AASHIQUI.......RTMC FF Part 29 updated 25/11/2017 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 10

As she entered in the office everyone stood up and greeted her with smiles..they had seen her after long time...she had completely changed in these few years...neha too smiled back and went towards her father's cabin

ashok-''neha this is our new project file..we are planning to make a five star hotel ''

neha looked at the file-''its nice dad...''

ashok smiled at her-''i knew u will like it...nitish is working on it...and i want u to join him...''

neha-''sure dad...''


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maddy looked at the little girl standing just in front of her with weird faces..maddy knelt down in front of her-''sorry baby but you have to take it ''while giving her glass of milk

arvi-''i don't like it...''

asha came out from the kitchen-''arvi what happened beta...why are u not taking..it is good for health''

arvi looked at her by making puppy face-''nani pls i don't want it pls''

asha picked her and made her sit in lap-''ok fine...but have some fruits''she asked maddy to brought some fruits for her...

asha fed her some fruits and noticed her cute face which was very much like her father...she seen him in many parties..he is tall and handsome no doubt...

arvi too has dark brown eyes and same nose structure as her father...
suddenly arvi touched her face-''nani''

asha-''yes beta''she came out from her thoughts and smiled at her-''u want something''

arvi nodded cutely-''mumma..when will she return''

asha kissed her cheeks-''she will come soon..go and play outside with maddy''

maddy nodded towards asha and picked her in arms-''come baby we will play outside''

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veer checking his files when a worker came inside-''sir may i come in''

veer nodded-''yes''

he placed a box on table-''sir this is for u''veer frowned at him-''what is this...and who send this''

worker-''don't know sir...''he went outside left him all confused...veer opened the box and surprise to saw a bracelet...''he took it and looked at it carefully ..suddenly he understood who had gifted him this...

he dialed a no-''what is this tara''

she smiled-''u liked it...??''

he put the bracelet back into the box-''it..its fine''

tara-''thank god u liked it..i want to go on a date with u''

veer moved his fingers in hairs tensely-''im very busy right now...pls try to understand''

she made her face-''im not forcing you..its fine no problem''she cut the call...

he closed his eyes tensely...

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at night

neha kissed her cheek affectionately...and caressed her little messy hairs while her daughter smiling in her lap-''mumma...i want ice cream''

neha looked at her with fake anger-''no...no ice cream..go and sleep..im tired too''arvi made her face-'mumma pls''

after looking her puppy face she finally agreed-''ok fine come with me''

she came downstairs when her brother and father discussing something...she went nearer and stunned to saw veer's picture on front page of a magazine...he is nominated as a business tycoon of the year...she smiled to saw his picture after so many years...as she went closer her father tore the pages of magazine in pieces...he still has so much hatred for him...her smile faded instantly

to saw his daughter-''neha where are u going...we are discussing on our new project..come sit here''she smiled at him forcefully...

then she turned towards maddy-'maddy can u pls go with her...''she agreed and went outside with arvi

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he drove the car tensely...she was very happy when he called her and he ruin her mood in another second...he is so rude with her sometimes...he thought and stopped the car in front of ice cream parlor...may be it work..he smiled and went inside

he was ordering for a ice cream when he heard the same voice..he quickly turned to saw that little girl sitting on chair with a girl besides her...

she was little irritated ...''i just want cotton candy nothing else''

cotton candy..it struck in his ears..he heard this name before with neha's mouth..she too like the same ice cream..

''baby this is very good..''maddy tried to control her when veer came to his senses..

he went nearer and sat next to her-''so u want cotton candy''avi looked at him -''yes''

he smiled at her-''ok come with me''he looked at maddy who was very tensed...looked at the handsome man..how could she let her go with him..he is a stranger..veer smiled at her-''u can come with me ''she hesitatingly agreed for arvi

veer picked arvi in arms and went towards his car...maddy followed him

after some time

he gave her ice cream and sat beside her...,maddy too smiled at him-''thank u sir...for ur help...''

veer smiled at her back-''its my pleasure''then he turned to saw her..she was licking ice cream lovingly..he was attracted towards her every time when he saw her...what was happening with him...

she looked at his lost face -''thank u''

veer came to his senses and smiled at her-''u r welcome''

he looked at maddy-''she is ur daughter??''maddy nodded negatively she was about to reply when arvi interrupted-''she is not my mumma..she is maddy..my mumma is very beautiful and smart''

maddy giggled at her innocence

to heard her answer he too smiled-''really...hmm just like u...and ur dad''

to heard dad word she become upset-''my dadda is not here...he went to USA to brought gifts for me for my birthday''

''hmm...birthday...when is your birthday''he asked excitedly

she smiled at him-''after one week...will u come in my birthday'while clapped her little hands

'will u invite me??''he asked with raised brows...she nodded-''yes...''

maddy picked her in arms-''sir we are getting late..sorry''avi looked at maddy sadly

his smile vanished instantly-''ok its fine..''she nodded and walked few feet towards entrance when she stopped her...he was still looking at her..maddy stopped and arvi came towards him..she looked at his face-''come here''

veer surprisingly knelt down and smiled at her-''what??''

she came closer to him and kissed his cheek..he gazed at her face lovingly. and caressed her cheek affectionately...this was different feeling for him..he had never felt like this before..this little girl brought happiness in his life...he kissed her cheek too-''bye..take care''

she shook hand and went away with maddy


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Edited by tejjo - 8 years ago
Vaidehi_1924 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Dii..ye to typical Ekta Kapoor ka twist ho gya dii..;)
4 years passed since the day when Veer & Neha got married,(technically) & both didn't met after that..Veer didn't got to know about her whereabouts neither he tried to find out..Neha got pregnant & they have such an adorable kid but Veer doesn't know about her..Neha's family abandoned her but still she didn't tell d only person responsible for all this :/ :(
PS- U answered maximum of my questions..!!
Neha's parents called her back..chalo thodi to sadbuddhi di uparwale ne..:)
Aww..so cute name..Avi..I will like to call her Neera ;) :*
That ice cream scene was so cuteee..love U loads,cutie pie :*
Arey aunty jii..q pandit ji ko takleef de rhi ho..hm h na future btane k lye..
"Veer & Tara ki kundali bilkul mel nhi khati..ye shadi disaster saabit hogi..Veer k lye jo ldki bani h wo use jald hi milne wala h..aap nischint rahe.." ;)
That whole shopping mall scene..I felt like watching in front of my eyes..super cute :D :)
Friends should b like Dev & Nisha..supportive without judging anyone :)
Wondering what will happen when father-daughter meet d next time..update soonish,dii..:* :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
This story is getting so cute day by day. I am loving this. Especially veer and arvi's bonding. Just wondering what will happen whennhe will get to know that she is his daughter. HE will be ao happy to hear this. Inhope he comes to know the truth soon and he meets Neha as soon as possible . ...and realise that he loves her...just her...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
This is soo sweet..
Avi is a sweet and cute girl..
Vaidehi_1924 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Dii..the story is moving forward to altogether a cute phase..:)
Ye Neha k family members ko business k alawa to aur kch yaad hi nhi rehta h..I doubt whether they know about Arvi's bday!!
Nhi sasuma..I mean Veer ki sasuma..not only looks but milk nhi peene ki aadat v milti h,but afsos no one there knows!!
Aww..Neera/Avi ko bina ice cream khaye ninni nhi aati..mumma ko ice cream advance me ghr me rakhna chahiye..but agr wo kiya hota to dadda se dobara mulaqat nhi hoti :D ;)
Ye log kb sudhrenge..magazine phadne se facts to change nhi honge..: p
And here,agr Veer Tara se rudely baat nhi krta to use manane ko ice cream shop to nhi jata..& darlo daughter se nhi milta..chalo Jo hota h achhe k lye hota h..Neha-Veer ki meeting would not have been good in that situation..:/
Ice-cream parlor scene was damn cool..damn cute..& very loveable dii..isse better invitation to ho hi nhi sakta tha..but Veer ne to address puchha hi nhi..jayega kaise party pe??
Waiting for next update dii..update soonish :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Wow..father-daughter duo met for 2nd time..!
Loving d way story is progressing 👍🏼 👏
Update soon 🤗 😊
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: 16lvkkk

Dii..ye to typical Ekta Kapoor ka twist ho gya dii..;)

4 years passed since the day when Veer & Neha got married,(technically) & both didn't met after that..Veer didn't got to know about her whereabouts neither he tried to find out..Neha got pregnant & they have such an adorable kid but Veer doesn't know about her..Neha's family abandoned her but still she didn't tell d only person responsible for all this :/ :(
PS- U answered maximum of my questions..!!
Neha's parents called her back..chalo thodi to sadbuddhi di uparwale ne..:)
Aww..so cute name..Avi..I will like to call her Neera ;) :*
That ice cream scene was so cuteee..love U loads,cutie pie :*
Arey aunty jii..q pandit ji ko takleef de rhi ho..hm h na future btane k lye..
"Veer & Tara ki kundali bilkul mel nhi khati..ye shadi disaster saabit hogi..Veer k lye jo ldki bani h wo use jald hi milne wala h..aap nischint rahe.." ;)
That whole shopping mall scene..I felt like watching in front of my eyes..super cute :D :)
Friends should b like Dev & Nisha..supportive without judging anyone :)
Wondering what will happen when father-daughter meet d next time..update soonish,dii..:* :)

aww so sweet of u...i loved ur comment
and im very happy that that u liked it...
yeah it was like ek serials..but it was just struck in my mind
thanks a lot for ur lovely comment

Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Poo_2208

Wow..father-daughter duo met for 2nd time..!

Loving d way story is progressing 👍🏼 👏
Update soon 🤗 😊

thank u dear for ur sweet comment
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

This story is getting so cute day by day. I am loving this. Especially veer and arvi's bonding. Just wondering what will happen whennhe will get to know that she is his daughter. HE will be ao happy to hear this. Inhope he comes to know the truth soon and he meets Neha as soon as possible . ...and realise that he loves her...just her...😳

u have to wait for it
but i love ur comment
seriously...loved it
love u for this
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

This is soo sweet..
Avi is a sweet and cute girl..

thank u for ur comment

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