: Aur Naina main yeh sab aise nahi karna chatha... Main chatha hu ki hum apne rishte me yeh kadam tab uthaye jab hum dono ek dusre ki ho jaaye, jab hum eek dusre pe saare adhikar mil jaaye, sirf apni nazar me hi nahi, kyunki humari nazar me to hum abhi bhi ek hai, abhi bhi hum dono ko ek dusre pe saare adhikar hai... balki sabki nazar main, huamre samaj, yeh duniya, aur agar koi bhagav hai to uski nazar me bhi jab hum sahi mayine me ek ho jaayenge, tab./... Tab main chatha hu ki hum ek ho... Har tarah se... har maayine se... Aur mujhe uss din ka besabri se intzaar hai Naina...he said while hugging her close to her and caressing her hair lovingly with his one hand...

Naina knew what he meant... Though he didn't say it directly, but she knew... She understood his hidden, unspoken words...

Naina whispers while hiding her face in his neck: Mujhe bhi uss din , uss pal ka besabri se intzaar hai rajveer, Jab main aapki ho jaongi, har tarah se...

Rajveer made his hold more tight on her waist hearing her words... He then smiled and placed a kiss on her forehead...

Rajveer: Love you Jaan...

Naina: Love you too...She then with a naughty smile said... Love you too JAANU... And start laughing...While Rajveer break their hug immediately...

Rajveer: Naina...please... He said with a irritated face...

Naina continues to laugh... She then pulls his cheek: aapko pata hai, aap na bhaut hi cute hai... Mere cute se Rajveer...aur main aaapse bahut bahut bahut pyaar karti hu... I Love you too Rajveer... She said smilingly and hugs him tightly... Rajveer too hugs her smilingly... They stay like that for few minutes...Rajveer then asked her to freshen up...And told her he will also go in his room to freshen up... Naina smilingly nods at him and move towards the washroom... She was about to enter when she heard Rajveer saying..

Rajveer: waise Naina, tumhe pata hai kalse na ek gaana mera sabse favt ban gaya hai... tumhe pata hai konsa...

Naina nods her head negatively...

Rajveer: arey wahi... Hum-Tum-ek kamre me band ho...aur - aur"aur chabbi kho jaaye...

Naina opens her eyes wide and then runs inside the washroom blushingly... While Rajveer laughs...He then Move towards the living room while singing this song and whistling... He then reach near the mirror and pressed it from the corner to turn it... Now also he was singing and whistling... But then his singing and whistling came to stop by hearing someone's scream...

"AHhh"

Rajveer by seeing the person in front of him shout too : " ahhh"

By hearing the shouts, NAina who by now brushed her teeth, came out of the washroom hurriedly and move outside... She found Rajveer standing near the mirror and shouting... So she ran towards him and what she saw in front of her made her shout too: " ahhh"

Rajveer hearing her shout stopped shouting and looks towards her and found her staring in front and to the person who was standing in the front...But the other person didn't stop shouting, in fact after hearing her shout, he turned his head and after seeing her he shout once more...Rajveer Hurriedly went towards Naina, And with right hand closed her eyes and with left hand closed her mouth... He then shout at the person who was standing in front...

Rajveer: stop shouting Gunny...And what the hell are you doing in my room, and that too only in towel...

Yup the person standing in front of his was sunny, who came out of the washroom after taking bath and thus was only in towel...

Gunny too said in a loud voice: what the hall I m doing, first you tell me what the hell is this secret door doing in your and Naina's room? And why the hell your and Naina's room is connected...

Rajveer: just shut up... I will tell u later but first u tell me what the hell r u dng only in the towel and why the hell u shout...

Gunny: ohh really u r askg me this... First in the ngt u forgot me and took ur naina with u and moved from the ball... You know I was supposed to stay in ur room with u... But you were very busy with ur Naina... Thank god that Alekh got the spare key from suriji by his haath ki safai, otherwise either I have to sleep in the corridor or with that Prince of Bharmel... And why I shout... You want to know... then imagine, I came out from the washroom after taking bath and came in front of the mirror to dressed up, but what I heard... I heard someone singing and whistling...Imagine my surprise when I heard that sound from the back of the mirror... So I came near the mirror to check, and it started turning suddenly...And as if this all was not enough to make me shock, I found you standing on the other side, that to without shirt and singing Hum tum ek kamre me band ho... Then what the hell was I suppose to do instead of shouting... You expect me to dance on your this song while you continue to sing... haa... And then what I see... I see Naina, wearing your shirt, ... looking at me..and shouting... I mean the friend whom I consider Ram, even left Krishna behind in romancing his gf...

Gunny said frustratingly... while Rajveer was equally pissed and embarrassed... Pissed that gunny found about this secret door like this and he knew he won't leave Rajveer easily... And embarrassed, well he was embarrassed that his best friend found him like that...

Rajveer: just stop your nonsense and first go and wear something... Tujhe jara sib hi sharam nahi hai el ladki ke ssamne sirf towel me khada hai aur mujhse behes kar raha hai...

Gunny: ohh really... Well jis ladki kit um baat kar rahe ho, uski aankon ko to tumne band kar rakha hai, taki wo mujhe na dekh le... Jise ki Naina agar kisi ko sirf towel me dekh sakti hai to wo sirf tum hi ho... You and your possessiveness... Aur tu mujhe kya bol raha hai... pehle apne aap ko dekha hai... aadha nanga khada hai, aur mujhe bol raha hai... Tujhe sharam nahi aati Naina ke saamne aise khade hone me... ohh ek minute tujhe sharm kyu aayegi, agar aati to tu aisi halat me hota hi nahi... huhh...

Naina whose mouth and eyes were covered by Rajveer's hand was standing still there, and hearing their bickering... But After hearing Gunny's words she started blushing like hell...

Rajveer: Bakwas band kar... ..Main Niana ke saath kya kar raha tha, wo humare bich ki baat hai... aur main to aadha nanaga,...mera matlab hai ki maine to shirf shirt nahi pehni hai, par tu, tu to sirf towel me khada hai... Aur agar tu nahi chatha ki tera yeh towel bhi utar jaye, to abhi ke abhi dafa ho mere saamne se...

Gunny: You know what You are impossible... par itna yaad rakhiya main tujhe itni aasani se chodne nahi wala... Abhi main jar aha hu, apni izzat dhakne, mera matlab hai kapde pehne... Par mujhe saari detail chaiye... smajha... He left from there after taking his clothes and went inside the washroom to change his clothes...

Wheareas Rajveer sighs...He then look towards Naina, and then removed his hands...

Rajveer: Naina tumhe kya zaroorat thi bahar aane ki, ab Gunny mujhe chodne wala nahi...he said fruatratingly...

Naina: excuse me aap mujhe bol rahe hai... aapko kya zaroorat thi chilane ki... nahi use bhi pehle aapko kya zaroorat thi itni zor se gana gane ki aur gaya to gaya, aapko yeh mirror bhi abhi turn karna tha... aaapki wajah se ab mujhe bhi gunny ki teasing jhelni padegi... Aapko pata hai main kitna embarrassed feel karongi unke saamne... aur upar se aap mujhe hi daant rahe hai,... You know what... Just... I don't care... she said getting frustrated equally and leave from there...

Whereas Rajveer keep standing there and then throwing his hand in the air said: great... just great...

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Precap: Gunny-Rajveer friendship

One new entry...

Rajveer finding the loophole...

Note: Hello guys... so here is the update... first of all I m sorry... I know its not good and not upto your expectations... Actually when I thought making Naina drunk and jealous, I thought I will sum up in the one update only... but when I started writing, it became too long, that I had to split it up... and I realized that most of the fun moments were there in the first part... so nothing much left for this part...

I know I could have showed something interested as Naina is in drunk state, but when I started writing it, I got confuse on what to show...There was no point in showing the romance more than what I showed, as we all know that Rajveer is not that kind of a man who will cross his limits when the girl is drunk... surely they both love each other, and can do that, but still, we are here talking about rajveer, who for Naina's reputation not only didn't confess his love but also started keeping himself away from her... Then expecting from him to do something when NAina is in drunk state I don';t think will do justice with his character... so I wrote how much I could managed, and how much I found appropriate as per his character...i don't know whether u will like rajveer or naina conversation or not... I actually wanted to show some of Naina's emotions, her childishness... I wanted Rajveer to see that she needs care, pampering and that due to circumstances she became mature from inside she is still a child, who misses her brother still... that's what I tried to show... I don't know whether u all will like it or not...

Also I am sorry I couldn't show Rajveer- and Gunny's friendship secret... or how they know each other...

Actually this update too crossed 14 k words... That I could add anything else in this...actually I don't know how other writers manged to write only 3-4 k words... Because every time I think that I will write my update in less words,and write more dialogues than explanation... but every time I am unable to do this... and end up writing 13-14 k words... and even after writing these many words my story is not moving at a fast speed... I think my writing sucks...

So guys... I am sorry if you are not satisfied with this update... I can understand, as I myself is not satisfied with this update... So I m sorry for not writing upto ur expectations...

Also I told I won't be writing for 10-15 days... But still I gave two updates... almost 10 days over and I have only 10 days now... So I need to write my assignments and projects... So for 10 days no updates...

So see you all after 10 days...

Till then take care

Love you...

And miss me, if you can...



Edited by saiaarti - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey
great update
Naina was too cute
and innocent also
She is very possessive
and want to secure her Rajveer from that daayans
As far as Raj was was also protective about Naina
He cups her eyes when Gunny was in towel
Raj's condition was so funny when he heard Naina'severy demand ,he was scared
Gunny and Raj conversations was so funny
Now he will not spare Raj and Naina by teasing and embarrassing them
looking forward for the precap
continue soon
and
All the very best for your projects and assignments
take care
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Posted: 8 years ago
thx for this long update
naina like a child it was such a treat to read the way she was behaving i think every girl have this child in herself and she needs pempering from her lover ,brother everybody
you wrote nainas emotion very well
naina ki zid ki rajveer usse utaye i was imaging the scene
lovely
aur bahoo me liye hue naina ko rajveer navin se bhi baat ker raha hai.babu and jannu awesome yaar
it was sexy and seducing update
i like rajveer character very much the way he behave while naina was drunk is so good he is truly a gentelmen .he know about her condition and never cross the limit when she want to do in druken state.
or raj ka cheerharan it was so comic
his talk with navin really cherry on the top.
me soch rahi hu ki next day chubey ,huda ,or alekh ka kya haal hoga
kya pata rajveer unko ulti dunyia dikha de.
or naina ne kya kya naam rakhe hai
has has ker me pagal ho gayi
and then huda and samira they look good in lrl
aur rajveer ki teasing naina ko.
phir gunny ka towel me yaar bas ab to meri hi halat kharab ho gaye itne sare shirtless man imagine karne bhi bahut muskil hai
or pooja ne naina ko adult movie dikhayi
really i was waiting for the update
your such a amazing writer

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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice update
Everything was beautifully written
Especially Naina's drunken state 😉
Gunny and Raj's scene was funny 😆


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