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Posted: 18 years ago
nice intro
just loved 2 way u have presented sujal
continue soonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice intro
just loved 2 way u have presented sujal
continue soonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
saara dear me waiting for you to continue... please continue... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
saraa please continue soon 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
when ur gona continue...plz continue soon... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

guys dont cry yaar i am done working on the first part!!!!!! here it is...i hope u guys like it......ENJOY


There's a big garden showed with two ladies walking and talking their faces are shown they are none other than TULSI and VEENA!!!. They were talking very peacefully and then they sit down on the grass. After a little while they hear some noise coming from the BASKETBALL court. They both look at each other and make a not again face.

Tulsi: Hogayi subah aur inka shor bhi shuru hogaya

Veena: haan. Aur abhi aayega koi nah koi aur aik doosrey ki complain karain gay

Just then a boy and a girl enter there arguing!!!!

Girl: ball shoot karney sey pehlay 3 passes karney hotey hain

Boy: abbey oyee…apni taraf sey rules nah banaao

Girl: abbey kisko bolay badey ho toh kya hua choton ki bhi izzat hoti hai!!!BADNAM KARKE RAKHA HAI CHOTON KO

Boy: TWINOOO

Girl: kiski twin hoon main

Boy: tum sach main sujal ki behn jaisi lagti hoo

Girl: lagti ho sey kya matlab hai main sujal bhayyia ki hi behn hoon. KRIPA GAREWAL

Just then girl is shown frm her shoes to top….hmmm shoes are JOGGERS/SNEAKERS……she is wearing a track suit like (u knw those loose pajama's( she is none other than NEHA i mean KRIPA

Boy: mujhey pata hai!!!

Girl: abhi toh aur bht kuch pata lagwana hai tumhain!!!!

Boy: kya matlab??? (confused)

Girl: mera matlab tumhian usss naye rule k baadey main nahiin pata tha nahhh abh pata lagwaoon gi abhi rukoo mumma aur aunty sey keh k tumhari team ko disqualify karwati hoon!!!!!!

She runs where tulsi and veena are sitting!!!

Kripa: Mummaaa iss ko batayie naya rule kya hai!!

Veena: naya rule yeh hai k tumhain 3 passes k baad hi ball basket main dalney ki ijazat hai!!!!NOT BEFORE THT!!!

Kripa makes faces at angad!!!

Boy: likin aunty jab yeh naya rule banna tha tab mujhey inform nahiin kiya gaya ta!!!

Kripa: mumma yeh apni ghalti nahiin manney ga kyinki yeh LADKA HIAN NAH!!!

Boy: haan toh kya hua magar tum ladki ho iska check karwana padey ga!!

Kripa chodongi nahiin bhayyyia ko anney do ohir dekhna…….

Boy (putting his arm forward) : pakdo!!!

Kripa: kyun??

Boy: arey bhudddu pakdo gi nahiin toh chodo gi kaisay!!!! (HE STARTED LAUGHING)

Kripa : (in anger) ANGADDDDDDDDDD!!!!

The boy is shown he is wearinggg track suit tooo and nike's sneakers!!!its IQBAL aka ANGAD!!!

Angad: yupp mera nam angad hi hai magar thoda pyaar sey bulaoo!!!!!

Kripa: bhayyia ko aaney d phir tum khudh hi chup hojao gey!!

Angad: main aur tumharey bhia k saamney chupp IMPOSSIBLE

Kripa: bhayyia k saamney impossible POSSIBLE kaisay hojata hai!!!(she started laughing)

Angad: main uss sey darta nahiin hon bas izzat karta hoon

Kripa: hmmm….sahi…izzat aur tum…….(she started laughing again)

Just then man is shown entering in the garden!!!! (I wont give the intro since its a lot of writing and wast of time so I will straight away with some suspense write HIS name) wearing black track suit looking dashing is wearing the sneakers!!!!! Kripa goes and hugs him!!!!he is none other than SUJAL!!!

Sujal: kaun kiski izzat nahin karta???

Anag: kaun??(gluping his saliva)

Kripa: arey tum toh yeh keh rahey they k main kisi sey nahiin darta aur SUJAL sey toh bilkul bhi nhaiin

Angad: main…..main ney aisa kab kaha???

Sujal: angaddd dudeee…take it easy…mujhey pata hai tumhain mujh sey dar nahin lagta….aur lagna bhi nhaiin chahiye……

Angad: dekha kripa…..tumhara bhai tum sey zayada meri baat manta hai!!

Kripa: who toph hai….tumhain bht support kartey haiaur mujhey bilkul nahiin kartey…….i am reallllly angry with u bhayyia…..magar main khush bhi hoon kyunki besaharaa logon ko sahara dena chahiye………aur mujhey (she looks at angad who was ready to run after her…)

Kripa ran as fast as she could kyunki agar pakdi gayi toh bache gi nahiin!!!!!!!

Sujal: yeh dono bhi na bilkul PAGAL hain….bachon ki tarahan har waqt ladey rehtey hain…

Sujal just then noticed tht veena and tulsi are looking at him and smiling so he smiled baq

Sujal: good morning mom…morning aunty

And then he bents down to take their aashirwaad!!!!!

Ok I think bht lamba hogaya……baaqi ka kal…….

COMING UP: Kashish, Kavya and Karan's entry!!!!and more of the family fun…..

Waiting for u guys to comment!!!!!!

sorry for the errorsss!!!!!!



Saraa 😆

Edited by rajeev_eijaz - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
PHEWWW THT WAS LONGG IT TOoK ME 2 HOURS JUST TO WRITE THT MUCHHH 😆


waiting to see loadfs of lost members replies!!!!




Saraa
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Posted: 18 years ago
soch rahi thi ke tum itna waqt kyun laga rahi ho....ab samaj mein aaya!!! tht was such a brillant n mind blowing part lol loved the entries of them 3 😃 it was simply great!!! nw dont tke forever wiv da next part samji 😡 jus jokin 😛 cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey saraa it was awesome.....great i loved the way angand and kripa fight cute. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

soch rahi thi ke tum itna waqt kyun laga rahi ho....ab samaj mein aaya!!! tht was such a brillant n mind blowing part lol loved the entries of them 3 😃 it was simply great!!! nw dont tke forever wiv da next part samji 😡 jus jokin 😛 cont sooon 👏

arey yaar waqt nahiin GHANTEY lagey they jsut to write this OMG!!and wen i posted and looked at the quantity i was like tht is not at all gonna fill surii and rach's tommy😆adn i have this stupid drama presentation tomorrow and after tht i am a free bird.....though i am a lil nervous!!!!😆THANKXX ALOTTT i wil try....nahiin...i will post the next part tomorrow!!!!

Saraa

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