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Posted: 9 years ago
Raj ko to already Naina k liye strong feelings hai. i wish she realizes that soon 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Raj already has strong feelings for Naina. i wish she realizes that soon!! 😊
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome.
I don't recive your PM for some parts so please PM me
Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome.

I don't recive your PM for some parts so please PM me
Lots of love
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thank u year.. n sorry I may forgot... but now onwards I will send pm for sure..
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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry for late update guys n... thank u all for reading n lovely comment.. keep commenting..
if any time if u find its boring plz tell me..


part 17:

next day in mess:
all having dinner. .
alekh n naina sitting one side of mess n naina said everything about their teacher who r naeend friends..


alekh:sach... ye tho achi kabar hai na..tho ye hame help karenge.. apun khali philihi us capt.rajveer par shaq kar raha tha..

naina:thu kyu unke peeche pade ho ha..

alekh:vo kyu ki vo kuch jyada ghurthe hai thuje ...

naina:kya..

thabi waha hyda aa jatha hai..

huda:kya thum dono hamesha kuch secret baathe karthe rehethe ho..phoolan ham se bhi bath kia kar ...

pooja:ha naina thumdono hamesha apas me sms bejthe rahethe ho .. kabi hame bhi call kiya karo..

naina:nahi.. aise kuch nahi hai... vo kuch jarori baath karna tha alekh se...

huda:kya phoolan jab dekho is sehi kaam rehetha hai thume... hum bhu hai. hamaresaath bhi bath karle... (in his huda style)

naina:jee ha.. vo isliye kyuki muje alekh kesaath bath karna acha lagtha hai..

huda face fell down by listening this...

pooja:wow.. kahI thum dono..

naina:shut up pooja.

naina left from there. .
alekh:kaha ja rahi hai..

naina:kuch kaam hai.. thu ja apne room me.mai subha milungi thuje..


yudi:oh kisika dil thooth gaya...
ali:mathlab..

yudi:bichara hamare huda ka.. shakal tho dekho uska..

ali:yudi bhai aap bhi na.. aise kuch nahi hai.. light out ka time huva hai hame apneroom me jaana chayiye..

pooja:oye ali.. thu tho chod .. tera tho hamesha wrong call hi rehetha hai..ab chalo warna bc akhar hame left right left karwayega..

yudi:she is right ha.. lets go... huda chali.. he hold huda hand n took with him..

on the way to room huda was lost in his thought.
huda to himself:kya sach me phoolan ko qaidi pasand hai... nahi yar aise nahi ho saktha.. mai mantha hu ki mai phoolan ke saath ladtha hu par mai us se pyar kartha hu yar... nahi aise nahi ho saktha.. muje phoolan se bath karna hoga .. us se poochna hoga..


before 5 min to light out...

in raj room all sitting n was discussing about something. . naina open te door..

raj:cadet singh aap yaha...??? is waqth... light out hone walahai.. mai nahi chahatha hu ki thume koi punishment mile..so..

naina:no sir ..actually. ... she went n stand beside gunny...

gunny:kya huva..
naina:kal rakhshabandhan hai.. tho mai ye bathane ayi thi ki kal subha 5 bhaje aap sab log uthkar thayyar hojavoo .. kyuki 6 se tho hamare training shuru hoga uske baad mai apko rakhi nahi baandh sakthi na..

abhi:tho aap rakhI bandhnewale hai hame..

naina:ha... afterall muje theen theen bhai mile hai yaha .. rakhi tho bandhna hu hoga na...
raj who was drinking water slips water from his mouth... noone sees this except gunny...

naina:chalo mai jaathi hu.. good night all.. bye.. meet u morning. ..

raj to himself:theen bhai .. kahi ye muje bhi rakhi bandhnewali nahi hai... no it cant happen... I need to do something. ...

gunny:kya huva raj ..kuch pareshani hai kya???

raj:no... no kuch nahi hai...

abhi:chalo hum chalthe hai... sojayiye..


they went to sleep... whole night raj not slept thinking about an idea... while gunny was enjoying this situation. .

next morning:

raj room:

abhi n nandini came
abhi:wow gunny kya bath hai ..aap tho kithne ache lag rahe ho...

gunny:ha aur thum bhi..

nandini:arey vo raj kaha hai...

gunny:patha nahi ithna subha kaha chala gaya..jab utha tho kamre me nahi tha...

abhi:nahi tha mathlab?
gunny:kuch kam se bhahar gayahoga... but he exactly know reason for raj's disappearance. ..

they here a knock on door..
gunny opens he door...


gunny:come in my dear sister ...

she came inand sat on sofa.. abhi and gunny both came n sat infront of her..

abhi:aap pehele kise bandage. ..???

naina:ek min.. thum tho do hai.. ..abhi ek tho aana hai na..

abhi:votho nahi hoga.. kyuki(he was about to say raj tho bhahar gaya hai. but stopped as someone knock the door..

naina:mai dekhthi hu...shewent toopen the door..
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gunny confusingly says raj???????


naina:thum aa gaye... chalo andhar avo... it was alekh who came inside..

gunny:tho ye third bhaI hai thumhara ??

naina:jee ha...

gunny smiles...

naina ties rakhi to all three. .
abhi:maaf kariye naina humkoi gift nahi laye abhi. par hum wada karthe hai ki sham thak apka gift mil jayega...

gunny:hum bhi naina..

naina:itsk... chalo hame dher ho raha hai ..warna vo thumhare fav maj.nair hame punish karenge..

alekh:ha chalo..

nandini:naina..ek baath kahu... jab thumne theen bhai kaha tho ham ne socha abhi alekh aur raj...but thumtho raj ko bhul gayi..

then naina got that she nt took raj name in bhayya list... she dont know what to ans..

gunny get this..
gunny:vo kya hai ki.. raj ham sab se alag hai . aur vo naina se sir jaisa hi behave kartha hai tho... let it be na nandini..

nandini:k...

alekh:apun ko chalna chayiye..

naina:ha..
she was thinking about nandin words..

alekh:chod na..har kisiko bhai banana jatoori thodi hai ..
naina:thuje kaise patha chala mai kya soch rahi hu..

alekh:bhai hai.. aise hi nahi..
both laughs on it..


in boys hostel:
yudi:bro ..ye thumhara big b kaha hai.

ali:patha banhi yudi bhai... vo naina ne 4:30 ko hi akhar utha di thi unhe...

yudi:kya naina.. alekh ko par kyu...
ali:patha nahi bhaijan..

huda who was listening this all..
huda:phoolan qaidi ko. he lost in his thinking. all went to training ground. .

alekh and naina both r first to come..

all came stood in the line..

ali:alekh bhai ye kya hai apne hath pe..

yudi:bro ye tho rakhi hai.. ha aaj rakshabandhan hai na...
ali:ha yudi bhai.. hamare behene bhi rakhi bijwayi hai.. par alekh bahi aap ko kisne bandha hai..

huda who was seeing it got a smile on his face..

alekh:aur kaun naina... apun ka ek hi ache dost hai aur ek ich behen naina..

huda face light up with smile...

huda:kya bath kaha qaidi. . thune tho kush kardiya muje aaj.. I love u mummyji.. .. alekh naina ka bhai mathlab mera...

pooja:vo badh me sochlena .. vo dekho vo aagaya thra chacha.. ham sab ka batry down karne..


maj.nair came n took the training. .

after drill all went to mess for breakfast. .

naina went her roomn coming to mess ..
raj came back to academy thinking
raj:hope uska rakhsha bandan katham huva hoga..muje nahi bandwana hai us se rakhi.. he was walking by thinking so he nt seen person who was coming infront of him.. vo akhar use takhra jatha haI.. that person was about to fall hut raj hold her..

it was naina who jow was in raj arm...
heagain lost in her eyes...

naina:I am sorry sir...
raj came out of his dream world..

raj:cadet singh .. aap.. dekhkar...

naina:sorry sir... mai urgent me thi tho nahi dekhi..

raj:its k..

naina:sir aap subha ...

raj know she was askibg where he was.. he dont want her to ask him to tag rakhi...

raj:mai vo... cadet singh.. rashthe se hathiye muje jaana haI... she left immediately as if someone following him to punch..


naina:abh inhe kya huva.. mai tho ye pooch rahi thi ki ye subha se nahI dikhe... chodo...

raj came him room n locked room from inside
raj:thank god bach gaya... warna patha nahi kya hojatha...aaj poore din us se nahi milung...

thrre was someone in room who was listening this by sitting in room..

gunny:raj.. kaha the thum... u know... we r search in for u ...

raj:vo kuch kaam se bahar gaya tha..

gunny controling his laugh..
gunny:(he is in teasing mood)
raj see naina ne rakhI bandhi hai.. aur thumhe ...

raj:gunny mere tabhiyath karabh hai tho mai sojatha hu.. thu mere class lena aaj..


gunny:vo acha.. dr.shalini ko bhulaloo...

raj:uski koi jaroorath nahi hai..



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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update😉😛😃lol raksha bandhan scene was awesome😉😆😃raj😳😳😃plz continue soon thanks for pm
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Originally posted by: 0913155

Awesome update😉😛😃lol raksha bandhan scene was awesome😉😆😃raj😳😳😃plz continue soon thanks for pm

thank u so much... even I love that raj..
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow
so nice ishani
mere toh hasi he nhi ruk rahi thi raj ke bare me souch kar oh ! god raj ke toh halat kharb thi phele raat bhar soya nhi or subha subha hebhag gaya
too gud yr i just love it

plz next part jaldi update karna

love naina
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb
Can't stop laughing at raj condition
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever

wow
so nice ishani
mere toh hasi he nhi ruk rahi thi raj ke bare me souch kar oh ! god raj ke toh halat kharb thi phele raat bhar soya nhi or subha subha hebhag gaya
too gud yr i just love it

plz next part jaldi update karna

love naina

thank u dear...
mai likhthe likthe hi has rahi thi... muje vo raj had as gaya tha jab yudi ko acadamy me rukhwaneleliye raj Jo plan banaya that air us samay uska acting I just loved it ..
I will try to update soon..

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