ARSHI TS: Forever,Together:Completed/Thnx NOTE pg 139 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
First of all welcome back di🤗missed u nd ur story a lot🤗finally u back with bang😆
Wow what a TS di...i just cant stop laughing😆😆...u should write more funny ts like this di...
Nd the meeting of arshi well janha arshi ho wanha unka milap bina fight k kese na ho😆nd khushi's monolouge abt him..😆😆...nd the way his father introduce her...truely jhansi ki rani..bt already clean bold the great Asr by her jhansi ki roop😳😆
Aha my mozo darling ki reincarnation hoke molly hogayeee nd chasing dhooni..what a name selection di😆😆
Aww that neha baby is so cute nd adorable nd Dr balraj himself is a funny man..😆
Seriously di thoroughly enjoy every bit of it...
Just looking forward for some rabba vey between jhansi ki rani nd Mr aram talab urff Mr angry janam urff The smitten raizada by jhani's beaury nd innocence😳😉
Continue soonish di..cnt wait for next😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Beautiful and exhilarating👏
Love the ambience of the Banner, very captivating and that hooked me right there.A side of extreme pain and A side of a great relief.Two sides, you can feel it even through their jokes.

A person who laughs or jokes a lot is the one who actually tries to hide his /her pain under these layers.That seems Khushi and even Dr.Balraj.


Character selection is very refreshing and new 😊

So looking forward to it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
awesome concept.. ...
loved it...
continue soon.,...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was so Happy to see you with another story on Arshi.😊
It was Amazing Ts.😊
The Whole Part was so interesting.😊
The Banner,Pics and the Title was so Nice.😊
Please Contiuue soon.
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Awesome update. Loved it.
Anjali is in depression bcoz of shyams truth.
Arnav met with an accident.
Khushi took him to her house.
Her blabbering and scolding was so cute.
Arnav was lost in her beauty and innocence.

Waiting for next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Awesome update. Loved ur new story n all the characters.. Shyam betrayed anjali.. She has suffered miscarriage n is in hospital. Arnav 's loves his di so much.. He is feeling so helpless n hurt seeing his di in such condition. Khushi entry n arshi meet was excellent. Loved khushi's talktive nature n innonence. Neha, molly,Dr. Balraj n buaji characters are superb.. Khushi took arnav to her home for aid.. Her family environment made arnav smile. Araam tanab, angry janab arnav got 2cute nick names frm her. So neha is orphan. I think khushi is also orphan here. Is dr. Balraj is their neighbour r he married buaji. Interesting precap. Continue. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Really very amazing dear !!! Well done!! ❤️ Nice to see you sweetheart!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
wowww...
another beautiful n sweeet story by u...
can't wait for the next part..
khushi is adorable...
continue soon...
n
thanks a lot for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a beauty Faiqu! ⭐️ I was totally bowled over!😃 Reading this is going to be such fun. The new characters, the kid and the dog are so endearing. Khushi is ekdum pagal! LG seems to have acquired a few more names courtesy Khushi. Bechara seems to be gonewa already😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Loved it.
waiting for more
thanks for the pm

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