Indradhanush - Page 109

Hot and cold that's what I feel

Mujhe Aaj Neel thoda self centred sa laga...I guess it's the wrong word to use, but I felt that for someone who has been obsessing over the fact that he needs to see Suvi, is so super attracted towards her, would want at least texting relationship if nothing else, he did respond coldly. Agreed that his in-laws are over and he's busy and its down memory lane etc etc, but it's not right naa. Wo Bechaari ne Aaj khud initiative liya and you kind of behave as if she is just some casual office person asking questions and you answer in monosyllables!!!! Not done pandit ji. If this is one thing he wants, he needs to work at it, not according to his own convenience or nothing else to do. A bit miffed at him. Feel so much for Suvi, wo kis se apni loneliness baatein??? Suvi Jane de use, let him obsess over his wife, it's his right to do so but you leave him alone, dont give him bhaav. If he wants you he needs to,prove himself!

TRANSITIONS

Concern in their hearts discernment in their eyes

Hope for his future and respect for his struggle

Wherever he goes love and care seem to arrive

Scorn in her heart censure in her eyes

Malice and ill will towards her and prayers she suffers

Whispered conjectures, self styled moral guardians troll her

Men crave one thing from her pass lecherous glares

Volunteer help with clear expectations in return

Misery seems to precede her ensuring simple pleasures are denied

He had shown through his actions, persisted in expressing

The difference she was making how the craving for her was driving him sleepless

She cares for the child more than him is possessive of the attention he receives from payal and her likes

The feeling for and of the other not longer restricted to the heart alone

They are each aware of the way the other feels beneath the clothes

When the equation is altered and responses become measured

She will recoil and return to her insecure state feeling rejected, unwanted and uncared.

Sorry neel you did very wrong...i cant understand him..he is the one obessed over suvi...now behavong lik this..suvi dont give any bhav to him now on...let him deceide what he want...nisha why did you make suvi very lonely...she does not have even one friend..all are obessed with nupur how will suvi live there..plz nisha get her one guy friend..who dont expect any physical things from her...plz introduce one temporary charcter...it will increase suvi confidence...and also neel...plz consider my request nisha...because of your writing i feel for them as they are all...

Originally posted by: ishruhi

Then what happened?????

Good question!!!
😉

This is nooottt fair...update venam...😭

Nisha,
Suvi, ke dukh door karo please.

Too busy to greet

He wasnt at work on Friday either, he worked from home and met with new "Accounts" over the phone and and conducted web meetings

She didnt pursue him, she let go after Thursday evening

When her daughter got better on Friday, (she took Friday off too)


She looked at tickets to Nasik to go stay in Aai Baba's house for a couple weeks

It was still locked up, Varsha wanted to come by to "take what she wants" and she hadnt been in 3 years

Suvi had moved to Delhi almost 18 months ago, her parents had passed one year after another after she had had Aadhya
They owned the house, and it had everything in it

Suvi went from Mumbai occasionally for 4 or 5 days to clean up
A trusted neighbor had the keys she got it cleaned every few weeks and opened the windows, stayed a night, sent pictures of the birds in the back yard or the mango tree Varsha and Suvi had planted
She had asked the neighbor to take all the mangoes, the best mangoes money could buy

The neighbor was not wealthy by any means so they couldnt send her more than one box every year

She went to her computer and looked up pictures of the house and the trees and flowers
It had a jasmine hedge upfront

The kitchen pictures were her favorite
Aai would turn and give her a sweaty smile as she sauteed fish
Suvechha had 100s of pictures of Aai in the kitchen

She was gorgeous to look at short like Suvechha but curly hair and clear skin
A lil plump with age she was buttery soft

Suvechha felt the cheek on the picture

"I can smell the fish Aai" she spoke in Marathi

And email popped in her in box, she checked the school had a "summer fair" at the school on Sat & Sunday
She had been getting notification for a while she was contemplating since it was too hot to do anything
They had attached pictures of last year's fair it was all in shade with misters and food and chilled drinks


She reluctantly took Aadhya on Sunday evening as the fair was from 5-10 PM both evenings

They wandered and did all the "fair" things

Aadhya sepnd Rs. 214 worth of tickets and won a yoyo and a pair of blingy Disney sunglasses
She wanted a fluffy teddy bear that was frankly too gaudy

But Aadhya was so weak and vulnerable after being sick she caved in and bought it for her

Nihar came running slamming into her

"Hi!" he waved

"HI! Nihar" she hugged him back warmly, she didnt recognize the scent on him

"My Nani Ma and bauji are here" he said pointing to a crowd

"Aai can we go to his house?" Aadhya whined

"U have school tomm, three more weeks..." Suvi counted

"Aunty... please stay here" Nihar begged

But she didnt... she didnt have anything to say to Neel's in laws
She didnt know why she had to meet them
She turned in the opp direction and walked away with her daughter

Around 45 mjinutes later around 9 PM ish Nihar accosted her

"YOU never waited" he said shocked

"I am sorry, we thought u were going to be long" Suvi explained

"BAUJEEE" he shouted

Bhuvan turned and Ragini did too and they approached

"This is my friend"

Ragini chuckled

"Aapki friend to bahut pyaari hai" she kneeled

"I winned a pink teddy bear" Aadhya explained

"I can see that" Ragini smiled

"Suvechha" she said

"Hum inke Nana beta" Bhuvan smiled

"Hello" Suvi nodded

"I am her daughter" Aadhya explained

Ragini burst out laughing

"Aapke baalon se to aap koi aur ho nahi saktey" she said

"She speaks Marathi and a bit of English" Suvi said sheepishly

Ragini looked like she was connecting dots

"We have lots of Marathi friends" Bhuvan said

Suvi nodded

"U have prety hai like your Mom" Ragini said

"I AM PRETTY" Aadhya declared
Nihar shut his mouth and laughed

"Kaise jaante ho aap inko?" Ragini asked Nihar

"Same school" Suvi said smiling

"Ofcourse" Ragini chuckled

"We live in Sector 40, you must come" Ragini invited

Nihar chased Aadhya around Suvi, so he didnt hear the invite

"Barobar" Suvi said

Catching her daughter before she fell down

Neel walked over with cotton candy, he looked like one in a green cotton shirt and casual khakis,
before he could take in her appearance in a embroidered skirt and a sleeveless blouse

Suvi waved good bye and walked away...

At 11:28 PM on Sunday night

"To busy to greet?" he asked over text

"I live in society" Suvi said quietly

"I KNOW where you live Suvechha" he said
That full name irked her

"Hum late ho gaye" she said
"Seriously?" he asked

"Aap busy hoyenge" she said

"Is that why I am asking you why you couldnt greet?" he asked sarcastically

"Are they enjoying their trip?" she asked politely

"I think so, they love Nihar" he said

"He looked very happy" she said

There was a pause...

"Good night... back to work tomorrow" she said

"Sorry mere ko bola maine" she clarified

He called her

"Hello" she said without looking

"I am going to be at work too" he said gruffly

"Oh?" she said

"I am not sure... but something is off" he said

She got of the bed and opened the bedroom door and went to the balcony

"Nai to" she said

"You have relatives... aapka family aaya hai.. so I dont want to sound like I will see you at office" she said

"I SAW you TWO feet away and you turned and walked away" he said

Her heart did a somersault

"Did you tell my in laws the kids go to the same school?" he asked

"Haa to jaate hai na?" she asked

"U didnt tell them you work for the same company?"

"Umm... tabhi tak to main waha se chali gayi" she said

"I am having my direct reports over for dinner Wed night, so they can meet everyone" he said

"Mera shaayad mushqil hoyega" she said

"Why?" he asked

" Kanika ki Mom ne text kiya woh abhi sick ho gayi... itna jaldi dono ko ek saath nai rakhne ka" she said

"Cant you bring her?" he asked

Suvi makes me cry.
I want her to be happy for selfish reasons.
Her being happy will make me happy.
Neel please don't hurt her unknowingly also.