ArHi Vignettes: Soulmates #1: Pg 5

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@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

So happy to see you back RB.. read your first chapter as an Os for Expressions of Love.. loved it a lot.. Beautiful ode to unique couple.. will be eagerly waiting to read more.. best wishes and happy writing Vertigo Fall/Soulmates 😃

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Such a beautiful start. wonderful!!!

The one thing i always look forward in your stories is the simplicity, which make a relationship between two people having opposite persoanlity grand and ethereal. I love it when Khushi read Arnav mind and vanish his insecurities with her wise words and reasonings.

Indeed, they are not done and they will never, that's the beauty of their love.

Can't wait to leave next chapter.

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

What less mortals like us passed as another dialogue regarding the second anniversary, becomes a story here. What more can be a testimony to what an excellent writer you are RB. Beautiful one.

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silvercloud1980

@silvercloud1980

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Beautifully written. Plz Pm me for the next update

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Very cute.. Arnav is adorable.. I would eat him kachha kachha..

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Will be back after the morning chaos is gone and everyone is out of the house.

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Wowww so beautiful one
Waiting fr more :-)

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Read the update twice at a time... Just so in love with them here!

Vertigo has this most calming effect and feels simply blissful.. This now takes it to a level of soul mates/companionship understanding each other in a journey you take to keep yourself happy!

Bravo Dear.. RB this is simply heartearming! Loving this extension to Vertigo 👏 thank you much :)

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

This was absolutely beautiful. Every single line spoke of love, their understanding for each other and that urge to make the other happy. Two years and they continue to learn a new aspect about the other. That is so refreshing for a couple.

And the notes 👏 a wonderful way to communicate when one is having difficulty expressing themselves verbally. Especially for someone like Arnav. Loved it!

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Those lines in bold were just a tiny reminder of how you write in ways that make us think, feel, feel some more and crave and crave some more. And the depth of their emotions, especially Khushi's...man! they are breathtaking.

I was suddenly reminded of these words...remember? "I stored a secret in a glass jar and hid it under sand dune. I only have map of the sound of the waves and sunset."

Signing off with a thank you and a contended sigh :D

Edited by AquaSandhya - 9 years ago

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