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uzam818

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

thanks dear
nice update
waiting for next

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sanasahel

@sanasahel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

super duper update worth a wait...

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sammymas

@sammymas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#483

Welcome back... the suspens goes on

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Arshi2503

@Arshi2503

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Great update Sandhya
Full of Suspense . The stalker must be
employed by the people behind the
abduction of young girls 😲 waiting
for the second part impatiently.

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Marvellous sandhya.

From the start till he reached to Khushi, my heart was on constantly beating fast. It was relief to know that she is fine. You write is brilliantly how arnav was going through till he reached there.

That one incident effect so many people. If arnav's mother of hinting that she is the one who is suffering most then she should come and see how much Anjali's disappearance effect her. If not more then not less then her.

Poor girl in this state too she is giving explanations why she called him. Hope she confess her state to him.

Finally something happen where arnav find someone following her. Hope he will go there and find some clues. Glad that he didn't go and try to find out who is there. Khushi's safety was more important at that time.

Is that man going to show their pics to his mother?

Waiting for next part. Thanks for awesome update.

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#486

My heart was in my mouth thinking of what Arnav was going through to reach Khushi ...

these mountain roads are really treacherous and a total disaster to drive in with all that dense fog ... He must have known the terrain on the back of his hand to have driven through it the way he did ... I have been up the Nilgiris with all that dense fog one can't see a foot ahead clearly ...

It's like those haunted movie songs one sees 😆

Finally having found Khushi (though passed out from the panic attack) was a relief ...

Loved his gentleness while handling her ... hope she realises the depth of his feelings for her before taking a hasty decision and running away ...

With the new photographs taken by this journalist they seem to be in for some more harassment by the media ... 😕 as if they haven't been through enough already ...

Thank you Sandhya ... waiting for part two eagerly ...

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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#487

Amazing update.. Whose that following and on whose instructions, for which he is expecting reward?!

Waiting for part 2..

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#488

wonderful chapter

wondering who is stalking Khushi...

waiting for part 2

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#489

Res. Who is that man?Aaargh, I hate him already.

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Angels11

@Angels11

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#490

My honest feedback is its becoming tough to follow many of these FFs nowadays due to lack of update. When i read this chapter i no longer remembered the prev chap. The initial few lines confused me. Did K call A. Did she ask for help. Then i had 2 go & quickly re-read the prev chap. Even then the cohesion & transition bet the 2 chapters was not smooth. This chap looked abrupt & there seemed to b a missing piece bet the 2 chapters. This is coz for the author also its tuf 2 grasp the thread & continue with the flow. Here its not clear frm the pt where K calls & A reaches her. How did he know where to find her. Did she give him the address. All these details are missing in the update.

Anyway i feel that an author/artist must b open to criticism. This is my honest feedback on the update. I sincerely hope u r not offended. My intention is not to be rude but just share my views.

Thanks for writing these stories which keep us entertained & give us joy. Esp since you are not getting paid & dont owe us anything 😊

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