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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#521

Great update.

Thanks for the pm.

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#522

Awesome update!! Loved it Sandhya!!

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#523

Wow

Now that is what I call a comeback

Superb update dear

Loved it

Thanks a ton for the pm

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#524

I loved the update. 🤗 Was really happy that both Arnav and khushi could speak without any invisible barriers between the two !! Glad that khushi cried her eyes out on Arnav and could somewhat unload her guilt that she had been carrying around !! Loved the fact that khushi confided in Arnav about how she sees Anjali in every rape, in every kidnapping and how Anjali's kidnapping has ruled her life. Good that Arnav told her that it was very courageous of khushi to revisit the painful memories of Anjali while everyone else had been trying to run away !! Love Arnav, he is such a gentleman ... staying on in khushi's house for her safety. Hope khushi doesn't push him away again. The man following khushi at the temple was interesting wonder if it was a reporter !! Also, shanti' sister disappearing seemed like another kidnapping ... Hope Arnav and khushi find some clues to the child abductions !! Really looking forward to the next update. Write when you get a chance, don't stress if AD is crazy !! 😳

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

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Posted: 9 years ago

#525

Glad to see another update from you.

I had always thought this story was much more than the Arnav-Khushi love story - the missing girls and the mystery and suspense revolving around that. That is why I think this story is so interesting, since this is not an uncommon reality in life today.

The chemistry between Arnav and Khushi has been palpable since they meet on that bike trail! The companionable meal they shared together and Khushi opening up to him, trusting him with her insecurities, and talking to him about her struggles with dealing with her past, sharing their first job experiences was so good!

If that guy with the camera is the guy from the train, then he has been following her from Bangalore. Which makes me wonder if she had been on to something and the bad guys are already watching Khushi to make sure she doesnt find out more? Although he seems like a real sleazy person because he is also gleeful that Raizada is in his pictures too and he thinks he can probably make more money because of that (which was not his real intention - real intention was just getting pictures of Khushi ?)

I understand it is not always easy to make time for a hobby like writing, but just a suggestion - if you have the entire story planned out in your head, then an option could be to give smaller updates more frequently?

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Tabs

@hatelove2012

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#526

The update was beautiful. They will survive. Arnav is in love and will do anything for her.

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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#527

Part 2 was simply lovely wtih only Arshi

Bring the update whenever you can.Take care

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#528

I honestly had goose bumps reading this chapter. The plot gets thicker and more interesting! You brought out the emotions of loosing a loved one not knowing what happened to them so powerfully. That's what I felt throughout the update - the power of your writing. Can't wait for the next chapter but I understand life always interferes in our pleasures :) take your time, take it easy :) Your note reminded me of my mom:) anytime I leave anything incomplete she would immediately say 'e muhurtam lo modalapettindo poorthe cheyyadam ledu'. Haha! Honestly it's always a pleasure to read your writings however long you take to write them - they are always worth the wait:)