AASHIQUI.......RTMC FF Part 29 updated 25/11/2017 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: 16lvkkk

Dii..the story is moving forward to altogether a cute phase..:)

Ye Neha k family members ko business k alawa to aur kch yaad hi nhi rehta h..I doubt whether they know about Arvi's bday!!
Nhi sasuma..I mean Veer ki sasuma..not only looks but milk nhi peene ki aadat v milti h,but afsos no one there knows!!
Aww..Neera/Avi ko bina ice cream khaye ninni nhi aati..mumma ko ice cream advance me ghr me rakhna chahiye..but agr wo kiya hota to dadda se dobara mulaqat nhi hoti :D ;)
Ye log kb sudhrenge..magazine phadne se facts to change nhi honge..: p
And here,agr Veer Tara se rudely baat nhi krta to use manane ko ice cream shop to nhi jata..& darlo daughter se nhi milta..chalo Jo hota h achhe k lye hota h..Neha-Veer ki meeting would not have been good in that situation..:/
Ice-cream parlor scene was damn cool..damn cute..& very loveable dii..isse better invitation to ho hi nhi sakta tha..but Veer ne to address puchha hi nhi..jayega kaise party pe??
Waiting for next update dii..update soonish :)

will update soon
hugsss for ur comment
love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
not fair yaar ...only father-daughter meeting
I was expecting veer n neha to meet but it's ok even the father daughter meeting was cute
next ud main veer neha milenge na?
u update soon
luv u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: ridzzi

not fair yaar ...only father-daughter meeting
I was expecting veer n neha to meet but it's ok even the father daughter meeting was cute
next ud main veer neha milenge na?
u update soon
luv u 😊

😃veer and neha will meet soon don't worry
thank u for ur comment
luv u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Part 11

Neha was working on her laptop when her mother came inside her room-''neha''

she turned to look at her mother-''yes mom''

asha-''tarun is coming tomorrow''

neha frowned at her mother-''tarun...why??''

asha-''to see u...after all four years have passed...he wanted to meet u and arvi''

neha turned her gaze-''ok''

tarun was her father's best friend's son...he was handsome and understanding person...he knew that neha got married with veer four years back and they have a daughter...still he had a soft corner for her ...

her mother turned to move when arvi rushed inside the room with maddy

avi-''mom i have found a new friend today''

asha and maddy smiled at her innocent act while neha made her sit in her lap-''friend??... and whose that friend''

arvi pretending to be in deep thought-''oh..i forgot to ask his name..but he is very smart''

neha giggled at her and looked at maddy to asked about that so called friend of arvi

maddy-''mam actually a gentle man helped us today...''

neha frowned at her-''maddy i told u that beware of strangers..still u''but arvi cut her mother in between-''but he is not a stranger..he is my friend...''

neha pulled her cheek lovingly-''ok fine...go to bed...its very late''

asha and maddy said gudnight to both of them and left the room...


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ashok-''are u ready neha''

neha rushed towards her father-''yes dad''

ashok-''we are going to see the place for hotel...i think its better to leave now''

neha-''yeah sure''

they both walked outside hurriedly...

as they went near the car they surprised to saw arvi standing in front of them with both hands on her little waist-

she spoke angrily-''u r going without me''

neha knelt down in front of her-''i have to go baby ..its very urgent''

she made her face-''im also coming with u''

ashok smiled at her-''ok come''

he picked her and sat in car with neha...

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''its nice dad..i think it is the best place for our hotel''neha spoke after viewing the whole place interestingly ...

ashok smile at her-''are u sure''

she nodded-''yes dad''

''yes nanu''arvi too joined her mother...both giggled at her answer and arvi too smiled to saw them happy...

after sometime

they were sitting in a restaurant discussing about hotel when his phone rang..after few second he cut the call-''neha im leaving for office...come i'll drop u home''
neha-''no dad...i have to bought dress for avi''while looking at avi who was eating burger tastily

soon he left them alone in the restaurant...

avi smiled cutely and hugged her mother-''i love u''

she kissed her head -''ok lets go''and wiped her mouth and they walked out of the restaurant

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she looked at the beautiful dress and looked at the avi-''howsit''

avi smiled at her mother-''very pretty''

neha -''just like my princess''she called the shopkeeper to packed the dress and went towards the counter...she was busy on counter when avi saw him through glass door...she smiled cutely and rushed outside...

he was stting with one of his client in a cafeteria...and had just finished his meeting..he came out the cafeteria and walked towards his car...

suddenly his gaze fall on a little girl that was trying to cross the road...his face turned pale to saw her..she was avi-''damn it''

he shouted at her but she was looking at him smilingly..soon her gaze fell on car which was rushing towards her..she closed her eyes frighteningly ..he rushed towards him and picked her in arms-''are u mad...what are u doing here in middle of road...if something will happen to u''

she looked at his face innocently and hugged him tightly...she curled her both arms around his neck...he made her sit on his car bonnet-''are u fine''

she was still sticking to his neck...then suddenly he noticed her little fist clutching his shirt tightly...just like her...just like neha...

he wiped her tears-''avi look at me''she looked at him with tears in her eyes...

he smiled at her-''u are very brave girl na..now stop crying...u r fine''

for a second his heart stopped beating to saw her in danger...in two days she became his life...he hugged her-''what are u doing here''

avi-''i was coming to meet u''

he smiled at her cute answer-''oh...ohk...''

she too smiled to look his face...

on the other hand neha searching her here and there nervously...

'ok where is ur mom''veer asked

avi-''there she is''avi pointed towards her mother who was searching her panicky...

soon neha's gaze fell on avi she rushed towards her but suddenly he turned to saw her and stunned on his place...

four long years had passed since they had seen each other...her heart jumped with happiness while he was still gazing at her continuously..she missed him so much in these four years..she could even know how z he looked now...he changed he become more handsome and smart...she snorted her mind what is she thinking...avi rushed towards her mother and embraced her legs-''mumma''

he shocked to hear that word from her mouth

avi was her daughter...

he managed himself-''she is ur daughter''and asked hesitatingly

she came to his senses-'no''

his forehead wrinkled then suddenly her answer came...

neha-''she is our daughter''

his heart filled with joy..and happiness..he delighted to heard her reply-''my daughter...''his eyes become moist to saw his little princess

neha knelt down in front of avi-''don't u want to meet ur dadda''

she nodded-''where is he''

neha looked at veer-'there''avi turned to looked at veer...she clapped her hands with happiness-''he is my dadda''she ran towards him-''dadda''

he picked her up in his arms and kissed her cheeks affectionately


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avi was playing with doll which was gifted by her mother while neha standing behind the veer..she went nearer to him-''veer''

he looked at her angrily-''u knew that she is my daughter still u hide that truth with me why??''

neha-''veer i thought that''

he cut her in between-''what u thought...i don't care...i just want my daughter''he shouted at her when she shivered with fear...

neha-''i know u r very angry..but veer i can't live without her''

veer-''i don't know anything...i spend four years without her...and now i want her at any cost''

she pleaded in front of him-''veer pls..try to understand...''

avi looked at her mother-''mumma why are u crying''

she quickly wiped her tears-''no im not crying''

avi came near to veer-''dadda u hugged me but didn't hug mumma that's why she is crying''

veer looked at her innocent face and then looked at neha who was become pale..

he moved closer to her and embraced her which made her shocked...avi smiled at them and clapped her palms


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hey guys thank u for ur lovely comments and appreciations...i really loved ur comments and happy that u liked my all three stories...now i am going to end these stories soon...thanks for ur appreciation and bearing my writtingšŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰
love u all😳





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Edited by tejjo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
aww..veer is hot headed again...but arvi will mend him
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
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This was so cute. Finally arvi ko uske dadda mil gye and veer ko uski arvi...arvi bht zyada cute hai yr...I hope veer and neha jald hi ek ho jae...bas...😳😳 but itni jaldi kyu khtm kr rhe ho?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Aww this is soo sweet and cute..
Finally veer and avi met as father daughter..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Finally..Avi got to know who her dad is..šŸ¤—šŸ˜Š
But Veer again got angry on Neha..can't he think with a cool mind šŸ˜•
Waiting for next..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
nice part...but I didn't expected veer-neha to meet like this
I was actually hoping that neha will avoid him at first...and veer will be highly irritated by her constant avoiding...
but all that meeting scene was nice, thoda filmy type...loved to know that finally arvi got to know about her father...she is really an angel,
update soon...
luv u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
I am d "latest" this tym :/
This was d most awaited part for us,dii..:)
Ohh..Neha's family wants her to patch up with Tarun..just like Veer's parents..hadn't they been family rivals,the situation would have been totally different,I guess!!
Aww..imagining Neera telling about her new friend was extremely cute..& that "I-will-not-talk-to-you-if-u-dont-take-me-along-with-u look" was superb..<3 <3 :)
Ohh..Neera was walking along the road to meet Veer,thank God he saw her,otherwise...:( :/
Veer & Neha met..finally..after 4 years!!..but what's this- I'm stunned by Veer's reaction..he didn't even asked Neha that how's she or where had she gone,he only just noticed his daughter..??..he hates her way too much & she loves him d same..but don't let her give in so easily this time,dii..I really think she should confront him so that he stops thinking so low about her (y)
Aww..d last scene b/w father-mother-daughter was just amazing..:*
Dii..Aashiqui ki story to abhi shuru hi hui h..don't U think its too soon to end,at least keep any one of d 3 going (Y)
Update soonish dii :* :)

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