ArHi SS | Frozen Heart | Chapter Three| pg : 16 (12/3)

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cheesemad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ..Chashmish..

Aww! cheeni, thanks for giving it a try😳. I hope to keep you glued with it😉

@bold- Ditto! Me too have a thing for writers😛,though here, it was necessary for Khushi's character.

@blue- I have actually given a hint in the chapter.😆

@red- I am not a fan of sad endings. But in my vision, only sad end is coming for it.😊

Khushi is good with words, Arnav is not 😳

Hint was, aged hands?

I am waiting :D

I have no issues with Sad endings because sometimes Sadness captures the beauty with happiness couldn't.

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kowshira9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Could it be that Arnavs randma is dying,because u described her hands as aged

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zayana khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Interesting prologue.. Something new to read.. Looking forward to it...

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SirenMitra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Good Start but "it may not have the happy ending"..😭 No Please!

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ranogill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

I was reading the prologue again ... You mention arnav'first love ... But this love got aged hands. Is she his mother or grand mother

Edited by ranogill - 9 years ago

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angeldream14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Intriguing

so do both have a frozen heart

to live u need a hope

to smile u need happiness

to love u need a to believe in beauty of future

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deepa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Interesting prologue but please give us happy ending. Thanks for the pm. 😊

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sweetydoll32

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Awesome prologue dear please continue soon

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Rashi Bhargava

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Wow sounds intrstng
Continue soon
Would love to read it

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Very Very interesting beginning. Who is Arnav's first love ? Are Arnav and Khushi known to each other in past ? Why should it be having a sad ending 😭