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Part 37 (b) special haithiyaar for Sweety singh



pritesh- (whispers) shishir, mitesh bhaiya,grishma chalo abhi yaha sab senior citizen ghum ghum chakri babu laao bakri karne waale hai...

grishma- par pritesh yaha toh kisine gadbad nahi ki aur nahi kisis ne ghotala kiya hai toh phir kyu sab ghum jaayenge..

shishir- haan pritesh abhi toh humne koi galti nahi hoti.. ab toh sabko patah ki hum abdi door se aaye hai..toh phir ghum jaao ghum jaao bhi nahi hota...

pritesh-(dramatically) shishir...ab mujeh phir se tujeh thode insaan banne ke tuitions dene padenge.. chalo mere saath..
kids except hemant leaves...

ghotalas doesn't understand what does hobaadad means and asks the meaning of it...

bhavna aunty- aree hoobaada matalb.. woh aise jo hulchal mach jaati hai woh...

vasant- haan par mein kya karu bhavna aunty ab yeh dekhiye na hemant monalisa ko annalisa keh raha ab aisa thodi ne chalta hai...

hemant- nai nai papa who toh paralysis hai jisko dekhne log duniya ke bahut kone kone se aate hai..aur photo bhi kichvaate hai...

vasant- nai hemant ...aise nahi chalta beta... Who monalisa hai aur haan paralysis mein bhi log dekh ne toh aate hai...aur bolte hai... Lo bolo intne bhale che insaan ko paralysis hogaya.. kal tak toh ache khaase chalte phirte te...

bhavna aunty( clapping hands) oo ghotala bhai have halo halo jaldi samjhaao hemant ko abhi baat ko ghumaao mat.. kabhi bhi rajasthan express ki tarah ulti patri pe chadh jaate hai...

ohja uncle-(clapping hands) k eke ke keh rahi hai bhavna bhabhi .. ki mein ulti patri pe lejaata hoon?

Bhavna aunty- haas toh wadi...

Lajo off ho.. bas kijiye sab.. sab kya baat ko dusri patri pe lejaarahe hai.. hum jitni der karenge uthna hi late hogaa 2015 ko dhoodhne mein.. vasant bhai aap hemant ko samjhaaye ...

Vasant- haan... haan... (to hemant) beta woh monalisa hai... monalisa ..woh jo aise muskuraata chehra hai paris mein woh monalisa hai..aur paralysis matalb ki ek insaani bimaari hai...jismein aise insaan ka ek bhaag ka sharir statue hojaata hai...
Hemant- haan.. haan wohi wohi.. na papa jiss mein insaan statue hojaata hai... aur uss mein bhi sab doctor annalisa karte hai na..

Vasant (facepalms) phir se... (opens board) hemant... who monalisa hai... Annalisa nahi...hai beta ..

Hemant- nai nai papa woh annalisa hai ...

Vasant-aeee gende... mein kya keh raha hon aur tu kya samjh raha hai...

Hemant- hawww(hemant starts doing hafu hafu and stumping his foot on ground)

Bhadresh- (sleepy) aeee hemant jaraa shaanti se kar meri nind bigad rahi hai...

Sharad-bhaiya realx realx ...logically mujeh hemant ki baat sahi lag rahi bhaiya ..dekhiye woh comssioner sweety singh ko monalisa kyu dekhne ko kahnege.. isse torture kaha hoga...yeh hemant kuch aur kehna chahta hai ...

Hemant haan papa wohi toh mein annalisa.. keh raha hoon..woh jo report aati hai. Uski...

Ronnie-(suddenly)(loudly) aeee mere ko patah hai man... hemant tum kya bolna chaha raha hai ...hemant tum analysis keh raha hai na...who analysis hai..

Hemant- heeein..

Ronnie- dekha... dekha.. mera hindi kitna kaam aaya...

Liza- Ronnie itna khush hone ka nahi man.. tumhara sirf ek baar hi kaam aaya hai... ab chalo chalo zyaada khush mat ho tum.. vasant bhai tum continue karo ...man

Ohja uncle- (laughs) areee baapre iska matalb sweety singh ka toh bahut bura haal hoga Ronnie tu samjha ke nahi...vasant ghoatala maan na padega kya paasa phenka hain tune...

Vasant- nai ohja uncle mere paas paasa kaha hai.. mein toh laaya bhi nahi hoon..sharad tere paas hai paasa..

Sharad-0(checking his pockets) nai bhaiya nahi hai shayad bag mein hoga...

Ohja uncle- areee ooo jhallaro... maareh kehne ka matalb hai ki kya idea socha hai.. isse toh sweety singh phat se dhoodh nikaalega who dono chor ko... hooon?

Vasant and sharad- hooon.

Ronnie-okay man chalo ab rakhta hai.. phir baat karte hai..
After the call...

Lajo- chalo yeh acha hua vasant bhai ne bahut hi acha idea socha hai...

Kuku enters ghotala house..and hears lajo ..

Kuku- konsa idea lajo ji?

All are surprised with kuku's question...

All stares her for a minute...

Kuku- areee kya hua aap sab mujeh ghur kar kyu dekh rahe kuch galat pucha mein ne?

Bhadresh- areee kukuji... who toh hum sab bas aise hi discuss kar rahe the...

Bhadresh stands up and asks kuku to sit ...

Bhairavi- haan aaye na kukuji baithye...

Bhavna aunty- (whisper) chakudi tu kya kuku ko baithne ko keh rahi... aur zyada bhaav mat de ..

Bhairavi- toh barobar...

Bhadresh- aree kitni pyaas lag rahi hogi... mein paani leke aata hoon...

Kuku- no no thank you its okay bhadreshji aap itni mehnat mat kijiye...

Bhadresh quickly seats besides kuku..

Bhavna aunty and others are surprised ... they give deadly glare to bhadresh.. he stands up and stands next to jacky...

kuku- kya hua vasant ji kya idea dekar gaye hai?

Hemant- kukuji papa ne idea diya hai ki mein aur bhiaravi didi sweety singh uncle ke thane ek do din ke liye rehne jaaye agar sweety singh uncle ne who do chor ko nahi pakda toh...

Kuku- (surprised) oh my god really??? (murmurres) bichare sweety singhji...

Liza- kya kaha sunnai nahi diya..

Kuku- who... kuch kuch nai mein toh bas soch rahi thi ki aise kaise chor hai jo pakde nahi jaa rahe..

Jacky- wohi toh bade shaatir chor hai...kukuji aap patah lagaa sakte hai?

Kuku-mein? Mein ? mein kaise patah lagaa sakti hoon?

Bhavna aunty- who kya hai na kukujii...ab jyada bholi banne ki jaroorat nahi hai.. hame patah hai kit um ek part time detective ho... aur pichli baar bhi tum aayi thi toh jasoosi karne aayi thi.. ab who hame kaise patah chala who baad mein batayenge

Varsha- (whispers) bhavna aunty aapko patah hai ki kuku jasoos hai?

Bhavna aunty- (whispers) pakka nahi patah hai mujeh aur jacky ko doubt hai uspe thode din se uspar nazar rakh rahe hai

Varsha- oh!!!..

Kuku- (in mind) oh god.. yeh sab inhe kaise patah..acha yahi hoga ki abhi inki baat maan loon.. phir patah karti hoon ki kaise patah chala unhe..(to bhavn aunty) dekhiye haan mein part time detective hoon toh patah karti hoon ki who chor ke barre mein...par aap please mujeh colony se mat nikaalye.

Liza- thik thik hum nahi nikaalenge ttumhe par tumko hamara kaam karna hoga.

Kuku okay..

After kuku leaves...

@ next day...

In police station...

Hemant and Bhairavi are chit chatting with jailers and criminals from outside...

Sweety Singh is weeping silently in corner..and his aids are trying to pacifying him...

Constable- nai sahab roye mat..areee ulta aaapka kaam Kam hojaayega...

Sweety singh- (crying)nai Pandey .. areee nai re mein issliye nahi to Raha hoon ki Bhairavi parjaai aur Hemant yaha aaye hai areee yeh toh khushi ke aasoon hai indono ke aane se Sab log thik se kaam karne Lage hai..

Pandey- Haan sahabji... Sab log har ek case Ko jaldi jaldi solve kar rahe hai...

Sweety singh- Haan chalo chalo Abhi woh do chor Ko pakdna hai warna mere par shaamat aajayegi...

Sweety Singh and constable Pandey leaves...

Here a criminal is crying and asks jailer to take away Hemant and Bhairavi.

Criminal- areee jailer Saheb mein Apne mummy ki Kasam khata hoon mein aajke baad kisi ladki Ko nahi chedunga ..saamne se jaake ISS seher ki saari ladkio Ko apni behen banaunga...raakhi bandhvaa UNGA..bas aAP Mujeh jaane do.

Jailer- nahi..tumhari Sajaa puri nahi Hui...

Criminal- areee Saheb bhaav kyu khaate ho..bas yeh lijiye aapka batwaa(taking out wallet from near bed ) bas yeh lijiye aapka batwaa mmujeh jaane do

Jailer-(checks his pocket) kya ..? Mera batwaa maar Liya ab toh aur ladi Sajaa milegi...

Jailer calls out to bhairavi and Hemant...

Jailer- Bhairavi bhabhi ...areee yeh waale bhai Sahab ne mera batwaa maar Liya AAP ..unhone samjhaaye ki Aisa nahi karna chahiye...

Bhairavi- kya batwaa maar Liya ..very bad... Very bad...aapko Aisa nahi karna chahi..chori karna paap hai... Areee acha kuch kaam dhandha kar lete ..mein aapko business ke tips deti hoon...sunn Lena ache se...

Hemant - Haan Haan ..aaghori karna paap hai bolo 10 Baar...

Criminal- ghori?? Aaghori kya hai ? Mein aaghori nahi hoon...

Hemant- hawww kitna jute Bolte hai uncle..

Criminal- hawww mein kaha jhut bol Raha hoon ...

Hemant-(starts to cry) Bhairavi...didi...Bhairavi didi unhone mera copy cat kiya... ..aaa ...aaa

Bhairavi gets angry...

Bhairavi- OOO criminal bhaisahab aapne mere bhai Ko kyu rulaaya kyu uska copy cat kiya...

Hemant starts to cry harder ..some havaldaars gather around Hemant asks him about what happened..

Bhairavi and Hemant narrates them the matter.

Other constables then start scolding that criminal...


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Part 38 (a) Napthelin balls ka paani

Ohja uncle--lajo shruti aur Megha kaise hai?

Lajo- abhi sab thik hai ..Shruti abhi hamare Ghar par hi rahegi...Megha bhi thik hai...usse chot Nahi aayi hai...

Sharad- lajo aunty woh Sweety Singh ne pakda woh do chor Ko...

Lajo- nahi ..Abhi tak uska kuch Patah chala ..Lekin Sweety Singh ji koshish kar Raha hai...toh thaare Ko chinta karne ki jaroorat na hai...

Manav- Haan aur mein puri koshish kar Raha hoon ap sab waha apna mission Pura kijiyega...

Ohja uncle- Haan thik thik chora par mein kehta hoon ki Tu apna Puri army force lagaa dena Woh Dono Chor ko i pakdne ke liye..aur Haan agar maarih Megha aur aur maarih Shruti bahu ka khyaal ralhna aur Nahi rakha toh mein taareh ko APNI wasiyat se nikaal doonga...samjha...aur uske gawaah yeh lajo, Vasant ghotala, logical ghotala,aur Ronnie hogaa...sunn lo Sab Dhyan se...

Manav- papa..yeh aap kya keh rahe mein khayal rakhunga na..aur yeh kya Shruti bahu Shruti bahu lagaa rakha hai Woh meri dost hai..

Lajo- rehne de chore maareh ko sab patah hai Woh taarih dost Nahi taraih girlfriend aur mein ne toh pehle hi usse bahu maan m liya..hai...

Ohja uncle- Haan aur Nahi toh ..taareh ko ke laage hai ki Pura din mein khaana khaave hoon aur kuch na kare hoon..maareh ko sab patah hai.......

Manav- (doesn't look at ohja uncle) papa ..aisa kuch Nahi hai..matalb ki hai ...matalb ki abhi tak ..hum ne...matalb...

Ronnie-vasant ,ohja uncle Dekho..apna manav bolne mein meri tarah atak Raha hai...

Vasant- aree Ronnie kaha woh kaha galat hindi bola hai

Manav- aisa..kuch Nahi aap sab kya baat ko divert kar rahe ho..Jacky sharad kaho na Aur vasant bhaiya aap toh meri side lo...

Vasant- areee mein Teri hi side mein hoon manav...

Sharad- Haan aur hum kaha baat ko divert kar rahe hai

Jacky- mein aapko na BAAD mein saari baat batata hoon ki manav kaise Shruti ke saamne kuch Nahi bolta

Ohja uncle- areee waah maareh ko BAAD mein batana Jacky...

Manav- areee aap sab kya mere piche pad Gaye hai...okay thik hai mein accept Marta hoon I love Shruti aur Woh bhi mujeh pyaar Karti hai par mein aap sab ko jhuthi aash Nahi dena Chahta..mein me Shruti ko abhi tak aliens ke baare mein Nahi batata..par..I don't Woh sach sunne ke BAAD kaise react karegi

Vasant- manav beta tum hamare wajah se APNI zindgi mat bigaado. Tum sab sach batado Shruti ko jitni jaldi hosake..aur sacahi sunne ke BAAD agar Woh hame accept Nahi Karti toh hum colony se Chale jaayenge..mein Nahi Chahta ki hamari wajah se tumhara pyaar tum se door jaaye.. ..Sacha pyaar paana aajke duniya mein bahut muskil hai manav..mein Nahi Chahta ki hamari se tumhRi zindgi bigde...

Sharad- Haan manav ... Tum sab sach batado Shruti ko .0hir Jo hoga hum Dekhe lenge...

Jacky- Haan manav..aur mujeh pakka yakin Woh hame accept karegi..mein me Dekha hai Kabhi aliens ki movies ya phir unki baat aati hai toh Shruti hamesha Khush hojaati hai aur Kabhi Kabhi toh defend bhi karti hai..

Lajo- Aunty- maareh ko bhi laage hai Woh aap sab ko accept karegi...

Manav- mein baat kaarunga usse...mujeh bhi yeh baat khaye jaa rahi hai ki mein me yeh baat usse ab take chuppa ke rakha hai...

Sharad- manav tum tension mat karo Woh accept karegi..mein toh kehta hoon ki tum Sahi time same par usse sab sach batana...

Manav- hmm okay..

After phone call...

Here @ ghotala house

Varsha and Jacky are putting napthelin balls under sofa and carpets...

When Bhavna aunt video calls them ....

Varsha jupms on call button .....

Bhavna aunty- aeee varsha aur Jacky tum dono it chotte chotte Kyu lag rahe ho...koi Naya feature dala hai phone mein......

Varsha-nai nai bhavna aunty hum dono na aise chotte hue hai sofa aur carpet ke niche napethelin balls rakh rahe hai ...

Bhavna aunty- Hein??? Napethelin balls Kyu?

Varsha- Bhavna aunty hum sabko aise napethelin balls ki khusbhu na bahut pasad hai toh room freahner ki jagah use karke hai.....

Bhavna aunty- room freahner ki jagah??? Aksar hum log woh perfume use karke hai...aur tum log napthelin balls...khair Jo bhi hai lekin napethelin balls ko khaana mat woh bahut jehrila hota hai ...agar mooh mein chala Gaya you tum logo ko kuch Ulta asar hojaayega....

Jacky-. Nai nai...Bhavna aunty hum aisa nahi karenge....aapko patah hai humne ne iska churaa banaya hai aur room freshner ki bottle mein paani ke saath milakar chidkte hai bahut pppppp khusbhu aati hai... bhairavi Didi ko humne churaa Diya hua hai

Bhavna aunty - haaye haaye....aisa kar rahe ho tum dono...mujeh chakudi Ko warn karna hoga ki khaana samjhbke use na kare . Khair yeh sab chodo mein khud bhul gayi tum dono ke chakkar mein Kya bol Rahi thi mein....

Bhavna aunty coughs a little...she asks bhairavi to bring water...

Bharavi comes with water....

Bhavna takes it drinks...

Bhairavi- hiiii Jacky aur varsha bhabhi ....kaise ho aap dono Kya Kar rahe ho aap dono

Varsha - bhairavi hum napthelin balls rakh rahe...hai ...tum nee woh churaa try Kiya....

Bhairavi -haan try Kiya na bahut hi mast hai varsha bhabhi .... . Churee ko paani mein Mila ke spray kiya

Abhi abhi pani ke glass PE jug pe sab chidk Kar laa Rahi Hoon....phir dusre room mein napthelin balls ka powder Wala spray chidka na...

Bhavna aunty- Kya????

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Part 38 (b)

Bhavna aunty cuts the call..

Bhavna aunty- bhairavi tune mujeh itna zehrila paani pilla Diya?

Bhavna aunty coughs...

Bhairavi- nai baa woh zehrila kaha hai...sirf thoda taste ajeeb hai baa..par aapke liye faayad kaarak hai..issliye toh dekhiye mein nee jug pe aur aapke paani ke glass PE bhi powder daala hai...

Bhavna aunty immediately puts down the glass.

Bhavna aunty- Kya??? Tune....glass aur jug PE bhi daala powder ..

Bhavna aunty starts coughing more...

Bhavna aunty- haaye haaye chakudi Tere mein akal hai ki nahi...tune mujeh woh powder Kyu khilaaya mein mar jaaungi... Chakudi .......mein Mar jaaungi..doctor ko phone lagaa....doctor..phone lagaa...chakudi...Liza Ko phone lagaa..lajo..lajo....

Bhairavi- nai baa...kuch nahi hogaa yeh to tested aur with full gurantee ke saath hai kuch nahi hogaa... ghotala family ne toh iski rasid bhi di hai

Bhavna aunty - areeee ooo ghanchakkar ghotalafamily to pure pure Bina akal ke hai insaani maamlo mein aur tu bhi unke jaise ho Rahi ... Tu jaa yaha SE mujeh doctor ke pass jaane de.... Mujeh saas lene mein taklif ho Rahi hai....haaye ram oo Maadi re!

At same time kuku enters Bhatt house.....

Kuku- oh my God Kya hua Bhavna aunty ji aap itne ghabraage hue Kyu hai...

Bhavna aunty-aree acha hua kuku tu aagayi..mujeh abhi ke abhi ke doctor pass le jaa warna mein Mar jaaungi....

Kuku- oh my God..Kya hua aapko....heart attack aaya hai...??Kya hua hai?

Bhavna aunty- areeee yeh dakaan nee mujeh zeher de Diya hai... ..mujeh phataphat hospital lejaa..

Kuku- what zeher???bhairavi... Ji maan na padega. Haan aapne to apni saas ko Siddha zeher de Diya maarne ke liye....Kya Bhavna ji aapko itna satati hai ki Siddha direct zeher de Diya..itna pareshan Kiya hai Bhavna aunty ne aapko !

Bhairavi- haaye haaye aisa Kyu karungi mein? Mein Kyu maarungi Meri baa ko....mein Kyu zeher Doongi..mein toh meri baa ki takat bada Rahi hoon stamina bada Rahi hoon

Bhavna aunty- nai nai...abhi tune mujeh zehrila paani Pilaaya nahi rasna Pilaaya hai na .

Bhairavi-nai nai baa aap aisa Kyu bol Rahi hai...mein Kyu rasna pilaaungi aapko ..aapko rasna pasand nahi hai....

Bhavna aunty- aeee daffod .........chod....(to kuku) mujeh doctor ke pass lejaao.....abhi..... Yeh napethelin balls ka powder Wala paani mujeh pilaa Diya hai.. jald se jald SE doctor ke paas leja..

Kuku- haan haan chaliye Bhavna aunty ji jald se jald aapko doctor ke pass lejaana hoga....

Bhairavi- ek min..ek min...baa aap doctor ke paas Kyu jaa Rahi hai. Natural . Napethelin ke powder ka paani se aapko kuch nahi hogaa..baa

Bhavna aunty & kuku - Kya???

Bhavna aunty- chakudi yeh tu Kya bol Rahi hai ..jaraa soch samjh ke bol... napethelin balls ka powder kaise mujeh Shakti dega

Bhairavi- baa mein ne aapko natural gluscoe Wala paani Diya tha aur thoda paani ke glass aur jug PE chidka tha....

Kuku- matalb woh napethelin balls ke powder Wala paani aapne nahi Pilaaya Bhavna aunty ko???

Bhairavi - haaye haaye kukuji mein Kyu pilaaungi napethelin balls ke powder Wala paani ko...

Bhavna aunty- toh woh napethelin balls ke powder ka paani nahi tha aur gluscoe ka paani tha?

Bhairavi- Haas toh Wadi....rukiye ( bhairavi bring the bottle) yeh dekhiye baa natural napethelin balls glucose powder.

Bhavna aunty takes the bottle and reads the contents of bottle...

Bhavna aunty- yeh toh Sach me glucose ka powder hai....

Kuku- lekin yeh agar glucose ka powder hai toh phir yeh aisa naam Kyu diya aur iska manufacturer Kon hai

Bhairavi- sochiye sochiye Kon ho sakta hai...baa aur kukuji...hum sab unhe jaante hai!

Bhavna aunty- jaante hai matalab? Bhairavi sahi se batana Kya bolna chahti hai...

Bhairavi - baa Mera matalb hai ki...jis ne yeh banaya hai woh hamare bich hi rehte hai.. yaha colony mein aur hum sab unhe jaante hai baa...woh hamare jaan pechaan ke hai

Bhavna aunty- aisa Kon buddhishaali, bhairavi ke sage hai jisne yeh glucose powder banaya aur aisa naam Diya hai.?

Kuku- haan aur nahi toh aur koi naam dete ..itne saare naam hai ...areee mere naam see bana dete ...mein kitni famous Hoon

Bhavna aunty- aisi galfemi mat rakh..bannanewale bahut sahi Kiya hai tera naam nahi rakha warna loko ko diabetes hojaayega......

Kuku gets angry....

Bhavna aunty- lekin yeh banaya kisne hai? Bhairavi

Bhairavi- baa aap jaanti hai unhe woh aapke apne hai baa...

Bhavna aunty- chakudi aise paheliya mat bhujha siddhe siddhe bol nee Ben ki kisne banaya hai...

Bhairavi- baa yeh hamare ghotala parivaar ne banaya hai...yeh dekhiye manufactured by ghotala family and company issliye toh mein ne aise mast jug PE paani ke glass PE paani mein milaake chidk Diya baa..taaki aap Jo Bhi chizz ko chue usse aapko taakat mile....

Bhavna aunty-haaye haaye yeh ghotala family ne banaya hai..par woh ghanchakkaro nee aisa naam Kyu rakha.... Aur Chalo rakha toh rakha batana toh chahiye tha aur chakudi tune thik se bolna toh tha ki yeh glucose ka paani hai...

Bhairavi- par baa pehle aap hi toh boli thi ki chakudi mein toh chizze dekh ke patah Kar leti Hoon ki ISS mein kuch gadbad hai...areee mein toh paani dekh ke Bata sakti Hoon ki yeh paani mineral hai ya municipality ka paani hai......issliye mujeh lagaa ki aapko paani dekh kr patah chal jaayega ki yeh glucose Wala paani hai ya matke ka paani hai ..

Bhavna aunty- arree daffod woh toh mein nee aise hi keh Diya that...aur tune Sach maan liya ?

Bhairavi- haan..baa

Kuku tries hard to hide her laugh ....

Bhavna aunty glares at her and she stops laughing...

Bhavna aunty- hey bhagwan ab toh kuch bolna bhi paap hai ...yaha

Bharavi-baa aise mat boliye agar aap kuch bolengi nahi to mein kaise samjhungi ki aap Kya chahte ho? Aur aap toh thik SE tarah se ishaare bhi nahi karti baa har baar hum dumbshreads mein haar jaate hai..

Kuku laughs...

Bhavna aunty- chakudi Kya bahaar waalo ke saamne sab pole khol Rahi hai...aur kukuji ab aap ki koi jaroorat nahi hai toh.. bye...bye

Kuku leaves....

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Part 39(a)Ruthna aur manna

@ colony gardern…

Shruti is limping and .manav could not see shruti in pain.. so immediately lifts shruti in his arms.

Shruti- oh my god !!! manav utaaro niche mujeh.. mujeh sharam aa rahi hai… koi delh lega …utharo niche mujeh.

Manav- no.. tum maan nahi rahi ho aur jisko dekhna hai dekhne do koi farak nahi padta mujeh..

Shruti-manav tumhe Abhi kaam or Jaana tha na

Manav- haan but Baad mein jaaunga Abhi ...

Shruti-kyu???Manav mein thin hoon okay tum jaao meri wajah se apna waqt waste mat karo...

Manav- no it's okay ...

Shruti feels gulity as because of her Manav was ignoring his duties because of her..

Shruti- no it's not okay ...tum jaao office mujeh baccho ki tarah treat mat karo okay..mein apna khayal rakh Sakti hoon okay..

Manav - what's this Shruti? tum apna khayal bilkul nahi rakhti isiye phir mujeh tumhe baccho ki tarah treat karna padta hai... ..na toh apni dawaai time or leti hi aur naahi exercise thik se karti hi.

Shruti- what ???mein time se dawaai leti hoon okay ..but tum mujeh baccho ki tarah treat mat karo ..!!!

Manav- (angrily)okay....

Shruti-manav!!dekho please gussa mat ho...but tum ..

Manav cuts in between..

Manav- thik hai agar tumhe yahi lagta hain ki kuch zyada Tum pe Dhyan de Raha hoon toh ab nahi karungaa..

Shruti tries to say something but seeing Manav

Shruti- (in mind) damnn ab mein kya karoor? Manav toh pakka wala ruth aya hai….aunty bhi bahaar gaye hai ab mein kya karu…

Shruti thinks for sometime but she doesn’t get any idea

Meanwhile manav comes in room with some fruits and juice for shrutu he keeps it and is about to leave the room..

Shruti- manav ruko.. I m sorry….

Manav- its okay shruti.. tum yeh fruits kha lo aur phir apni medicines le lena..

Shruti- manav I know tum mujeh se ruthe hue ho issliye mujeh avoid kar rahe ho.and I know meri galti hai.. tum mere liye itna phikar karte ho itna care karte ho aur mein hoon ki ulta tumhe hi daant diya aur ulta sidha bol diya… I am so sorry tum jo sajaaz dena chaho mujeh manjoor hai…

Manav- shruti mujeh der ho rahi hai kaam se bahaar jaa raha hoon aur maa aaye toh unse keh dena ki mujeh der hogi aane mein..

Shruti – okay..aur apna dhyan rakhna ..

Manav leaves..shruti feels bad and decides to make it up for manav..

Later at night…

Lajo is at ghotala house where as shruti prepares fav. Food of manav ..

Manav comes to ohja house he sees shruti is waiting for him…

Shruti – acha hua tum aagaye manav.. mein kabse wait kar rahi thi tumhara..chalo tum dinner karlo..aur phir tumhare liye mein ne bahut hi yummy dessert banaya hai…

Manav is about to speak..

Shruti- aur meri tension mat lo mein ne khanna bhi kga liya hai aur dawaai bhi le li hai..aur isse pehle kit um pucho ki lajo aunty kaha hai toh mein bata doon ki who ghotala house mein hai..aur who aaj raat wahi rehne wale hai..chalo ab jaldi se freshen up ho jaao…

Manav-(in mind) hmm lagta hai ki mujeh mannae ki koshish kar rahi hai.. lekin iss baar mein nahi mane wala .. hamesha apni manmaani chalati hai..aur meri baat toh bilkul bhi nahi sunnti iss baar toh mein nahi maanewala …

Manav-okay..

Shruti was expecting that manav will ask about her taking medicine but he doesn’t he eats silently..

Shruti –(in mind) aree what okay??? Manav toh kuch bol hi nahi raha matalb ki puch bhi nahi raha mujeh ki mein ne dawai li ya nahi… ya phir khanna khaya ya nahi …kuchkarna hogaa kuch sochna hoga.. ki kaise nmanav ko manau..

Shruti calls with megha…

Shruti- megha, tu sahi keh rahi hai mein directly jaa kar baat karti hoon….sahi mein yeh ladke kaise mannte hai honge apni girlfriends ko.. bahut mushkil hai.. mera bichara manav kitna mehnat karta hoga ..

Megha- haan shruti , sahi tune mera bichara Pluto.. kitni mehnat karta hai jabhi mein ruth ti hoon ..

Shruti – mein ne toh ab decide kar liya ki agar aisa kuch hua na toh mein ruthungi nahi..dekho na mujeh kitni mehnat ho rahi ,muskili ho rahi hai manav ko mannae mein…

Megha- haan shruti, sahi mein lekin ab mein nahi ruthungi aur gar ruth bhi gayi na toh phat se maan jaaungi mein..

Shruti- mein bhi.. chal acha abhi rakhti hoon mein manav par yeh cool fruit custard barsaati hoon aur phir baat karti…

Megha- kya?? Shruti toh phir tu pehle manav bhaiya ko chatta de dena ..

Shruti kyu??

Megha- kyu tune hi toh kaha kit u un par fruit custard barsaa ke phir baat karegi toh agar unhone chatta nahi rakha hoga toh jab custard daalegi toh unke kapde kharab honge phir who change karne jaayengi aur uske baad baat karenge tere saath aur kya patah agar woh aur naraz hogaye toh..

Shruti starts laughing at megha ‘s explanation..

Shruti- ( controlling her laugh) oh my god megha… tum na sachi mein bhairavi didi jaise baat ki hai.. mere kehna ka matalb tha ki mein pehle manav ko fruit custard khilaaungi aur phir baat karungi.. fruit custard barsaati hoon who ek kehna ka tarika tha…

Megha- toh barobar!!!

Shruti cuts the call…

Shruti takes two bowls of custard keeps in front of manav ..

He looks questionely towards her..

Shruti- (in mind) ab dekhti hoon .. tum iss yummy fruit custard se kaise bhaagte hai...

Shruti – manav deko mein ne tumhare liye custard banaya hai and I know um iss yummy custard ko ignore nahi kar sakte

Manav- mein baad mein kha loonga ..

Manav leaves and sits in front of tv

Shruti-…areee bade ziddi ho tum..mujeh patah hai .. tum avoid kar rahe ho mujeh..

Manav- mein kaha avoid kar raha hai mein bas tv dekhna chahta.. hoon..news dekhne ne do...

On TV they were showing news about some militants entering India .and being hidden or in any state.

Manav and Shruti gets tensed..

Shruti looks towards Manav.. ..

Shruti- Manav..kya yeh news...

Manav- I can't tell you Shruti.

For a moment they both are silent then

Shruti sits besides manav and starts talking with herself..

Shruti- hmm chalo kisiko toh padi hi nahi yeh yummy cuatrd khaane ki.. mein hi kha leti hoon.. warna bichara custard ko bura lag jaayega..

Manav gives side glances to shruti..

Shruti continues her acts..

Shruti- hmmm bahut hi yummy hai shruti… (pats herself ) waah shruti waah ..kya custard banaya hai..(giving side glances to manav) hmmm kuch logo ko toh yeh mera yummy wala cutard nasib hi nahi hoga.. well mujeh kya..merre liya acha hai.. mujeh aur bhi custard khaane ko milega..

Mananv is badly resisting to eat ..custard..

Shruti sees him.

Shruti- tum kha sakte ho custard ..mujeh dikh raha hai tumhe bahut khaane ki iccha ho rahi hai..

Manav – ji nahi .. mujeh bilkul bhi nahi khanna custard … no thank you …. Mujeh na abhi tikha khaane ki icha ho rahi hai..

Shruti – toh thik hai tikha khanna hai hai na to iss mein mirchi daalke ke laati hoon phir khanne lena ..

For a minute manav and shruti stares each other and then bursts into laughter..

Shruti-(holding her ears ) okay acha baba.. bas ab bahut hua na .. manav..ab maan bhi jaao I m sorry na.. mujeh patah hai tum bahut care karte ho meri..I love you for that.. aur tum mere liye puri duniya upar se niche kar sakte hai.. lekin ab mein thik hoon aur iss wajah se tumhara mann kaam mein nahi lag raha hai..aur yeh baat mujeh pasand nahi aayi ki meri wajahs e tumhara kaam mein effect aaye..

Manav- (holds her hands) its okay.. but mujeh tumhari chinta hai shruti .. aur tum bilkul bhi apna dhyan rakhti shruti… I know kuch dino se mein tumhe bahut pareshan kiya .. par mein tumhe dard mein nahi sakta shruti..

Shruti-awwww iknow par ab mujeh promise karo tum apne kaam pe dhyan doaur mere liya yaha dhyan rakhne waaale bahut hai..

Manav- ookay.. par tum bhi promise karo tum apni health ko leke kabhi careless nahi hogi…

Shruti kisses on his cheeks.

Shruti- okay.. promise… promise mere captain sahab…

Manav- (kisses on shruti’s cheeks) thank you miss. Shruti….. and I promise to ke ab se mein tumhe baccho ki tarah treat nahi karunga..

Shruti- waise ek baat aur bat kahu tum sab boyfriends apni girlfriends ko kaise mannate ho. yaar mujeh tumhe manna eke liye kitna sochna pada aur yeh bhi patah chala ki kitni mehnat lagti hai.. mannene mein

Manav- (making a sad face ) dekha.. ab patah chala hum bichare ladko ki kya halat hooti hai apni apni girlfriends ko mannane mein kya kya papad , theple, aur roti belni padti hai..

Shruti- haan patah hai mujeh kitne papad belne padte hai.. puriyaan belni padti hai.. bahut mehnat lgti hai aur sabse buri bahut bakwaas ideas aate hai. Ab toh mein ne decide kar liya ki ab jabhi na mein ruthungi toh phatse maan jaaungi tumhe aur jyada mehnat nahi karaaungi…

Manav- (teasingly) hmm yeh toh bahut acha hua.. ab mujeh bahut mehnat nahi padegi..

Shruti- ( punches his shoulders playfully) manav!!! Zyada khush mat ho.. mere kehne ka matalb hai ki…

Mamav cuts in ..

Manav-( copying bhairavi) matalb baad mein samjha ne ka kya matalb hai shruti…

Shruti turns her face..

Mamav- areee sorry baba mein mazaak kar raha tha..

Shruti turns and faces manav..

Shruti- mujeh patah hai mein bhi bas mazak kar rahi thi..acha ab meri baat sunno mein yeh keh rahi ki agar ab mein ruthi na toh jaldi maan jaaungi tumhe zyada pareshan nahi karungi., aur sach bolu ruthne aur manne ka mazaa hi kuch alag hai..

Manav- haan who toh hai.. sahi kaha jasie aaj mujeh bahut mazaa aaya jab tum mujeh manna rahi thi.. aur manna se yaad aaya let me have custard .. bahut wait kar liya..mein ne kabse muh mein paani aa raha hai..

Shruti laughs…

They talk for some time.. while having custard..

Shruti- waise manav .. ohja uncle, vasant bhaiya , Ronnie bhaoya aur sharad aise achanak rajasthan kyu gaye hai.. koi emergency toh nahi hai..?

Manav- who.. who ..actually shruti kaam ke silsile mein gaye hai papa aur vasant bhaiya aur Ronnie bhiya unhe company dene gaye hai.. who kya hai papa pe mainly vasant bhaiya aur Ronnie bhiya nazar rakhne gaye hai.. maa ko chinta ho rahi thi.. papa ka cholesterol bahut badh gaya hai toh waha papa control mein rahe issliye Ronnie bhoya aur vasant bhaiya ko bhejaa hai saath mein..aur tum toh jaanti ho papa ko..

Shruti-(laughs) haan sahi kaha uncle ko control mein karna bahut muskil hai..

@ in manav room’s

Shruti is cleaning her purse or say she has emptied all the contains on manav's bed...

Shruti- kitna kachra bhar Gaya hai purse ..uff...jab itne saare purse..aur insab use nahi kar Rahi ...ek kaam Karti hoon colony mein se purse jisko chaiye mein de deti hoon puraane bhi nahi hai..just use nahi kiye...

Manav comes in his room..and finds it totally messed up...he gets a real heart attack..

Manav- shrutiiiii !!!mera room...!!! Mera room ki kya halat banaa di hai!!!

Shruti- (in Sharad style) areeee chill chill relax relax Manav ... Kuch kharab nahi Kiya just thoda saaman clear kar Rahi hoon.Promise Sab saaf kar doongi pakka wala promise.aur vas thoda saa hi Raha hai ek do purse hi saaf karne hai...

Manav- (sad)okay ..koi problem nahi mein saaf kar doonga bed...tum aaram karo...

He still looks at her with doubt

Shruti- promise!! Pakka wala promise..

Manav is still in doubt and is clearly visible on his face.

Shruti- areee doubt mat ho Aisa Ho toh tum mere saath help kardo .Mazza aayega..waise bhi timepass karna hai jab tumhe call nahi aata ..

Manav agrees

They talk and make fun of each other while cleaning.

Manav- huh!!! Finally !!!Shruti tum kitna kachra bhar ke rakhti ho..Apne purse? Aur atleast chocolate wrappers Kon bharke rakhta hai?

Shruti-areee woh raaste mein bhuk lagti hai issliye aur agar raaste mein ab kachra daalungi toh (pulls manav's cheeks) babu toh Desh Ganda hogaa .

Right??

Manav- (holding his cheeks) par Baad mein jaake bhi toh dustbin mein kachra daal sakti ho...

Shruti- mein bhul jaati hoon! You know Mujeh bahut kaam hota hai..

Manav- ya ya I know kitna kaam hota hai..well chalo ab Sab kaam complete hogaya hai movie dekhte hai..

Shruti- no Abhi bhi woh ek purse baaki hai check karna. Baaki...and you are helping me

Manav- what??? No!! Please these worst then tourture !

Shruti- yes!!? And I m loving it kyuki kabhi kabar hi mr..Manav ohja mere haath mein aate hai..now chalo baitho yaha. Aur help karo meri.

Manav- huh!!! Please dekho Mujeh Abhi Jaana head office please Patah nahi ab wapas kab aaunga...please chalo na movie dekhte ya baate karte hai..

Shruti- no.hum baith ke baate karte hai and kaam bhi hojaayega...

Manav- no.

Shruti- yes& no arguments Mr. Ohja that's an order.

Manav- okay.

Shruti empties her purse

.

Shruti- thank god ISS mein sirf bills hai ..

Manav and Shruti starts checking the bills and that's when she finds a small paper bag.

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Part 39 -(b) Ruthna aur manna



Shruti- areee yeh kya hai ..yeh mera toh nahi lagta..

She opens the package and finds a small piece of paper..

She opens the paper and starts to read..it..

Manav -kya hai Shruti ?yeh kya hai?

Shruti- Patah nahi Manav yaha toh sirf train ya bus no. Likha and I guess train ya bus ke coaches ke number likhe hai.

Manav - shayad tumne likhe honge shayad orphanage ke kaam hoga..

Shruti- nope Abhi koi Aisa kaam nahi aaya and yaha date bhi dekho Abhi ki nahi yeh future ki date hai ...aur yaha dekho kuch coaches ke aage dates Abhi ki pichle mahine ki hai..

Manav- hmm may be Samar ne Rakha hoga ya shayad tum bhul gayi hogi.. Aisa Ho toh ek Baar inquiry karlo site se may be kuch Patah chala..

Shruti- okay but agar Aisa kuch hota toh Mujeh yaad hota Manav...phir bhi let's check ..may be mein bhul gayi hoongi..

They check the train number coaches and are super shocked to see the results...

Shruti- how ...how how...is it possible ...Manav ..Manav I swear I don't know anything about this...

Manav- Shruti...Shruti relax I m not doubting...ek Baar phir se check karte hai...

Manav again checks it but same results appear...

Manav- Shruti do you know anything about these? Please I m asking you..dekho right now not as your friend but as an officer I m asking you right agar kuch tum Chupa Rahi ho toh please batao..koi tumhe force toh nahi kar Raha na..ya phir tumse yeh Sab kaam karvaa Raha hai..

Shruti-mein tumhe sach hi Bata Rahi hoon Manav I don't know yeh packet mere bag mein kaisa aaya ..please trust me...

Mashru shares a eye lock..

Manav- I trust you...Shruti..but it's just it's my duty too..mein yeh information headquaters bhej Raha hoon...and ho sake toh please try to remember yeh tumhe kisne diya ya Rakha..tumhare bag mein...

Shruti - okay..

Meanwhile Shruti so trying to remember .Manav packs his bags and he gets ready .

Shruti-(whispers) oh my god Kahi yeh aur woh dono related toh nahi...jo mere pe hamla hua Kahi woh Issi wajah se toh nahi hua...kyuki woh dono mere purse ke piche...the...

Shruti informs about this matter to Manav...

Manav- hmmm may be possible Shruti....but we can't be sure...

Manav makes Shruti sit on bed...

Manav- Shruti...tum Dhyan se yaad karo kya hua woh din .jab market mein woh do log tumse takraaye the woh aur yeh do chor jissne tum par hamla Kiya tha woh dono ke kaise dikhate hai woh bhi yaad karo....

Shruti-okay..Manav Mujeh bahut Darr lag Raha hai.agar woh sach mein .. ..agar woh sach mein militants nikle toh?

Manav-( takes shruti's hands) Shruti ..tum chinta mat karo mein tumhe ya kisi aur Ko kuch nahi hone doonga..

Shruti hugs Manav ..Manav hugs her back...

Shruti- I don't know..Mujeh bahut Darr lag Raha hai.

Manav-(rubs her back) shsss !!!Shruti everything will be fine...don't worry...


Precape- who is after all this mess??how did that paper reach shruti's bag ??

Will Manav be able to know in time stay tune to know more!!!

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