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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Awesome update dear please update soon

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rn94

@rn94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Nice update.
Thanks for the pm.

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bluesky10

@bluesky10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Awesome update dear

Arnav want her to feel comfortable

Thanks for the pm dear

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Amazing update

Loved the way arnav's feelings are shown !!

Update next part soon !

Thnxx for pm 😊

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shreya

@Willy_Wonka.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Amazing update!

Even I also admire Samridh<3

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Param

@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

wow that was superb.. loved what Arnav said and Khushi was quite and she listened him.. well hapy for changes.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

That's really good!
Arnav let out his feelings and his decision truthfully! And those dialogues were awesome!
Itna kuch sun ne ke baad koyi bhi melt ho jayega!
And Khushi has melted a bit too!
Wonder if this change z gonna stay like this!

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Hey thanks for the pm. Loved the update. Wonderful well written. Fantastic. So Khushi is now being sober towards Arnav. Fantastic. Update soon

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Mally

@-CrazySobtian-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#99

This fan-fiction is everything! I just love it!!! ^_^

At first I thought it was just like MRMRW but it just has the base idea and the rest is absolutely different! I love how Arnav's character has so many shades. First he was a prankster, then he was driven by ego/his stupid friends which made him take revenge but then he felt guilty and at last he fell in love with her <3 And I love the way you portrayed Khushi! She wasn't like a typical scared girl. She knew how to stand up for herself and obviously her sarcasm just adds to everything! Her anger is justified after all Arnav unintentionally turned her life upside down! Arnav's parents are so cute <3 But Garima? Well this is the harsh reality! But I love you added her part like that. It made the fanfic more realistic ^_^ And now we have Akash and Payal also! And they are all at Lucknow! :3 I hope things will get sorted out soon!

Now coming to the writer herself :3

You have penned it down so damn well <3 I love the way you write! It's to the point. Nothing less nor nothing more which I love as I hate draggy chapters. It's just perfect! But hey you have to make the chapters longer though as I can't get enough of this fan-fiction! :3

Continue soon or else I'll start a petition! XD And spam you everywhere! Phir mujhe maat daatna 😆

Edited by -CrazySobtian- - 9 years ago

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: -CrazySobtian-
This fan-fiction is everything! I just love it!!! ^_^
At first I thought it was just like MRMRW but it just has the base idea and the rest is absolutely different! I love how Arnav's character has so many shades. First he was a prankster, then he was driven by ego/his stupid friends which made him take revenge but then he felt guilty and at last he fell in love with her <3 And I love the way you portrayed Khushi! She wasn't like a typical scared girl. She knew how to stand up for herself and obviously her sarcasm just adds to everything! Her anger is justified after all Arnav unintentionally turned her life upside down! Arnav's parents are so cute <3 But Garima? Well this is the harsh reality! But I love you added her part like that. It made the fanfic more realistic ^_^ And now we have Akash and Payal also! And they are all at Lucknow! :3 I hope things will get sorted out soon!
Now coming to the writer herself :3
You have penned it down so damn well <3 I love the way you write! It's to the point. Nothing less nor nothing more which I love as I hate draggy chapters. It's just perfect! But hey you have to make the chapters longer though as I can't get enough of this fan-fiction! :3
Continue soon or else I'll start a petition! XD And spam you everywhere! Phir mujhe maat daatna 😆

Khushi Ki Sarcasm! That is from the writer herself, baby. And Arnav's shades, respect him okay? He is your Jiju. Don't love him too much. ROFL. Garima's part was there in the show and I just couldn't remove it out as it seemed so real because of all these things. Things, AHEM, no comments.

I wrote some draggy chapters, like seriously. Some FFs had them and I know it. Please start a petition and spam, I love when people do that. So no daatna.