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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
M in looovvveee with your story
Pls update jaldi se.. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: merry786

Hai yeh to pechly waly se bhi zyda acha tha...i'm in love...in love with Akanksha di's story😉😛...update was full of akya moments n tht i loved the most😃...thanks alot for pm!!!!!!!😊


Aww!!! Thanks a lot my dear!!! ⭐️ 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: luvakya

Awesome update

M in looovvveee with your story
Pls update jaldi se..😆


He he!! Thanx!! Will update asap!!! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update..
Loved to read it..
Airlines season 2 lag raha hai..
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: snehal05

Superb update..

Loved to read it..
Airlines season 2 lag raha hai..
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm


My pleasure dear!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really beautiful
so lovely
loved it
keep the good work up di

I really love it
Already read it on fb <3


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Princessnidhii

Really beautiful

so lovely
loved it
keep the good work up di

I really love it
Already read it on fb <3



Aww!! Thank u so much my sweetheart!!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 8

They reached ananya's home. Ananya got out of car and leaned through window to goodbye him but he said "How mean ananya tum mujhe andar aane ko nahi bolgi? Waise bhi tum nahi bhi bolgi toh bhi mai aaunga" He came out of car and went straight to d door and rang d bell. Ananya just came stood beside him looking all confused.

This time shefu opened d door and greeted them wid a big smile "Welcome back" they both smiled and entered.
Shefu called Madhu "Bua, dekho ananya di aur Captain Akash aaye hai" and she whispered to both of them "The Hottest couple in town"

Ananya and Akash looked at each other and then at shefu and Akash said "Maine kaha Tha na tumhein ananya ye aaj Kal ke bacche Kuch jyada hi smart hai"

Just then nanaji came so ananya shushed akash and whispered back to Shefu "Tujhe mai bad mein dekhungi"

Nanaji said "Are aa gaye tum dono, are akash baitho na khade kyon ho?"

Akash replied "Nahi nanaji, Der ho gayi hai mai chalta hoon, mai toh bas ananya ko chodne aaya tha aur aap ko thank u bolna tha,ananya ko mere sath bhejne ke liye,actually pichle Kuch Dino mein bahot sari misunderstandings ho gayi thi Hamare bich lekin ab sab Kuch thik hai" and he looked at ananya who smiled at him lovingly!

Nanaji smiled and said "Hmm! Vo toh dikh hi raha hai...actually thank u toh humein tumse kehna chahiye, kitne Dino bad, ananya ke chehre pe Muskan aayi hai"

Akash said assuring tone "And I promise ki mai koshish karunga ki ye Muskan hamesha uske chehre pe bani Rahe, on that note, I take ur leave, Good night everyone"

Everyone smiled and greeted him back. Ananya said to nanaji "Mai akash ko bahar tak Chod Kar aati hoon"

Nanaji nodded and replied "Haan jao beta"

Ananya and Akash came outside near Akash's car. Ananya said sadly "Toh... chalo phir Good bye!!

Akash went to sat in d car but came back to ananya and said wid his killer smile " Mujhe jyada miss mat karna... and by d way... Mai Kal meeting ke liye aa raha hoon, be ready at 10am, mai tumhein pick karunga aur phir saath mein chalenge"

Ananya gave a broad smile and nodded and Akash whispered "I love u!! she blushed and whispered back "I love u too byeee!! They gave a side hug to each other and Akash sat in d car & left.

Ananya entered in d house and closed d door behind, she was abt to say something but she noticed everyone was in d hall looking at her wid teasing smile, so she asked "Kyaaa?"

Shefu jumped frm her sit and stood near ananya wid action as if she is holding Mike in front of Ananya and asked "Toh, Captain Ananya Rawat, aap ke iss chamkte hue chehre ka raaz???"

Ananya said wid a fake anger "Shefu tu fir shuru ho gayi, chal mere saath" Ananya held Shefu wid elbow and almost dragged towards their room.

But they were stopped by nanaji "Ananya beta, yahan aao mere samne"

Shefu looked at ananya wid winning smile and ananya closed her eyes in nervousness!

Ananya left shefu's hand stood in front of nanaji looking away! Nanaji said lovingly holding her hands "Kya tum aur akash ek dusre se pyar karte ho?"

Ananya looked at him wid jerk and then again looked down and blushed and said "Nanu...wo...aap... aap ko Kaise Pata?"

Nanu replied "Tum dono ki ankhon mein saaf dikhayi deta hai ki tum dono ek dusre se kitna pyar karte ho"

Madhu asked "Sach beta?"

Ananya slowly nodded & nanaji said smilingly "Tu nahi janti beta ki hum kitne khush hai tere liye, Akash Sach mein ek bahot accha ladka hai, humein fakr hai tumhari choice pe"

Ananya was really feeling very shy so she excused herself and went to her room. Shefu too ran behind her.

Madhu was really overwhelmed & she askrdd nanu "Papa ye hamari hi ananya hai na?"

Nanu smiled and said said putting his hand on Madhu's shoulder "Haan beta, bas bhagwan se yahi binti hai ki ye Naya ehesas uski zindagi khushiyon se bhar de" Madhu nodded smilingly!

Here ananya came to her room and fell on d bed and hid her face in pilow, she had never been so shy.
Shefu took her guitar and started singing "Pehla Pehla Nasha pehla khumar... Naya pyar hai Naya intazaar ..." with that ananya came down frm bed and ran behind Shefu and finally caught her and they giggled.

Shefu twirled ananya around and said excitedly "Di di di di, I'm sooo happy for u, aap dono ke bich sab Kuch thik ho gaya" Ananya blushed and nodded

Shefu continued " Toh finally ab aap dono officially ek dusare ke girlfriend - boyfriend ho right? "

Ananya looked away hiding her shyness and said " Ya kind off "

Shefu said elbowing her " Toh bataiye na kya kya Hua, aap ki iss haseen romantic mulakat mein"

Ananya lightly slapped on shefu's shoulder and said "U know akash sahi kehta hai, tum aaj Kal ke bacche bahot bolte ho..."

Just then madhu came "Ananya beta, tumhara dinner ho gaya Ya, mai khana laga Doon?"

Ananya replied "Are, sorry ma wo aap ko batana bhul gayi, hum dinner Kar ke aaye the"

Madhu replied "Hmm, hota hai hota hai, kyon Shefu?"

Shefu went to madhu and said putting her hands around her neck " Yes,u r absolutely right Bua "

Ananya said putting her hands on her waist " Ma, plz ab aap ise join mat karo"

Madhu chuckled and said "Accha thik hai chal papa ne tujhe Bulaya hai"

Ananya nodded and followed madhu, they came to nanaji's room, ananya sat in front of nanaji and asked "Kya Hua Nanu? Sab Kuch thik toh hai?"

Nanu smiled and replied "Sab thik hai beta, aaj tak tum Hamare liye jiti aayi ho, hamesha hamari khushiyon ke bare mein sochti aayi ho, lekin ab khud ke liye, khud ki khushiyon ke liye jeene ka waqt aa gaya hai ananya, tum kahogi ki nanu abhi ye sab Kuch kyon Bata Rahe hai, isiliye beta kyonki mai Dekh sakta hoon ki aaj tum kitni khush ho, lekin mai tumhare mooh se sunna chahta hoon.. "

Ananya kept her hand on his and replied " Haan Nanu, mai Sach mein bahot khush hoon" she took a pause "Sach kahoon nanu toh Maine kabhi socha nahi tha ki ye din itni khubsurati se Meri zindagi mein aayega"

Madhu came and caressed her hairs "Iss pyar ko iss ehsaas ko khul ke jiyo, bhagwan kare tum hamesha aise hi khush raho Meri bacchi". Nanu smiled and nodded.

Here after returning home, Akash went to his room and opened Skype on his laptop "Hey, hi dad!"

His dad replied "Hello my boy... so... train abhi bhi patri pe hai Ya... fisal gayi" ... Vikram Saluja, d handsome retired army officer and as cool as his son.

Akash smirked and said "Patri pe?? ... are train toh station pe pahoch gayi dad"

Akash father was really happy "Ye hui na bat...are yaar anjali wo magazine chodo aur yahan aao"

There stood she... Anjali Saluja... d elegant & loving lady, who just exactly knows how to handle these two cool boys.

She smiled and said "Mujhe laga tum bap-bete ke bich bada hi important discussion chal raha hai toh disturb nahi karna chahiye na"

She looked at akash and asked lovingly "Kaise ho beta...thik toh ho na...apna khayal toh rakh Rahe ho na... aur tumhara mission... "

Akash replied "Mom mom mom saans toh lo"

Anjali's expressions changed to worried one "Kya saans lo... tum par hue attack ko Sankar yahan Meri saans atak gayi thi"

Akash replied "Relax mom... see I'm here in front of you.. perfectly fine"

Anjali said "Hmm.. tum dono kabhi serious ho hi nahi sakte... accha chodo.. Batao kya kaha ananya ne??"

Vikram said jokingly "Anjali, tum bhi Kamal karti ho... are look at his face...sab likha hai waha pe" and they laughed together!

Just then Akash's phone rang & it was none other than ananya! He looked at d phone and again towards his parents and said "Aap ki would be daughter-in-law ka phone hai"

Anjali asked "Tune propose bhi Kar diya use?"

Akash said mockingly "Are nahi mom, par jald hi karunga"

Vikram said to anjali proudly "Ise Kehte hai confidence"

Anjali nodded disappointingly. Vikram ignored her and said teasing akash "Le lo barkhurdar, call le lo, we'll talk to you later!! Good night and sweet dreams"

Akash replied smilingly "Bye dad good night!! Love u mom"

Anjali smiled and replied "Love you too beta, take care" and they shut their respective laptops!

Finally akash picked up d call and ananya said worriedly "Itni Der kyon laga di phone uthane mein, mujhe kitni tension ho rahi thi, tum thik se pahoch gaye na Ghar?... bolo na?"

Akash sighed & murmured "Ekdam perfect bahu ho Meri mom ke liye"

Ananya asked "Kya? Kuch kaha tum ne?"

Akash replied "Nahi Kuch nahi, mai keh raha Tha ki mai Bilkul thik hoon bas abhi mom dad se bat Kar raha Tha na isiliye call uthane mein Der ho gayi!"

Ananya said lovingly "Oh, accha, I'm sorry wo mai thodasa dar gay.. "

Akash asked teasingly cutting her in middle "Dar gayi thi Ya... mujhe miss Kar rahi thi?"

Ananya chuckled "Actually wo mere Ghar mein sab ko Pata chal gaya hai Hamare bare mein & they are happy"

Akash said "Great!! Maine bhi mom dad se wahi bat Kar raha Tha, aur wo toh Kuch zyada hi khush hai" & he laughed.

Ananya said softly "Akash, Mujhe toh ye sab Kuch sapne jaisa lag raha hai"

Akash replied "Nahi ananya ye sapna nahi hakikat hai, bas ab Zara bhi chinta mat karo aur aaram se jao, hum Kal milenge hi."

Ananya said "Hmm tum bhi so jao, good night, love you"

Akash replied "Good night, love u too"

They cut d call wid d beautiful smile on their lips. Ananya was standing in d balcony and she just turned to get inside but collided wid shefu who was giving her meaningful look.

Ananya scolded her "Shefu tum dinbadin bahot bigadti ja rahi ho! Bhala aise koi kisi ki bat sunta hai kya"

Shefu gave a fake thoughtful look and said "Haan, ye bhi sahi hai but mujhe bada maza aata hai"

Ananya replied "Maza aata hai Haan, idhar aa Shefu ki bacchi..."

Ananya ran behind shefu and they had pilow fight!!

After long time Ananya and Akash slept peacefully thinking about each other.

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How was it? 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
haayyee.. kitna sweet update tha.. sweetness over loaded.. I just loved both families. . sab kitne acche hai.. thank you akka for such lovely update. .

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anzum505

haayyee.. kitna sweet update tha.. sweetness over loaded.. I just loved both families. . sab kitne acche hai.. thank you akka for such lovely update. .


My pleasure dear!! I'm extremely happy that u liked it!! 😳

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