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madhu1210 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Marvellous beautiful outstanding update..


Jenny this is my shortest comment so far in your story..
I totally enjoy each n every work of this wonderful update...
They are finally one...thanks alot..

I don't want to dilute the effect of update with my words
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Posted: 9 years ago
I've missed out on so much - there was a proposal, wedding and already a suhaag raat - these two sure are moving fast!! But I'm so happy for them because no one deserves it as much as they do after all that they can gone through just to get to the point.

Loved the whole process of them getting back together - love how you wrote it. I liked how Khushi said - they were never really separated in the true sense of the word (sorry don't remember the exact sentence you wrote, but I just really liked that line!!).

Poor Anita - my heart is breaking for her...is Aman really going to be on the same plane as her? And sitting next to her? That's totally not fair for her😭

Although I'm loving this honeymoon phase, especially since they are back to where it started, I can't help but wonder what's going to happen once they return back home - will Sujata finally be normal with Khushi or will she continue to be stubborn even after Khushi is married.

Glad you added the tidbit about Lavanya moving on - it was perfect timing for Khushi and Arnav so they could both finally let it go, especially Khushi.

LOL at the road signs in the last chapter😆😆

Sorry I've been MIA - this AD just sucks. I'm probably going to disappear again for the next month or so - but will catch up with SF as soon as I get a chance.

As always, thanks for this lovely story - it truly is a pleasure to read😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi
The link to the new thread doesn't work


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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update and interesting teaser!
Waiting for more, Di!
PS: Especially for the gray eyes! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow beautiful song, thanks for sharing. Sujata and Navin are reminiscing their beloved little daughter who got married. It's a moment of joy and pain. The feelings are more intense when the daughter got married of her own. The moment looks beautiful how Navin consoling sujata. It seems sujata mellowed down.
Oh poor anita, I am so hurt for her.

Where khushi smudged her sindoor! They must had an awesome suhaag raat.
Waiting for the morning romance.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry I'm late:( read the update and loved it to heaps. Finally my arshi got married in their own unique way. The moment has come, arshi as husband and wife, Mr and Mrs Raizada...
Seriously Jen, you are the best to write these intimate scenes. The way you wrote shows crystal clearly how much they love and need each other.
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved the teaser jen. looking very promising. i hope anita too finds her happiness soon whether its with aman or not.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Jen sorry for being late and thank you so much for sending me PM . I really can't say in words how much I loved it . your other admirers have already put it so wonderfully that I have just hit the like on their comment . Normally when we are reaching towards the end of any amazing journey we just don't want it to end same is with this story I just want it to go on and on .
AD is keeping me away and IF keeps pulling me here😉 . I wish I had more time to read . I am trying my best to come here and read at least what I started so I will be with till the end and even after this ends I am already requesting to start a new journey . i am so selfish😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Jenny,
Desire hummed between these two souls❤️
The whole world stopped
Time stilled
Joy so infectious
Skin on skin
This urgent need...his desperate need...
The bubbling crescendo...
Need to be touching..
'You have all of me'...
'I am your friend...exited to be your wife '
'I am exited to be your lover as I'm exited to be your husband '
This togetherness throwing goosebumps feverishly to the core
Bubbling Crescendo
She arched with a whisper 'Yes'
Her quivering & she grew slicker
Oh the moment of surrender
'Yes'...❤️
Desire simmered in the blood...
Awareness tingled along the skin
Combustible Sexual Chemistry...
But something more deeper pleasured their body to delirium...
This hunger was more than physical
'He gave me the right to His pleasure...
It was mine & mine alone'❤️
Oh the chain nestling on her curves
Hugging & winking
The gentle pulling & tugging ..
Called mating for the human species
His fingers whisper across the flat stomach
Their lips do their calling
Then their tongues reach out at the same time
Perfectly in synch...❤️
Nuzzling in the hollow of her neck...
Teeth grazing along the curve...
Oh it hurts so good...
I hook up on his waist...
Scratching him on his way...
He grunts & groans...
'What a vision to behold...
Perfect...in every way...
Perfect only for you
Damn right you are'.
Says with hooded gaze...
Urhghf...
Pounding of the heart
Deep breaths to slow that pounding
Her heart beat a staccato rhythm..
His hands on her waist...
His warm breath caressing her cheeks
Pleasant shivers down the spine...
The pores on her body dancing with expectations
Tightening of the knuckles...
The building of the tension
Conscious of every rise & fall of the chests
And the shuddery breaths...
The breaths were their only companions...
Accompanied by the tangible current
Scorching wherever it went...
Eyes, Lips, Breast..
The heart fluttering frantically,,,
The core twisting & turning...
The ache thumping
The ache for that release his eyes promised...
Turned into a quivering mess of hormones..
Yes...yes...that is all what was said...
'Oh how precious she was...
Destiny's gift to Me...❤️
Gift I'd never expected...'
No more facade...
You & I...
Skin on skin...
Who cares for wine & roses...
Anyone can do that...
But the tapestry of Arnav has to have those silken threads...
Colourful silken threads of Khushi...❤️
Coming through all the snarling storms
Arnav & Khushi are strong...
Lending support to each other...
Arnav + Khushi = ❤️
You have given depth to their emotions in this chapter
Beautifully penned...
Hats off to you...👏👏
🤗
Look forward to your next update...
saffron
❤️S
Some text from various sources...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Jen - Have been with you on this journey for a long time and I felt like this chapter was a milestone for Arnav and Khushi as well as us the readers who fell in love wi this story and the characters or to state it more bluntly, started obsessing about this fictional characters...lol.

The wedding and the events leading up to Wedding were so beautiful and so beautifully depicted by you that I felt like I was watching this wedding and privy to every thought of theirs. Simply lovely.

Khushi has believed in the santicity of marriage from the beginning of this Story and Arnav is also believing in it by now and I really felt that when he completed the sindoor and mangalsutra rituals and you conveyed how seriously he was doing everything to make his Khushi happy.

Now for the suhaagraat, let's just say it was fantastic and you as the author did justice to it. You have often said you are not comfortable with intimate scenes but this was done so well that I can tell you, you have mastered that art.

Sorry for the short comments and delays but as you said, AD has been crazy.,

Hope the Jashn brings you more inspiration.😉 And you will continue to write Arhi stories.
Edited by Anamika100 - 9 years ago

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