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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

online aayi sirf bhairu AT ke darshan karne aur krishu ke update ke darshan ho gaye.. me toh dhanya ho gai...

dupahar ko padhungi aur comment karungi..
aaj hi...

no worries hiyu

Originally posted by: ice-cold

Nice update krish. ⭐️

I liked the pritesh scene. Really missing pritesh these days.

Ghotala house scene was too good. Sharad -vasant and later varsha joining the fight due to hemantgiri. 😆

Bhairugiri was good.😆Yay! I guessed it right! while I read bhavana's dialogue.😃😆 And it was bhavna's mistake. 😆

Do add' toh barobar ' next time 😊😛

Reminded of Cid at some places in ur story.😃😛

Well written krish. Wah wah adhbuth! 👏

thanks barfi..haha yes I miss pritesh too yr...plus well u know vasant ki detective agency hain toh socha aise thoda woh detective banna doon sabko..with ghotalagiri touch..lagta hain toh barobar likhna mein bhul gayi warna mein likhti hoon..vasant phasa all thanjs to hemant bol diya varsha ko sab

Originally posted by: ice-cold

Nice update krish. ⭐️

I liked the pritesh scene. Really missing pritesh these days.

Ghotala house scene was too good. Sharad -vasant and later varsha joining the fight due to hemantgiri. 😆

Bhairugiri was good.😆Yay! I guessed it right! while I read bhavana's dialogue.😃😆 And it was bhavna's mistake. 😆

Do add' toh barobar ' next time 😊😛

Reminded of Cid at some places in ur story.😃😛

Well written krish. Wah wah adhbuth! 👏

arey waah.. kya baat hai barfi ne bada wala comment diya 👏👏

Very nice update krishu 🤗
Aww Pritesh Ka scene. Pritesh to show se missing hai.
Bhairugiri and hemantgiri 😆
Update the next part soon

Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Very nice update krishu 🤗
Aww Pritesh Ka scene. Pritesh to show se missing hai.
Bhairugiri and hemantgiri 😆
Update the next part soon

thanks mta will update soon

Sorry bahut late ho gya😛

Krishna Di mujhe aapse bohut jalan ho rhi hai...aap itna accha kaise likh lete ho...I'm very happy that u hv got the talent to write...hats off to u...

story wise... aapne mera sapna pura kiya hai...for entry of bhavna Hus...at least CVS nhi dikha the to aap hi dikha do...same maza aayega...nhi...same maza aa rha h...story ekdum mast jaa rhi h...Maine aapka update dekha to maza aagya...I was surprised... anyways... thanks for update n u r a born writer...

by the way Maine insta temporarily stop kar Di for 2 weeks...padhai karni hai na...after 2 weeks I'll again come...I'm missing our grp convos

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

wowwie!! krishu wat an update!!!

yeah wala toh mere liye complete surprise tha...
maja aaya padhke..
manav karthik meeting d thieves...
sharad ka superpower kaam kia.. i was worried kaam karega ya nai😆😆
manav going to sweety singh... loved manav-sweetysingh convo..
mast tha...😆😆
bechara sweety singh...

vasant trying to find clue from d breifcase...
they dint get anything...
they decide to send d scrap to their planet so it can b of help to find any clue...

vasant runs behind sharad for he ruined his shirt..
gosh 5-6 yrs children...😆😆😆

hemantgiri ne phirse vasant ko phasaya...
varsha joining d fight...
aata pheka... vasant ne..
ojha uncle kitchen me😆😆
ronnie atka...
pritesh ek hi kaam ka banda...
Hemant ne mast nakhara dikhaya..
warna koi uski baat sunta hi nahi😆

so as expected plan a failed...
plan b worked..
pritesh ne kaam baat suni...
but merry go round chalu senior citizens ka...😆😆
phirse bechare pritesh ko plan banana padega...

baap re.. ronnie, vasant, ijha follow ramniklal...
manav kyun nai???😲
vasant busy with doing hello hi to karthik, ronnie busy in atakna.. ojha busy in chat pakodi..
waah waah waah...
lekin chalo baato baato me connection bhi nikla...
so this was karthik wil come to colony again.. & ghotallas wil get him??
plz ab aur mat tadpana...

now last but not d least my sweetest bhairu...
haha, dawaai, balm dono pani me...
& bhavana ne piya😆😆😆
bechari bhavana.. she shud learn to gv instructions properly..😆😆😆
coz bhairu toh ni sudharne wali😆😆😆

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...

waiting for another upcoming twist...

thanks hiyu for. Ur comment...hahaha dono bhai chotte bacho ki Tarah laf rahe hain..smell ittu SA wiat kar abhi nahi bulaaunga 2015 ko family se..bad ittu SA wait aur kar.bhairu hamari great hain...well manav ko aur kaam se bheja hain so usne 3 trio ko bola jaao follow karo...will update soon

Originally posted by: krishnasree001

Krishna Di mujhe aapse bohut jalan ho rhi hai...aap itna accha kaise likh lete ho...I'm very happy that u hv got the talent to write...hats off to u...

story wise... aapne mera sapna pura kiya hai...for entry of bhavna Hus...at least CVS nhi dikha the to aap hi dikha do...same maza aayega...nhi...same maza aa rha h...story ekdum mast jaa rhi h...Maine aapka update dekha to maza aagya...I was surprised... anyways... thanks for update n u r a born writer...

by the way Maine insta temporarily stop kar Di for 2 weeks...padhai karni hai na...after 2 weeks I'll again come...I'm missing our grp convos

awww thank you so much shree for ur comment dear..it means me a lot..well Jalan kyu?areee dear u also write mast...I m waiting for ur more writings..dear..yes cvs ne toh bas than ki hain ki Bhavna husband track nahi dikhana toh mein ne socha mein hi dikha doon...thanks for ur comment .will update soon