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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
lovely nd intrstng updates dear
wonderfully written
finally ananya got to knw tht aakash is dib officer
thanxx for the pm
😊 😛 😛 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: akanksha1319


He he!!! I am sure it worked!! 😆
Done!! Check out!! 😃
By d way I really didn't have any idea that it's u! I thought u r not on IF! I'm so happy to see u here!! ⭐️



Yeah ut definitely worked aur jo thodi bachi thi iss update ko padh kr gayab ho gyi 😛 😉
Haha i thought u knew 🥱 😲 heheh ab ptoh pta chal gya 😆

Now coming to d update 😳
Diii itni heart touching aur emotional ff koi likhta hai bhala? 😭
Emotional kr diya mujhe
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Kaash show mein bhi aisa hota...aap ko apni fiction unhe deni chaiyechaiye 👏
Simply beautiful 😳 😛
And i know i m being greedy pr jaldi jaldi update kriye 😆 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: anju10

lovely nd intrstng updates dear
wonderfully written
finally ananya got to knw tht aakash is dib officer
thanxx for the pm
😊


Thank u so much my dear!!!! !!! 😛 😳 ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: purplebunny



Yeah ut definitely worked aur jo thodi bachi thi iss update ko padh kr gayab ho gyi 😛 😉
Haha i thought u knew 🥱 😲 heheh ab ptoh pta chal gya 😆

Now coming to d update 😳
Diii itni heart touching aur emotional ff koi likhta hai bhala? 😭
Emotional kr diya mujhe
😕
Kaash show mein bhi aisa hota...aap ko apni fiction unhe deni chaiyechaiye 👏
Simply beautiful 😳 😛
And i know i m being greedy pr jaldi jaldi update kriye 😆 😳


Awww!! Thanx a tonnn my darling!!!! 🤗
Yes updating soon! ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: akanksha1319


Thanx a ton dear!! 😳
I'm so glad that u all r liking it so much!! ⭐️

Arey itni achhi story ko kaun like nahi karega...😉
Mai toh fan ho gayi hu iss story ki 😳😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Tarushi

Arey itni achhi story ko kaun like nahi karega...😉
Mai toh fan ho gayi hu iss story ki😳😃


Thank u once again!! I'm really humbled wid this love!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Thank u once again my all dear friends for so much love and encouragement!! 😳
Updating in few minutes!! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Sorry guyz for d late update, I'm facing some serious network issues but thank you so much for loving my story, I'm really humbled!! 😳
Here is d next chapter... 😛

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CHAPTER 5

She left his hand and stood near d railing and looked back at him wid teary eyes "I'm.. I'm sorry Akash...jo Kuch bhi hua ussmein hum dono ki koi galati nahi thi, galat toh halat the...aur tumne hamesha mere liye itna socha... har bar khud ki jaan khatre mein dal ke Meri jaan bachayi.. Meri itni fikar ki...aur Maine gusse mein aake tumse itna Kuch keh diya...I'm sorry...but Mai kya Karoon...mai iss kadar ulajh gayi tum mein...in sare Dino mein sab ke hote hue bhi maine bahot akela feel kiya...bahot bar tum se milne ka... tumse bat karne ka man karta Tha... par sirf mai janti hoon ki kis Tarah se Maine khud ko roka hai..."

She looked at d beautiful city lights & said smilingly "Jab mujhe Pata chala ki Mera promotion ho gaya hai aur Mai Captain ban gayi hoon tab mai kitni excited thi ye bat tumhein banane ke liye, aur.. "

she was unable to speak further, as she turned towards Akash and her eyes fall on him who was standing wid his arms open..their eyes met...& there was a surge of emotions flooding their hearts...

She just ran to him like a mad and clinged to him as tight as she could! He also hugged her back and hid her in his protective arms like if he doesn't do so, someone would snatch her away! This was d moment they waited for, so long!Tears started rolling down from their eyes freely, washing away all their pain, filling their hearts wid enormous happiness & relief!

She said sobbingly "I missed u so much Akash!!" he replied caressing her hairs "I missed u too miss rulebook"

They chuckled & broke their hug and smiled admist their tears looking at each other contently and hugged once again!

After few minutes ananya broke hug and without breaking eyelock she said very lovingly "Akashhh..." Akash too replied in d same tone "Hmm.. Ananya spoke "I love you"

Akash smiled... he rubbed his nose wid her & said "I know stupid" and then he kissed her hands and said those three magical words which ananya was dying to listen "I love u too!"

She felt like she is on the top of the world,she looked at him overwhelmed, she just didn't want to wish anything anymore! They joined their forehead looking into each others' eyes, which had immense love for each other!

Dil ki maange thodi thi kam
Har duaa bhi thodi maddham


Akash took her too d swing kept in d center of terrace and they sat there wid ananya resting her head on his shoulder and he is holding her looking at her peaceful face!!

Tune kaandhe pe sar jhukaaya jab
Jaise dargah pe baandhe dhaage tab
Bina maange hi mill gaya hai sab
Meherbaan hua hua
Meherbaan hua hua
Meherbaan.. hua
Meherbaan hua Rab
Meherbaan.. hua
Meherbaan hua Rab


They looked at each other without blinking their eyes... they were feeling like all this is a dream and if they move their eyes even a lil, it will break d dream!

Duaa rang rangiya yun malang laal laal rang
Rooh ki patang baandhi tere sang
Tab hi toh laga
Meherban hua Rab
O din ye sehre sa saja
Meherbaan huaa Rab


They entwined their fingers...and were totally lost in each other's eyes...

Haathon ko tere apne
Haathon mein le leti hoon
Ke taqdeerein apni saari padh loon
Aankhon mein tere chhupte
Armaan main dhoondhta hoon
Bas tu soche, aur poore main kar doon
Abhi abhi toh hum adhoore thhe
Poore ho gaye tere roobaroo
Oo.. ye bhi deekhe na
Kahaan main khatam, kahaan tu shuru


Her cheeks were getting Crimson by his intense stare... so she lowered her eyes in shyness and blushed!

Aankhein teri (aankhein teri)
Girti hain jab (girti hain jab)
Ab to neendein aati hain tab
Humko lagta hai kuch dino se ab
Tu ibaadat hai, tu hi hai mazhab
Bewajah kaise, kyu, kahaan aur kab
Meherban hua hua
Meherban hua hua
Meherban.. hua
Meherban hua Rab
Meherban.. hua
Meherban hua Rab


He tried to wipe her tears by his thumb but ananya stopped him...she was still sobbing "Aaj mat roko inhe Akash.." and she cuddled to him more, buried her head into his chest and let her pain come out. Akash's condition was no different, he just took her into his arms and kept caressing back and her hairs.

Rab ne banaaya sabko
Par kaun bataaye Rab ko
Mar ke tum pe, hum saans lete hain
Rab se karun jo duaayein
Ab ye tujhi tak jaayein
Tu jo sun le toh sunta ye Rab hai..
Jaane naa jahaan
Jaane hai kahaan
Mili thi meri teri haan me haan
Sach hai yahi tujh sa kahin
Nahin hai nahin


She raised her head and said "Phir kabhi mujhe aise akele Chod ke mat jana akash, mai nahi reh sakti tumhare bagair" Akash put her hairs behind and whispered "I promise, phir kabhi nahi" and they shared a tight hug!

Meri raahein aayein tujh tak
Iss janam se har janam tak
Waqt ko rokein aa zara sa ab
Usko samjha dein ishq ka matlab
Chhod ke zidd ye maan lega ab
Meherbaan hua hua
Meherbaan hua hua
Meherbaan.. hua
Meherbaan hua Rab
Meherbaan.. hua
Meherbaan hua Rab
Meherbaan.. hua
Meherbaan hua Rab


Akash placed his head on her and said "Pata hai ananya iss puri duniya mein ye Meri sab se fav jagah hai..jab bhi mai bahot udas hota hoon Ya phir stress Mei hota hoon toh mai hamesha yaha aata hoon, yaha aakar mujhe sukoon milta hai!"

She looked at him without breaking their hug and said innocently "Aur Pata hai Meri Sab se favorite jagah Kaun si hai?"she again rested her head on his chest and said "Yahan..." she continued "Duniya ki sab se mehfooz jagah, jahan mujhe sukoon milta hai"

Akash broke d hug and cupped her face & said "Ye sab kuch itna aasan nahi hai ananya, Tum nahi janti ki Meri zindagi kitne sare khatron se bhari hui hai"

Ananya said "Mai janti hoon akash par tum kya chahte ho ki, aaj hum ne ek dusre ko apne feelings ke bare mein Bata diya, ab Kal se sab Kuch bhul jao aur ajnabeeyon ke Tarah raho? Kya ye itna aasan hai Aakash?"

Akash said "Tum samajh nahi rahi ho ananya..."

Ananya interrupted "Samajh tum nahi Rahe ho Akash... jab tak tum mere saath ho mujhe Kuch nahi ho sakta... I trust you akash... aur mai tumhari kamjori nahi balki tumhari takat Banke tumhare saath Rehna chahti hoon"

Akash smiled and said "Accha thik hai hum iss bare mein bad mein bat karenge, abhi tum yahi ruko, mai do minute mein dinner order Kar ke aata hoon, bhook nahi lagi hai kya, ek toh tumne subah se thik se Kuch khaya bhi nahi hai kyon?"

Ananya made a cute face "Haan woh... tumhe Kaise pata?"

Akash just smirked & replied "I'll just be back" & he left.

Ananya smiled, she thought to herself "Just a few hours ago... situations were so complicated... so painful...and now everything looks like a beautiful dream" she was feeling so happy, so light!

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I hope u all liked it!! Waiting for ur replies!! 😊
Edited by akanksha1319 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
I love you akka... <3

it was way too much sweet. .. bht bht bht jyada accha update tha.. Airlines ki wo emotionless confession ka sadness dur ho gaya... thank you so very much. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anzum505

I love you akka... <3

it was way too much sweet. .. bht bht bht jyada accha update tha.. Airlines ki wo emotionless confession ka sadness dur ho gaya... thank you so very much. .


😛
Thanx yaar, I'm really happy that u liked it so much!!! ⭐️ 🤗

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