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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Omg Omg Omg
What an awsm update
U r fantastic
Mindblwing
Suprb
Fadu
Took good ...

well tqqq tqqq tqqq tqqq tqqq soo much...

Arti u made my day with the update love u yarrr... i am glad to know that yaar... at least i made someone's day...
Confrontation betwn nandinj n Naina was too good .... tqqq
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i am glad you liked it... actually i was afraid whether i will be able to do justice with this scene or not....
Love the way Naina handled her ...
BTW who.is playing d character of nandini ??.. well its none other than Ankita Bhargava... Shreya of Reporters...
Nandini still loved raj 😭 .. Yeah... too bad for her... and sad for us....
But tab to iski akal ghash charne gyi thi.. yeah i think tab iske pass akal thi hi nahi... Rajveer ke door jaane ke baad uske gam me sahayd isse akal aa gayi...
Secret room meeting hieee... 😉😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
Meri pooji always correct ... yup///
Raj ne use danta .. yeah.. i was also feeling bad for her... but it was important to show this... i hope you won't mind...
😆
Fr apne charming style me mana b liya .. yeah ab danta hai to manana to padega hi... warna inki home ministry inhe chodne walli nahi...😆😆
Plan was nice ... tqqq
Sonia abhimanyu is layak hi nhi ki use itani big responsibility... yeah thats true... That's why i didn't give him any responibility...
Di jaye tabhi to dekho na itna sab kuchh hua but us jabreele
Ko kuchh khabar nhi army officer ko hunesha alert hona chahiye but yeh 😡
Nalayak kahin ka 😡 yeh ek dam nalayak hi hai aur humesha nalayak hi rahega...

Naina ki dress 😳
I loved it... well i m glad... i was scared actually ki pata nahi tum sab ko pasand aayegi ya nahi... kahi jayada bold na lage....
Ball n whole action thrill was suoerbly explained...tqq soo much... you really calmed me and gave me relief by saying this...
I.didn't found any loop wholes ...i am glad and now can breath properly...
So meri ahinshawadi writer aap action scenes me b
Superb ho like romantic once ...
😳 😛
hahahah.. well tqqq for this compliment... now you made my day dear...😳😊😊
Gunny I like him he knows the truth if raj 👏 ...
I know rajveer ne Shoot kia ... yeah Rajveer ne hi shoot kiya...
But Naina ko goli lagi 🥱 😲 yeh to dekhna padega...
But najna ko kuchh nhi hoga ... well hope so......

Overall dhasu
Super we b uper .ka part
In the end
All d best for ur project take ur time to update
tqqq tqqq for your good wishes, tqqq for this such a long and wonderful comments...
tqqq for all the compliments yaar...
tqqq soo much...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RNgirl

Hey,

Good luck on you project.
Coming to the update it was breath taking
Excited to see how raj and Gunny know each other and who fired the bullet
Love
Misha


Hii Misha...
well tqqq for your good wishes...
and tqqq for the compliment... am glad that you loved my update...
now you don;t have to wait more as update will be up within few minutes...
love you too Misha...
take care..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias

Superb update...nandani n naina came face to face...n nandani tried to create rift between naina n raj but kya answer Diya naina ne 😃...wow army ball...n many ministers r invited n raj have to take care of whole arrangement...loved naina's dress n colour...raj must have fainted 😆...so much of security but still spys came in the party...but raj n naina managed it..but now naina's life is at stake...all the best for your assignment...i know sometimes it gets really very trying and exhausting..waiting for next update



tqqq sooo much...
i am gald that you loved my update...
tqqq for your good wishes too...
and tqq for understanding me and my situations ...
well for update you don't have to wait more as update will be up within few minutes...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 27 (A):

Hello guys... missed me?? well i am back and that to before time... i told you i won't be able to update at least for 10-15 days, but see here i am...I couldn't control myself from writing after reading all the updates of other lrl writers...Their updates motivated me also to give you guys update of my ff... Before every time i used to be late from my promised time, but see this time i am way too early before i promised you... So shouldn't i deserve some reward or something??

well for me your appreciation only is my reward, so if you want to give reward to me then just vote And comment...

And this beautiful cover is made by one of my beautiful reader neha12056...Tqqq neha for this beautiful cover... I just loved it and loved your gesture too...

And this and the nxt part, both updates are dedicated to my two readers neha12056 and riya11dhanuka... I am dedicating it to them not because neha made cover for my story, but because, their comments motivated me soo much... and i am not talking about their comments on my ff but on other stories too.. i know they don't like their name to be mentioned specifically... but i couldn't control myself... If readers need to appreciate their writer by vote and comments then i think writers too need to appreciate their readers for their constant support and motivation... and i am doing that only... So once again guys thank you soo much... and enjoy the update...

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Chapter 27:

Recap:

All four of them shout: Naina...

While Rajveer was standing there like a statue, his gun still pointed in front, but his eyes were wet with tears...

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Naina was lying on the floor...and beside her was laying the goon... There was blood on the floor... Rajveer was still standing there with gun in his hand, which was pointed in the same direction, where Naina was standing... Smoke, caused by the shot, was coming out from his gun... Tear drop came out from the corner of his eyes...

Fast Rewind of the scenes...Rajveer's tears, he standing there motionless, everyone rushing towards Naina... Naina falling down on the floor, everyone shouting Naina, Gun shot, Rajveer looking into Naina's eyes...

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Now lets play...

Rajveer was still looking into Naina's eyes... He doesn't want to shot... Once again he was facing the same problem, where he doesn't want to shot but have to, due to circumstances... He is again forced to do something which his heart is not allowing him to do... By seeing Naina there, he just remembers Naveen standing there in front of his eyes...And then he closes his eyes... He decided he have to do this... Then he opens his eyes... And fire a shot from his gun... Before anyone can realize what happened, he fire one more shot... and Naina fall down on the floor, her head hitting the ground... Everyone except Rajveer shouts her name and then they rush towards her... Gunny, Huda, Ali, Alekh reaches near her.. Alekh hold her from her shoulder and turns her face... There is a scratch on her forehead, which she got due to falling on the rough and concrete floor and its bleeding little... ...

Alekh whispers: Naina...

Naina then looks at him and then looks at Rajveer who was still standing there motionless, with a blank face and his gun in his hand... She then turns to see her side and found the goon lying there, his eyes wide open,... his lips parted...blood oozing out from his forehead due to the bullet which hit him directly on his forehead... Then Naina remembers what happened...When Rajveer fired first shot, it hit that goon's hand which was holding gun... Due to this Gun fall down from his hand... That bullet crossed her ear from few mille centimeters distance, which made her ears numb for some seconds... The hold of that goon after getting hit by the bullet, on Naina's neck became loose ... And before he could do or understand anything, he was shot point blank on his forehead... This shot also missed Naina by only few mille centimeters... Agar goli jara si bhi idhar udhar hoti, to us admi ki jagah wo Naina ke forehead pe lagti... Because of that shot's intensity and it hitting him on his forehead, Naina got jerked by that goon, her ankle got twisted and she fall down with that goon beside him... ... She falls on her left side and her head hit the ground, resulting her to get scratch on her forehead... Naina saw that man lying beside her dead... She didn't have any doubt on Rajveer,... She knew Rajveer won't let anything happen to her... She knows that Rajveer is one of the best shooter of Indian army... She knows and trusted Rajveer... Its just she was worried for him... She knows that how much difficult it was for him to shot, when he knew that even a small mistake can take Naina's life... How much difficult for him to fire that shot, which could have hit her, if it would have been little misplaced... And moreover, she knew that how much difficult it was for him to shot, when once again someone close to his heart is in front of his gun... Standing there at his gun point... When she looked in his eyes before the gun shot, she knew that Rajveer was not seeing her, but he was remembering that moment when Naveen was standing in front of his gun, asking him, begging him to shot him... She knew that in how much pain Rajveer is,...how much difficult it is for him... And today one more thing she realized that during faculty appraisal when Rajveer missed his last shot, it was not because he was being Abhimanyu's true friend by letting him win... No... Though He is abhimanyu's friend... But he is a true friend which anyone can get... And thus he wants his friend to win fairly, by their hard work, by their skill, not by his favors... That was the reason that Rajveer and Naveen were not only each other's friends but competitors also, because by competing fairly with each other, they made each other to realize their true skills and use their full potential and thus help each other to bring their best out... ... At that time she didn't realize all this, because she didn't understand him completely... But now, now she understands him completely, understands him more than anyone else... Understands that how much difficult it is to see someone his own his gun point, after Naveen's death... Naveen's death not only shattered him badly but also shattered his confidence on him, that whenever someone comes on his gun point he doesn't have full confidence on him that he will save that person... And when it comes to Naina, standing on his gun point then his confidence falls down little more, his pain increases little more... And same happened today also...

Huda: Phoolan tu thik to hai na...

Huda's voice brings her back from her chain of thoughts...Naina turns to look at them and then looks at Rajveer... By seeing him she can clearly see that in how much pain he is...

Naina calls him out to bring him back from his trance, from his painful memories: Rajveer...

But he didn't hear her.. She once again calls him, this time little louder: Rajveer..

Her voice brings him out of his trance; he looks at her and found her sitting on the ground, with her forehead bleeding... Naina tries to get up, but as her ankle got twisted while falling, she hisses in pain and was about to fall down but Alekh and Huda holds her... Rajveer by seeing that comes hurriedly towards them... He then lifts Naina swiftly in his arms... Naina being lifted suddenly, places her hands on his shoulders...She looks at Rajveer but Rajveer was not looking at her...His face was blank, without any emotions...

Rajveer: Alekh I am taking Naina to infirmary... Get Shalini there...

He then starts moving towards infirmary... ... Huda, Ali and gunny follows him, while Alekh rushes to bring Shalini... Rajveer finds Huda and Ali following him...He stop and says...

Rajveer: Huda, Ali, Naina is fine; first you take care of that body... If cadets found it they will get afraid... and mostly I don't want anyone to know about this right now... Ball is not over yet... and I don't want it to get disturbed...

Huda: but sir Phoolan..

Rajveer: Capt. Huda, its an order... Naina is fine and Major Randhawa and I are here with her... You just go and do as I say... He says seriously..

Huda and Ali saw the seriousness...

Both: yes sir...

They then leave from there... And Rajveer started walking again... He was once again looking in front... He not even once looked at Naina... while Naina was looking at him continuously...His grip was tight... He was holding Naina tightly, as if he was afraid that the moment he will lose his grip, she will be gone... Apart from Naina, gunny too was looking at Rajveer... He knows that how much Rajveer loves Naina... He also knows that why Rajveer is disturbed right now, he too knows that while shooting Naina, Rajveer remembered Naveen and the way he was shot by Rajveer ... He knows... He knows everything... After all he is Rajveer's friend, a kind of friend which Abhimanyu was never able to become...

Gunny places his hand on Rajveer's shoulder: Relax Rajveer... Naina thik hai...

Rajveer who stopped walking when Gunny places his hand on his shoulder, first looks at him and then looks at Naina, who now also was looking at him... His eyes met with hers and as always they both felt each other's pain and the pain which they were feeling by seeing the other in pain... After seeing Naina for a good minute, he closes his eyes and sighs...

Rajveer whispers: I know... I know she is safe... I am just making myself to believe this... he then opens his eyes and looks at gunny... He found him little injured... His face and hands are bruised a little... His clothes were smudged by the dirt...

Rajveer: tu thik hai?

Gunny smiles: I am absolutely fit and fine... as you can see..

Rajveer: haa wo to dikh hi raha hai..

Gunny: hey come on.. Didn't I thought you to not to judge someone by looks, as looks can be very deceiving..

Rajveer raises his eyebrow: lagta hai waqt ke saath tumhari yaaddasht kamjoor ho gayi hai... isliye tum bhool rahe ho ki yeh line tumhari nahi merit hi, jo main humesha tumhe aur naveen ko bolta tha, as tum dono hi kisi bhi ladki ko dekh kar us par latto ho jate the...he by saying this started walking...

Naina who till now was looking at Rajveer and tries to understand his emotions, gets surprised to hear this... As from the time she knows Gunny, she always found him serious, who keeps his feelings, his emotions with himself and who behaves with others formally... Though he helped her in proving Rajveer and Naveen's innocence, but he didn't interact with them much... he talked with them as much as was necessary and only things which were related to the mission... And also she didn't know till today that Gunny knew not only Rajveer but Naveen too..

Gunny while walking beside them: Come on Raj, ab agar tumhe ladkiyon me koi interest nahi tha, iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum mujhse aur Naveen se chido... Ab aap to there maryadapurshotam Ram, one women man, but that doesn't mean everyone else need to be like you too.. ab agar tum Ram the, to kisi ko to Krishna bhi ban na tha na, warna saari gopiyon ka kya hota... Unka dil jo ki aap pehle hi tod dete the, wo aur toot jata na... Main aur Naveen to bas un dilo ko thoda jod dete the...

Rajveer shakes his head but a small smile appears on his face, which Naina adores him at this moment... Right now she is feeling relieved to have Gunny with them, as due to gunny, Rajveer came out from his painful memories and were smiling, though she knows that still he didn't forgot whatever happened moments ago, completely, but he was not that much lost as much he was... .. She was now calm down little by seeing Rajveer getting calm...Also she was enjoying Rajveer's this side, which was hidden due to all the past happenings and his sufferings...

They reached the infirmary... Rajveer places Naina on the bed carefully... He then places a pillow behind her back and one pillow below her leg, to make her comfortable.. While doing this he didn't look at her... he was just doing all that without glancing at her... While walking when gunny told him that Naina is fine, was the only time when he looked at her... Rajveer was making Naina comfortable on the bed, when infirmary door gets open and a frantic Shalini comes inside along with a little disturbed Alekh..

Shalini: Major what happened to...

Her rest of the words didn't come out of her mouth by seeing the person standing in front of her eyes... Gunny, Rajveer were facing there back towards the door when Shalini entered and by hearing her voice both turned immediately.. One in relief, as Shalini came and another because after hearing her voice he was unable to control himself... He knew that she is here in KMA, he knew that he will be facing her once again, He before coming prepared himself for all this, but the moment he heard her voice, after years, he just couldn't control himself,... For that one moment his heart overpowered his mind and Maj. Gunnraj Singh Randhawa who always listen to his mind and never let his emotions to overpower him, gave in to his heart...

He was staring at her... His eyes looking into her eyes, once again... He looks at her completely... For him she is still the same, she didn't change but still changed a lot... Shalini too was lost in him... She didn't know that he is here, didn't know that he came back once again... Last time when he was in KMA, she with great difficulty controlled herself and she knew that why she was able to control her last time, because last time she was still Capt. Dr. Shalini Singhel, but now how will she control herself?...now how will she keep her heart in control?...when now she no longer is Capt. Dr. Shalini Singhel but Capt. Dr. Shalini Kapoor...

Rajveer: Doc, thank god you are here... Naina ko chot aayi hai, so you please treat her fast..

Shalini and Gunny who were lost in each other's came out of their trance... Shalini then shifts her gaze from Gunny to Naina.. And then move towards her... Though her heart is beating fast but she keeps herself in control, as now first she needs to treat Naina...

While Shalini was treating Naina, Yudi, Pooja, Ali, Huda came to the infirmary...

Rajveer gets angry by seeing them: Capt. Alekh did I tell you to bring Capt. Sahani and Capt. Ghai along with Dr. Shalini?

Alekh: no sir..

Rajveer: then what they all are doing here?

Pooja: sir wo Naina ko chot aayi hai, to hum kaise na aate..

Rajveer: Naina ko chot aayi hai, to aap sab yaha aa gaye, unse milne, apna mission bich me chodkar... great just great,... Kal jab aap sab border pe war me honge, aur aapke saathi ko chot lag jayegi, tab bhi aap dushman se ladne ki jagah aapne dost ke paas aa jayege nahi? Kyunki aapke liye war ladne se jayada jaroori apne saathi ko dekhna hoga... m I right Capt. Ghai... He ask them sternly..

Yudi: wo sorry sir.. But wo NAina..

Rajveer: Naina thik hai... And didn't you know ki Naina akeli nahi hai... Maj Randhawa and I are here with her.. Then what was the need for you to come here leaving your duties, and ur mission in between...

Abhi bhi yeh ball khatam nahi hui.. Abhi bhi army ke senior officers and humare defense minister KMA me hi hai.. Aur hume nahi pata ki sabhi dushman pakde gaye ta nahi, lekin phir bhi aap sabke sab, sab kuch chod kar yaha aa gaye... Is this how a soldier behaves? Is this what I taught you all?

Pooja: we are sorry sir..

Rajveer: I don't want your sorry... Capt. Ghai.. ladai me aapki sorry ki koi jagah nahi hoti.. Aapki ek bhul dushman ko jeet dila sakti hai,... Kya aapke sorry bol dene se tab sab thik ho jayega... Now I want you all to move out from here... Capt. Sahani, aap control room me Chaubey ke pass jayege and wahan se sab kuch monitor karenge... Capt. Ghai , Capt. Huda, Capt. Beg aap sabhi assembly hall me jayenge aur waha sab pe nazar rakhenge... Abhi aur bhi kayi dushman KMA me chupe ho sakte hai... Mujhe kisi bhi tarah ki koi galti nahi chaiye... Main khud bhi waha aa raha hu.. Capt. Alekh yaha Naina ke pass rahege... Now all of you move out..

Huda, Ali, and Pooja move out from there reluctantly...Meanwhile Shalini did Naina's dressing...

Shalinii to Naina: all done.. You are now as fit and fine as before...

Naina: thanks doc...

Shalini: Well you are not welcome, Naina... You are not welcome here in the infirmary as a patient... ok... so take care of yourself...

Naina just nods at her with a smile..

Shalini then turns to Rajveer whose back was facing Naina: Major, your naina is now perfectly fine... so now you can relax... The scratch on her forehead was not that deep... And on her ankle I applied the spray and bandaged it... It will be fine soon... for now she just need to be little careful and not to put pressure on her feet...she just need to come to change her bandage once, on day after tomorrow... Other than this nothing happened to her... So ab aap chain ki saans le sakte hai...

Rajveer who turned the moment Shalini called him, listened to what Shalini said... Rajveer just looks at Naina... and then turns to Shalini..

Rajveer: Doc, you just stay here with her and make sure she takes rest... I will go, I need to be there till the ball ends, also I need to inform to BC about everything which happened... And Alekh will be here with you... I will just go... He turns to move out but stops hearing Naina's voice..

Naina: I am fine, I don't need rest... I also need to be there to do my duty...so I will come out with you...

Rajveer: stop being stubborn every time Naina...You are supposed to take rest and that's what you are going to do... You are not moving from here till the time I won't ask you.. Is that clear?

Naina: But I don't want to take rest... And besides Doc said na I m perfectly fine.. So what's the need to take rest...

Rajveer: Shalini also said that you shouldn't stress yourself and put pressure on your foot.. If you are going to come with me then you will be hurting your feet more, you can't walk properly, you can fall down...and it will pain more...

Naina while looking into his eyes: to kya hua aap ho na mujhe sambhalne ke liye... aur aapke hote hue mujhe dard nahi ho sakta...

Rajveer while saying sarcastically: aapko humesha zid karni hoti hai nahi... aapne to kasam khai hai meri baat na ,man ne ki... You want to go outside na, you want to come with me, fine... then...

He then come towards her and lifts her in his arms with a swift moment and starts going out... Shalini, Gunny and Alekh were shocked to see that...Alekh was supposed to be here with Naina, but now what can he do by standing here, when Naina only is not here... So he too moves out of there... Gunny too starts moving out... when he heard...

Shalini: Aapko bhi chot aayi hai... Aapko bhi dawa lagane ki jarrorat hai warna aapke zakhm jaldi thik nahi honge...

Gunny while turning to her: mere zakhm itni aasnai se nahi bharte doctor... Aur kamal hai mujhe zakham dene wala aaj mere zakhmo pe dava lagane ki baat kar raha hai...

Shalini: gunny please tum...

Gunny: its Major Gunraj Singh Randhawa for you Capt. Dr. Shalini Singhal, or should I say Mrs. Shalini Singhal...mujhe gunny bulane ka haq aap bahut pehle kho chuki hai...he then leaves from there...

Shalini sees him leaving and tears comes in her eyes... She whispers: Its not Shalini Singhal, Its Shalini Kappor now...She just closes her eyes and tears flows from her eyes...

Here Gunny after coming out of infirmary takes out his phone and sees a photo in it...

He then kept his phone in his pocket and left from there...


(guys don't mind but i didn't see lrl after rajveer left, so i have no idea about Gunny and Vidya's love story... I am pairing Gunny with Shalini because i saw their serial jeet and i loved their pairing... In that show even after being together, they couldn't be together because of Gunny's past, who came in his life once again... So moral of the story is their love story couldn't get complete in that serial which i didn't like... So here i am gonna complete it... and as my ff name is Second chance to their love... So why should only Rajveer and Naina get this second chance... Let others also get second chance to complete their love story... So i hope you will like this pairing and i am not disappointing you guys...)

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Rajveer-Naina:

After coming out of the infirmary, Rajveer started moving towards the hall..

Naina: Aap kya kar rahe hai Rajveer.. Please mujhe niche utariye...

Rajveer: ab aapko meri iss baat se bhi aitraaz hai... Mujhe ache se pata hai ki main kya kar raha hu...

Naina keeps her hand on his cheek and make him to looks at her.. She just takes his name with full of Love: Rajveer ...

Rajveer looks at her and whispers her name like a prayer: Naina...And one tear fall down from his left eys... Naina removes that tear and Rajveer closes his eyes.. He then keeps his forehead on her by bringing her closer... Naina too closes her eyes...

Their trance was broken by a cough...Rajveer turns to find Gunny standing there and having a teasing grin on his face...He has washed his face... and dusted his clothes... his condition was looking better now, except some scratches, which were now not that bad, he was fine...

Gunny: jis tarah se tum infirmary se nikle the, mujhe to laga tha ki kahi yaha world war 3 na ho jaaye... Par yaha to nazara hi kuch aur hai... aisa lag raha hai ki Karan Johar ki koi romantic movie ka scene chal raha hai...

Rajveer rolls his eyes and gave a glare to him, while Naina starts blushing...

Rajveer: Gunny ji agar aapki bakwas ho gayi ho to chale...

Gunny: Bakwas aur main, come on Major you know I am always the sensible one.. Aur chalna to hai, but are you sure aap aise jaayenge, I mean Naina ko apni baahon me lekar... No, I mean I am not having any problem with this, as she is totally yours and you can do anything with her, I don't mind you lifting her in your arms, but I am sure lot of other people will mind and tumhare saare cadets yeh sochenge ki unke faculty yeh konsi nayi drill sikha rahe hai unhe??...

Rajveer stars coughing, like fake cough, to hide his embarrassment... and Naina, If Naina was blushing before, we can say now she completely turned into a tomato, where as Gunny was having a smirk..

Rajveer controlled himself: if you are forgetting, then let me remind you Shalini said ki Naina ko apne pair pe pressure nahi dalna hai, so I was just helping her..

Gunny: help to aap unko sahara dekar bhi kar sakte hai, baahon me utha kar hi help nahi ki ja sakti... But its okk.. I completely understand your emotions...

Rajveer after getting frustrated: ohh stop it gunny... He then make Naina stand and says: here, now happy both of you... ab chale..

Gunny: Sure Major...

Rajveer then very carefully make naina to walk.. His one hand is on her waist and other is on her shoulder... Naina smiles seeing rajveer concern... Though she is not getting pain, because she is habituated to it, she got injured more than this many times, and she can walk properly herself without any help, but she doesn't want to do that, because she is enjoying Rajveer's concern, his care... And she is also aware that if at this moment she will say to Rajveer that she is fine and can walk herself then he will get angry and that only because he cares for her and is worrying abt her...

They come inside the hall, where the celebrations are going on... After Defense Minister's speech, music started once again, and everyone was enjoying ... As everyone was busy they didn't see Rajveer, Naina and gunny, but still some people or cadets saw them and were having curious expressions on their faces... Rajveer made naina sit on a chair, which was beside a table, in the corner of the hall...

Rajveer: aap yaha aana chathi thi, main aapko yaha le aaya... lekin ab aap yaha se bilkul bhi nahi hilegi... Is that understood?

Naina nods at him and with a small smile says: okk sir..

Naina then turns to gunny: waise gunny sir aap yaha achanak?

Gunny: wo unofficially mere yaha aane ka reason hai ki aaj KMA ke 25th celebration me KMA ke ex students bhi aaye hai, aur main bhi unme se ek hu... aur mere yaha aane ka official but secret reason hai ki

Rajveer: Major Randhawa joined us in our mission... And now he will be teaching in KMA gorilla war techniques... He then turns to look at Gunny, I think hume BC se mil lena chaiye... Chale... And then turning to Naina, aur aap yaad rakhiyega ki maine aapse kya kaha tha,...

He then leaves from there along with gunny and go to meet BC, who was busy in having a conversation with Defense Minister...

Rajveer to Bc: sir...

Bc turns and then he looks at Gunny... Gunny salutes him...

BC: Major Randhawa, welcome back to KMA... In the morning only I came to know about your posting...I will make the announcement tomorrow, for now enjoy the ball... But what happened to you?? You seem to be injured...

Gunny: I am perfectly fine sir, Soldier ke liye Ghayal hona jaise pani peene ke barabar hota hai... I am perfectly fine..

BC: well you are absolutely correct Major... Soldiers ka injuries se bahut gehra rishta hota hai...

Bc then turning to Defense Minister: Sir aap Major Gunraj Singh Randhawa ko to jaante hi hai, as for sometime he was appointed for your daughter's safety... .. and while pointing towards rajveer, he says... Aur yeh hai Major Arjun Rathore... I was telling about him only... ...

Defense Minister (Sameera's father, I am not able to remember his name.. so sorry guys... you have to mange by Defense minister only..): Of course Brigadier I remember Major Randhawa very well, after all its difficult to forget such an brilliant and courageous soldier..How are you Major? He said while giving his hand for shaking..

Gunny while shaking his hand: I am perfectly fine sir.. And its nice meeting you again..

D. M while moving his hand towards Rajveer: And Nice meeting you Major RAthore... Brigadier Chandok was telling me about you... well if you don't mind then I will like to meet you after sometime, in Brigadier Chandok's office..

Rajveer while shaking his hand: Its pleasure meeting you also sir.. And sure I will meet you Sir...

D.M: well, then see you soon, Major... I will go with Brigadier Chandok and will be in his office for sometime... You can come and meet me after sometime... Till then enjoy the ball... You too Major Randhawa, enjoy the ball..

Rajveer/Gunny: Sure sir..

Then D.M and Bc leaves from there...

Gunny: kya lagta hai Raj yeh tujhse kyu milna chahte hai?

Rajveer: Jaroor Bc ne kuch kaha hoga... well we can only guess for now, will have to wait till I meet him...

Gunny: hmm yeah...By the way wo..

Abhimanyu: Hello Captain Randhawa... Its nice to see you here again..

Gunny was cut by Abhimanyu, who saw Gunny talking with Rajveer...

(okk, so in my story, Abhimanyu and Gunny knows each other, but only because guuny came to KMA before, and helped Naina and her friends in proving Naveen and rajveer's innocence... Gunny knows Rajveer and Naveen how and when, that you will come to know soon... But yes Gunny shares a friendly bond with Rajveer and Naveen, while with Abhimayu its just formal bonding, nothing else, as I don't think Abhimanyu deserves any friend, if it would have been in my hand I would have never made Rajveer his friend, but I can't do anything, as my story's background is same till the time of Rajveer's jeep blast scene...)

Gunny turns to looks at Abhimanyu: well its good to see you again Major Chauhan, but just a correction, now its not Captain Randhawa, but its Major Randhawa.. I think aap apne aap me kuch jayada hi khoye rehte hai, isliye aapko aapke aas pass kya ho raha hai kuch pata nahi chalta..

Abhi gets embarrassed: ahh I m sorry Major, its just..

Gunny: arey main to bas majak kar raha tha, aap to serious ho gaye,,... Don't worry I didn't mind you calling me Captain.. As Main chahe Captain hu, ya major, mujhe iss baat se koi fark nahi padta kyunki mere liye mere desh ki seva aur suraksha karna hi mera kaam hai aur yahi meri asli pehchan...

Abhi: well you said absolutely correct.. Ek soldier ke liye uska desh hi uski pehchan hota hai, na ki medals aur uski army me position...

Gunny: well I am glad that you understood me correctly...He says sarcastically... hmm well its nice to meet you again, but now I will take your leave, as I have to meet my fav cadets who have now become reputed soldiers of army.. So see you soon.. And then turning to Rajveer, Ahh Major chale...

Rajveer: sure.. ..

They then start moving from there...

Abhi pov: Iss Major Rathore me aisa kya hai ki Naina, unke friends aur ab Gunny bhi inke saath itne comfortable hai, jabki yeh inhe pehle se jante bhi nahi... hmm may be gunny inhe jaante ho, but jaha tak humne search kiya hai, yeh apne missions ke liye jayada tar india se bahar hi rahe hai, as yeh India ke secret missions ko lead karte aaye hai... par phir gunny inhe kaise... hmm.. Pata to lagana padega major Arjun Rathore ke bare me, hum jab se inse mile hai, hume yeh lag raha hai ki yeh kuch to chupa rahe hai, yeh jaise dikhte hai waise hai nahi... ...

Gunny and Rajveer were walking when Rajveer gets a call.. he asks Gunny to go and told that he will come...

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Meanwhile Naina was sitting alone, with a sad face... She knew that Rajveer is not perfectly fine and is worried because he is not ready to share his pain also even with her too.. She can't see rajveer in pain and all this serious type... She was thinking what she should do make Rajveer calm and to give him peace.. .. She was made to come out from her trance by Alekh...

Alekh: aise mooh latkake kya soch rehli hai... yaha baithe rehne se Sir ka mood thik nahi hone wala...

Naina: To main kya karo Alekh? Wo to thik se baat bhi nahi kar rahe... Agar apna dard wo mujhse baatenge nahi to main unka dard kam kaise karongi? Their conversation was disturbed by a voice...

: "agar wo apna dard tumhe nahi dikha rha to tum apni feelings use dikha do, I am sure tab wo apna dard tumse chupa nahi paayega..."

Naina and Alekh turns to look and found Gunny standing there...

Naina: aap bolna kya chah rahe hai gunny sir?

Gunny: Main yeh kehna cha raha hu Naina, ki dekho aaj KMA ki achievements ko hum sab celeberate kar rahe hai,... KMA ne humare desh ko pichle 25 saalo se itne jabaz officers diya hai, uske like hum KMA ko ek chota sa thanks bol rahe hai right... But KMA ke soldiers me sirf ek yahi talent to nahi hai na...Aur tum apne ussi dusre talent ko use karke ek tir se do nishane laga sakti ho... Pehla nishana sabko yeh bata karke ki KMA ke officers kisi bhi field me kam nahi hai,.. aur dusra tum apne Rajveer se apni feelings share kar paogi...

Naina still doesn't understand anything and gives him a confuse look...

Alekh: Abhi bhi tere dimag ki batti nahi jali... Gunny sir ke kehne ka matlab hai ... He says something in her ear... Samjhi yedi...

A smile comes on her lips... and then she nods at them...

Gunny: so lets set the stage for Naina... and naina all the best.. he shows her a thumbs up... And goes...

Suddenly the music stops and everybody starts woofing for being disappointed... And then they hear gunny's voice...

Gunny: I know I know guys you all are disappointed because the music is stop...but trust me its just done to make this celebration, this atmosphere more interested... So guys as you know that today we are celeberating KMA's 25th anniversary... And as our Brigadier sir and DM must have said that ki KMA ne inn pichle 25 saalo me humare desh ko behtarin aur jaanbaaz officers diye hai, jinhone humare desh ke dushmano ko jung ke maidan me naako tale channe chabvaye hai...,, but guys KMA's officers have some other talents too... They are not only expert in war field but other fields too... And as today we are celebrating here, so I would like all of you to see those other talents... So now I am not going to waste your more time... .. So be ready guys... And then we see the lights off...and then suddenly voice comes...

Hmmm, hmmm, hmmm, hmmm,

Hmmm, hmmm hmmm.

Hmmm, hmmm, hmmm, hmmm,

Hmmm, hmmm hmmm.

Kabhi yaadon mein aaun

Kabhi khwabon mein aaun,

And then center lights fall on someone, and we can see Naina standing in the middle...

Kabhi yaadon mein aaun,

Kabhi khwabon mein aaun,

Naina then lifts her eyes and sees Rajveer standing in the corner... Rajveer who was on phone, after ending the phone was about to move towards the Gunny, when he heard his voice... He was curious to know what he is up to...

He started moving towards him, when lights got switched off... He stood at the place where he was standing, and then he heard the voice, the voice who always reaches to his heart... He knows that voice so very well that he doesn't need to wait for the lights to come and see her face, like others are waiting.. The moment he heard humming sound he knew it's her, it's his Naina who is singing... And then light comes and he found her standing in the middle singing with her eyes closed... By her words he knew she is singing for him... and then Naina lifts her head and opens her eyes and their eyes gets locked with each other...

Teri palkon ke saaye

Mein aakar jhilmilau

Main wo khushbu nahi jo

Hawa mein kho jaun...

Hawa bhi chal rahi hai

Magar tu hi nahi hai...

She sings this line and Rajveer was able to feel her pain.. He knows that Naina is disturbed for him, disturbed from his behavior, disturbed from him not being here from his heart... he knew that She knows that he is here because he wants to do his duty.. Otherwise his heart is not here.. as his heart is not calm and disturbed ... though he is physically here, but emotional he is till stuck on the moment when Naina was at the gun point... So Naina is just trying to bring him back from his painful state...

Fiza rangeen bani hai,

She sings this line while moving her eyes around her..

Kahani keh rahi hai,

She once again locks her eyes with his...

Mujhe jitna bhulaao

Main utna yaad aau...

By now Rajveer stars moving towards her... It was as if he was in some kind of a trance and was getting pulled by it...

Haa.. jo tum na milte

Hota hi kya dhoondh laane ko...

Haa.. jo tum na milte

Hota hi kya dhoondh laane ko...

Jo tum na hote

Hota hi kya haar jaane ko

Now Naina too starts moving towards him...

Meri amaanat ho tum

Meri mohabbat ho tum

Tumhe kaise main bhulaun...

Naina's sandle gets stuck on this gown and she was about to fall, when Rajveer comes and holds her... Rajveer's one hand is on her waist and other is on shoulder...,... They were lost in each other, that they didn't realize that everyone was watching them.. But how can their friends let this happen... So when Rajveer holds Naina and was making her stand properly, the light which was till now on them move and fall on Alekh... Now Alekh starts singing...

Tu aasmaan mera jahaan lage mujhe

Tu raaston ki manzilein lage mujhe

Tu hi meri chandni wo

Raaton ko jo halki si jale

Tu hi meri sham-o-sehar

Jo mere sang chale...

(Rajveer and Naina both are lost in each other... Though it's Alekh who is singing, but the words clearly depict rajveer's feelings... And Rajveer and Naina both feel as if it's Rajveer who is singing...)

Hawa bhi chal rahi hai

Magar tu hi nahi hai

Fiza rangeen bani hai

Kahani keh rahi hai

Mujhe jitna bhulaao

Main utna yaad aau...

(Now Pooja sings this song, and you can assume it to be background music for both Rajveer and Naina... Rajveer then starts walking towards the sitting arrangement, while all the time looking into Naina's eyes... Naina too is lost in his eyes...)

Kabhi yaadon mein aaun

Kabhi khwabon mein aaun

Kabhi yaadon mein aaun

Kabhi khwabon mein aaun

Teri palkon ke saaye

Mein aakar jhilmilau

(Rajveer made her sit on the chair once again... He was about to move when Naina holds his hand... Rajveer looks at her and then sits beside her...Naina is still holding his hand... He starts caressing her hand with his thumb... He then brings his other hand towards her face and cups her face... Naina leans onto his touch... Both just kept staring each other...By this time, Song ends and everyone applauds... Music starts once again and everyone start dancing and enjoying once again... Lights were kept dim, so none was able to see Rajveer and naina clearly...Also because their table was hidden by the curtain...

Rajveer: Maine tumhe dubara khone ke liye nahi paya hai Naina... Jaanta hu ki mera aise react karna bilkul bhi appreciable nahi hai... Ek soldier hone ke naate, maut se humara saamna hona bahut hi aam baat hai... Hum soldiers' apni jaan ko humeahs apni hateli me lekar chalet hai Naine... Aur soldiers hone ke naate tum aur main, hum dono hi jaan dene se nahi darte... Main aaj bhi apni jaan apne desh ke liye deno ko tayar hu... mujhe meri jaan jaane ka koi dar nahi hai...

Lekin Naina, Jab aapki jaan, aapki zindagi koi aur ban jata hai na, To ek soldier bhi phir apni jaan ko kuch hote hue nahi dekh pata...Wahi aaj mere saath hua... mere saath hi aisa kyu hota hai Naina, kyu mere saamne mere hi apne khade hote hai... Kyu meri hi bandook ki goli unki zindagi aur maut ka faisla karti hai... .. Dushman pe goli chalana bahut aasan hota hai Naina, Par ussi goli ke lagne ka dar uss inaasn ko ho, jo aapko duniya me sabse pyaara ho, jo aapki zindagi ho, to wo dard bardasht nahi hota Naina... Ek baar pehle meri goli ke nishaane pe Naveen tha, aur aaj tum thi... Main pehle hi Naveen ko apne hi haatho se...He closes his eyes... Aur agar aaj jara sib hi chuk ho jati to main aaj tumhe bhi Naveen ki tarh kho deta, wo bhi apne hi haatho se...Kyu Naina...Why me?? Why me only?? ...

He then closes his eyes... Tears come out from his eyes... Naina's eyes too becomes teary by seeing Rajveer in that state... She takes her hand out from his hand and removes his tears and while cupping his face says...

Naina: Aapke saath aisa isliye hota hai , kyunki shayad bhagvan ko bhi pata hai ki aap apne apno ko kuch nahi hone denge... Uss din bhi aapne Bhaiya ko kuch nahi hone diya... aur aaj mujhe kuch nahi hone diya... Uss din aapne Bhaiya ko aazad kiya tha... aaj aapne mujhe uss aadmi se aazad karwaya... Pata hai Rajveer aaj mujhe sachem pata chala ki bhiaya ne kyu aapse kaha tha unhe aazad karne ke liye... Kyu unhine aapke hato se aazad hona behtar laga... Kyunki aaj jab jab main waha gun point pe khadi thi... Aur mere saamne aap the gun point kiye hue... Tab mujhe bhi wahi feel hua jo ta bhaiya ko hua hoga...

Rajveer looks at her after hearing this...

Aapne sahi kaha hum soldiers hai jo apni jaan dene se nahi darte... Par jab ek taraf aapka dushman ho aapki maut banker aur ek tarf aapka apna, tab aap dushman ke haato marne acha apne uss apne ke haatho marna chahege... Bahiya ne bhi wahi kiya tha... Apne dushmano ke haatho marne ki jagah unhone aapko chuna... Aur aaj jab main ussi jagah pe thi, mujhe pata tha ki aap mujhe kuch nahi hone denge... Lekin dil me ek khwaish yeh bhi jagi thi ki agar mujhe maut aaye to aapke haatho se aaye...

Rajveer becomes shocked to hear this...

Dushamn ki jagah kisi apne ke haatho marne se aapko sukoon milta hai, wahi sukoon bhaiya ko bhi mila hoga... aur wahi sukoon mujhe bhi milta agar aaj mujhe aapki goli lag jaati... Aura b main yahi chahungi ki agar mujhe kabhi maut aaye to wo aapke haatho... She was cut by Rajveer, who kept his hand on her mouth, stopping her from saying further...

Rajveer: please NAina, don't say this... Don't ever say this or wish something like that... Tumhe nahi pata ki main kitni maute mara hu, Naveen par wo goli chalane ke baad... Kitni taklif mujhe hui thi jab tum meri bandook ke saamne thi...

Kisi apne ke haatho markar hume to sukoon mil jata hai Naina, par uss apne ka kya, jise Zindagi bhar iss kadvi sachai ke saath jeena padta hai ki usne uss insaan ki jaan le li jo ki uska apna tha... jise wo had se zayada pyaar karta tha... Tum nahi jaanti uss taklif ko, uss ghutan ko, uss dard ko jo uss insaan ko hoti hai jo kisi apne pe goli chalata hai... Maine wo ghutan, wo dard, wo taklif sehen kari hai NAina... Aur kahi na kahi zinadagi bhar karta rahonga... Lekin mujme wo sab kuch dubara bardasht karne ki himmat nahi hai...

He then removes his hand from her face...

Tumne to keh diya ki tum mere haato se... Par kabhi tum apne aapko meri jagah dekh paogi... Akbhi mujh par goli chala paogi...

Naina lowers her head and whispers: Goli to chalai thin a maine aap par...Wo bhi bina kisi guilt, bina kisi taklif ke...

Rajveer understood about which she is talking... She mentally curse himself for making her remembering that day when she shot him... rajveer then lifts her head up and while cupping says...

Rajveer: Naina please tum bhool kyu nahi jati uss haadse ko... Maine tumse kaha than a ki hum ab uske bare me koi baat nahi karege... Us din job hi hua usme tumhari koi galti nahi thi...

Naina: to us din jo Naveen bhaiya ke saath hua usme aapki bhi to koi galati nahi thi na... Wada to aapne bhi kiya tha ki aap bhi apne atit ko yaad nahi karenge... To phir kyu wo sab yaad karke apne aapko kamzor bana rahe hai???... Kyu bewajh apne aapko taklif de rahe hai wo sab yaad karke... aapki taklif mujhe taklif deti hai... nahi dekh sakti main aapko dard me... phir kyu aisa kar rahe hai... Please aisa mat kijiye apne saath... please ...

Rajveer looks at her and feels her pain... He knew that his pain is giving her also pain... So he decides to end both of their suffering...

Rajveer: I am sorry Naina... It's just at that time while seeing you there, I couldn't control myself from remembering Naveen... and I promise from now on I won't remember that and gives you pain... I am sorry Naina... I am so sorry...

Naina hugs him tightly: I love you...i don't want to see you in pain...

Rajveer too hugs her tightly: I love you too Naina... and I promise I won't let our past effect out present... They stay like that for few minutes... Rajveer then breaks the hug and while looking at her place a kiss on her forehead... He then gets up and was about to move out when Naina again holds his hand...

Naina: ab aap kaha ja rahe hai???...

Rajveer smiles at her: don't worry main kahi nahi jar aha.. wo bas DM ne mujhe unse milne bulaya tha.. to main bas unhi se milne BC ke office jar aha hu... Tum yahi baitho... main jaldi unse milkar aata hu... ok...

Naina smiles too.. Rajveer then leave from there...

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BC office: Rajveer, BC and DF were present in BC office... The trio was sitting on the couches... There was discussion going on... Which for now, is not audible to us...

DM: The decision is yours Major... In my opinion the time has come when you should come out in open...

Rajveer: thank you sir... I too think that now the time has came when Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat should make his entry...But still I think we should wait for few days... First I want to find out that even after our tight security how they managed to come inside that too with all that bombs and pistols... There was surely some loophole, which we need to find first...

BC: that's fine major... Whenever you decide, your presence will be made to known to everyone...

Rajveer then stands up and salutes them and leave from there with a smile on his face...

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Meanwhile in the assembly hall:

After Rajveer left Naina was sitting alone and seeing everywhere... He found Ali and pooja on the dance floor... Though they were dancing, but still keeping eye on everything... Huda and Alekh were standing beside the bar along with Gunny talking about who knows what... She then shifted her gaze and found Shalini standing in a corner near to the bar counter and looking in one direction... She followed her gaze and found her looking towards Huda, Alekh and Gunny's direction... She found it little strange... But before she could think further she was disturbed by someone...

" ahh, Naina, aap yaha akeli kya kar rahi hai"...

Naina turns and found Sonia standing there...

Sonia: I hope you won't mind calling you by your name... Can I sit here...By saying that she was about to sit but stopped hearing Naina's words..

Naina: No... ...I won't mind neither you calling me Naina, nor for sitting here... She said with a small smile...

Sonia: ohh thank god... You know for one moment I got shocked by hearing your No...I must say you have a way with your words... By the way I didn't get my answer yet, aap yaha akeli yaha??

Naina: wo you must have saw gana gaate hue I got tripped and twisted my ankle, so I m just sitting here... And I am alone, because I don't want to spoil my friends' enjoyment...

Sonia: ohh I see... Well I must say aap gana bahut hi acha gaati hai... You know its my first time when I am attending any army ball... I always thought army balls to be formal and boring... But I must say army balls are anything but boring and army officers too have many talents besides being the great soldiers...

Naina: well I agree with you...Though we are soldiers but we too need to live our lives... and I think ek soldier ko zindagi jeena jayada ache se aata hai, kyunki use yeh pata nahi hota ki agle pal wo zinda hoga bhi ya nahi... Hume pata hai ki humari life sabse unsafe hai, to hum jitna bhi ho sake use jeene ki koshish karte hai... Kyunki kya pata kal ho na ho...

Sonia: you know after coming here and meeting you all, my opinion really changed about army officers... I mean I always respected army officers as they protect us, our country, but after coming here I really started liking army officers... I mean you all are brilliant... And by looks also you can give competition to any model... Ab Major Arjun Rathore ko hi dekh lo, he is so handsome... He can make any top model run for his money...I never imagined army officers to be this much dashing, well built, strong...

Naina who was drinking water started coughing hearing her words...Sonia pats her back to make her comfortable...

Sonia: are you alright Naina?...

Naina gives her a tight smile: yeah I am fine... tqq...

Sonia: That's good... Hmm waise Naina, I hope you don't mind me asking this, but can you tell me about Major Rathore??

Naina raises her eyebrow on this...

Sonia: wo kya hai na I really like him, so I want to know more about him... And I have seen him sitting with you and your friends.. so that means he is close to you people and today also he came with you... You people seems to be close... So you can tell me about him...

Naina: baithi to abhi aap bhi hai mere saath, but that doesn't mean ki main aapko ache se jaanti hu... Aur rahi baat ball me aane ki to Ball me aap bhi Capt. Huda ke saath aayi hai, jisne aap abhi kuch din pehle hi mili hai, does that mean you two are close to each other??

Sonia fumbles little: ahh.. no no.. I don't know Capt. Huda... wo to ball me couple entry thi to bas... And I am sorry I didn't mean it that way... As I am new here, and you people were here before I came, so I just thought that by now you must be knowing each other that's why...

Naina: waise app Major Rathore me itni interested kyu hai? I mean KMA me aur bhi army officers' hai... Jaise Capt. Huda, Capt. Sharma, Capt. Sahani, Capt Chahuan...

Sonial: wo sab to hai... par you know kab dil ko kon bha jaaye kya keh sakte hai... And Major Rathore is different from others, his personality, his looks coupled with his dimples, his muscular body; I think anyone can go fida on him...

Naina who was listening all this with wide eyes thinks in her mind: Yeh to aise bol rahi hai jaise isne unke looks ke upar puri Ph.D kari ho...Aur yeh Rajveer bhi na kya zaroorat hai itna handsome hone ki, sab ladkiyan inke piche pad jati hai...Pehle ek wo ritu thi, phir wo Nandini aa gayi, aur ab yeh... Saari duniya me sabko bas mere Rajveer hi milte hai line maarne ke liye...

Sonia: You know I just want to talk with him once... After that I know we will be great together... I think I am falling for...

"Naina wo.."

Naina who was seeing Sonia with wide eyes after hearing this, gets more frustrated by seeing Rajveer there... Because how much she wants to be with Rajveer, but at this moment she wants Rajveer to be miles away from there... Rajveer came after meeting DM and BC came in the hall and saw Naina sitting on the table where he left her... He was happy after his meeting with DM and wanted to share his happiness with her... So he directly went towards Naina's table and was about to speak with her... When he noticed Sonia too there...

Rajveer: ahh hello miss Sonia... I hope I didn't disturb you both..

Sonia : no no Major... you didn't disturb at all...aur aap khade kyu hai baithiye na.. You can join us... we won't mind having you here with us...

Naina in her mind: haa yeh kyu mind karegi, mind hoga to mind karegi na... Aur iski to jaise lottery lag gayi... Rajveer ko bhi abhi aana tha yaha

Rajveer was about to sit when Naina spoke..

Naina: ahh come on Sonia... He must be very busy... You know na aaj ki ball ki saari zimmedari inhi par hai... So he must be having many works... She then turns to look at Rajveer and gives him a look... Major we know that you are very busy, so you can continue your work...and now you don't have to worry about me, as I am not alone and having a very wonderful company here...

Rajveer sees Naina's reaction and lifts his left eyebrow...

Sonia: ohh come on Naina... Thodi der baithne se kuch nahi hoga... aur unhe bhi to thoda rest chaiye hoga na, afterall aaj ke celeberation ke liye kitne kaam karne pade hoge... So he also need to relax na for sometime... And abhi thodi der pehle tum bhi to yahi keh rahi thi na ki soldiers ko bhi enjoy karna chaiye...

Rajveer looks at Sonia and then looks at Naina... and then a smirk appears on his face, because now he got a hint that why Naina is behaving that way... he then sits on a chair beside Naina and opposite to Sonia...

Rajveer: you are absolutely right Miss Sonia... I actually need to relax myself... All this preparations made me tired...He said while sitting on the chair... While Naina glare at him...

Sonia: Ohh I can understand Major... And by the way you can call me Sonia... No need of formalities...

Rajveer: That's good.. I also don't believe in formalities... I must say we think in the same way... And now that u have given me permission to call you Sonia, I think you also should do the same... So stop calling me Major, you can call me Arjun, Just Arjun... Sonia... Ahhh,... he was flirting with her, when he suddenly yelp in pain... Because under the table, Naina kicked him hard...

Sonia: what happened Arjun? She asked showing her concern...

Rajveer: ahh nothing just mosquitoe... mosquitoe bitten me...

Sonia: mosquitoe... I m sure mosquitoe ne aapko bahut zor se kata hoga tabhi aap itni jor se chilaye...

Before Rajveer could reply, Naina replied: ofcourse SONIA, ab yeh hai hi itne swt ki mosquitoe ko inka blood kuch jayada hi pasand aa gaya, aur usne inhe zor se kaat liya... Aur agar yeh itne hi zaroorat se zayada swt rahe na, to I am sure uss mosquitoe ko inka saara khoon pine me zayada time nahi lagega... She said while greeting her teeth and glaring at Rajveer... While Rajveer get amused to see NAina reacting that way... By now he understood clearly that Naina is getting jealous and he is enjoying her new avatar...

Sonia: Yeh to tumne thik kaha, he is very sweet... and handsome too... She said while looking dreamily at him.. While Naina, clutched a fork tightly in her hand...

Rajveer saw her reaction...and thus while trying to be innocent: Ji aapne kuch kaha?

Sonia: ahh nahi... wo I was just saying that you are looking very handsome...

Though Rajveer was not liking all this and getting uncomfortable by Sonia's words, but to tease Naina, he continued his flirting...

Rajveer: ohh Thank you... I am glad that you found me handsome enough to praise me... And I must say you are looking gorgeous too... I am sure you are making many to loose their concentration...

Naina in her mind: What the... Yahi line inhone mujhe boli thi... aur ab mujhe diya hua compliment iss kale kapdo wali dayan ko de diya... Rajveer I am not gonna spare you...

Sonia: ohh you are praising me way too much Arjun ...But still thank you for the compliment...

Naina: ab tak ki saari baton me sirf ek yahi baat isne sahi kahi hai, ki Rajveer isse Zaroorat se kuch zayada hi praise kar rahe hai...

Sonia: ahhh... If you don't mind Arjun, can we dance? I mean see your partner is injured, I mean she sprained her ankle.. While my partner is busy in who knows what... And its my first ball... and I don't want it to end without having a dance... So if you don't mind can I have my first dance with you?

Rajveer was now in a fix... He was flirting with her just to see Naina's reaction, but dancing and all with her was not something he was ready to do...

Rajveer: ahh wo... But Naina yaha akeli...

Sonia: Ohh I m sure Naina won't mind me having one dance with you... M I right Naina...

Naina: of course why I would wind... When I didn't mind till now, then why would I mind now... And you know you shouldn't be asking me this... I mean its him with whom you wanna dance, not me na... so it should be his decision... and by judging by the conversation, I don't think he would mind having a dance with you at all... M I right MAJOR RATHORE...

Rajveer now knew that Naina was angry on him... Though he was enjoying Naina's jealousy till now, but now he was scared... because he knew Naina and her anger is not good for his health... ... But before he could think or say anything, Sonia came towards him..

Sonia: see I told you she won't mind... So shall we Arjun? She said while forwarding her hand...

Rajveer was not having any other option but to dance with her... So while looking towards Naina, he placed his hand on Sonia's hand and went to dance with her by glancing Naina one last time...

And here Naina was angry like anything... She thought RAjveer will refuse to dance with her, but no... He just went to dance with that kaali dayan... Already she was pissed with Rajveer's flirting with her and now to he is dancing with her...She got up from her chair and stood beside a pillar... She was seeing Rajveer dancing with Sonia... And she did not like this at all...

Here Rajveer was trapped in his own plan... He was not liking this and on the top the way Sonia was trying to be close with him was making him uncomfortable... He was dancing with her, but he kept his eyes on Naina and found her standing with a angry and frustrated look on her face...

Here Naina was standing alone when he heard Huda's voice...

Huda: yaar aaidi yeh galat hai... Sir ke hote hue koi hume bhaav hi nahi deta...

Alekh: to tujhe kya lagta hai ki unke aage koi tujhe ghass dalega...Yeh tera tabela nahi hai Huda...

Huda: yehi to bawal hai na qaidi... waise jo bhi keh in dono ki Jodi lag kamal rahi hai nahi?

Naina who heard this shot a glare to him...

Huda: ohh Phoolan mujhe aise gusse se naa dekh.. maine kaha kuch kiya... Yeh to sir hi hai jo sab kuch kar rahe hai...

Alekh: Sahi kaha Huda, Dekh kaise chipak ke dance karrele hai...

Actually Alkeh, Huda heard the conversation between Rajveer, Sonia and Naina and then they saw Rajveer going with Sonia for dance... So they knew that Rajveer was just making Naina jealous... So they thought why not to add ghee in this aag...

Huda: waise yeh galat hai qaidi... Sir har janani ko le jaate hai... pehle wo Dr. Ritu Mishra,... Huda ka kitna dil aaya tha uspe, usne bhi sir ki wajah se iss jatt ko ghass nahi daali...

Alekh: abbey sukhar mana ki usne tujhe ghass nahi dali, warna aaj tu narak me baitha yamraj ko ghas dal raha hota...

Huda: Kya bak raha hai be qaidi, main aur narak me... Na yeh jatt to sawrg jaane ke liye bana hai, aakhir waha ki apsarayon pe bhi to Huda ka charm chalana hai...

Alekh: teri innhi harkaton ki wajh se apun sure hai ki tu swarg nahi narak me hi jaayega, aur phir waha jalado pe chalana apna charm...

Naina who was already frustrated got more frustrated and shouted: tum dono apni yeh bakwas band karoge...

Huda: arey tu gussa kyu ho rahi hai phoolan, acha le ek maar le... Dekh tera sara gusaa dur ho jayega... he said while forwarding a peg to her...

Naina: Huda tujhe pata hai na main nahi peeti...

Huda: Haa yeh bhi hai... Waise Phoolan dekh tu sir ko kuch samjhati kyu nahi, ki kisi ko to humare liye bhi chod de... Dekh ab tere saath to main kuch kar nahi sakta, kyunki tu to tehri unki hone wali Mrs... par jiske saath dance kar sakta tha, aur apna charm chala sakta tha wo to use bhi le gaye... aur dekh kitna chipak ke dance kar rahe hai...ab yeh jatt kiske saath dance karega...

He said while pointing towards Rajveer and Naina.. Naina looked at them and what she saw made her eyes popped out... because she saw Sonia getting stumbled and falling on Rajveer and in this her lips touched his cheek...

Huda: ooo teri, yeh to sir ne mauke pe chauka maar liya yaar...

Alekh: sirf chauka nahi apun ko to puri ki puri century lagti dikh rahi yaar...

Naina who by now were out of control because of her anger and jealousy took that peg from Huda's hand drank that in a go...

Huda: phoolan tu yeh...

Alekh: aur yeh bol reli thi ki yeh pitti nahi hai...

Naina: bakwas band karo tum dono... aur Huda tujhe dance karne ka bada man kar raha tha na, apna charm chalana tha na tujhe... to chal aa chala apna charm... She said while catching his hand and then she started dragging him towards the dance floor..

Huda: phoolan, tu yek kya kar rahi hai.,... ruk to phoolna... dekh mujhe sir ke haatho saheed hone ka koi shauk nahi hai...

Naina: aur agar tu chup chap mere saath nahi aaya na to main tujhe yahi saheed kar dongi samjha... She said and dragged him... While going she took one more glass of drink from the waiter and drank that... Now both reached the dance floor...

Rajveer was shocked when Sonia kissed him on his cheek and automatically his eyes traveled to the place where Naina was standing... By Naina;s expression he came to know that he is in big trouble... .. And then he saw Naina snatching drink from Huda's hand and drinking it... By now he was sure that today he is dead... So he tried moving towards Naina, but Sonia stopped him by asking him to dance with her for few more minutes... Before he could reply he saw Naina on the dance floor with Huda... Now it was time for him to get shocked...

Here Huda was scared... he didn't know what to do... On one side it was Naina, who was not looking less than a wounded tigress and he was not having any intention to become a pray of her... Other side it was Rajveer, who was now looking towards them... If Naina was a wounded tigress, then of course Rajveer is not less than a lion... In normal situation only Rajveer is like a lion then now when Huda was with Naina, who made him to keep his hand on her waist and to dance with her, Huda can see getting himself becoming Rajveer's pray, or we can say his dinner... He was able to feel the burns by Rajveer's gaze...

Huda in his mind: kaha phas gaya mummy ji... mujhse galti ho gayi, jo main Rajveer sir aur Naina ke maza lene ke chakar mein Naina ke pass chala gaya... wada karta hu mummy ji aage se kisi ke fatte me apni taang nahi adaonga... bus iss baar mujhe bacha lo mummy ji... warna appka yeh jawan te papa ji ka kissan aaj saheed ho jaayega...

Gunny saw rajveer dancing with Sonia and Naina dancing with Huda... He also saw the way Rajveer was looking towards Huda, or to be precise on his hand which was resting on Naina's waist... He was sure that something is going on... Something very big and dangerous... He came towards Alekh..

Gunny: yeh kya ho raha hai Alekh? He asked while pointing towards the Rajveer, Naina and Huda...

Alekh: kuch nahi sir, bas aaj apna bakra, halal hone wala hai... Ab dekhna yeh hai ki iss bakre ki bali kon deta hai, Naina, Ya phir apne sir...

Gunny: By looking at Rajveer I can clearly say ki yeh bakra to wahi halal karega... lekin Naina ko dekhkar yeh lagta hai ki aaj to Rajveer ki bhi bali chadne wali hai...

Alekh: apun ko to isme bhi sir ka ich fayda dikh raha hai?

Gunny: aur wo kasie?

Alekh: Naina do peg down hai sir... aur jab botal ka nasha, pyaar ke nashe ke saath mil jaata hai, aur uspar jalan ka chakna saath ho, to phir kayamat hi hoti hai... aur wahi aaj apun ke sir ke saath hone wala hai...

Gunny: Wow Alekh... I mean tum kabhi apni daaru aur chakne se bahar nahi aate na?

Alekh: ab kya kare sir, Naina ne peena to band karwa diya, ab bas baat hi kar sakta hai apun...

Gunny: well I must say Naina has done a fantastic job... now lets c what she is going to do with our Major...

They then turn to look at Rajveer and Naina direction... Here Huda was sweating like anything by seeing Rajveer glaring at him... ... he was continuously praying to her mummy ji to save him... and Naina, well Naina wanted to take revenge from Rajveer... She wanted to make him taste his own medicine... So though she was not liking but still was dancing with Huda and forcing Huda to dance with her... And what should I say about Rajveer... He was burning holes in Huda's hand by his glare... By every passing second it was becoming harder fro him to control himself and not to go towards Huda and Naina and snatch Naina from Huda... But the moment Naina kept her both hands on Huda's neck, which resulted in Huda's second hand also to lend on Naina's waist, Rajveer couldn't control himself anymore... So he stopped dancing with Sonia abruptly... which surprised Sonia too.. He then marched towards Huda and Naina's direction... Huda by seeing Rajveer coming in his direction started chanting in his mind...

Huda in mind: Bajrangbali ji bachalo mujhe...

Jai hanuman Gyan gun sagar...

Jai kapis tihu lok ujagar...

Jai hanuman..aage kya tha mummy ji...

Well he was that much afraid that he forgot his hanuman chalisa too and started chanting:

Aaltu jalatu aayi bala ko taal tu,

Aaltu jalatu aayi bala ko taal tu...

Rajveer By now reached there and By seeing Rajveer, Huda himself removed his hand from Naina's waist and moved himself away from Naina.. Naina by seeing Huda's reaction turned and saw Rajveer standing there and glaring at Huda...

Rajveer while glaring to Huda: Capt. Huda, jab aap kisi ki zimedari lete hai to use pura karna bhi sikhiye... Aap yaha Miss Sonia ke saath aaye the, to jab tak yeh ball khatam nahi ho jati, tab tak aapko unka saath dena hai nahi.. lekin aap unhe akela chod kar pata nahi kaha busy hai...

Naina: ohh really Major... you know I have learnt in my school that preach what you practice, and practice what you preach... aap Huda ko uski date ko akela chodne ke liye daant rahe hai, and what about you?

Rajveer then looks at Naina: Aap ache se jaanti hai ki agar Huda ne Miss Sonia ko akela nahi choda hota to mujhe unke saath dance nahi karna padta...

Naina: ohh really... well I don't think so.. And by the way why are you calling her Miss Sonia... last I remember she was just Sonia for you...as you both don't like formalities...

Rajveer: Naina dekhotum...

Naina: Naina?? Excuse me aapne mujhe Naina bulaya... abhi thodi der pehle to main aapke liye Capt Thi...nahi... you know what mujhe aapse baat hi nahi karni... aap jaiye aur jakar apni Sonia ke saath dance kariye... Aur mujhe bhi dance karne dijiye... She turned to Huda by saying that...Huda.. chalo lets dance...

Huda curses himself again... Surely he don't want to make the same mistake again... If Rajveer was able to make him sweat from far, then he was sure that this time he will be burnt completely by Rajveer... And he doesn't want to do that not after seeing Rajveer, who was glaring at him and signaled him to leave from there... and Huda well Huda knew better to not to disagree with Rajveer... So Huda found it better to run from there... So he said to Naina..

Huda: phoolan wo... wo... wo mujhe na... mujhe na ek no.. aaya hai... to main abhi aata hu... and he ran from there to save himself while thanking his mummy ji and bajrang bali for saving him from becoming a bali from Rajveer's hand...

Naina: Huda, Huda sun to..

Rajveer: well wo ab nahi sunne wala...

Naina turns to Rajveer: mujhe pata hai wo yaha se aapki wajh se chala gaya... par aapko kya lagta hai ki agar Huda chala gaya to main dance nahi karongi, main dance karongi , karongi, karongi... Naina by now was getting tipsy...She never had drink before, so those two pegs were making her tipsy...because of her tipsy state and her sprained ankle, it was becoming difficult for her to stand properly... So she just stumbled, but before she can fall, Rajveer catches her by holding her from her waist...

Rajveer: tum thik se khadi bhi nahi ho pa rahi ho, aur tumhe dance karna hai... Chup chap chalo yaha se...

Naina: nahi main nahi jaongi... mujhe dance karna hai... Aur aap bhi kahi nahi jaayenge... Abhi to uss Kali dayan ke saath bada chipak chipak ke dance kar rahe the... ab kya ho gaya.. chaliye ab mere saath chipakiye, mera matlab hai dance kijiye...

Rajveer with wide eyes stares at her and then asks: kaali dayan?

Naina: haa wahi aapki SONIA... jab dekho kale kapde pehenke aa jati hai... aur pata nahi konsa kaal jaadu kar diya usne aap par ki aap mujhe chod kar uske saath chipak rahe the...

Rajveer gets amused to heard that... This Naina is surely new for him and quite interesting too...

Rajveer: acha aur wo jo abhi aap Huda ke saath kar rahi thi, uska kya?

Naina: arey wo to wo tha... wo kya kehte hai use... haa tit for tat... aapne uss kali dayan ke saath dance kiya, to maine uss bhainso ke masiha ke saath...

Rajveer was unable to control his laugh by hearing bhainson ka masiha... For sure, his Naina has unique name for everyone...

Naina: Aur ab aap apna yeh KBC band kijiye aur mere saath dance kijiye...She said while holding his hand...

Rajveer: Naina dekho abhi tum dance karne ki condition me nahi ho, hum phir kabhi dance kar lenge... abhi chalo yaha se...

Naina: nahi mujhe dance karna hai matlab karna hai... Kyu aapko mere saath dance nahi karna... Abhi to aap uss kaali dayan ke saath kar rahe the na... to ab kya hua... Usne aap pe aisa kya kaal jaadu kiya ki ab aapko mere saath dance nahi karna... Ab aap mujhe chod denge na... ab aap mujhse pyaar nahi karenge na... She said and by seeing her it was easy to guess that she will start crying anytime... And it will create a scene...And by seeing Naina reacting that way and thinking all negative, Rajveer got scared... So he tries to calm her down...

Rajveer: arey Naina, aisa kuch nahi hai... main tumhe kaise chod sakta hu... Koi bhala apni jaan ko chod sakta hai... nahi na...aur main sirf tumse hi pyaar karta hu...

Naina: Sachi..

Rajveer: haa meri jaan Sachi... ab chale... He said while turning and about to go with Naina by clutching her hand in his but Naina stops him..

Naina: to aap mere saath dance kijiye na... Please... (Guys I want you to assume this song being played in the background, but the words here will clesrly shows Rajveer's feelings and what he is feeling for Naina at this moment... I will try my best to explain his feelings, but if I won't be able to do justice then please forgive me...)

sun zaalima mere

saanu koi Dar naa

kii samjhega zamaana

tu vi si kamli

main vi sa kamla

ishqe da rog sayaana

ishqe da rog sayaanaa..

Naina's face, her smile, her innocence, the love in her eyes for him, makes him impossible for him to say no to him...He let himself to lost in her eyes... He then lifts her elft hand and keeps on his shoulder... He then take her right hand in his left hand and by placing his right hand on her waist, brings her close with a jerk ...

sun mere humsafar

kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar

ki teri saansein chalti jidhar

rahunga bas wahin umr bhar

He starts swaying with her on the music... Rajveer is lost in her eyes... He keep swaying her while looking all the time in her eyes... The words of the song were clearly depicting his feelings for his Naina...

jitni haseen ye mulaakaatein hain

unse bhi pyaari teri baatein hain

baaton mein teri jo kho jaate hain

aaun na hosh mein main kabhi

baahon mein hai teri zindagi, haaye..

sun mere humsafar

kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar...

Rajveer remembers their past... How they met, how they came close to each other... How he always lost himself in her, in her eyes, in her talks... How he always wished to stay lost in her...

zaalima tere ishq 'ch

main ho gayiaan kamli

haaye..

They continue dancing... Rajveer twirls her and again brings her close to him... NAina is totally lost in him... Already she is loosing her senses due to the alcohol she consumed, and now Rajveer is making her loose more by his immense love which she is able to see in his eyes... Their proximity, their dance, the song everything is making them to forget about their surrounding... For them in this moment nobody exists except them...

main to khaRa kis soch mein paRa tha

kaise jee raha tha main deewana

chhupke se aake tune

dil mein sama ke tune

chheR diya ye kaisa fasaana

Rajveer then remembers his life before he met with Naina... His was just living his life for the name sake... His life was full with pain, guilt, sufferings... And then she came...she came and he didn't even come to know when she started making her presence in his heart... When and how he started falling for her, he didn't even come to know...

Oo...muskurana bhi tujhi se seekha hai

dil lagane ka tu hi tareeka hai

aitbaar bhi tujhi se hota hai

aaun na hosh mein main kabhi

baahon mein hai teri zindagi, haaye

He then remembers that how he started smiling once again because of Naina only... in his efforts to make Naina smile, when he himself started smiling he didn't come to know...How he always used to forget about his pain whenever he used to be with her... She without knowing became his medicine... How he started to trust her... ..

hai nahi tha pata

ke tujhe maan loonga khuda

ki teri galiyon mein is kadar

aaunga har pehar

sun mere humsafar

kya tujhe itni si bhi khabar

ki teri saansein chalti jidhar

rahoonga bas wahin umr bhar

He never thought that one day she will become the most important person of his life, one day she will become his life... One day she will be his everything... But it happened... Now he can't even imagine his life without her... He never believd in god after whatever happened with him... But now for him She is only his god... And he wants to be with her... Wherever he goes but in the end he wants to come to her, be with her...Now he wants to spend his entire life with her... Now if he is living his life then because of her and for her...

zaalima tere ishq 'ch...

Rajveer and Naina both end their dance with the song... Naina is in Rajveer's arms... Both are lost in each other...

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Precap:

Naina under the effect of alcohol,

Naina-Rajveer's romance...

Someone getting jealous.. but who?

Rajveer- gunny friendship...

Someone is coming...

Note: okk guys... i am sorry but i couldn't show Rajveer and Naina's romance i mean hot romance in this update... as its already 13 k words... so you have to wait for the next update... which i hopefully gives u either by today midnight or by tomm... So you have to wait,... and also if you want me to update fast then give your votes and comments also fast... because i have already started writing the next part and wrote almost half of it... so i may update before midnight also... but that depends on you... so gives ur views abt this update... i wrote something new, which i always tries to do... But i have no idea whether u will like it or not... or is it up to your expectations or not... So plzz and kindly gives your honest views abt this update... i will appreciate every review even if it is negative then also...

so see you guys soon...

love you all

take care

and enjoy...


Edited by saiaarti - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
thx a lot for update
everyword the emotions was awesom the way naina feel rajveer condition and his thoughts was amazing,she knew what he is feeling the fear of loosing her,very well written .
and about jeet i love this show ankur was a professer on this show i really want them as a couple in this ff plz make them together .i like there pair .
and both the song is awesome
raj or flirt bechare ka kaam ho gaya ,sonia or kali dayan or huda bansio ka mashia
really comic .and then ala tu jala tu
it was like when teacher take surprise test i realize i do this
when ever i read your ff i really felt proud for army realize how much they have to face.bullet staying away from family
lovely part and then alekh ka chakna or sharb
i really wish ki next update me naina raj ko seduce kare or raj apni izzat bachaa ker baag raha ho
but kuch or bhi ho sakta hai
i miss nandini or abhi tjodi or insult hoti unki to or achaa hota
i want to press like button to many time but we can like ones
plz write some os its a request in which naina cant speak and how raj save him and fall in love with her
plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update..
Initially, I thought Naina was injured.. very well written
Sonia and Raj, Naina getting jealous 😉 was superb.
Alekh and Huda were funny
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing and outstanding ud
Thank God naina ki kuch nahi hua aur waise bhi Raj ki hothe hue naina ki kuch nahi ho sakta
Abt gunny nd shalini pairing...It's cool sab ko second chance milna chahiye
Naina's song was gud
Sonia flirting wid Raj was superb
Naina's jealousy nd Raj Sonia's dance huda and naina dance,alekh huda convo.was just😆
Huda's situation on dance floor was just hilarious🤣
Precap s interesting
Eagerly waiting for next ud
Continue soon
Ha thnx fr d ud oh bhi jaldi dene ke liya I'm always waiting for your story,ur writing skills r really superb👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
First i thought Naina had been injured but thanks to you for this
Naina gets jealous and Raj is enjoying it
I don't feel good about Sonia
Naina is right that she is kaali daayan
Hope she don't come between them
Huda's condition was hilarious
His nickname is so funny and suits him
Curious to know the story of Gunny and Shalini
and also about Gunny and Raj as well as Navin's friendship
Excited for next update
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

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