Arshi OS : The Inevitable (12/12)

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

is that all?

there will be another part right?

he should feel the pain too

why always khushi has to lose in front of this man

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fffan123

@fffan123

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Nice one... Can you extend it to show what happens to ASR when Khushi does not come in his arms?

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alwaysarshi

@alwaysarshi

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Glad she showed him what his actions are doing to her. It is his feelings that are muddled up and he is spoiling three lives just to save his stupid notion that he writes his destiny. Glad she ran away from him.

Will you consider continuing this OS? The last line leaves me intrigued as to how he will get her back in his arms, when he is engaged to Lavanya.

Thanks for the PM😊

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MIT DEY

@mit0905

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Its heart touching soul...romantic OS...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Hope your write ...second part...

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mandeep

@mandy15

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

superb

i dont want her to give in so easily
arnav should also feel the pain

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

what is this? he is so rude

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

amazing shot.. do continue na.. want to see how Arnav brings her back in his arms next day.. loved the shot..

thanks for pm 😊

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256748

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Awesome update

Poor khushi she always get hurt

How will Arnav win her back? Can't wait

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

God she should have slapped hm for his stupidity

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

it was nice.. Depicted the emotions very well..

I really want you to continue it and don't make her come easily to him, in his arms just tomorrow, he should know what he made her go through, if not all, he should atleast feel little bit of pain..

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