Innocent Love-AK ,pt 15, p.22 - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Numera89

ahahaha just caught up!! really cool! poor angad! lol only got 2 weeks! continue soon!

Thanks alot😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part
bet the girl would be kripa

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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome just love it not boring but no kripa well its ok con soon

Thank you 😊

kripa will be in next part

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Posted: 18 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great part
hope angad finds kripa soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. 👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

hailaaa angad jaldi dhoondooooo 😆 lol do wat srk did n stop da traffic while dancing....n ull find her 😆 lol fab track 2 go wiv it 😆 😆 😆 uff wats up wiv mishty 😕 😕 neways hmmmmmmmm ladki kaun...maybe mishty? 😳 😳 😳 neways cont sooon 👏

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arey angad iss kahani main dcotor hey actor ya rockstar thodi hey ki sharukh ki tarah nachey 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: coolgirl249

awsome part 👏 👏 👏
angad's marriage 😲 😲 😲 but wid whom??? 😕
cont soon plz 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: sweety223

Thanks 😃

arey angad iss kahani main dcotor hey actor ya rockstar thodi hey ki sharukh ki tarah nachey 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

sweety

arre angad need not be a rockstar or actor....love ke liye kuch bhi karega😆😆 cont soon!😃😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 6

angad searched for her in all universities in all possible ways, but he didn't found her, angad and nisha are sitting in a cafe

angad is looking down at his , he isn't able to think anything

ni: angad your coffee is getting cold

a: no response

ni(shakes him): angad i am talking to you

a: i am sorry, nisha kya oh mujhe milleghi

ni: angad sach pyar ko koi judha nahin kar saktha, and untill i know you are deeply in love with her

a: lekin vuska naam thak mujhe patha nahin

ni: koi problem nahin hum vusse dhundlenghey

a: per kaise

ni: shayad oh job kar rahi ho

a: no way yaha tho chotey chotey bahuth sare companies hey and i don't hey enough time for searching, already ek haftha hoghayi hey and we are left with one more week

they both remain silence for a while, suddenly

ni: **** main ye bath kaise bhulghayi

a: what ?

ni: angad tumne kaha ki oh ek car main chalighayi , kya tumhe vuss gadi ka number yaad hey

a: abb gadi ka number yaad karke kya phayadha (use)

ni: arey yaad karo tho sahi

a: ok hmm oh kuch MH 01........ A.......... 1415 shayad

ni: good abb chalo mere sath

a: lekin kaha

ni: vehchile registration office aur kaha

a: arey vaha jake kya karenghey

ni: budhu ............use brain angad, gadi ke number se vuska address patha chalegha

a: yessssssss, lets go hurry up

nisha and angad go to registration office and get the address and reach the address

to their surprise the gate is locked

they ask the watchman(wm) where the people are

wm: oh mumbai gaye hey unki pothi ki shaadhi hey

angad is shocked on hearing that

ni: to wm, kya tumhe patha hey oh mumbai main kaha rehtey hey

wm: nahin mam

ni: atleast vahaka phone number ya shaadhi ka card

wm: mere pass tho kuch nahin hey

ni: shukriya, angad lets go

a: nisha can you drive

ni: ya sure

angad is in worst of tears, just then he recieves a call, he looks at the name blinking on his mobileits misty

a: misty

mi: hi angad , how are you

a: i am ok, tum bholo kaha ho tum , i went to that bungalow but you were not there

mi: angad actually meri shaadhi fix ho ghayi hey, issliye mujeh vapass ana pada

a: what?.................tumhari shaadhi fix hoghayi hey aur tum mujhe abb bhol rahi ho

mi: sorry angad aunty ne mana kiya tha , lekin mujeh rehnahin ghaya iss liye bhol dhiya

a: atleast ye tho bholo with whom

mi: oh tho suspence hey, tumhe shaadhi ke dhin thak wait karna padegha, abb main rakthi hun bye

a: misty suno tho

mi: angad aur ek bath bholo meri aur tumhari shaadhi ek hi dhin hey

a: what

mi: bye angad , i miss you jaldhi mumbai ajanna

and she disconnects the phone

a: hello hello

ni: angad kya huva , is everything ok

a: mujhe lagtha jindhaghi ke shocks sare ajj hi mill rahey hey

ni: abb kya huva

a: misty ki shaadhi hey

ni: tho tumhe kya problem hey

a: oh kuch thik se nahin keh rahithi,

ni: kya kaha vussne

a: vusne kaha ki meri aur vuski shadhi ek hi dhin hey

nisha thinks for a while

ni: angad kahi oh ladki misty tho nahin

a: no ways, aur misty ko tho patha hey ki mujeh pyar huva hey, then how can she

ni: just think angad, aghar tumhare mom ne vusse pucha ho aur oh naa nahin kaha sakhi

a: lekin .........

ni: angad 2 haftho main ladki ko dhund na bahuth hi mushkil kaam hey aur aunty ne tho kaha ki oh ek hi haftey main ladki ko dhundliye

a: nish lets go back to mumbai as soon as possible

nisha and angad goes to their hotels and pack their bags and goes back to mumbai , all the way angad is just thinking about what nisha said

after reaching home he sees everyone busy in wedding preperations, angad finds his mom in kitchen

a: mom mujeh appse kuch bath karni hey

na: kya hey bholo

a: mom ladki ka naam kya hey

na: kuan si ladki ke bare main bath kar raha hey thu

a: mom main vuss ladki ke bare main bath kar raha hun jo mujhse shaadhi karne valli hey

na: vuska naam ....................main bhul ghayi , jake nishanth se pucho

a: ok, bhaya kaha hey

na: arey oh tho ladki ke ghar ko ghaye hey shaghun dhene , ajj mehendhi hey na

a: ajj mehendhi ka rasam hey , aur app yaha kya kar rahi hey

na: main kya karu beta , dilip office ke kaam par newzealand ghaye tey iss liye maine nishamth aur kannan ko bhej dhiya

next day during breakfast

angad gets a call, its from nisha

ni: angad tumhare sare appointments reschedule kar dhiya hey maine, ajj aur kaal ke liye kyunki purso tumhari shaadhi hey aur phir ek haftey tum leave pe ho na

a: oh ok........ek minute purso meri shaadhi hey

ni: haan, nishanth bhaya ne phone karke bhathaya tha

a: fine bye

nis: angad tumhare sare friends ko maine invitation bhej dhiya hey, aur tumhare hospital valloko bhi

a: bhaiya atleast app bholenghey ladki ka naam kya hey

ka: arey jaldhi kya hey angad

a: bhabhi atleast mujeh vuska naam tho patha chalna chahiye na

nis: cuts off, kannan kya tum bhul ghayi ho ke tumhara ajj doctor ka appointment hey

ka: not again, nishant tum kujhe drop kar dho naa

and they both leave from their

na: angad beta tum hospital se ghar jaldhi ana , ajj tumhare haldhi ka rasam hey

a: mom please app tho bholiye na ladki ka naam

na: kay misty ne tumhe nahin bathaya, vusse tho patha bhi hey

and naina leaves from their, angad reaches hospitaland everyone congrajulate him

a: nisha cancel all my appointments

ni: but angad, kya huva

a: ghar main koi mujeh ladki ka naam nahin bhol rahey hey , aur aghar oh misty hey tho i can't

ni: whats problem with her

a: probelm, i never seen her in that way, i mean she is my best friend and i treat her like a little sis

ni: lekin angad abb hum kya kare

its the day of marriage everyone is busy in their work and happy except angad

a: looking at his sherwani, hey baghvan ye kaise mode pe lakhar mujhe kada kar dhiya

nishant comes in the room

nis: angad tum abhi thak thayar nahin huve, sab tumhare intezar kar rahey hey jaldhi karo

he gets ready,nishant comes and puts his sehra( i think they call sehra, the one with flowers they tie it to the head)

they reach the hall , their angad sees two mandaps

a: bhaiya yaha dho shaadhiya hey

nis: haan tumhe bathana bhol hi ghaya, jiss ladki se tumhari shaadhi hone wali hey vuska bhaiya ka bhi shaadhi ho rahi hey

pandit ji calls the dhulha, angad and another guy goes into the mandap, they bring the girls with their ghunghat on their face

all the ritals are done, and angad is hopping its not to be misty just then he spots kiran

kiran: misty's elder brother who leaves in US looking after their business

a: tho ye misty nahin hey, thank god lekin kuan hey ye

while putting sindhoor he looks at the girl and he gets the biggest SHOCK of his life

its the same girl, she is his first love, the girl in the moonlight and its our sweet KRIPA
angad puts the mangalsutru, and he wants to dance happly

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thats for today

hope everyone likes it, and please do comment

luv all

sweety

Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.
Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
wow wonderful prt luki angad he finali found out kripa n wat not hes even married 2 er 😛 👏 👏

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