Love wins (LRL) - Page 2

Originally posted by: rkchandni

Oh very nice 2 part me hi kiss

Not bad so story me past n present dono sath me chal rahe hai interesting plzz bit more long part cont soon

Yeah i ll try to update long
Nd haan coz u guys wana know na wht ll happen to rn in past thats why
😛

Originally posted by: RNforever

nice start
i loved it raj naina ki shadi or ek cute se beti how sweet
plz update soon
do me pm wjen u update


love naina

Hmm av tm sab hme apne ff se itta entertain kar rahe ho toh maine v socha kuch strt karu

Nd yeah i ll pm u

Part-3
Raina naina raj ko aawaz deti h
Raina- mumma dedaa aao na
Naina- fir naina raj ko zabarzast bathroom se bahar bhejne ki kosis karti h
Raj- yar ye raina hmare romance ke bich mai kyu aa jati h, usse pta hona chaiye aaj issi romance ki wajh se ho h
Mai nai ja raha

Naina- plz jaan jao na. Dekho na raina wAit kar ri h. Meri princess dar jayegi. (Showing cute puppy face to raj)

Raj- ok.. Ja raha hu (or chotu sa mu bna ke towel rap karke chale jata h raaj bahar)

Naina fir raaj ko bahar nikal ke gate lock karke nahane lagti h.
Thodi hi der mai naina v naha ke nikal jati h.
Jav naina ready hoke nikalti h toh raj usse dekhte hi reh jata h.
Naina ne pink colour ka suit pehna tha nd meching accessories. Bt minimum makeup, jst 1 stroke of kajal n light pink lipstick.
Uspe hi naina bht adorable dikh rahi hoti h.
Naina raj ke pass aake usko shake karti h toh raj ko hosh aata h. (Omg kya hoga jav dekho naina mai hi kho jata h raj)
Apna hero v kuch kam nai h
Vo v bht dashing dikh raha hota h in his white t-shirt n light blue jeans.

Fir raj raina naina tino ready hoke b/f karne pass ke 1 restaurant pe jate h
Raj- meri princess ko kya karna h b/f pe
Raina- dedaa muche na choco milkshake chaiye
Then raj naina se puchta h
Nd vo log b/f khatm karke baga beach ke liye nikal jate h
Beach pe jate hi raina pani mai jane lagti h
Toh raj uske piche jata h nd raina raj pe pani splash karne lagti h
Then raj v raina pe pani splash karne lagta h nd dona pani mai khelne lagte h.
Naina side pe baith jati h nd sochne lagti h pehle ki batein.

Flashback resume
Naina next mrng jog ke liye ready hoke nikalti h
Jogging karte hue usse capt. Aman mil jate h

Aman- hey naina

Naina- hello sir

Aman stairs at naina
Then naina realise

Naina- Umm sorry aman

Aman- its kk bt nxt tym se yaad rakhna. Kya aap hmare frnd banna passnd karenge ( with a breaf smile)

Naina think 4 some time
Aman naina ko aise sochte dekh ke bolta h

Aman- ham itne bure v nai h naina n give a wink at her

Naina hesitate for few seconds
Then shake hand wid him

Naina- hmm friends nd smile at him

Aman - so kaha se h aap naina nd kon si academy se

Naina- m frm nainital nd i had completed mah academic session from KMA
Kanchanjangha military academy, ambala

Aman- oh so aap kma se h
One of d best academy of india.
Hamne bht suna h kma ke bare mai bt kavi moka nai mila jane ka.

Kma ka naam sunte hi usse raj ki yaad aane lagti h nd vo apne raj ke sath bitaye moments ko yaad karne lagti h

Aman- oh miss naina kaha kho gyi (naina ke eyes ke samne fly karte hue)
Naina- nahi kuch nai vo kuch yaad aa gya. Waise fir toh aapko zarur jana chaiye kma

Aman- yeah lets see. Jav tak aap hme vaha ke kuch kisse hi suna dijiye

Naina ye sunte hi upset ho jati h nd excuse me bol ke chale jati h
Yaha aman sochne lagta h ki isse kya huA, aise kyu chale gyi

Yar sach mai av pta chal raha h tm sab ko kitna sochna or likhna parta hoga
Tm sab itte long updates dete ho fir v short lagta h
Nd likhte tym short v long
Ufff
Chalo-2 guys give ur comments
Waiting 4 ur rplys


Love millee 😛

An pata chala writers ka dard😆

really nice start..
waiting to read more..
plz continue soon

nice part
but short form me mat lekho yaar samjhne me or feel karne me problem hoti h
so milee finally apko hum sab writers ke problem samjh aane lage jab tak m bhi nhi lekha tha tab tak mjhe bbi bohat easy lagta h ff lekhna jab lekhne batho tabhi pta chalta h ki kya haal hota h writers ka


all the best
update next part soon
n plz long update

love naina

Originally posted by: rkchandni

An pata chala writers ka dard😆

Nice update cont soon

Aur ho sake to use full forms and full words

Mujhe read karne me prblm hoti hai

Cont soon

Hmm av pta chal gya
Yeah i ll try to write in full words n give long update

Originally posted by: kark12

really nice start..
waiting to read more..
plz continue soon

Thanks 4 u feedback ishani
😛

Originally posted by: RNforever

nice part
but short form me mat lekho yaar samjhne me or feel karne me problem hoti h
so milee finally apko hum sab writers ke problem samjh aane lage jab tak m bhi nhi lekha tha tab tak mjhe bbi bohat easy lagta h ff lekhna jab lekhne batho tabhi pta chalta h ki kya haal hota h writers ka


all the best
update next part soon
n plz long update

love naina

Hmm sach
And thanks
Mujhe meri mistakes btate rehna nd ur compliment too
Coz mujhe encourage katenge na 😆