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Posted: 7 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: Prizi

yea I read it on blog

Isn't it awesome !?!?

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Posted: 7 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: Prizi
"It's a new day, it's a new life, he whispered quietly to himself as was his tradition whenever he entered the hospital.
Okk I love this tradition of him... ok ok I probably love everything he does 😳

luvd how shanky was keenly observing armaan... when u said everyone's going at hospital I thought it was only boys.. bt well im glad even girls are also there...

then came ridhima thinking abt old days. Their lil moment... so ridhima realised she used to take armaan for granted.. im glad bt its too late I guess. . bt u know I can sense their new start going to be intense.. ridhima will nt shy away this tym 😉

armaan and children moment always awed me. . hr luvs babies undoubtedly... glad it was only ridhima...noone was there with her...

sid-ridhima is really something I would luv to read more about these two...

ufff armqan kya karu main uss ladke ka.. lyk always hus timings are really bakwaas..

well idk bt I felt when armaan said ridhima he knws how to take care of himself, he was hurt... chahe kitna v kehle he moved on bt he'll be never able to.. maybe now he doesn't feel those unbearable pain bt its still affects him so much

plz plz plz dont stop writing... I already told you in the other TDBU thread.. don't leave it incomplete... at least try to motive urself fr us

I love this tradition of his too ! He's so cute .

Yes , Shanky was observing him, na . It's cause he noticed the similarities in their routines.

Yes , Riddhima has been thinking about all this a lot. Seeing Armaan has made her regret everything all over again. I really hope their new start is intense too . :p

Armaan is the cutest with children. He's always been. It's the one thing that I love about him so much.

Sid & Ridzy are such good friends and they've been through a lot together, so obviously they're close . There's going to be more scenes with them, I promise .

Of course Armaan is hurt on seeing them together, because it does hurt him . He's learned to live with this pain , but it'll always be there. Its just that, it doesn't hurt as much, because he's accepted it and moved on. This is the way things are. And that's fine with him.

I will definitely update as often as possible. Thank you for loving this story so much !

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Posted: 7 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: scorpiofazy
First of all thanks again for giving us update back to back...and aur kisi ke comment aaye na aaye mere comment zaroor aenge...that i can promise.👍🏼
And about the part i loved it...kinda like ri-sid bonding...and finally shanky is realizing something...warna hamesha armaan ko blame karna hota hai...kher der se hi aaye durust aaye...😎 continue soon and please AR scene de do...

Thank you so much !

I'm glad you're liking it.

I'm loving Sid and Riddhima's bonding too . And Shanky. Useless kahin ka . Theek hi hai woh bhi

AR scenes are coming soon. Pakka promise.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: anne_01
Hey !
First of all, I'm very sorry for commenting after so long.
I read all the chapters today.
And yeah, Lemme tell you that you are one of the most amazing writers I have ever seen.
The way you're portraying the story, damn !
I'm a fan of yours.
About the story ... I'm really liking sid-riddhima's bonding !
Aur Armaan ! He has always been super awesome.
I'm eagerly waiting to read Armaan riddhima's interaction.
And and ... I even loved Sona n armaan's bond. :D
Lastly, I promise to read on time and comment regularly; just like the way you update for us.
Thank you :)

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you're liking this story.

Sid - Rid & Armaan - Sona are really cute friendships and I'm really enjoying writing them too! Thank you!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
I m short of words...
Everything is just too awesome...
How Armaan behave in hospital, with each person work there...
How they know him so well and take of his needs when he step in the hospital...
How Armaan care for his chote papa...

Shashank was amaze by Armaan...
and everyone was enjoying the tour around the hospital...

We all know that they both have still feelings for each other...
Ridz koh aur chupana nehi chahiyeh...
Even she is making Sid make hide it from Armaan...
Ridz chup chupke Armaan koh admire kar raha hai...
Aur jab usse yeh ehsaas huva, toh chup gaye...
Ek taraf woh sahi hai, uske wajahse Armaan ne itna takleef saha hai...
Lekin Armaan ka khushi bhi toh uspe hai yeh kyun nehi samajhte yeh...

Oh no, Armaan ne phirse dekhliya Sid and ridz koh...
Woh toh yehi believe karte hai, Ridz uski biwi hai...
Now I just can't wait to see how Armaan would react to know Ridz is single...
Continue super soon...
Keep posting...
Love it...
Take care :D

Thank you so much, Rihoo!

Armaan cares for his staff a lot , so his staff cares for him too . And obviously , he cares for his Chote Papa . He's been a father to Armaan in the past few years . And he really loves Armaan too. So , obviously Armaan also cares a lot about him .

Armaan and Riddhima ke beech ke problems itne easily toh sort nahi honge na. So much has happened in the past and Riddhima is really scared to bring it all up. Plus , she genuinely believes that Armaan is very happy in this new life, which he is , and she doesn't want to do anything that'll jeopardize the world Armaan has built for himself. She's only coming from a place of concern and love . She's not hiding it to be cruel .

But, Armaan will find out , because of course , itni badi baat kab tak chupegi ? Let's see what happens then !

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Posted: 7 years ago

#496

Track 16: My poor Armaan and Ridz 😭 Dreams shattered and broken apart.

Though I am happy to see Armaan smiling and proud of the life he built for himself. I like the way you are emoting Ridz feelings... she is happy to see Armaan's happiness is no longer solely tied to her and yet sad at the same time coz he seems too far away from her.

I am hating Tamanna though. Never liked her earlier either. Sorry, but I can't help it. Waiting for AR to talk.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#497

Track: 17: Nice insight into Armaan's life at the hospital. Even though he has come so far in life, deep down he's still the same Armaan.. alwaz helping others selflessly.

Again wrong time pe entry Armaan!!! Ridz really needs to start talking .. The parting dialogue from Armaan was really heart breaking.. It showed the depth of how much Riddhima's abandonment has hurt him.

Thank you for updating so regularly. I know you have been updating ILYLTF too. It must be hard work. Really appreciate it.

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Nazzz16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#498

Hope someone gets AR together soon

Armaan is going through alot pain seeing them together and has also suffered alot in past...

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Posted: 7 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: dmgd3
Track 16: My poor Armaan and Ridz 😭 Dreams shattered and broken apart.
Though I am happy to see Armaan smiling and proud of the life he built for himself. I like the way you are emoting Ridz feelings... she is happy to see Armaan's happiness is no longer solely tied to her and yet sad at the same time coz he seems too far away from her.

I am hating Tamanna though. Never liked her earlier either. Sorry, but I can't help it. Waiting for AR to talk.

Yes! I'm so glad you're understanding where Riddhima is coming from. She's seeing a completely different Armaan , but in so many ways he's still the same person and it's difficult for her .

Hahaha , a lot of people aren't liking Tamanna . Frankly, I didn't like the Tamanna on the show either, but I'm trying to write her in a way that I like her, so hopefully as the story progresses, you guys will too. :)

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: dmgd3
Track: 17: Nice insight into Armaan's life at the hospital. Even though he has come so far in life, deep down he's still the same Armaan.. alwaz helping others selflessly.

Again wrong time pe entry Armaan!!! Ridz really needs to start talking .. The parting dialogue from Armaan was really heart breaking.. It showed the depth of how much Riddhima's abandonment has hurt him.

Thank you for updating so regularly. I know you have been updating ILYLTF too. It must be hard work. Really appreciate it.

Yes. Armaan is still essentially the same person . Always helping and spreading happiness in anyway he can ! :)

Uski timing toh hai hi kharab, but ab kya karein? LOL.

Yes , Riddhima abandoning him hurt Armaan deeply and it really changed him in subtle yet important ways . I'm exploring that part still and you can see a little of how it affected him in the Outtakes Ive posted should that interest you . :)

Thank you so much. Updating so quickly , for both this and ILYLTF has been hectic, but really fun because I'm really excited for the direction these stories are taking. :)

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