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Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Waiting for the next part

will update soon

Chapter 4:

Originally posted by: --Manas21--

Chapter 4:

Kya update tha!! 👏

Chaar daat waala rakshas!!🤣

Ye naam sune hue kitna tym ho gya...

And Bhavna aunty ko bhejne laga rakshas... Very bad rakshas🤣

hmm thanks manas ..for ur comment

finally unresd on pg 72

kitni baar update kia post...
kya pata..
har ek line me upsate karti thi..
tab jake pura hua🥱

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

superb update...
loved it!!!
Krishu🤗


abhi type toh kar rahi huu..
hopefully light na jaye to post bhi kar paun...


okk first agents talk was superb...
could actualy imagine it...

bhavana-bhadresh fight was superb..
very well written..

bhadresh trusts his dad...
bhairu & her kids trusts, bhavana...

bhadresh leaves d house as bhavana refused ramniklal to enter d house..
i cant even give bad words to him...
yaar mere bade papa ka naam bhi yahi h.. unko ramniklal hi bolate hain sab...

oops.
varsha ke muh se sach nikal ne hi wala tha..
vasant stopped her on time..

manav heard it..

bhavana told d whole truth to ghotalas..
but krishu dint tel us😡😡
very bad...

power fluctuate chalu..
phirse😲😲

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

Originally posted by: Krish58

Thanks hiyu for ur comment..chinta mat kar bataungi sabko bataungi Bhavna ka atitt..

Hmm so agents are back...and power fluctuate chalu firse...

Hmm varsha was emotional and sach nikal ne wala tha par vasant stopped her..but they didn't knew hamara captain manav ohja ne sab sun liya hain..aur notice bhi kiya hain

Hmm aage aage dekho hota hain kya...

Will update soon

My pleasure Krishu!!!
waiting already!!!😉

chap11
mmm Tha😊
mast maza aya...bhairvigiri...Ronnie Ka atakna...
manav saving Ghotalas again...
Anna Ka jalna megha se...

hemant double ooohhh
Ab kya hoga??!
will read next part soon

Needs jaldi unres kar tu..

hey u dint send me link of this story
i was waiting
finally i askd coolhi1988 & she/he send me d link
nice story
i liked its title too much
home so sweet it is
vava & family abt to meet kartik who is 2015
colonywale r stupid
they always trouble ghotalas
poor ghotalas though sharad could talk with karthik but couldnt meet
so sad
wil read nxt prts later

Originally posted by: cutest_vava

hey u dint send me link of this story
i was waiting
finally i askd coolhi1988 & she/he send me d link
nice story
i liked its title too much
home so sweet it is
vava & family abt to meet kartik who is 2015
colonywale r stupid
they always trouble ghotalas
poor ghotalas though sharad could talk with karthik but couldnt meet
so sad
wil read nxt prts later

sorry dear as busy with story update so link bhejna bhul gayi anyways I just send u links...hmm thansk for comment..will be waiting for ur comment