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kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: RNforever
nice part
but plz yr itne chote chote update mat kiya karo
longgg... wala update plz ya phir thoda jaldi update karne ke koshish kiya kar

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thank u so much for reading...

chota??yar ithna bada tho hai..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: rkchandni
Awsm cont soon👏

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kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: anu000
👍🏼 great !!!!

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gargy ghosh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

nice update:) RN jaa to aur k sath rhe h but dekhna yea hai k dance ek dusre se kaise karte hai:)

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m.bahety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Again a very nice update Ishaani! Ab to mujhe ye samajh nahi aata Ki kaunse words me tumhari taarif karu! BAs ab ball me Naina pure time Raj ke sath hi rahe...

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ginny_trish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

aye haye!! Raj n Naina rsuch cutie-patooties 😆

n Bechara Abhi ends up being the "bhaiya" always! 😃

Great update!

Keep updating

Love n Luck

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kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: ginny_trish
aye haye!! Raj n Naina rsuch cutie-patooties😆
n Bechara Abhi ends up being the "bhaiya" always!😃
Great update!
Keep updating
Love n Luck
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thank u so much dear for reading

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kark12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#238

hi sorry for delay in update.. thank u for support.. plz read this part also n give valuable comment..

part 15:

near naina room:

huda:ye kaha rehegayi phoolan.. agar jaldi nahi ayi tho patha nahi in sab jananiya muje chodenge ya nahi... .. khas mai kisi ek ko commit nahi huva hota...
someone tap his sholder from behind.. it was naina...
huda mouth was open seeing her like that..
naina:hello..
huda:wow phoolan kya bath hai.. man gaya mai ..ithne tayyar mere liye...
naina:huda...
huda:chod phoolan... chal ab.. dekhna is bar mr.and miss fresher tho hum hi banenge..afterall thu huda ke aaath jo hai..

naina:chale??
huda:ha.. ek bath kahu..agar mere mammyji thuje mere saath aise dekhli na dekhlena vo jaroor manlegI..
naina:huda plz.. isiliye mai thumhare saath nahi aana chahathi...

huda:kya mathlab nahi aana chahathi.. is poore academy me mere alawa koi nahi hai jo meri phoolanke saath ja sakhe...

naina left from there hyda followed her..

in party:

suriji:lolita ji ur looking beautiful ..
lolita:come again suriji...

they here the claps from all they see the pair entering the hall its pooja and ali...
they both were looking like reall couple made for each other.. with ali holding pooja's hand..

they came near score meter n checl tge score
its
pooja 8/10
ali 8/10
pooja in excitment hug ali ali as uauall feels shy..

ali:pooja aa..aap ye kya kar rahe hai..
pooja:oye miss call..kya kar rahi hu ka kya mathlab ... chal ab...

next pair
alekh and neelu
the whole hall is filled with the sound of claps

pooja:oye ali..ye qaidi kise le aya hai...

ali:hame nahi patha..

alekh n neelu cole n join them..
alekh 9/10
neelu 8/10
then come our yudi n anju (anjali)

yudi as usuall looked over excited n anju normal..
yudi:look everyone just staring at both of us.. isnt it means that we r .. we r nice couple. .

anju:yudi ... dont be more hopfull k??? mai sirf ye party ke lIye thumhare saath ayi hu... n dont forget I have boyfriend...

yudi made a face n says :k..

alekh:dekh tere bhai ko...
neelu; what u mean dude..
alekh:kithna dhar raha hai vo us ladki ke saath..
neelu:dude...
alekh:theek hai theek hai..

score meter
yudi:8/10
anju 8/10

yudi:hey bro... n pooja..looking nice ha...
pooja; thqnk u yudi... waise naina n huda kaha hai..
yudi:no idea...
then they sees towards the entrance there camw naina and huda with hand in hand...

they came near score meter
naina 9/10
huda 9/10
huda:kya bath hai phoolan.. delhlena hum hi jeethenge mr.and miss fresher ka award...
yudi:dude ..let me clear it... I am gonna win ..
huda:abey oo yudiye... lage sharth 100 ki mammyji ki kasam thu nahi jeethega..
yudi; what u mean ha..
huda:mean tho nahi mere yudiye..ye batha ye ladki kaun hai..
yudi: stop .. is se dhur rehena k ..she is my date anju..

huda:(in his flirting style):anju...

ali:aap phir se shuru math ho javo...partye tho ye sab chodo..
naina:chod na ali ..is se kya bol rahe ho.. ye kabhi nahi sudhrega...

"any problem"
a voice coke from behind they turn to see who it is it was nandini n abhi
huda:wow... mam I look so beautiful. ...
alekh:phir shuru hogaya ..phatoo sala.

nandini:so sweet of cadet huda... yaha tho kisikisiko tareef karna bhi ache se nahi atha..
abhi:ap kehena kya chahathe ho ki hame tareef karna nahi aatha??
huda:sirji...
naina:huda plz stop... mam u looking beautiful n u too sir.
abhi:thank u cadet..

pooja:sir sharuk... mera mathlab hai rajveer sir kaha hai... mai unhe dekhnekeliye mar rahi hu..I am sure vo sabse ache lag rahe honge..

all laughs on this..
abhi:ha apke capt ko apne date ke saath aneme late hoga...

the hall agin filled with claps n it was more this time as raj n ritu entered the hall..

abhi:vo dekhiye apke capt aagaye..
pooja:hai mai mar java.. mera sharuk.. .. indononki jodi tho bilkul sharukh aur rani mukarji jaisi lag rahe hai...

score meter
raj:10/10
ritu:10/10

abhi:kya bath hai rajm. aptho pureke pure marks jeethgaye..

all says raj n ritu that they look cute together. .

naina:sach me.. u too looking great sir..
raj:cadet singh aap bhi bahooth kubhsurath lag rahi hai aaj.. just like a angel... he lost in her wyes... he just saying whatever comes in his mind without thinking anything. .

everyone looked confusing at him..

"wow captain" a vpice come from behind it was shalini...
shalini:muje nahi patha tha ki aap ithneache tareef karthe ho
.

gunny:apko bahuth kuch patha nahi hai inke bareme dr.ahalini..

abhi:ek min... gunny apka date... omg shalini ji aap gunny ke saath ayi ho.. apke tabhiyath tho theek hai na...I mean gunny means..
naina:y ..sir gunny sir also looking great n I am sure he give great company to shalini mam.
shalini:absolutely cadet singh...

music starts and the party begins..

naina was standing at one corner ..raj just staring at her...gunny sees ths

gunny:kya huva raj.. u look lost.
raj:nothing. .
gunny:is there something which I should know.m
raj:nothing yar.. bas aise hi..

rutu came ask for the dance.. raj agreed..at the same timw there was announcement that everyone come to dance floir n after every five min the parter will be changed...
so all joined on dance floor..
it was a romantic music which is played

first ritu was raj partner
ritu:capt.. u r so sweet..
raj:ji...
ritucomeone capt it was complement. .. aap tho mere tareef nahi karoge.. atleast thanks tho bol sakthe hai na...
raj:no dr.not like that... ur lookibg beautiful. ...

nandini n abhi
nandini:abhi dekho na ..mai ne kaha tha na ki raj aur ritu I mean kithne ache lag rahe hai. n I think raj ko vo pasand hai.. jis taraha se vo uske saath dance kar raha hai..
abhi:hame bhi aise ji lagtha..

huda n naina:
huda:kyu phoolan karegi mujse shadi??ha muje patha hai thummuje naa nahi karoge.
nain gives him whatever kind of look..

pair change..
pooja with raj..
pooja:sir..aap bilkul veer zaara ke veer lag rahe ho..
raj:veer...??
pooja:mera mathlab hai.. sharuk ka veer zara.. aapne dekha movie ko
raja: cadet ghai mai movie nahi dekhtha..
poja started with her rohits bhashan.n raj was like koi muje bachalo.

abhi ritu:

abhi:aap ke koi boy friend hai??
ritu:capt... nahi..
abhi:apkocapt.rajveer pasand hai??
ritu:ha... mera mathlab...
abhi smiles. .:dr.hame sab patha chaljaatha hai chodiye.. n all the best..ye hamae dost aise nahi manjaatha ..apko hard work larna padtha..
ritu with smile:hard work... ??

nandini n gunny:

nandini: wow Gunn thum tho bade chuperustam nikhle... dr.shalini ko...

go nny:shut uo nandini . .. thumhare dhimag meiske alawa kuch aatha hi nahi.. jab dekho bak bak karthi rehethi ho...
nandini:what u mean ha... thum muje dhanth rahe ho... dekhlena mai kya karthi hoo... she smirkes at him n apne pav se uske paav dabadethi hai..
gunny:ouchh...
nandini smiles..
gunny:thumhe tho dekhloonga mai..
nandini:ha ha.. dekhle.. pehele dance tjo theek sekar na..

alekh n naina
alekh:apun ko thjse kuchpoochna tha..
naina:ha poocho na ..
alekh:ye us din capt mathlab ki.. thu un donoke saath.. aur ye capt rajveer vo kuch theek nahi lag raha hai..

naina:alekh... aisa kuch nahi hai.. actually muje thujse ye sab bathana tha..
alekh:mathlab...
naina:ye sab bhayya ke dost hai..
alekh:kya...
naina:baad me bathvoongi detail me..

music change n partner also

this time ir was raj naina

raj was veey happy that he was dancing with her..
he put one hand around her waist.. she feels shy that she ntfelt while dancing with anyone. . he pulls her close to him. she place her hand on his sholder..

one was lost in her eyes other was thinking y sge feel so different when he is around. .

there was complet silence between them. ..
naina broke the silence..

naina:sir can I ask u something. ...
raj:ya... u can naina..
naina:aap bhayya ke sab se ache doat the na.. unke best friend..
raj:ha naina.. hum sab unke best friend the..aur mai uska rommie tha tho jyada close tha mujse..

naina:sir apko bhayya nekabhi bathaya ki unke jindagimekoi ladki thi..?? I mean unke girlfriend. ...

raj turn her around making her back face him.her back was touching his chest..in that position he was dancing..

raj:naina. muje ithna pTha tha ki vo kisi se pyar kartha tha par vo kaun thI muje nahi patha..

raj push her away n then pull her towards him..then she came inbhis arms with his hand around her ...their faces r so close to each other .

raj:can I ask something. .???personal. ..
naina:personal??
raj; ya... if u dont wont to ans mean thats k naina..
naina:its k sir.. u can ask.. I believe u as bhayya also believed u..
raj:u ... u have.. (he was fearing to ask) do u have boyfriend)??? or u lioe someone??

naina:what !?? (shocking expression on face)
raj:I am sorry naina.. dont get angru..I was just...

naina amiles at it
naian:its k.. sir... so u want ans... no sir I dont have boyfriend. .. she paused for a sec..
raj tooka relief breath knowing her ans.
naina:u know what sir bhauya kehethe theagar kabhi muje koi ladka pasand aya tho pehele unhe bathana chayiye..uske baadh vo decide karenge.. yaha thak ki bhayya ye bhi kaha tha ki vo kudh muje boyfriend dhundhlenge thaki koi muje cheat na kare...she became emotional. ..
raj inmind:vo tho naveen ne kar diya hai naina...

he sees naina who has tears in eyes..he cant see her like this

raj:mai bhi kithne pagal hu na. thumse ye question poochraha hoo.. thumhare koi boy friend kaise hotha?with smile

naina:kya mathlab...
raj; mathlab ye hai ki aap tho college ke don the na.. mathlab sab ladkonko dharathe the na..

naina:nahi tho ...apko kisne kaha.. ye sab jooth hai... I amaure ye bhayya ne bathaya hoga.. use tho mai...

raj smiles looking at her..naina sees this n get that he was joking...
naina:sir aap... she hits at his chest...

raj:ouchhh...
naina:I am .. I amsorey sir...
raj laughs at her innocence. ..naina gets he acting..
both smiles.

there were two persons who was just looking at this whole scene. ...gunny and alekh