***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 28

wow mrsa raj well done mein un parts par comment nahi karungi cos i am bit nt comfortable i knw u will inderstand par the majburi of that girl u have written it very well and naveen reaction towards her and she calmy listening to his wrds loved

Originally posted by: prathe

wow mrsa raj well done mein un parts par comment nahi karungi cos i am bit nt comfortable i knw u will inderstand par the majburi of that girl u have written it very well and naveen reaction towards her and she calmy listening to his wrds loved

pardha utna wala hai jald hi😉am sure

thank h
i understand hot mirchi sabka apna comfort zone hota h...
well parda toh utna he h aj nahi toh kal but keep guessing kya pata kya ho parde ke peche ka razzz 😉 aksar jo dekhta h wo hota nahi aur jo hota h wo dekhta nahi 😆

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Very emotional part

thank u 😃

nice updatess
read 2 and 3 rd part at a go😃😃
really good😉

Originally posted by: RNforever

thank h
i understand hot mirchi sabka apna comfort zone hota h...
well parda toh utna he h aj nahi toh kal but keep guessing kya pata kya ho parde ke peche ka razzz 😉 aksar jo dekhta h wo hota nahi aur jo hota h wo dekhta nahi 😆

Originally posted by: prathe

oh jo aksar nahi hotha hai wahi dekne ka mann kartha hai😆

dekhne dekhane me kya rakha ...ab toh parda utana h bas aur hoga ek jor dar dhamaka 😉

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

nice updatess
read 2 and 3 rd part at a go😃😃
really good😉
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thanks rikita 😃

*** Ek Anjana Rishta***


Part 4



Jab wo sab infirmary jate hai toh dekhte hai ki wo ladki paglo ki tarah har chiz yaha Se waha phak rahi thi mano kisi chiz ki talash ho usse...



Shalini usse rokne ki koshish karte hai.


Shalini : please ruk jao tum kya dhundh rahi ho ...ruko please


Par wo ladki kuch sunn he nahi rahi thi bas pagalo ki tarah kuch dhundh rahi thi...


Raj aage aa kar usse pakadta hai


Raj : (holding her from shoulder) kya dhundh rahi ho tum please kuch btaogi kya chaheyi tumhe ...


Ladki : (chilate hue) mujhe mera tabizzz do kaha hai wo ...(holding his collar) wapas karo mujhe mera tabiz ...(rote hue uske pairo me gir gayi) please wapas kardo ...tum jo bolo gay main karugi par mera tabizz mujhe wapas de do ...



Raj usse uske shoulder pakad kar uthata hai ...


Raj : dekho humare pas tumhara koi tabizz nahi hai ...hota toh hum jarur de dete tumhe ...


Uss ladki ko gussa aane lagta hai ...wo gusse me raj ko ek thapad mar deti hai


Ladki : (slapping him) kaha na mujhe wapas do mera tabizzz...samjhte kyu nahi tum wapas karo mujhe mera tabizz ...

Raj aur baki sab shocked ho jate hai uss ladki ke ase reaction se ...

Wo ladki raj ke pairo me gir ke usse bar bar apna tabizzz mang rahi thi...




Raj : (samjhate hue) dekho please believe me mere pas tumhara koi tabizz nahi hai hota toh main tumhe jarur wapas kar deta ...


Aur wo ladki wahi rote rote behosh ho jati hai...

Shalini kisi tarah wapas usse uski jagah sula kar dawa de deti hai...



Sab wapas Naveen ke room me tensed baithe the ...wo ladki ke saath kase deal kare unhe samjh he nahi aa rah tha ki aakher ab aage karna kya hai...


Shalini : yeh ladki bohat weak hai ...isliye bar bar is tarah behosh ho jati hai ...mujhe toh kuch samjh he nahi aa raha ki aakhir ab karna kya hai...


Naveen : wo sab baad ki baat hai par wo kis tabizz ki baat kar rahi thi...shalini tumhe koi tabizz mile hai kya uske pas



Shalini : nahi Naveen agar mujhe mila hota toh kab ka de diya hota maine...

Room me sabhi pareshan baithe the abhimanyu situation ko lite karne ke liye kahta hai



Abhimanyu : (Teasingly) wase raj apka experience kasa raha..(raj ko samjh nahi aata ki abhimanyu kis experience ki baat kar raha hai) arre aap samjhe nahi ..girlfriend aap banate nahi ...kisi ladki se aap jada baat karte nahi phir aaj kasa laga ke khubsurat ladki ke haath se chata kha kar kam se kam issi bahane kisi ladki ne chua toh apko (yeh kahte he abhimanyu aur baki sab hasne lagte hai ...)




Raj : chauhan sahab ab toh aap gaye ...

Yeh kah kar raj abhimanyu ke peche bhagne lagta hai...


aur sare ka sara din yuhi beet jata hai ...wo ladki dari sahmi se bas ek jagah baithi rahti thi ...kisi se koi baat nahi karti na he kisi ke sawal ka jawab deti...




Naveen ne brig chandok ko kisi tarah convence kar liya uss ladki ko KMA me rakhne ke liye jab tak uski family na mil jaye...




Sab ne bohat koshish ki uss ladki se uska naam pata puchne ki par usne kisi ko kuch nahi bola aur shalini ne uski halat dekhte hue kisi ko usse jada kuch puchne bhi nahi diya tha ...


Ase he dekhte dekhte do din beet gaye...wo ladki ab thoda thoda normal hone lagi thi par uske sharer ke jhakhm abhi taza he the ...wo abhi kisi se koi baat nhi karti
Bas chup chap khud ko khud me samete baithe rahti na jane kis soch me khud ko gum rakhti thi...


Next morning


Aj uss ladki ko KMA me aaye hue teen din ho gaye the par uske bare me kuch pata nahi chala tga

Raj apni class attend karne ja raha tha tabhi ek orderly uske pas



Orderly : (saluting him) jai hind sir... Wo sir aaj m apki jeep ki safai kar raha tha toh mjhe usme ek tabizz mile socha apki hogi isliye dene aa gaya ...



Raj ne uss orderly ke haath se tabizz le aur usse jane ke liye kah diya ... Raj uss tabizz ko dekh kar soch he raha tha ki yeh kiski ho sakti hai tab usse uss ladki ka apni tabizz ko pagalo ki tarah dhundhna yaad aaya ...


Raj ne uss tabizz ko apni pocket me rakha aur apni class ke taraf chala gaya




Ase he sham ho gayi raj uss tabizz ke bare me bhul he gaya tha ...sab canteen me baithe coffee pe rahe the ...shalini Naveen abhimanyu aur raj...par ke table pe cadets bhi baithe the ...



Naveen : shalini uss ladki ne kuch bola


Shalini : nahi Naveen wo kuch bolne ko taiyar he nahi hai bas dari sahme se rahti hai...



Abhimanyu : par ase kab tak chalega ...BC bhi ase jada din unhe yaha rahne nahi de gay



Pas baithe cadets inki baatein sunn rahe the...



Huda : (with attitude) sir mere mano toh uss ladki ko kuch der huda ke saath chod do phir dekho ...huda ka charm kase chalta hI uss ladki pe wo tote (parrot) ki raha sab bol degi...




Yudi : dude bolne ka pata nahi par ha abhi sadme se chup h tab pagal ho kar chup ho jayegi tumhara charm dekh kar . ..


Sab hasne lagte h aur huda muh banata h...



Alekh : apun ki mano toh (showing hus bottle) do dhut pila do sab bak degi wo...



Ali : alekh bhai kuch toh sharam ki jiye ...wo bimar hai aur aap ase bol rahe hai



Pooja : sir mere pas ek idea hai ...kyu na hum uske hand set me apna sim dal de mjhe pura yakin hai wo ladki humare network ki rang me jarur aa jayegi...



Huda : oye hum kab tak usse wo ladki wo ladki bulate rahe gay mujhe lagta hai hume usse koi naam dena chaheyi...




Abhimanyu : wah cadet lagta hai life me phele aur akhri bar apne koi samjh dari ki baat ki hai ...



Huda : kya sir aap bhi ...


Tabhi raj ki wo tabizz ki baat yaad aati hai...



Raj : arre main itni important baat kase bhul gaya



Naveen : konse baat . ...



Raj : Naveen mujhe uss ladki ki wo tabizz mil gayi ...jeep me gir gaya thi tabizz...orderly ko saaf safai karte hue mila ...



Yeh kah kar raj ne wo tabizz nikal kar Naveen ko de ...



Naveen uss tabizz ko dekhta he rah gaya jase usne kahi dekha ho uss tabizz ko


Naveen : yaar maine isse kahi dekha hai yaad nahi aa raha kaha ...



Huda : sir yeh tabizz hai...aur sari tabizz ek jase he hoti hai apne kisi ke pas dekha hoga asa he tabizz


Abhimanyu : (teasing huda) kya baat hai huda aj toh apne ne ek din me do bar samjh dari ki baat ki hai ...


Alekh : apun ka asar aane laga hai saale pe ...


Yeh sunn kar sab hasne lagte hai par Naveen abhi bhi apni soch me gumm tha...



Naveen bina kisi ko kuch kahi waha se chala jata hai...



Abhimanyu : ab Naveen ko kya hua ...kafi pareshan lag rahe hai wo...




Shalini : pata nahi jab se wo ladki aayi hai tab se Naveen ase ajeeb sa he behave kar raha hai...



Alekh : apun ko lagta hai ...apun log ko chal kar dekhna chaheyi...




Raj : haa chalo ...



Phir sab Naveen ko dhundhte hue uske kamre me jate hai ...


Naveen apne cupboard me kuch dhundh raha tha

Shalini : kya dhundh rahe ho tum



Naveen apne cupboard se ek album nikalta hai aur usne se ek tasvir nikal kar uss tabizz se match karne lagta hai...


Raj : kya baat hai Naveen kya dekh raha hai iss photo me



Naveen bilkul shocked khada tha uske chahre pe koi expression he nahi the ...



Raj jaa kar Naveen ke shoulder pe haath rakhta hai toh Naveen apne khayalo se bahar aata hai ...

Naveen raj ko photo aur tabizz dekhata hai...


Raj wo photo dekhta hai ...usne ek ladka aur ladki the dono he chote the ladki 7 ya 8 saal ki lag rahi thi aur ladka 10 12 saal ka... raj ne dhayan se dekha uss ladki ke gale me same tabizz thi ...


Raj ne Naveen ki taraf dekha Naveen raj ko he dekh raha tha uski aakho me aasu the ...



Raj aur Naveen dono ki he aakho me sawal the aur jawab kisi ke pas nhi...


Shalini aage aa kar raj se wo photo aur tabizz le usne bhi wo baat notice ki ase ek ek kar ke sabne tabizz or photo dekha sab confused ho kar Naveen ko dekh rahe the



Alekh : yeh photo me ladki ke gale ka tabizz aur yeh humare pas jo tabizz hai ek jasa he hai ...iska kya mtlab hai...aur yeh bachi hai kon apun ko samajh nahi aa raha ...



Naveen : (with tears) mere gudiya ...


Abhimanyu raj aur shalini teeno ko pata tha ki yeh kon hai par sare cadets haran ho kar usse dekh rahe the ...


Ali : iska mtlab wo ladki jo apko mile wo apki bahen hai...


Sab ek dosre ko dekh rahe the kisi ko samjh he nahi aa raha tha ki kya kahe aur kya nahi aur sabse jaad toh Naveen pareshan tha ...




Naveen : mujhe usse baat karni hai ...


Yeh kah kar Naveen photo aur tabizz le kar uss ladki ke pas chala gaya ...



Sab Naveen ke peeche peeche gay kisi ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki aakhir ab aage hone kya wala hai ...




Naveen infirmary me ja kar uss ladki ke samne khada ho gaya ...wo ladki apne he soch me kahi gumm khidki ke bahar dekh rahi thi ...



Naveen : tumhara naam kya hai...


Wo ladki Naveen ki aawaz sunn kar apne khayali se bahar aayi aur Naveen ko dekhne lagi par wo kuch bhi kah nahi rahi thi bas chup chap usse dekhe ja rahi thi ...


Asa lag raha tha ki dono he ek dosre ki aakho me kuch dhundh rahe ho ...


Baki sab bhi infirmary me aa gaye sab dono ko dekh rahe the...



Us ladki ki nazar Naveen ke haath pe pade tabizz pe gayi uss ladki ne jhat se wo tabizz Naveen ke haath se chin le aur apne seene se laga le mano koi khoyi hue kemti chiz usse wapas mil gayi ho...




Jab se wo ladki yaha aayi thi aaj phele bar sabne uske chahre pe ek muskan dekhi thi ...uski aakho me aasu the par khushi ke hontho pe halki se muskan thi ...



Naveen bohat gir se uske experience dekh raha tha ...


Naveen ne uske shoulder par haath rakah aur kaha ...


Naveen : (with tears) please apna naam bata do ...kon ho tum kaha se aayi ho...



Wo ladki bas Naveen ko dekhe ja rahi thi...par abhi bhi kuch bolne ko taiyar nahi thi wo...



Naveen ke sabar ka badh tuta ja raha tha ...bar bar puchne par bhi wo kuch nahi bolrahi thi ...

Bas apne tabizz ko dekhe ja rahi thi...




Naveen ne gusse me usse uske shoulders se padkda...


Naveen : (shouting) kuch puch raha hu main kon ho tum..naam kya hai tumhara ...


Naveen ko yuh chilate dekh wo ladki dar gayi aur khud ko chudane ki koshish karne lagi...




Par Naveen bar bar bas ek he baat puch raha tha ...aur wo ladki kuch bol he nahi rahi thi...


Dar ki wajahse uss ladki ki tabyat kharab hone lagi ...
Aur wo hyper ho rahi thi...uski saase tej hone lagi sab waha khade yeh sab dekh rahe the ...




Shalini ne uski halat bigadte dekhta toh usne Naveen ko usse dor karke usse ek neend ka injection diya jise wo normal hone lagi aur uski aakhe band hone lagi


Par najane Naveen ke sir pe kya dhun sara thi usne uss ladki ko pakad kar phir se uska naam puchna suru kar diya ...


Abhimanyu aur Raj usse uss ladki se alag kar rahe the ki tabhi uss ladki ne neend me kuch bola sabka sara dhayan uss ladki ke bolne par tha



Naveen : (not hearing properly) kya kaha tumne kya naam hai tumhara ...


Girl : (neend ne) m..me..mera naa...naammm..na...nai... Naina
Yeh akah kar wo ladki injection ke wagah se so gayi ...



Naveen ke toh chahre ka rang he udd gaya tha aur baki sab confused khade the...



Abhimanyu : (confused) naina ??? Par Naveen apki behen ka naam toh gudiya hai na ...



Pooja : iska mtlab yeh apki behen nahi hai sir...




Naveen kuch bol he nahi raha tha wo bas ek tak uss ladki ko dekhe ja raha tha ...




Shalini Naveen ko ase dekh kar pareshan ho rahi thi...


Shalini : Naveen kya baat hai ...tum usse ase kyu dekh rahe ho ...wo tumhare behen nahi hai Naveen... Please bhul jao iss baat ko ...


Par Naveen kuch kah he nahi raha tha...


Raj : ek minute jaha tak mjhe pata h Naveen ki behen ka naam gudiya hai par wo toh ghar ka naam hai na uska real naam toh hume pata he nahi hai...
Naveen asli naam kya hai tere behen ka ...




Naveen ne raj ke yeh baat sunn kar uski tarah dekha ...



Naveen : (without any expression) Naina...



Yudi : sir iss ladki ka naam nahi apki sis ka naam puch rahe hai rajveer sir...




Naveen : naina...


Abhimanyu : irritated ) kya naina naina laga rakha hai apne Naveen apne behen ka naam btaiye na please...



Ab jase Naveen ko apne kaano pe yakee hone laga tha uske chahre pe ek smile aane lagi sab usse yuh muskurat dekh haran the...



Naveen : (hugging abhimanyu) naina ...naina ...naina



Sab Naveen ko ghur rahe the



Naveen : (happily) naina ki taraf dekhte hue) mere behen ka naam naina hai ...


(Naina ke ser pe haath rakhte hue)

Naveen : yeh mere gudiya hai (with tears of joy) mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha mujhe mere behen mil gayi ...yeh mere naina hai mere behen ...mere gudiya ...



Sab bilkul shocked khade the ...
Kisi ko iss baat ka yakeen he nahi jo raha tha ki yeh Naveen ki behen hai...




Naveen toh khushi se pagal ho raha tha usse apni kismat par yakeen he nahi ho raha tha ki usse itne saalo baad apni behen wapas mil gayi...


Ase he kuch time beet gaya aur sab haran khade rahe wahi pe...Naveen toh bas naina ke pas baithe usse dekhe he ja raha tha...


Naveen naina ko chod kar jane ke liye taiyar he nahi tha par sabke samjhne par wo apne room me gaya kyuki raat se phele ab naina ko hosh jo nahi aane wala tha...



Yeh khabar aag ki tarah pure KMA me phal gayi ki jo ladki mile thi Naveen ko wo koi aur nahi balki uski apni behen naina hai jo bachpan me kho gayi thi...



Jaha sab ek taraf Naveen ke liye khush the toh dosre taraf sabke dimak me dought bhi tha uss ladki ko le kar ...




Asse he sham ho gayi pura din sabke dimak me hazaro sawal ghum rahe the naina ko le kar ...par koi kuch kah nahi raha tha .



In evening

In Naveen room


Naveen khushi ke mare pure room me ghum raha tha ..aur sab bas usse dekhe rahe the cadets ki class khatam ho chuki thi toh wo bhi Naveen ke room me he the ...sabke maan ne dought tha par kisi ki himat nahi ho rahi thi Naveen ko kuch bhi kahne ki




Huda : (to Naveen) confused) sir apko yakeen hai ko apki behen hai...



Naveen : (angrily) kya mtlab hai tumhara cadet huda ...mujhe pura yakeen hai ki wo mere gudiya hai...aur wase bhi uske pas wo tabizz milna aur apna naam naina batana yeh sabit karta hai ki wo mere behen he hai...




Alekh : sir apne kaha tha ki apki behen desh ke dushmano ke haath lag gayi thi...aur phir uske marne ki khabar bhi aayi thi...sir apun ko kuch locha lag raha hai ...


Abhimanyu : alekh bilkul sahi kah rahe hai Naveen aap samjh nahi rahe ase kase aap uss ladki par bharosa kar aakte hai ...usne kaha aur apne maan liya ki wo apki behen hai...


Naveen : usne yeh nahi kaha ki wo mere behen hai par halat aur sabut toh yahi sabit karte hai ki wo mere behen he hai...



Raj : Naveen main tujhe nirash nahi karna chahta par yaar jo bhi decision le yeh mat bhulna ki wo dushman ki chal bhi ho sakti hai...wo tere kamzori ka faida utha rahe ho ...tujhe tere mission me bhatkane ke liye...



Raj Naveen ko mission ke naam se triggers ke ur ishara karta hai ki shayad yeh triggers pane ke liye kisi dushman ki chal bhi ho sakti hai...


Naveen raj ki baat sunn kar soch me pad jata hai...


Tabhi waha shalini aati hai...


Shalini : mere pas tumhare pareshani ka hal hai Naveen


Naveen shalini ki aur dekhta hai shalini ke haath me envelop tha aur chahre pe pareshani...



Shalini Naveen ke pas aate hue

Shalini : Naveen maine tumhe bina btaye tumhara aur uss ladki ka DNA test karwaya hai



Naveen harani se shalini ko dekh raha tha...


Shalini : (holding his hand ) main nahi chahti thi ki tum Kisi bharam me raho isliye maine bina btaye tumhare hair brush se tumhara ek hair liya aur uss ladki ke saath tumhara DNA test karwaya ...emergency base pe maine reports bhi magwali hai...ab saaf saaf pata chal jayega ki wo tumhare behen hai ya nahi...


Shalini ne yeh kahte hue Naveen ko wo envelop pakda diya


Naveen ke haath kaap rahe the uss envelop ko le kar ...wo apni saalo phele bechdi hue behen ke milne ki umeed khona nahi chahta tha ...



Naveen : mujhe nahi dekhi yeh report mjhe pata hai ki wo mere behen hai bas...



Par sabke samjhe par Naveen bohat himat kar ke wo envolp kholta hai...


End of part 4



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