Humko Deewana Kar Gay(prt 78 pg 127)AK ff - Page 11

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

i love ur ff
its really nice and 4 once angad is in a teacher profession otherwise its either buisness rockstar or a student
grt part

I TOTALLY agree wid u....I know its kinda awkward tht Angad is a teach but hey...atleast its diff frm the usual!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
luvvv u guyz 4 ur comments and replies....

Part 17



Recap:They ordered food.

Prithvi stared at Kripa for a long time..and then at Angad.What was going on?Was he missing something?How cum Angad sir knew so much abt Kripa even though they had just met tht day at the university?
Prithvi was quite confused.Angad & Kripa realized saw the puzzled xpression on his face and so they decided to tell Prithvi everything.

A:hey man!

P:(baffled)ya…

A:u must be wondering how we know eachother so well,right?

P:(with a blank luk)yupz…

K:(hesitantly)well,we'll tell u.

P:FINALLY!

A:actually we both came to U.S.A in the same flight from India…

K:so we met and became friends.

A:since our flight got delayed,we had lunch together at a Chinese Restaurant.

P:(smiling and relieved)tht's it?

K:yeah…I think tht's just abt it!

P:( disbelievingly ) so that's really just abt it?

A:haan bhai…kiya ho gaya hai?

P:(all smiles)
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Even after hearing all this,Prithvi was a bit doubtful and felt unsecure.He seemed quite offended and wanted Angad to just disappear into thin air.He wished Angad never existed.On the other hand,Angad who was unaware of Prithvi's feelings 2wards them both, kept staring at Kripa.
Kripa felt a bit uneasy and out of frusteration,was abt to say sumthing mean to Angad when suddenly,Angad grabbed Kripa's right hand from beneath the table.

K:(gasps)

A:(with fake concern) kiya hua?

K:(giving him a mean look)kuch bhi nahin…

P:is everything ok Kripa?

K:Prithvi who baat yeh hai ke-

A:(interrupting)ke Kripa ko bauhat bhook lagi hai aur us se bardaasht nahin ho raha ke aur logon ko khana serve kiya jar aha hai aur humein nahin…haina Kripa?

K:(gives him a I'm-gonna-kill-u look)

A:(smiling)I hope the food comes quickly…

K:(trying to free her hand from his grip)I hope so too.

P:hey guyz I'll be right back.

K:tum kahaan ja rahe ho?

P:I'm going to the toilet…

K:oh

Kripa didn't wanna be left alone with Angad at the moment.

A:ab to Prithvi bhi gaya

K:to….tum kiya kar loge?

A:kuch bhi nahin….meine kiya kerna hai?

K:kam se kam mera haath to chor do plzzz

A:nahin

K:par kyuun?

A:don't u know y?

K:-----

A:I don't believe u.It's bcuz I-

Prithvi came back at tht instant.

P;bhai kiya baatein ho rahi hain?

K:kuch bhi nahin

A:we were waiting 4 u.

P:(sarcastically)ha…how sweet!

The waiter finally brought the food.

K:(exhaling loudly)finally!

A:I'm starving!

K:(looking at Angad and whispering)mera haath ab to chor do?

A:(smiling..mouthed)NO WAY!!!

K:(had a pleading look on her face)

A:(ignored her and started serving himself.)

A:(when he was done)array Kripa tum kuch nahin logi?Chinese food is ur favouriute naa?

P:haan Kripa ab don't be so formal & shy.

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Posted: 18 years ago

ur fanfic is awesome pls cont soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
hi sehrish amazzzzzzzzzzzzin part.u r superb it's coz f u dat i cum to this site as u updt regularly.great part lookin 4wd 4 nxt one and yes i luved the last part where he grabs her hand.and also u r jus in 10th grade and u r doin sch a prfct job m impressed alottttttttttttttt.by the way i am doin my post graduation coursr in merchandisin.anyways bye and take care.
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Posted: 18 years ago
That partwas toooo gud!!! 👏 It was tooo sweet n cute!!! 😳 N dat stupid prithvi always has really really bad timing!!! 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
naughty angad
keep it up 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part i really like your ff
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing parts
yaar y does pritvi had such a bad timin
i bet angad was gonna say i luv u but that jerk had 2 cum at that tym arrghhh
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part....stupid prithvi got in the way 😡 ...but it was really funny😆 ..cont soon 👏
Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

hi sehrish amazzzzzzzzzzzzin part.u r superb it's coz f u dat i cum to this site as u updt regularly.great part lookin 4wd 4 nxt one and yes i luved the last part where he grabs her hand.and also u r jus in 10th grade and u r doin sch a prfct job m impressed alottttttttttttttt.by the way i am doin my post graduation coursr in merchandisin.anyways bye and take care.

nice 2 hear tht u give so much importance to my ff...its pretty kool tht ur doing a merchandising course...Im focusing on business studies!

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