Arshi OS : The Inevitable (12/12)

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._Jyoti_.

@._Jyoti_.

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

First time happy to see what Arnav would feel when Khushi will show him what is felt when someone whom you love so much don't want you in your life you have no value in their life! Arnav should feel that pain.
in other hand it's only Khushi whom Arnav can get that peace!
Amazing update...

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vish2005

@vish2005

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Asr and is ego😡. good work dear

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._Jyoti_.

@._Jyoti_.

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Waiting for the next part..

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Seeing the title and beginning of O.S ..kind of guessed it what will be the story..I dont understand how one person downplay other's emotion so easily.
BTW..shivi do u know you just gave readers a bait to demand 2 part of this O.S..
You know it..dont you.? Leaving at that point ...😉

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Nice one. Wil der be a second part

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CRAZY4CARTOON

@CRAZY4CARTOON

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

good that
khushi showed him just how much
she was hurting becoz of him
nd now he s damn shure she will return to him
so easily hope not...
he should also feel d pain nd hurt...

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

WOWWW so good i love it

plz make it two shopt plz its a request

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

That was one beautiful piece of writing
So wanted to see something like this in the show
But thanks you fulfilled this wish of mine
This song is my all time favourite and the cherry on top you wrote it for our favourite couple, just awesome
But pls dear you simply CANNOT stop here, it has to continue
Pls pls make this into an SS
Thanks for the pm