TR 5S: You're The One (Part 4: Pg.32) 08/07/19(edited version)

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@Sp8699

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

U updated after a very long time... i am waiting for next update continue soon... nice part hope ... Rey soon short out his feelings for tani...

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Jasmine_ash

@Jasmine_ash

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Hi dear
Sorry for late comment but I totally forgot the track
Just had a complete glance

Y this pain
Taani should not have rejected offer
But same time from her side what she has done was correct

Don't blame me I was totally confused whom yo support

Both r correct from their POV

Hope soon Rey realise is love and confess to Taani

Kriya hope she does not convert to villains

Thanks for pm dear
Hope to see more

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Pearl_TR

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Hiii!😊

I know I'm really late for commenting. 😃

Hope you remember me 😉

Now coming to the story.

Amazing story. beautifully written.

Part 1

Well we all know Rey shouldn't have behaved like that.

We can't stop a person from loving anyone.

Nevertheless he was feeling guilty good for him.

Tadapte raho Taani se baat karne k liye.

Part 2

Feeling bad for Taani.

Bichari pyaar hi toh kiya tha murder toh nhi kiya na😆

Oh no Kriya is back.

I don't have issues with her. Still unknown to her she is keeping two love birds away from each other. 😭

Part 3

Have Taani giri and Rey catches her.

You she has to help Kriya. I know Taani is good at heart but itna b kya Acha banna🥱

Good plan flop toh hona hi tha Akhr Rey doesn't feel anything for Kriya.

Part 4.

Taani 😡 how could she miss such an opportunity to be with. This is because Kriya and Rey together 🤢

Omg 😲ye Taani Shivam k sath kya karing wo b late night band classroom me.

Rey ka gusse se ab Taani ko uske Krishnaji bachaye.

Keep writing

Update soon.😆

And thanks for pm😊

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sneha lokwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Amazing update

Loved it

Awww poor taarey

Update soon... Please

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nicky13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Aww my poor babies TaaRey ... both are in so much pain ...thanks for the update it was awesome but sorry for late reply I just read it today only as I hardly come to Forums nowadays... please update next update soon

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Sowmya

@my_angel...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Awesome update

👏👏👏

Update soon

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nishita23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Amazing update dear... Rey want taani as his ags... But taani refuse that... And when rey saw shivam with taani He was so angry... Plz update next part soon so eager to read... And thanks for pm... Plz update soon

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TR_lovebirds

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Posted: 7 years ago

#168

Hi to all the lovely readers,

first of all very sorry for not updating this story from so long as i didn't get much time and then i lost the track that how to continue this story and because of not updating from so long this story was closed by mods but now it's reopened and i promise to continue this asap.

hope u all still remember this story and will show your love for it.

Thank you.

Love

Neha 😊

Edited by TR_lovebirds - 7 years ago