New SwaLak FF Love is Frienship

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue


A guy jogging.with earphone in his ear.!he is in white & jogging enjoying with his earfone. Suddenly a girl came from behind in cycle.

Girl:stay out of d road...u mr earphone..my brake is fail yaar...,

But he was in another world.he didn't listened her and she hit him with the cycle.Both fell down.
Laksh:r u blind?
Swara:r u deaf?
He: excuse me! U hit me. Its ur fault.
She: excuse me...! I was shouting, my brake is fail, u were not listening 2 me. Its ur fault.
Laksh:oulta chor kotwal ko dhante! stop arguing and say sorry.
Roli: y should i? We fell becoz of u. U say sorry.
Sid:u...
His phn rings.
Laksh: yaa bhai. No just 10 mins. M reaching. Yeah bye. He was going,
Swara: oye hello, atleast say sorry n go!
Laksh:chuhiya kahinki.
He leaves.
Swara: naughty monkey.

She says in disgust.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

Laksh reaches home. Sanskaar rushes 2 him.

Annapurna: Laksh, kahan the beta?

Laksh:Kissi chuhiya ne rasta kaat liya Maa...

All: Chuhiya??????

Sanskaar understood he was telling about a girl..so he interupted:

Laksh,,forget about that. Jaa get ready.. we r being late. Ache se taiyaar hona haan...

Laksh: bhai,, hum tumhare liye ladki dekhne jaa rahe hain be sure she don't choose me if i dress up well...u knw how handsome i am...

Sanskaar: Shut up Laksh and go n get ready...soon.

Laksh leaves..

All d family reaches a house where there were people 2 welcome them.. Shekhar garodia welcomes them.. Laksh goes 2 park d car..

A girl comes with sarmista and sits in front of Sanskaar.

Shekhar: Our daughter, Ragini.

Ragini and Sanskaar had eye lock.

Laksh parked d car was about 2 go into d house when he bumped to a girl.

Both:R u blind????

They looked each other's face and both: U??????

Laksh: tum ab ak mera picha kar rahi ho?? Just for a Sorry???

Swara: How cheap u r.! How dare u talk to me like that?

Laksh : What do u mean?

Swara: I mean u r following me..

Laksh:JUst shut up! Chuhiya Kahiki...

Swara:U naughty monkey! How dare u call me a Chuhiya????

Laksh:That u r...CHuhiya...

Swara: U...

Someone called frm inside: Swara...

Swara: Coming Ma...(to Laksh)dekh lungi main tumhe...

She leaves...Laksh Follows her with an irritating face...

WHen they go insidee

Sarmistha: Annapurna ji she is Swara, Ragini's sister.

Sujata: He is Laksh, Sanskaar's brother.

Shekhar: Swara,distribute sweet 2 all..

Swara: Yes papa..

She distributes but she doesn't gives one to Laksh.. Annapurna notices this but stays quiet.

Annapurna: Shekharji, We like Ragini,..but it will be better if children talk 2 each other once.

Shekhar: Sure annapurnaji, Swara,take Ragini 2 terrace,,

They leave.

Annapurna: Sanskaar...

Sanskaar stands up, goes 2 Laksh: tu chal mere saath.

Saying this he drags him with him.

All of them go up.

Laksh:I think we should leave them alone.

Swara:I know, mujhe tumhari advice ki jaroorat nahi hai...

Laksh made an irritating expression again.

Ragini: Swara...

Swara: Leave it Ragini, he deserves it.

Sanskaar: I think u have met before (slowly to Laksh)

Laksh: Subah wali Chuhiya...

Sanskaar gave a shocking look.

Swarya leaves and Sangini seats..Swarya goes to a corner,

Laksh: Swara right?

Swara: Why? Do u have any problem??

Laksh: Amazing name, Sounds like a young angry goon, SWARAAA!!

He said giving force on her name.

Swara: (with an o face): stop teasing me u monkey...(Annapurna hears from behind) Apni sakal dekhi hai Ayine me ? Bilkul circus k retired monkey lagte ho...wild monkey...

Annapurna hears it and gets shocked.

She leaves after listening Swarya conversations. Sanskaar and Ragini talks 2 each other which makes them very relaxed and happy. After a little while Laksh n Swara comes there, Swara takes Ragini from there running towards d room and Laksh asks Sanskaar:

Liked her na???

Sanskaar: Laksh I think we should meet once more...for her...

Laksh: Main samajh gya bhai...

He runs. Sanskaar follows him..

"Laksh, Ruk..."

He goes 2 d hall.

Laksh: Papa, YEs...

All becomes happy.

DP: Shekharji, aap ek baar ragini se puch lijiye...

Swara comes running.

Swara: Papa,...Haan...

All becomes happy again. Annapurna says Shekhar and Sharmistha should give Sanskaar a coconut and 101 rs. To fix everything.

Sharmista: Shona, Ja.. Nariyal le kar aa.

Swara: haan maa...

She leaves. All were busy in giving eachother congrats when Swara was coming down stairs...She was having a bucket of flowers and a coconut in it too...She was so excited that she was about 2 fall at d last step when Laksh hold her.All d flowers fell on them,They had a continuous eyelock until d coconut fell on Laksh's head.

They unhold eachother after that when Laksh said: AAAhhh...

All looked there.

Shekhar scolded Swara: Swara...Kya hai yeh? How could u be so careless??/

Laksh (looking Swara feel crying): A...Uncle. Uski galti nahi thi. That was an accident...Plz ignore...

All goes well and Parvati asks maheswari family to rest and return in evening. All agrees. After sometime Swarya along with Sangini went 2 terrace to take fresh air..Where:

Swara: Everybody excepted u it does not means that I accepted for my Sis...U have 2 answer my three questions...

Sanskaar: OK.

Swara: U know how 2 wash clothes????

Laksh: Clothes???U dont know my brother...all washer men take tips from him 2 wash d clothes better...

Swara(Ignorig him):U knw how 2 cook food?

Laksh: Food?U r asking about food? U dont know my brother...once his aim was 2 become a cook...Our servants...even some hotel managements takes tips from him...

Swara(again avoiding): U knw Singing and dancing na???My sis is very fond of it...

Laksh: HAhahahaha...u dont knw my brother he is a very good dancer...

Swara: Now, another question...

Laksh:wait...tumne bola questions...

Swara: Yeh aap ke liye hai...

Laksh: Mere liye? Han han pucho pucho..

Swara: Tum kya unke naukar ho????

Laksh: What?//No...

Swara: To phir unke question ka answer tum kyun de rahe ho???? MR. Naughty Monkey???

Laksh: CHuhiya kahanki...How dare u call me that?? Wo b mere bhai k saamne????

Swara: THen how can u call me chuhiya in front of my sis...???

Laksh: Dont forget Miss Swara Gundi.. Main ladke wala hun

Swara: Toh kya hua? Mere liye um sirf ek Monkey ho, aur hamesha rahoge... Jungli Bandar!

Laksh gave an irritating look.

To be continued...


Love,

Shirisha😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
#3

Disclaimer

All the characters are a work of fiction. Don't be over possessive for any Character or Bash them. All the characters present is a necessary need. Any harsh comment will make the writer stop the story right at the moment.


PART 2

All were in d hall. Greeting each other.

Swalak(2 each other):I need 2 talk 2 u...

Swara took him2 terrace.

Laksh:k tum bolo.

Swara: tum...

Laksh: Swara we r getting late...

After a few second:

swalak(at a same time)

Laksh: sanskaar ragini se milna chahta hai...

Swara: ragini ko sanskaar se milna hai...

then

Laksh: Fine...Listen 2 me carefully... hame saath kaam karna hai, so jhaga bilkul b nahi... ok???

Swara: What do u mean? Mujhe koi sauk nhi hai umse jhagada karne ka... main sirf ragini k liye ye kar rhi hu.

Laksh: main b tumhe tolerate nahi kar sakta. Sirf bhai k liye... Ok forget it. I have a plan. Lein uske liye, ham friends banna hoga, and no fight.

Swara: Laksh...

Laksh:I said no fight Swara...

Swara: OK...what's d plan?

At hall Maheswari family were about 2 go...

Sanskaar (in mind):God Laksh...where r u???????

Swalak came.Swara went 2 Ragini and Laksh 2 sanskaar.

Laksh: Dont worry bro...all set.

Swara: all done .

All were going. Sanskaar and Ragini looked each other..Laksh went near Swara and put his hand forward. Swara responded and shake hand.

Maheswari HOUSE

LAKSH AND SANSKAAR GOES 2 HALL WHERE EVERYBODY WERE SITTING.SANSKAAR TELLS LAKSH 2 TALK 2 MAA.

LAKSH:A...MAA...

MAA: YES LAKSH, U WANT 2 TELL SOMETHING?

LAKSH: MM...YES MAA...MAIN SOCH RAHA THA, WHY SHOUDN'T WE GO FOR A FAMILY PICNIC...WITH RAGINI AND HER FAMILY TOO...

MAA: WHAT?

LAKSH:YES MAA... BHT MAZA AYEGA...

MAA: CHALTE HAIN...

LAKSH:YES!

SANSKAAR:THANX BRO...

LAKSH:U R WELCOME...

LAKSH & SANSKAAR GOES 2 ROOM AND LAKSH CALLS SWARA.RAGINI PICKS THE PHONE.

LAKSH: HI CHUHIYA...KAAM HO GAYA.

RAGINI:CHUHIYA???YEH CHUHIYA KAUN HAI LAKSH????

LAKSH: SORRY...WHO'S THIS???

RAGINI:RAGINI.

LAKSH(BITING HIS TONGUE):A...RAGINI...HYE...A... SANSKAAR SE BAAT KARO..

HE GIVES PHONE 2 SANSKAAR AND GOES AWAY.

NEXT MORNING

LAKSH WAS SLEEPING.SANSKAAR COMES.

SANSKAAR: WAHAN SAB READY B HO GAYE, AUR YEH JANAAB SO RAHE HAIN...LAKSH WAKE UP.WAKE UP LAKSH...

LAKSH: SANSKAAR...KYA KAR RAHA HAI YAAR...SONE DE NA NA...

SANSKAAR: LAKSH,WE R GETTING LATE...GET UP.

LAKSH: LATE FOR WHAT?

SANSKAAR: LATE FOR PICNIC...

LAKSH: SANSKAAR...MENE TERAS KAAM KIYA NA...AB TU MERE LIYE KUCH KAR.

SANSKAAR: KYA KARUN?

LAKSH: LET ME SLEEP.

SANSKAAR: LAKSH...7 BAJ GYE GET UP YAAR...RAGINI KI FAMILY HAMARA WAIT KAR RAHI HOGI...LAKSH...IF U R MY BROTHER THEN GET UP.

LAKSH(WAKING UP):AGAIN EMOTIONAL ATYACHAAR...

THE MAHESWARI FAMILY GOES 2 DWIVEDI HOUSE WHERE THEY PICKS UP THEM. SWARAG AND SWALAK HIRES ONCE CAR.

IN THE THE CAR

LAKSH WAS DRIVING, SANSKAAR WAS SITTING WITH HIM, RAGINI AND SWARA WERE SITTING AT THE BACKSIDE.

SWARA:LAKSH EK BAAT PUCHU...?

LAKSH STARTS LAUGHING.

SWARA:HAS KYUN REH HO?

HE DOESNOT REPLY AND ONLY LAUGHES.

SANSKAAR:LAKSH, KYA HUA?

LAKSH:TUM BOLNE K LIYE PERMISSION MAANG RAHI HO???HAHAHAHA

SANSKAAR AND RAGINI TOO STARTS LAUGHING.

SWARA: FINE.. AB SE NAHI MANGUNGI... DIRECT BAAT KARUNGI.

LAKSH: OK OK.BOLO..

SWARA: SANSKAAR TOH ARRANGE MARRIAGE KAR RAHA HAI... WHAT ABOUT U??

RAGINI:SWARA...

LAKSH: I WILL PREFER LOVE MARRAIGE...

SWARA:OOOUOUUU...WHY?

LAKSH: I WANT A GIRL OF MY CHOICE...SHE IS THE UNIQUE...THE ONE AND ONLY...

SWARA: HMM...TELL SOMETHING ABOUT HER...NAAM KYA HAI USKA?

LAKSH: MUJGHE NAHI PATA, JAB USSE MILUNGA, TOH SABKO BATA DUNGA...

SWARA: COOL... AUR AGAR WO TUMHE MILI HI NAHI TOH?

LAKSH: HMM.. NAHI MILI TOH TUMSE SHAADI KAR LUNGA.

SANSKAAR, RAGINI, SWARA: WHAT?????

LAKSH: JUST JOCKING YARR...

SWARA: SERIOUSLY LAKSH , MAIN KISI B LANGDE LULLE SE SHAADI KAR LUNGI PAR TUMSE... NEVER!

LAKSH: WO TOH WAQT HI BATAYEGA...

EVERYBODY REACHES THE PICNIC SPOT.THEY STARTS PLAYING CRICKET.SANSKAAR WAS BATTING PARI WAS BOWLING.AFTER SOMETIME HE GETS OUT AND RAGINI COMES FOR BATING.

SWARA: BAHUT ACHA KHELTI HAI...

LAKSH:AHAAN?

SWARA:AHAAN.

RAGINI BATS VERY WELL.SHE ONLY HITS SIX.IT WAS VERY HARD 2 OUT HER.THEN LAKSH GETS A PLAN.SAILLU BALLS,RAGINI AGAIN HITS HIGH BUT THIS TIME LAKSH HOLDS SWARA UP AND SHE CATCHES THE BALL..

SWALAK:OUT!

SANSKAAR:U CHEAT! WO OUT NAHI HAI. CHEATERS!

LAKSH: BHAI, ITS NOT CHEATING, ITS

SWALAK:TEAM WORK.

ALL ENJOYS IN THE PICNIC VERY MUCH.AT NEARLY 4 PM MAA ANNOUNCED:

WE R ABOUT 2 LEAVE GET READY.

AGAIN THE FOUR WERE IN ONE CAR.THEY WERE ON THE ROAD NEAR A FOREST WHERE THEIR CAR STOPPED.

SANSKAAR: KYA HUA?

LAKSH: PATA NAHI.

ALL THE 4 COMES OUT OF D CAR.

SANSKAAR: ENGINE GARAM HAI,WE NEED SOME WATER.

LAKSH: AB YAHAN PANI?

SWARA:(THINKING SOMETHING)LAKSH , MUJHE DIKH RAHA HAI WATER.

LAKSH:KAHAN?

SWARA:WAHAN...

LAKSH: SWARA...

SWARA:COME NA...

SHE DRAGS HIM INLAKSHE LEAVING SANSKAARAR ON THE ROAD. THEY WALKS SOME TIME,THEN

LAKSH: SWARA,KAHAN HAI PAANI?

SWARA: I DONT KNOW!

LAKSH:WHAT?TOH MUJHE TUM YAHAN KYUN LAAYI?

SWARA: TAAKI RAGINI AUR SANSKAAR KO THODA AUR TIME MIL SAKE.

LAKSH: WHAT????

SWARA: YES...NOW IF WE HAVE ALREADY CAME LETS LOOK FOR WATER. FOLLOW ME.

LAKSH JUST GIVES A LIITLE SMILE AND STARTS FOLLOWING HER.AFTER A LITTLE WHILE LAKSH STOPS.

SWARA:WHAT HAPPENED?

LAKSH: DO U KNOW WHERE WE R?

SWARA:NO! TUMHE RAASTE YAAD HAI NAA ??

LAKSH: WHAT!MUJHE? OH NO...!

SWARA:LAKSH ...WHAT DO U MEEAN?

LAKSH:I MEAN R LOST SWARA!

SWARA:WHAT???

LAKSH:YES!

SWARA:AB HUM KYA KAREN?

LAKSH: BAHAR JAANE KA RAASTA DHUNDTE HAIN...

SWALAK WERE WALKING. SWARA SHOUTED

LAKSH: KYA HUA?

SWARA: MOCH AA GAYI SAYAD.

LAKSH: WHAT? OK.. TUM YAHIN BAITHO MAIN AATA HUN.

HE TURNS AND ABOUT 2 GO THEN TURNS AGAIN

LAKSH: AATA HUN MAIN...

SWARA SHOOKS HEAD POSITIVELY.

LAKSH GOES AWAY.

AFTER A WHILE SWARA HEARS SOME CAR HORN.SHE RUNS TOWARD THE SOUND. AND REACHES THE OTHER LAKSHE ROAD OF THE FOREST.SHE SAW A CAR COMING AND WAVED HAND FOR LIFT.THEIR WERE SOME BOYS IN THE CAR.THEY STOPPED SEEING SWARA.

SWARA: A...LIFT PLEASE?

BOY:OH YES WHY NOT...COME SIT.

SWARA: A...ACTUALLY ONE OF MY FRIEND IS INSIDE..LET ME CALL, LAKSH ...

BOYS: LET HIM BE THERE...U COME WITH US...WE WILL DROP U...

SWARA(KNOWING THEIR INTENTIONS):THANK U VERY MUCH..SORRY 2 DISTURB U, U MAY LEAVE NOW...

BOY:HOW CAN WE LEAVE WITHOUT U DARLING...

THEY FORCEFULLY TRIES 2 MAKE SWARA SIT IN THE CAR.

SWARA:LEAVE ME...(CALLING LAKSH)LAKSH ...JAANE DO MUJHE PLZ...

THEN THE BOY WHO WAS HOLDING SWARA'S HAND GETS A PUNCH ON HIS FACE. ALL LOOKS.HE IS OUR HERO LAKSH! ANOTHER BOY HOLDS HER HAND

LAKSH: HAATH CHOD.

BOY: KYUN?

LAKSH: MENE KAHA HAATH CHOD.

BOY: NAHI CHODUNGA, KYA KAR LEGA?

HE BEATS ALL OF THEM AND THEY DRIVES AWAY.LAKSH GIVES ALONG LOOK 2 THEIR WAY.

SWARA:LAKSH...

HE GIVES HER A TIGHT SLAP...

LAKSH: TUM KHUD KO SAMAJHTI KYA HO? JHANSI KI RANI HO TUM TUM KUCH B KAR SAKTI HO? HOW COULD U BE SO CARELESS SWARA? MANA KIYA THA NA MENE KAHIN JAANE SE ITNI CHOTI SI BAAT TUMHARI SAMAJHME NAHI AATI???

SWARA:I...I M...I M SORRY...

LAKSH: SORRY?SWARA DO U HAVE ANY IDEA K AGAR MAIN TIME PE NHI AATA TOH KYA HOTA? WO LOG KUCH B KAR SAKTE THE...TUMNE MERE BAARE ME EK BAAR B NAHI SOCHA? IF AGAR TUMHE KUCH HO JATA TOH MERA KYA HOTA? AND U R SAYING SORRY?

SWARA:LAKSH,I KNOW MUJHSE GALTI HUI HAI BUT WHY R U SO WORRIED FOR ME? WHY MAY I KNOW WHY U CARE FOR ME????????

LAKSH: BECAUSE I LOVE U DAMN IT!...

Love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Is it okay if I say my version of part three here it is



PART SIX

Swara:what?
Laksh:yeah
Swara:but how I mean keise
Laksh:I don't know it just happened the time I saw you
Swara:okay but listen I have something to say to you too
Laksh:what?
Swara:I...i..
Laksh:I
Swara:I love you too
Laksh was so happy he lifted her in the air.swara:ok leave all that how are we going to get back home I mean everyone is going to be scared right
And swara Was right
Precap:everyone scared
Edited by Alishaali - 9 years ago

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