SS 59 Tan, Atom Bomb & Twins - Page 108

Originally posted by: NSB7

Had a ball while reading this update

Dam nice

Still reeling in the fits of laughter and fear for II too

😆

my review in a bit...once i get home

Originally posted by: dristi64

I'm just relishing it all! Shruti must be rubbing her hands gleefully with a sinister smile to go along. 😆

The Dude has really got it bad. Now he wants II to mess with his food choices, too? Naiicee..

His heart skips a beat looking at her with his 'precious cargo'

II's nature is so relatable in these updates- being at home, all over the place, claiming rights on everything and everyone. I was so this way when I used to b home for hols while pursuing undergrad.

Appa egging on No-way Abhi to cross-examine II on her career. Evil Appa😈

Bring in the BUTTER ball to give II some competition. She's been getting too much attention. The Dude needs some now.

Not so aloof now are we?😆
Usko bhindi ke liye tease hona chahiye, usko breakfast chahiye, usko sab attention chahiye
His wife is acting like he is invisible😕
Hmphhh!!

sharp twinge of jealousy.. now this is called emotion.

II blushed.. R&B's heart skipped a beat

This holds so much depth ❤️
they are married... he knows she belongs to him.. but inspite of all the facts, he just demands her attention n concentration all for himself.

Jealous R&B is a treat for us Nisha 😳 special wala thanks for this track 😉 😳

Oh woow dude is head over heels in love with II
He wants her to mess with him in all sence even with his food!!
But dude u too hav used all sorts of food for ur pleasure... Remember breakfast poker
Ab vegetables like bhindi ko to chor do 😆
So abhi knows bout blues great!!!
Dude u hav all right over her just pic her and take in to room nd do all u want 😳
Leave Appa and abhi to team up.
Ur two angels r waiting for u to take charge!

R&B leaned back.. finally the spot light was on him"

🤣

Originally posted by: -Ara-

Hey Nisha,

Kiara here. I know I did promise to read SS a long time ago and haven't really managed to. I'm getting on it now. Blame a bunch of friends who heavily recommend it. Since I'm busy studying I won't be able to review or give feedback as frequently as I would like to but will try my best to tell you via PM. And if I do say something that could be perceived as offending to you, in PM, please do try to understand that I don't mean it and mostly I don't even realise it. I'm told you're someone who doesn't take feedback quite well and thus I will try my best to limit what I say. But honestly, you have a nice little group here and I would love to be a part of it one day. For now studying takes priority and reading this so I can be up to date.


Keep up the good work. :)

I honestly do feel like the plague atm but can you please link me to an index since the one on the forum isn't updated post thread 27. Thank you.

Originally posted by: NSB7

Hi kiara

Great to know you want to be a part of this little group

I'm volunteering to reply on behalf of nisha because she seems busy

Firstly you could post reviews here if you wish to be a part of this group...involves more interaction with the group and nisha is busy and constantly checking PM's is tough.

And about the index..well after 27 if you go to the last page of every thread you will find a link to the next

Just like you Vikas has been busy with his studies and might not have got the time to update the index

So just maybe put in a little effort of two more clicks and reach the last page and find the link to the next thread :)

And about the positivity towards negative comments

Don't mind me getting a little defensive here

The story and the author both are quite close to my heart.

Since nisha isn't charging anybody to read the story or forcing anybody to do so...she need not respond to negative feedback with a smile...the story is something she writes because she likes to and naturally anything said negative about it might hurt her.

And itaa story she writes alone and its a great thing that she involves opinions from the readers while doing so.

But if there is something that seemed against your interest kindly ignore it because saying negative about something needs either a right to say it...if you are hereby close friend/family/coauthor or some strong reason like it offended your belief. I haven't seen nisha offend anybody through her story.

I'm sorry if it's an over reaction but I'm just throwing some light omwhy its ok for nisha not to take feedback well of she doesn't ...but she has always taken feedback well and justified a lot of what she writes

Thankyou and welcome

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thanks for the defense

Totally appreciate it😳

I JUST told her that... I was behind on reading some pages from two days ago😆

Thats exactly what I told her, be as harsh as you like IF you EMPLOY me OR pay me to write...or are married to me OR brought me into this world😆

I know none of those mentioned above read my story... so all others shall have to keep to gushing and silliness and positivity😆

🤗

A bit - Ooo Super