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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

kimmy yaar ur just mindblowing..ur totally amazing... simply awesome yaar... stupendous....
the parts were totally rocking...mujhe yeh parts behad pasand aaye.. i simply enjoyed it to the maximum extent... ur are simply tooo goodddddddddddd......the parts were simply mast...zabardast....... 👏
👏 ab please jaldi se continue kar do..me waiting for the next part very damnn eagerly... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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golu_1677

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Posted: 18 years ago

#62

komal wonderful part. Pls cont soon

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komal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#63

hey ppl thx sooo much 4 ure wonderful comments me will cont sooonnnnn 😳 😳 😳

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komal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#64

Hey ppl im komal back with LAMHE's 7th Part 😳
RECAP:Sujal n Kashish reach the restaurant ......Zaib-Kripa's plan is in action......Zaib-Kashish and Sujal-Kripa are together ..........Kashish feels jealous seeing SK together .......Zaib Sujal show Kashish n Kripa their Sujal .....Sujal-Kashish have a small fight there.....Kashish cries remembering her family n talks 2 Veena and Sujal tries to make her laugh.......Zaib tells Sujal that he will propose Kripa

The next morning.........In Kashish's room.....
The scene is just opposite to the previous morning.....Kashish is awake n is in front of the mirror dressing up while Kripa is still sleeping or rather acting to be asleep as she sees Kashish again n again slowly......
Kashish:Kripa tu uth rahi hai ya nahi
Kripa(behaves as if shes sleepy):kya hua kashish aaj tu kyun subah subah itna jagah rahi hai so na
Kashish:uth na Kripa plzzz c'mon chal ready ho ja
Kripa:ready?? kis liye aaj humein kahin jaana thodi hai
Kashish:kya.(turns n goes 2 Kripa)...aj kahiin nahi jaana hai
Kripa(gets up):haan aaj koi plan nahi hai aaj sirf aaraam
Kashish(to herself):jab mujhe jaana hai tab hi koi plan nahi banta aur yeh ladke koi kaam ke nahi hai jab zaroorat hoti hai tab hi nahi hote hai aur kal yahan takk lene aa gaya tha woh mujhe kya fayda jab jaana hai tab toh aaya nahi KHADUS
Kripa:kya hua kya soch rahi hai tu
Kashish:nahi .....kuch nahi acha tu so jaa
Kripa goes back 2 sleep
Kashish thinks for sometime n then
Kashish:acha Kripa sun main mandir jaa rahi hoon
Kripa:kashish tu pagal ho gayi hai mandir aur yahan london mein
Kashish:hai yahan par ek mandir kal Zaib ne bataya tha
Kripa:ok tu jaa kar aa phir
Kashish:ok then bye (and she leaves)

As soon as Kashish leaves Kripa calls up Zaib n tells her that Kashish is gone to mandir

Here in Zaib n Sujal's room.....
Zaib is up and is practising how to propose Kripa ........
Zaib(puts his up as if asking kripa's hand):kripa i love u......(he shakes his head in a no and) kripa maine jabse tumhe pehli baar dekha tab se tumse pyar karne lag gaya (he again moves his head ) nahi yaar nahi hoga mujhse yeh (he goes to sujal who's asleep) sujal yaar tu uth na meri madat kar
Sujal:kya yaar subah subah tu mujhe utha raha hai
Zaib:Sujal main Kripa ko kaise propose karoonga kuch samjah nahi aa raha tu uth kar mujhe bata na plzz
Sujal(gets up):acha chal uth gaya ab bol kya hai
Zaib(holds sujal's hand):kripa jabse maine tumhe dekha maine aur kuch nahi dekha
Sujal:kyun andha ho gaya hai (n he starts laughing)
Zaib:sujal yaar c'mon agar tu hi mera saath nahi dega toh mera kya hoga
Sujal(gets serious):okok main teri help karoonga magar plzz yeh line mat bolna warna uska bhi jawaab wahi hoga(n he starts laughing again)
Zaib(angrily):Sujal .........im going ........(and he goes to the washroom)
His phone rings .......Sujal checks it......Itz a message

it says like this
Hi Zaib........im ready just need 1/2 hr more....meet u at 10 in the coffee shop of my hotel......kashish is gone to mandir so im waiting 4 her .......see u soon .....Kripa

Sujal reads this n gives a bigggg smile.......
Zaib comes out of the washroom n sees Sujal getting ready
Zaib:arre tu kahan jaa raha hai
Sujal:jahan tu nahi jaa raha hai
Zaib:very funny ab bol bhi
Sujal:aata hoon bas aa kar bataoonga zara jaldi mein hooon bye(n he's gone)
Zaib checks his phone n messages something to Kripa.......

Sujal comes to the mandir where Kashish is already praying......He dosent recognise her as shes in Indian.....he removes his shoes n runs insiden starts praying
After finishing praying he sees here n there 4 kashish he dosent find her then his eyes go to some1 beside him ........He'll see a very beautiful innocent girl sitting n praying there ....Thats Kashish....Hes lost into her face ......he forgets everything else around except her face......Suddenly someone rings the bell n Sujal turns to the other side......
Kashish opens her eyes n sees Sujal beside her n is surprised ......
Kashish:arre aap yahan
Sujal(behaves as even hes surprised 2 see kashish): aap
Kashish:hii
Sujal:hi
Kashish:aap mandir mein?
Sujal:haan main mandir mein ajeeb hai na hmm pata hai par kuch lamhe paane ke liye yahan bhi aa jana hota hai
Kashish(dosent understand):jee main samjhi nahi
Sujal:hmmmm kuch nahi
They get up n start walking back....
Kashish:toh aap yahan humesha aate hai
Sujal:nahi kabhi kabhi
Kashish:hmmm mujhe laga aap mera peecha karte karte yahan tak aagaye
Sujal(gets scared):nahi nahi
Kashish:arre aap itna darr kyun rahe hai main toh mazaak kar rahi thi
Sujal(gets relieved):ohh mazaak.......so kya maanga aapne
Kashish:jo maangte hai woh kisi ko nahi batate warna icha poori nahi hoti
Sujal:main apse agree nahi karta ........hum jo bhi saaf mann aur sache dil se maangte hai woh zaroor poora hota hai phir chahe hum usse bataye ya nahi
Kashish:arre waah ap toh itna kuch jaante hai
Sujal:zyada nahi bas yehi ki bhagwan kisi ko niraash nahi karte
Kashish:hmmmmm
Sujal:ek baat kahoon ap bura toh nahi maanegi
Kashish:nahi nahi kahiye na
Sujal:aap indian mein badi achi lagti hai .......aap yahi pehna kijiye
Kashish turns on the other side n her cheeks become red.....
Sujal:kya hua maine kuch galat keh diya
Kashish(turns):nahi nahi infact apne toh meri tareef ki thx
Sujal:aap hain hi tareef ke kaabil
Kashish:acha toh aap bataye aaone kya maanga
Sujal:maine maanga ki jisne mere loye maaga uski iccha poori ho jaaye
Kashish laughs
Sujal:toh chaliye main apko chod doon
Kashish:ohk chaliye

Sujal is in his car this time .........Kashish sits inside the car......Sujal starts driving ........Sujal are not talking 2 each other but thier silence is spking
Song In Backgroung....
Ji ye chahe ye lamhein
bas yahin pe ruk jayein
samne tum raho aur
hum tumhein dekhte jayein...
(Sujal remembers the scene when kashish held his short)

dil men hone lagi hai
meethi meethi si hulchul
tum raho saath jaise
meri aankhon ka kajal..
(Kashish remmbers the scene when they were on bike)

saath din raat rahein
oh oh oh ..
pyaar ki baat rahe
aur rahe kuch na baaqi..
(Sujal remembers the scene when he saw her in the mandir)

Thoda sa pyar hua hai
thoda hai baaki
thoda sa pyaar hua hai
thoda hai baaaki
(Kashish remembers the nightscene when she was crying n sujal came 2 her)

They reach the Hotel......
Kashish:chaliye na ek cup coffee peete hai
Sujal:hmmm nahi i think i should leave
Kashish:arre chaliye na humari mulaqat humesha ladayi se hui hai aj pehli baar hum lade nahi hai so letz celebrate
Sujal(laughs):ok as u say (n he parks his car n both of them get out)

Sujal-Kashish both go to the restaurant inside the hotel........they are shocked to see sumthing
Kashish has her mouth wide open n Sujal is smiling...........They see sumthing like this

Kashish sees Sujal looking and smiling at Zaib-Kripa.....She's lil confused.....
Kashish:aap itne muskura kyun rahe hai arent u shocked?
Sujal:no
Kashish:noo??
Sujal:yeh toh hona hi tha jab do log ek dusre se pyar karte hai toh won unki aankhon mein dikh jaata hai
Kashish:toh kya apne in dono ki aankhon mein ek dusre ke liye pyar dekha??
Sujal:haan
Kashish:par maine kabhi nahi socha ki aisa kuch hoga coz Kripa toh humesha ap ke saath rehti thi so i thought maybe u n ........(she asks this purposely)
Sujal:haan yeh sahi hai Kripa mere saath rehti thi par woh mere saath rehkar bhi mere saath nahi thi uski aankhon mein toh Zaib hi tha
Kashish:matlab u dont like Kripa
Sujal:well i liked her but ab kya karein woh Zaib ki hi thi khair Kripa nahi toh koi aur sahi(n he winks at Kashish)
Kashish(understand that he's flirting):oh god u guys are all same kabhi apni yeh flirting nahi chodoge
Sujal:agar hum flirting chod de toh ap ladkiyon ko bhav kon dega
Kashish:well bahut mil jayenge humein decent ladke humein flirts ki zaroorat nahi
Sujal:acha toh phir dhoondiye decent ladke hum toh chale(and Sujal goes away to Zaib-Kripa)
Kashish:pagal hai(n she hits her head n smiles)

Sujal goes to Zaib-Kripa
Sujal:hey ppl congratz
Zaib Kripa turn to see whuz it......They blush
Sujal:c'mon c'mon itna sharmao mat abhi toh sirf pyaar hua hai ab shaadi baaki hai
Kripa runs away to Kashish
Sujal:im really happy 4 u Zaib par tumne yeh kiya kaise i mean hw did u propose her?
Zaib tells Sujal the whole thing

FLASHBACK
Kripa is waiting 4 Zaib in the restaurant but Zaib dint come still........Kripa is looking at her watch again and again......Zaib comes....
Zaib:sorry sorry im late
Kripa turns away
Zaib:oh kripa im so sorry yaaar kya karoon tayaar hone mein der ho gaya
Kripa(turns 2 zaib n angrily):tayaar hone mein der ho gayi tumhe yeh dialogue mera hona chahiye tumhe kyun der hogi sach sach batao na aana hi nahi chahate the
Zaib(to himself):aane ke tayari bhi toh karni padhti hai
Kripa:kya....kuch kaha tumne?
Zaib:nahi nahi kuch nahi plzz kripa maan bhi jao na kaha na im sorry
Kripa:sorry kaha toh hogaya main nahi manoongi tumne nahut der kar di hai (n she turns away again)
Zaib(goes to the side where she's turned..... makes her stand with his hand on her shoulders ....... takes her hand in his and.......
Zaib:Kripa ab der nahi hui hai par agar maine aur der ki toh shayad sach mein der ho jayegi kripa main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon
Kripa is just staring in his eyes ........
Zaib:Kripa kehne ko toh tum meri fan ho par tumse milkar main tumhara fan ban gaya hoon tumse milkar aisa laga jise mujhe apni manzil mil gayi jab tum mere kareeb hoti ho toh aisa lagta hai zindagi kitni khoobsurat hai aur jab nahi hoti ho toh lagta zindagi tumhare siva hai hi kiya
aaj main tumhe woh baat batana chahata hoon jo main tumhe us waqt se batan chahta tha jabse maine tumhe pehli baar dekha I Love You......I love you Kripa
Kripa is speechless.....she just looks at zaib
Zaib:Kripa kya tum mujhse pyaar nahi...........
Kripa(puts her hand on Zaib's mouth):jis insaan ki main tabse fan hoon jabse woh 8 saal ka tha aur main 7 saal ki woh mere dil mein tabse hai jabse mujhe dil pyar yeh saare shabd ke matlab bhi nahi pata the uski tasveerein mere ghar mein meri khud ki tasveeron se zyada hai main usse pyar kaise nahi kar sakti
kaisa nahi kar sakti I Love you too Zaib....
Zaib puts his hand on Kripa's face and then hugs her ..........
FLASHBACK ENDS........

Sujal:arre waah yaar tu itna romantic hai mujhe pata hi nahi tha
Zaib:hmmm par tu muhse bhi zyada romantic hai tu toh kuch kaam se gaya tha na phir yeh kashish tere saath kahan se aayi
Sujal:arre woh mandir mein thi maine dikh liya so lifet dedi
Zaib:haan haan mandir mein hw can i forget kripa ne msg jo kiya tha wohi main sochu tujhe kaam kaise aa gaya subah subah
Sujal(acting innocent):nahi yaar Zaib main sach mein kaam se gaya tha mandir toh raste mein tha
Zaib:haan toh maine kab kaha ki tu mandir gaya tha..........He sings Kaisa yeh pyar hai.....kaisa yeh pyar hai
Sujal just goes away from there........When he's going he sees Kashish n Kripa
Kripa(stops him):arre aap kahan jaa rahe hai rukiye n
Kashish:haan apko kya hua
Zaib comes:main bataon kya hua
Sujal (comes n cuts Zaib):Kya hua hai kuch bhi toh nahi hua hai kuch nahi kuch nahi
Kashish:r u sure?
Sujal:yaya im sure
Kashish:ohk then aaj ka kya plan hai
Zaib:kya plan hai?
Sujal:hmmmm aaj mujhe kuch kaam hai so im out ap log plan kar lo
Kripa:c'mon sujal ab tumhe kya plan hai hum yahan bas aaj hi hai phir kal hum jaa rahe hai
Sujal:nahi yaar mujhe actually apne ghar jaane ki tayari karni hai
Kashish:ghar? aap yahan nahi rehte
Sujal:nahi yahan toh main sirf padhne aaya tha bas main bhi ek do din mein wapis apne ghar chala jaaonga bahut saal baad
Kashish:bahut saal baad
Sujal:haan main pehle hostel mein tha aur phir yahan aa gaya
Kashish:ohhhh hmmm ok then phir kya karein
Zaib:aisa karte hain hum log aaj mere ghar chalte hai
Kripa:tumhara ghar hai yahan par?
Zaib:mere ek cousin ka hai par woh yahan nahi hai so main kabhi kabhi wahan chala jaata hoon
Kripa:ohh phir wahin chalte hai n then well sit there only aur kya
Sujal:well in that case i can join u'll too mujhe laga ap log kahin ghomne jaoge n i dint want 2 stress myslef par ghar par toh chalega na
Kashish(her face lights up):ok gr88 then hum log apko 1 ghante baad milte hai yahin par
Sujal:ok see u soon bye

Zaib-Sujal n Kashish-Kripa go to their rooms........
In Kashish and Kripa's room
Kashish:Kripa mujhe toh yaken hi nahi hota ki zaib ne tujhe itni jaldi propose kar liya
Kripa:mujhe khud yakeen nahi hota
Kashish:kuch log kitni jaldi samajh jate hai aur log kitna time lagate hai
Kripa:kyun time kisne lagaya
Kashish:kisine nahi main toh aise hi keh rahi thi
Kripa:acha acha aise hi......Kripa too sings Kaisa yeh pyaar hai ......Kiasa yeh pyaar hua
Kashish:c'mon yaar Kripa aisa kuch nahi
Kripa:kaisa kya nahi hai
Kashish:mere aur zaib ke us frnd ke beech mein
Kripa:maine kab kaha ki kuch hai ........iska matlab kuch hai......kuch hai na kashish
Kashish blushes and runs away to the washroom.......

After an hour Kashish n Kripa get dwn to see the boys are already there waiting 4 them.....
Kripa:arre aap log aagaye
Zaib:aadha ghanta pehle
Kripa:kya...toh upar kyun hai aaaye
Zaib:humein laga tum log naraaz ho jayoge isliye
Kripa:tum log bhi na ek ghanta bhi nahi ruk sakte
Zaib:tumhe dekhe bina ek pal nahi ruk sakta ek ghanta toh bahut badi baat hai
Kripa (blushes):bas bas ab chalein
Zaib:haan chalo chalein Sujal
Sujal is lost in Kashish......
Zaib(shakes him):Sujal chalein
Kashish giggles
Sujal:haan..haan chalo

All four of them leave to Zaib's cousins house........They are in the car this time....
They reach the house n get down
Kripa:hey wow what a beautiful house....
Zaib(puts his hand on Kripa's shoulder):tumse thoda kam
Kripa(blushes):chalein ab andar
Sujal:haan tum log chalo main apne kam karke aata hoon
Kashish:ap kahan jaa rahein hai
Sujal:maine kaha tha na kuch kaam hai ap log chalo main aadhe ghante mein aata hoon
Kashish:ok jaldi aana.......(Sujal leaves)
Kripa:ab hum chalein
Zaib:haan chalo

They go inside.........They sit n talk 4 sum time but Kashish is bored n is looking at the time again n again
Zaib:kya hua kashish kisi ka wait hai kya
Kashish:nahi...nahi .....kyun
Zaib:nahi woh tum bar baar time dekh rahi thi isliye
Kashish:woh aise hi
Kripa:offo Zaib kyu khamakha usse nervous kar rahe ho woh toh apne sajna ka intezaar kar rahi hai(n she goes n puts her hands on her shoulder)
Kashish(looks at Kripa):kya
Kripa:i mean...apni frnd Sanjana ke call ka
Kashish:haan Sanjana ke call ka
Zaib:ohh..waise sujal ko bhi gaye hue kaafi der ho gayi aya nahi woh ab tak
Kashish:pata nahi kya kaam aagaya use yun achanak chala gaya
Kripa:hoga kuch kaam aata hi hoga bas
Sujal enters:aata hoga nahi agaya
Zaib:hey Sujal hogaya tera kaam ab toh nahi jayega na
Sujal:haan hoagaya....So kya baatein chal rahi hai
Kripa:kuch nahi kashish ke sajna ki
Sujal(shocked):kya........
Kashish gives Kripa a look......
Kripa:im sorry i mean kashish ki frnd sanjana ki
Sujal(relieved):ohhh sanjana ki ...........
Zaib:so ab kya karein
Kripa:hm ab mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai
Kashish:mujhe bhi
Zaib:aisa karo tum dono wahan par jaa kar kuch bana kar kha lo aur humare liye bhi kuch le aana
Kripa:ji nahi hum nahi banayenge balki aap log banayenge
Sujal:kyaa hum banayenge
Kashish:haan chalo chalo jaldi karo we're hungry
Both the girls push the boys in to the kitchen.......
Poor guys......They are making lunch 4 da girls n the girls are watching cricket ...........
Kripa:bechare woh dono pata bhi nahi hoga unhe kaise banate hai kya we shld go n help them
Kashish:no wayz unhe bhi toh pata chale ki kaam karna kaisa hota hai bas sirf beth kar oredr hi karte hain har waqt
Kripa:nahi yaar im feeling bad chal na unki madat karte hai
Kashish:na tujhe jaana hai toh jaa mujhe toh match dekhna hi hai looks like India will win....
Kripa:uff tu na kabhi nahi samjhegi meri baat
Kashish:kabhi nahi
Kripa:tu beth im going

Kripa goes into the kitchen to help them......She's lil surprised to see the guys in the kitchen...........Zain n Sujal turn
Zaib:hey kripa
Kripa:tum logon ne koi gadbad nahi kii
Sujal:gadbad kyun karenge humein khana bana aata hai
Kripa:maine toh socha tha ki saara kitchen bikhra hua hoga aur tum dodo pareshan ho gaye honge but yahan toh tum log sab kuch almost ready kar chuke ho
Zaib:we are perfect u see hum sab kuch kar sakte hain
Kripa:haan woh toh tum dono ne prove kar diya hai tumhari wives toh bahut lucky hongi
Zaib:what do u mean by tumhari wives......(looks at Sujal) iska mujhe nahi pata par meri wife toh decide hogayi hai
Kripa(acts innocent as if she dosent understand):acha kon hai woh
Zaib(goes nearer to her):bataun kya..........
Sujal coughs:tum dono sab lekar dining table par betho main kashish ko bula kar aata hoon

Sujal goes outside n sees that Kashish is seeing cricket match......He cant see Kashish as she is on the sofa n he can the sofa only.....
Sujal:chalo kashish khaana ready hai
Kashish dosent reply
Sujal:kashish chaloo
Kashish doesnt reply again........He goes in front of the sofa n sees Kashish sleeping
Kashish is sleeping like an innocent child.....Seeing her like this Sujal has a smile on his face........He quickly takes out his mobile n clicks her picture n keeps his phone back quickly.......
He takes a glass of water n shrinks it on Kashish's face......Kashish gets up n sees Sujal in front of her.......Sujal drops lil more water.....
Kashish:kya rahe ho stop it
Sujal pours lil more.......Kashish gets angry n getz up takes another slass of water n throws at Sujal.....Sujal runs.....Kashish runs behind him....Both of them fight 4 sumtime .......Zaib-Kripa come outside to call them .......They are shocked to see Sujal -Kashish like this......
Zaib:arre tum dono is tarah lad kyun rahe ho ........He goes n stops Sujal
Kripa(goes to Kashish):Kashish kya kar rahi ho stop it......She pulls Kashish's glass of water.......
When Zaib-Kripa take both their glasses ........S-k start fighting
Kashish:isne mujhpe pehle paani dala
Sujal:toh main kya karta yeh uth nahi rahi thi
Kashish:uthne ke baad bhi toh dala
Sujal:Woh mujhe laga tum neend se jaagi nahi isliye
Kashish:dekho galthi iski hai humesha yeh hi ladta hai
Sujal:main ladta hoon main......ladti tum ho
Kashish:nahi tum ladti ho
Zaib:c'mon yaar kya bachon ki tarah ladte rehte ho
Sujal:bachi hi toh hai yeh
Kashish:shut up ladayi tum kar rahe ho
Kripa:chup ho jayo tum dono plzzz
Sujal:ok fine im sorry
Kashish:im sorry too
Zaib:chalo ab khaan khane chale
Kripa:haan mujhe bhi bahut bhook lagi hai

All of them go to have their lunch.....They have thier lunch.......Kashish n Kripa come back

In the hotel......
Kashish:aaj ka din kitna jaldi guzar gaya na
Kripa:hmmmm sach mein acha tu apni packing shuru kar main fresh hokar aati hoon
Kashish:ok
Kashish starts her packing....Suddenly her eyes go on some flowers kept on the side table....
Kashish goes there ......She finds a card with that.........
This was written on the card.......

Kashish,
Hum jab bhi mile hain lade hai jhagde hai par aaj jab hum shayad aakhri baar milenge main tumse kuch kehna chahata hoon
I'm sorry.........tum soch rahi hogi sorry kyun?.......sorry isliye kyun ki hum jab bhi mile hain lade hain aur us ladayi se tumhe kahin na kahin
thodi si tho chot pohonchi hai aur main nahi chahte itni khubsurat ladki ki aankh mein kabhi bhi aansoon aaye aur meri wajah se toh kabhi nahi

SORRY!

Khadus......
Kashish: tum itne aache ho shayad maine hi tumhe samajhne mein galthi kar di thi (and she blushes)

Kashish puts it in her bag.......

Well ppl here ends this part.......
What nxt??
Will S-k become frnds??? or Will they fight again????
Will Z-k's realation move on???
Keep waiting.......n Keep commenting 😳 😳 😳
Im sorry 4 being late..... Hope u all liked it.......

Edited by komalsirwani - 18 years ago

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Hana

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Posted: 18 years ago

#65

oh komal acha hua jaldi continue kiya u know i was pulling my hair everyday only waiting 4 u to continue ..so sweet zaib n kripa together can't wait s-k getting together..great part 👏

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brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#66

cant awit till she realizes mr. khadoos is sujal. lol

great part n continjue sooooonn

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golu_1677

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Posted: 18 years ago

#67

wonderful part komal. Now eagerly waiting for the next one

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#68

gr8 part komal.... 👏 ....jus 2 good...luv the way zaib prposed kripa...gr8 gng... 😊

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

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kimmy dear i'am at a loss of words after reading your stories part.......so this claps are for you.... 👏
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the part was simply superb....👏
please continue soon..me waiting eagerly... 😃