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Posted: 9 years ago
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Isn't he adorable😳



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RSanaya71

Credit to the creator

Isn't he adorable😳




Haye Sanaya, I am deadwa
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Posted: 9 years ago
Di , I know, we all are crazy after Arhi.

Can we have a teaser at this weekend.Please.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vijayalaxmib

Hot, emotional n superb update.. Wen khushi left arnav place by accusing him as selfish n arnav got angry n went to search her.. I thought oh god, again another fight wat ll happen now.. But loved the way how arnav open up to her, even though in anger, bt he told her abt the things which she didnt know n abt his presence in her life n important days .. Police whistles seeing their war n love was superb n little funny too.. Arshi made love.. Loved ur style of writing abt their hot n romantic moments.. Arnav is in india , to encourage anjali to build her love life with arun.. Even khushi is coming back to india that to with uncle suki.. Arnav confessed abt their marriage to gupta's n raizada.. Aadi n payal is fixed even ahjali n arun's too , next is our arshi.. Waiting for next chapter.. Continue.. Thanks for pm in adv.


Vijayalaxmib😊

I was feeling down and your comment gave me so much energy with a smile.THANK YOU so much dear.🤗

I am so happy seeing a lot of you including yourself to enjoy the way I wrote this story.To mix the original with make up stuff as FF wasn't easy and 😆 I am a difficult person.
But it was such a fun to have this pen down.I enjoyed every bit of it.
Consummation scene was a challenge for me and I was a bit nervous...but I am happy that you all enjoyed it without being so uncomfortable.I don't like my readers to be uncomfortable.

Police part ...I laughed by myself after finishing it...it came out good during an intense part as Mojo was out.

Love u dear.❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thnx shiv😊

Really appreciate that
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: latersbaby.

Oh my my di let me cool down first..so much hotness to handle it..really need a cold shower in this brone crushing winter😆😳


😆 chill Shibani chill
Aww the fight that start with so much intensity ends with so much passion😳...
Arnav ne v apne dil ki bhadas nikal he diya..enough izz enough...nd ya in points amwith arnav bitwa dat if she was hurt by his action then he was also no less hurt by every tym a new accusation...
Oh my gossh the intensity with which khushi kissed him..

"Heere moti main na chaahoo...Main toh chaahoo samgam tera
Main na jaanu, tu hi jaane...Main toh teri, tu hai mera..."

Lovely song and connection...yes he was hurt too and she wasn't realizing it till now and the moment it seeped in...she is not hesitant taking her man with pride

overwhelmed by his confession...nd this tym thier is not going back..to show her by his action his intensity of love..his passion & desire for her...as actions speaks louder than word😉😳
finally they became one body and soul in true sense...that was so hawwtt sensual and passionate...☺️
"Adhoori saans thi, dhadkan adhoori thi, adhoore hum ...
magar ab chaand poora hai falak pe ... aur ab poore hai hum.."

Thank You Shibani , for loving it
I must thank you for appreciation at every step of this story ..love u Dammit

as for arnav they r already a married couple with all the rituals...

yeap
Nd finally mr arrogant stale piece of resin confessed that 3 words in most romantic way..haye di u make me all blushy blushy through out the update😳😳
Glad u liked it as I was nervous
now waiting for arshi marriage in properway i mean infront of family and frnds...
Oh no agaye arshi k life me ghrahan...shyam snakewa..now what he wants...when after so ling anjali got her share of true love tav iss ko tapakna tha...😡😡

😆 👏
Not to forgot those poor police man...😆😆thier face r worth watching to get hold of arshi nd witness thier cute nok jhok...😆😆dat was damn hilarious di🤣thier face must b like this...oh not again😆🤣

🤣 good one Shibani

Bdw di no mojo darling in this update..his this mojni missing him😆😉
Waiting for nxt..
Continue soonish.😃
Your Hero will be here in the next update

PS:- oh di lovely edit of arshi...just eagrly waiting for them..uff abb intezaar he nahi hota...24 nov kyun jaldi ni aying...it gonna b 9 episodes mini series of only 10 min...huh..10 se kanha maan bharega di..bt phir b they r back itna he kafi hai...😳😳chahe 10 ka ho ya 1 min...uff when it cameto arshi we cant get enough of them...😉till then rabba vey



know I love em...I enjoyed it

Don't care about tack stuff...just love ARSHI Bas

Thnx for the lovely comment my Mojni😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
And I was expecting Shyam was dealt with along with that devil incarnated sick Uncle..
Either way, I am happy Arnav and Khushi marriage was real..Anjali get true love, provided Shyam has not comeup with another blow at her.
Poor Adi and Payal, hope they would soon unite...

P.S : I really loved the senseous and passionate union of ARSHI was written, beautiful.. the way you mentioned about nature marked the end of anguish and beautiful beginning of new phase of their lives...awesome
Edited by jyothirockz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RSanaya71

Superb Update👏👏👏

Romantic ,but emotional.How much pain Arnav had is what grabbing me here.There is no doubt, Khsuhi's pain is far rom imagination,but Arnav's pain finally surfaced up and the way he explained it.😭 My heart ached for him.

Khushi sealed his lips understanding him finally.She wasn't aware of and now the way she took his pain away and he made the promise to take her pains away.👏

This is the BESTEST chapter ever .

So Sukhi uncle was with O'Conner 😆 and the way police whistling at them, I giggled .They are right Mad people and in Love with each other.

This is the longest comment I have ever made in my history on IF😆😉


Thnx Sanaya😊

Now I am grinning like a child

thank you and yes I think this is the first time Sanaya had written long one👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Totally fabulous update fiaqa ... relished each nd every sentence bit by bit ... u made me speechless with ur writing skills... beginning passage was just awesome ... his rage, her anger ... frustration nd her beautiful confession ... loved it ... FB ... WOW !! smooth flow of beautiful words ..nd the beautiful morning ... ur description of arshi emotions ..lovely confessions... beautifully penned... the invader becoming invaded... he was hers ... she was his... now for forever... he was back to India .. waiting for her... arnav met adi .. lil suspense .. cleared nd finally she is going to land .. intezar .. its always worth..hehehe.. Last sentence jerked me ... ouch ...
Thank u so much for this beautiful update Fiaqa nd thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
No teaser 😒,
Eagerly waiting sweets 🤗

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