ArHi Vignettes: Soulmates #1: Pg 5

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Bookmark. ..waiting for more gems..

Comment on blog..

Loved loved loved it

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Dot_n_Line

@Dot_n_Line

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

So ardent...especially those lines in bold. How I wish I saw this on screen instead!

Bring on more love notes :D

I say, everyday should be a celebration of love and life! :D

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Wowww ! Awesome .welcome back just love to see you back and your writing.

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

"When I lay my head on the small of your back, I feel I am feeling the curve of the earth itself."

Khushi hurried towards her dresser and pulled out a small box. "Happy Anniversary to you too Arnav," she replied softly and handed him the box. She had stuck a simple card with words - My bones have made a map of the path made by your fingers and your eyes. I cannot tell anyone who I am without telling them who you are as well. '

Loved the bold quotes.

Loved her explanation of different couples
.immaterialiastic. thoughts of hers was very intriguing.

Laws of life..

Bful.

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Looking frwd 2 it loved it

Do pm me

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Simply beautiful. Every gesture, every word speaks of a deep abiding love between them. An understanding and acceptance of who the other is. Skilfully woven words telling us of their journey this time round.

Love how you've used both of the gifts mentioned in the episode and elevated them, giving them deeper significance.

The quote, the song, the story, all seamlessly reflecting each other.

"Meri bequrari ko hadh se badhana tumhe khoob aata hai", waiting for the next :}

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Hello

Thanks for the pm.

Loved it is just a understatement.dear.

It was written in such a way, that left it's impact on the heart.

Thank u

And must say what a fantastic start .

Thank u

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

That was so beautiful... I loved it.. i am so glad u r back.. the quotes their thoughts and they themself were so intricately woven together by u.. looking forward for more..