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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: RSanaya71
Di please remove confusion and Update
first part is giving me goosebumps

Same here😊

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Kowsi

@Kowsi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#892

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Kowsi...dear, the first scene is carrying on where we left , after his kiss ...what happened

Yes he has to be in India for his di...and it is Aadi's wedding

😆 sorry to make u feel that way

Well can't wait to read it

Also about Aadi and Payal's wedding even if I kind of feel awkward reading about Payal with someone else than Aakash but Aadi and Payal are cute too

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wiwy

@wiwy

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#893

What a beautiful chapter Faiqu...love the shades and layers of emotions you paint so effortlessly. Leaving the end product so uniquely beautiful. The friendship between Khushi and Aadi is so strong and there is no scope of any misunderstanding between them. And soon there bond will become more stronger I feel when Aadi marries Payal finally. Its is really nice that Di is getting married soon too...she has found her love in Arun and deserves all the happiness denied to her character in the show. I hope you will not let any misfortune fall on her in your story. That leaves our Arshi and you got them married too! Maybe it was a play or maybe they really got married because Father Michael was real and they said their vows in front of him. And Khushi confessed her love for Arnav. I think the marriage is for real...it was too beautiful a setting to be fake! JPalo's bit was very emotional.

The Teaser is a real tease!

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Sobhan006

@Sobhan006

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#894

I'll never ask for a tease again:) you made me to think, think and more think... Man...

So many questions... Why Arnav is in India, while Khushi was flying with someone mysterious to us? Who is that accompanying her??? Why Arnav and aid is laughing? It must be someone very annoying is with Khushi...

Good teaser girl...

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#895

Loved the teaser, eager for the chapter 👏

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#896

Originally posted by: Sharlini
I'll never ask for a tease again:) you made me to think, think and more think... Man...
So many questions... Why Arnav is in India, while Khushi was flying with someone mysterious to us? Who is that accompanying her??? Why Arnav and aid is laughing? It must be someone very annoying is with Khushi...
Good teaser girl...

😆 I am so grumpy this morning and u made me laugh Sharlini...May God Bless you

Let me put u at some ease

First part is the continution of the scene where he kissed her after confession

in the update where he tells her about Anjali and Arun in the park , Khushi asks him so that is the reason to go to India...

I think majority is missing that part .

now India ...yes Aadi has to be because it is his wedding and Khushi has to come later because of her finalization at work

and now in between ...read in the update when it will come.

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Jini Tracy ;)

@-cadbury-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#897

A very nice teaser!

Very well written

Interesting too

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#898

Originally posted by: wiwy
What a beautiful chapter Faiqu...love the shades and layers of emotions you paint so effortlessly. Leaving the end product so uniquely beautiful. The friendship between Khushi and Aadi is so strong and there is no scope of any misunderstanding between them. And soon there bond will become more stronger I feel when Aadi marries Payal finally. Its is really nice that Di is getting married soon too...she has found her love in Arun and deserves all the happiness denied to her character in the show. I hope you will not let any misfortune fall on her in your story. That leaves our Arshi and you got them married too! Maybe it was a play or maybe they really got married because Father Michael was real and they said their vows in front of him. And Khushi confessed her love for Arnav. I think the marriage is for real...it was too beautiful a setting to be fake! JPalo's bit was very emotional.
The Teaser is a real tease!

wiwu👏 u are in a right track

and yes the friendship of di N Khsuhi is unique and flawless

Anjali's part is coming up as these two have to be settled...

JPalo is a man who we can't hate...regardless of his actions

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#899

Originally posted by: .Anisha.
Loved the update as always
enjoyed reading every bit of it
waiting for the next part
thanks for the PM

PS- Happy Diwali!! 😃

Thnx Anisha😊

Love u dear and happy diwali to u too