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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#301

Superb Flashbacks...Arnav father is mean. He hates his father and came to India where he met Khushi...who seems to be his happiness.

For Khushi it was love at first sight...I think because he told her not to add "bhaiya" after his name😛. Their first meeting was pure magic...she came running and falling near Arnav which he tried to save her...I loved the way you penned their present and past track together.

For Arnav, it was a strange feelings and before he could understand his feelings for Khushi, he went back to US and fell back to his boring life and bedding women. He is so affected by his father's behaviour which in turn affected his life too.

I loved his cousins...Tanu is a sweet girl. Loved the bonding between him and his cousins.

As Panditji blessed her with her choice of husband...I hope she gets the same. She has full faith on Shivji...that he will keep her safe.

Loved their Temple visit and uske baad kya hua...Thinking there must have been some misunderstanding between ARSHI, that he called her characterless girl. Looking forward for the next chapter.

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#302

Originally posted by: lechuarshi
😉 nahi chodungi😆😆..Haha! I am glad you got to read the part first.
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unres

for khushi...love at first sight...
for anav... some strange connection at first sight. Khushi surely fell for him in bad way...this reminded me of those cute meetings from my teenage years back in Delhi, they used to be cute, pure and innocent😉...I thought about those when i penned her feelings.

For Arnav, Khushi was very different from the girls he was around with till now. i don't think his feelings were romantic at all in the beginning. but somewhere he started caring for her a lot .

flashbacks were superb...oh god his father was a bas***d😡😡 ..Arnav hate his father and for some refreshing vacation went to India...where he met Khushi...little innocent khushi...Arnav's father was a typical playboy, he would come in the picture again towards the end.

Why all playboys fell in love with Virgin girls??? lol..Haha! Yah that seems to be true...

that... bechaini and tadap is back...Man get ready for a roller coaster ride with ur girl..😉😉..Off course Panditji Khushi will get best hubby in world...(But di I still love Arnav Rathod ok😊?? yeah..i will wait for this story to unfold and may be decide to change my heart...😳.)I love my Arnav Rathore also...He was my ultimate man...This Arnav may touch a part of Arnav Rathore towards the end. But this one will be special too.
Temple visit..so spiritual..
assumption regarding Arnv and his hate for Khushi..
misunderstood her character???(Typical ASR😡😡)
or the circumstance lead them to it???

Arnv have a little teeny bit of feelings but it didnt strengthened to further...he return back to US and fell back to his boring life and bedding women...

Only one request...After this blackmail marriage or whatever DONT make our khushi some doormat 😕😕...Di pleaseee😳..Omg, I hate doormattish characters...She may be shy or in awe of him for sometime...but she would never be a doormat...

the opening and ending song..hmm which movie???😳😳😳 Nah those are the couplets...who knows from where...I had written this story back in 2004...made lot of changes in the characterization for current writing , but these couplets remained the same. I used to put the couplets always with my story chapters. 😉
TC...I will see you with next part...🤗

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: Mrieshka
Since you have started updating this regularly. I will reread from begining and will comment in future. Will wait for story to evolve further. thank you.

Great! yah its a good idea to catch up from the beginning.😃

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matosarah

@matosarah

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: manjunaidu
Loved reading the whole update dear.eagerly waiting for the next part.i liked your way of narration,combination of both past and present tracks of khushi and arnav.good work dear.thanks for the PM.

Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed the part...😃

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#305

Superb update

Their past is being revealed

Wonder how will they meet again

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#306

Wat went wrong with arnav n khusi as for him n her it was love at first sight, i think there must be some misunderstanding, i hope arnav rescue khusi before its too late.

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#307

Part 3:

Khushi is so selfless , innocent and giving , she is marrying Shyam because he promised to take of her Mamaji's treatment. I love Ira I wish her dream comes true before the engagement happens I dont want Khushi to be nay way tied to Shyam 😡

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#308

Part 4 :

Arrgg Khushi got engaged to Shyam 😭😭😭 . I hope both of them realize that they are made for each other and that is the reason Arnav is feeling that he lost something precious. I am happy that Khushi has Arundhati and Ira beside her who can understand her emotions.

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#309

Atlast I caught up with the story . The glimpses of the past look very cute and romantic. Khushi looked like a very bubble and happy girl even after being an orphan. I think there is a big misunderstanding between both of them which lead to the separation. Cannot wait for the next update.