manan ff- JUNOON -E ISHQ(chapter 8 -updated/pg 10)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hey guys ,,,today i wa s a little free so i thought of giving update ...so here u go...by the wauy my exams r starting from 2nd march so wish me luck...

HUM TUM EK KAMRE MEIN BAND HO AUR COCKROCH DEKH JAYE...(B)

store room-

manik- (just to reduce the akwardness)ok koi nai atleast abb store room mein band ho he gaye hain toh lets not waste time come files bhi yahin hai so lets finish of the pending work...

nandini just stares at him in total shock...

nandini prov- aiyappa yeh kaise insaan hai...insan hai bhi ki nahi...yahan hum store room mein lock ho gaye hain aur inhe kaam ki padi hai...

manik- aise ghoor kya rahi ho ...(nandini gestures a no moving her head)jao wahan se wo files lekar aao ...fast(pointing towards some files kept on the self)

nandini without saying anything nodes and moves towards the shelf ...but stops in the mid ...suddenly her expressions become scared and she starts to breath heavily...she wants to scream but it seems her vocal chords are not allowing her to ...

manik- kya hua ab kya kisi invitation ka wait kar rahi ho ya sahi mahurat ka...

nandini -(finally screames to her loudest)aaa...(closing her eyes and putting hands on her ears)

manik -kya hua pagalon ki tarah kyun chilla rahi ho(freaking out)

nandini-(starts jumping on her place in the same posture)aaa...ahannn...cockroach...

as soon as manik hears the word cockroach he also sreams like an idiot...

manik- aaa...cockroach kahan hai ...ka ka kahan hai...(looks here ant there to find the cockroach)

while all this drama the cockroach even gets scared listening to their screams...and freaks out and not knowing where to go starts coming towards nandu...

watching the cockroach coming towards her she screams even louder and runs towards manik and hides behind him...

nandini- sirr...sir plz save me ...mujhe cockroach se bahut dar lagta hai...plzzz...(and starts jumping on her place)

manik- nandini...u r a brave girl right ...so tum bhagao iss cockroach ko...haina...aur waise bhi tumne toh un terorists ko bhi bus mein dhool chata diya tha to..toh yeh cock..cockroach kya cheez hai...hai na sooo go for it...

nandini- sirmere chodiye aapne toh akele un terorists ki kya dhulai ki thi na ...toh yeh cockroach kya chzz hai...jaye na bhagayna isss(says while clutching his shirt tightly from his back)

manik-aree nandini...tumne toh sunna hi hoga ki ladies first...so tum shuru karo i will also join you.(scared trying to ignore the sitiuation)

nandini- arre sir jayena ...aap kaise mard hain jo cock...cockroach dekhke darrahe hain..

manik- mein...mein koi darta warta nahi teek hai...(scared but still with attitude)mei..mein bhagata hun na cockroach ko ...

manik bends a little in his place ...

manik- cock..cockroach...chu chu chu chu...ja...are jaa na shu...shu... aare mere baap jaaa yahan seee...(Literaly pleads to the cockroach)

nanini- sir aap cockroach ko dara rahe ho yaa ussse patane ki koshish kar rahe ho...

but finally seeing their condition the cockroch decides to leave ...and give them some peace...so he leaves...

and both manik and nandini sigh in relief...

nandini- sir aap toh dekhate the ki aapko kisi chezz se dar nahi lagta...(naughtily)

manik-(again back to his bosy attitude)ha..han toh nahi lagta ...

nandini- aise lag toh nahi raha...(teasingly)

manik looks here and there...

after some time...

nandini- thand bohot bad rahi hai...

manik- hmm...aisa karo wahan shelf mein kuch useless paper rakhe hain go and bring them we can burn fire...

nandini nodes and goes towards the shelf but her height is not enough to reach the papaers...hence she brings an old stool from one corner and stands on it unaware of the fack that the stool is very weak...after climbing on it she tries to reach the paper but before her hand reaches it due to the weak stool and its wobbely movment she looses her balance and was about to fall when manik reaches in correct time to catch her but during falling she doesnot realise but her dres gets torn out from the back because of getting stuck in the nail which was comming out a little off the shelf...

nandini closes her eyes tightly and waits that any moment she will hit the ground but instead she feels a warm touch and a strong arm holding her close to his chest...she opens her eyes slowly only to find manik holding her actually carrying her close to his chest in his protctive arms...and the moment their eyes meet their world stops right their..

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sham bhi koi jais hai nadi

lehar lehar jaise beh rahi hai

koi ankahi,koi ansuni

baat deemi dheemi keh rahi hai

kahin na kahin jaagi hui hai koi aarzoo

kahin na kahin khoye hua se hain main aur tu

ke boom boom boom para para

hai khamosh dono...

ke boom boom boom para para

hai khamosh dono...

jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein

jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein

gummsum gumsum hai yeh fizayein hai na...

after a long eye lock they come out of their la la land only to fell awkward...when nandini realiss that her dress is torned from the back...so she literally chipko fies with the shelf after manik puts her down...blushing profusely...not wanting to make it more awkward ...

manik- ummhmm(clears his throat and walk back to the table again in his bossy andazz)

maniks pov-

what the hell !! manik yeh kya ho raha hai tere saath ...jab bhi tu uski ankhoon mein dekhta hai ...why u get lost ?? no no no ...this cant be happening ..u r the manik malhotra...u have to get a grip of yourself...

manik- ooo hello!! why u standing there like a statue...come here and help me with this ...tumhara nokar nahi hun...(pointing towards the papers to light fire)

nandini is still thinking what to do ...when

manik- oo...behere ho sunai nahi deta kya ...

nandini- si..si..sir ...mein wahan nahi aa sakti...i cant come their...

manik- why why cant u come here ...tum kya koi queen victoria ho jo tumhare liye red carpet bichaunga to tab jakar maadam padharengi ..(sarcasticly)

nandini- wo.. wo.. mei..mein..

manik- yeh bakre ki tarah mein mein kya kar rahi ho ... sedhe seedhe batao ki kya problem hai...

nanidi- sir ...wo ...wo na meri top peeche se shayad shef ke nail mein atak kar phat gai hai..(hesitantly)

manik again softens hearing that she is again facing problem...he may not realise it but he definitely has some soft corner in his heart for her...so a situation was already awkward he walks towards her with blank expression and removes his coat...seeing this nandu starts freaking out...

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Suhani suhani hai yeh kahani

Jo khamoshi sunaati hai

Jise tune chaha hoga woh tera

Mujhe woh yeh batati hai

Main magan hoon par na jaanu

Kab aane wala hai woh pal

Jab haule haule dheere dheere

Khilega dil ka yeh kamal

Ke boom boom boom para para

Hai khaamosh dono

Ke boom boom boom para para

Hai madhosh dono

Jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein

Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein

Gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein hai na...

nandini- (widening her eyes) si..sir yeh yh aa...aap ky..kya kar rahe hain...

manik walks towards her straight looking in her eyeys while she also looks into his yes...

manik- (stands infront of her) just shut up ...films kam dekha karo ...jo bhi soch rahe ho theres nothing like that...ok so stop using your pea sized brains...jop bhi bacha kucha hai wo bhi khatam ho jayega...(nandini fowns)mein bus tume yeh coat dene aya tha..(throws it on her face nandini holds it and again frowns) ab yeh shaklein banana band karo au chup chap isse pehenlo...manik checked out the room and found a couch in the corner of the room

manik- uum nandini come lets sit...

nandini-huh?(confusd)

manik-ab yeh huh kya hota hai ...i think it will take some time for someone to figure out that we are missing so come lets sit yahan khade rehene ka koi faida nahi...

both of them settle in the couch ...and suddenly the light goes off..

nandini- aiyappa...!!ye..yeh ..kya..hu..hua...lights ...why did they go off...(scared)

manik- chill its just lights yaar...abhi aajayega...lagta hai power cut hua hai...

thre is no light in the room excepet the moon light which is comming into the room through a sky light...

after a few mins manik notices her shivering and sitting by closing her eyes tightly...

manik- um nandini...r u alright...tum theek ho na ...

nandini- ha..han...mu ...mu..mujhe kya hoga..i am...fi...fine

seeing her geeting worst with each passing minute manik started to get worried...

manik- nandini are u nyctophobic?

nandini-(not able to hold back any more)yes..yes sir...plz sir mujhe bohot dar lagraha hai...pl..plz help me...(she starts sweating and shevering even more badly...)

seeing her like this why dont know but manik feels sting pain in his heart and he without thinking twice goes near her...

manik- nandini...(cuppling her pace )hey...look at me ...you are fine tum theek ho ...see i am with you..

nandini- sir mein saanss..saanss nahi lee paa rahi...plz sir ...mujhe bacha lee jiye ...

without wasting a moment manik takes her in and bone crashing hug forgeting everything around...he has no idea why but still there is some force ...some connection that pulls him towards her...but what is it...

nandini- sir plz i will plz mujhe...mujhe andehere se bahut dar lagta haii ...plz manik min mar rahi hun plz mujhe bacha lijeye...(unintentionaly she calls him manik instead of sir)

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Yeh kaisa samay hai, kaisa sama hai

Ke shaam hai pighal rahi

Yeh sab kuch haseen hai, sab kuch jawan hai

Hai zindagi machal rahi, jagmagati jilmilati

Palak palak pe khwaab hai

Sun yeh hawayein gungunaye

Jo geet lajawab hai

Ke boom boom boom para para

Hai khaamosh dono

Ke boom boom boom para para

Hai madhosh dono

Jo gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein

Jo kehti sunti hai yeh nigahein

Gummsum gummsum hai yeh fizayein hai na..

manik -(hearing this why he doesnt know but he feels very happy )nandini...shant ho jao see i am here with u ...mein tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga... nandu ..plz calm down..

hearing him call nandu she instantly cams down why she doent know but she feels some kind of a peace in his arms...

to be continued...

waiting to know your views on the chappy so plz reply soon and dont forget to hit the like button...and spelling mistake ho toh maff kar dena...and afcourse all juta chappal and sada tamatars allowed...😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Wow.. nyc. I remembered ky2 by reading this

Do update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Amazing update

Now I am eagerly waiting for next part

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Didiaish

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey nice update

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hey guys sorry havent updated in a long time but u all know the reason anyways was free so here is the next update...

HUM TUM EK KAMRE MEIN BAND HO AUR COCKROCH DEKH JAYE...( C)

Meanwhile at cabirs place...

Cabir-yeh dono subha se office mein nahi dekhrahe hain...gaye toh gaye kahan...aur subha manik bhi itna weird behave karraha rha...hmmm kuch toh gadbad hai...pata laga na padega...donon ek dusre ko aise dekh rahe the jaise long lost lovers ho...(laughs naughtily)kuch toh locha hai boss...mukti ko call karta hun usse sab pata hota hai...just then his phone rings...

He picks it up...

Cabir- haye mere behena tu sau saal jiyegi...abhi mein tujhe hi call karne wala tha ...

Mukti- (panicked)cabir bhaiyu...wo sab chodiye yeh bataeye kya bhai aapke saath hain??

Cabir- nahi toh meine toh usse sbha ke baad se nahi dekha...par tu kyun puch rahi hai...?

Mukti- cabir bhaiyu...bhai kabhi bhi bina mujhe batae kahin nahi jate aur late honge toh bhi mujhe batate hain and din mein ek bari toh mujhe zarur call karte hain par aaj nothing like that...pata nahi bhai kahan par hai...unhonne kuch khaya bhi hai ya nahi...(almost on the verge of crying)

Cabir- arre chutki tu ro mat...ruk mein check karta hun aur...(just then he sees another call coming on his phone so thinking may be it can be manik)aaa muku ek minute hold kar ek aur call aaraha hai...shayad manik ka hosakta hai...

Mukti- ok bhai...plz jaldi...

Cabir keep mukti on hold and answers the other call ...

Cabir- hello...

Girl- ummm cabir sir..?

Cabir- yes speaking...

Girl- sir mein varsha remember aapne mangalore se do ladkiyon ko appoint kiya tha ?

Cabir- ooh yes yes...

Vasha- sir actually...mein aur nandini ek saath rehete hain and aaj uska office ka pehela din tha but wo mujhe subha se nahi dikhi phir meine socha shayad busy hogi but sir...wo ab tak ghar waapas nahi aaye...plz sir I don't know anyone here...sir plz can you help me...

Cabirs provo-

Hain?ab nandini bhi gayab hai...yeh chal kya raha hai...kahin in dono ka koi scene toh nahi ban gaya...

Varsha-sir?are u there?

Cabir- ya ya...don't worry mujhe jaise he kuch pata chalta hai mein tumhe inform karta hun...

Varsha - ok...thanx sir...(still tensed)

Call dissconnects...

Mukti-bhaiyu kuch pata chala...

Cabir- achha muku...manik ne tujhe kuch aisa bataya hai jo mujhe nahi pata??(suspiciously)

On that very moment mukti remembers her and maniks conversation and starts stammering...

Mukti- ummm...na... nahi toh...ai..aisa toh kuch bhi nahi kaha unhonne...

Mukti prov-

Shit!ab kya karun...ab toh phass gaye ...bhaiyu se jhut bhi nahi bol sakte...

Cabir-tu sach bol rahe hai na ...dekh tune mujhse promise kiya tha that tu mujhse kabhi jhoot nahi bolegi...

Mukti prov-

kya karun??

Cabir- muku??

Mukti- ha...haan...actually bhaiyu...han aisa kuch hai jo bhai ne mujhe bataya hai aur aapko nahi pata but bhaiyu mein aapse wo baat abhi philhal share nahi kar sakte as meine bhai ko promise kiya hai plz understand...

Cabir- achha theek hai...but is it about a girl??

Mukti- aapko kaise pata??(confused)

Cabir provo-

Yes!!!i knew it !!i knew it kuch na kuch kichdi pak rahi hai in donon mein...jis tarah manik majnu ki tarah usse ghoor ghoor ke office mein dekh raha tha...I am sure this what ever thingy he has told to mukti is definitely related to nandini in some way...ho ho ha ha ha...(laughing like a mad person in his thoughts)mere majnu manik ab kahan bachke jayega mere chill jaise nazroon se...

Mukti- bhaiyu kuch toh boliye??

Cabir- abb...kuch nahi...sun...tu ready ho I am coming to pick you up..!!i think humein ekaur bari office mein check karna chahiye...may be wo abhibhi wahin ho...

Mukti- ok bhaiyu...!!

Cabir dissconnects the call and calls back varsha and she picks up in a single ring...

Varsha- yes sir...!!!

Cabir- umm miss varsha...I think humein aik bar office jake check karna chahiye so give me your address I will pick you uo...

Varsha- ji sir...

Soon cabir picks up varsha and then mukti...

IN THE CAR-

Mukti- hi Im mukti...

Varsha- I' m varsha...

Mukti- tum bhi kisi ko dhund rahe ho...???

Varsha- han...meri best friend ko...usne aaj hi office join kiya tha par ab tak ghar nahi aye...

Mukti- strange!!mere bhai bhi abhi tak ghar nahi aye and he is also missing...

Soon they reach the parking of the office building...

Cabir- yeh dekho!!manik ki gadi toh abhi bhi yahin hai...iska matlab he hasn't left the building till yet...chalo lets check inside...

Meanwhile ...

IN THE STORE ROOM-

Its been a while but still both are in the same position manik continously stroking her hair to calm her down...and slowly she is trying to get a grip of herself but still her fear for darkness keeps winning...

Manik- miss.murthy...u ok??(concerned)(still hugging her)

Nandini- ha...han...(stammering trying to control herself)

Mank- no u r not...(calmly)just relax I am here with you...shhh everything is fine...(her grip on the back of his shirt becomes more stong)

Nandini provo-

Aiyappa!!yeh...what is happening to me...??why?kyun I fell so much secure in his arms...it fells as if mein pehele se unhe janti hun...but how is it possible??mein toh kabhi pehele manik sir se mili bhi nahi...what is this feeling??kyun jab mein unke saath hote hun toh mano jaise koi invisible dor hum dono ko bandh ke rakhti ho, jaise...mein unhe barsoon se janti hun,unpe ankh bandd karke kar sakte hun...aakhir kya rishta hai humara??

Manik prov-

Pata nahi yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai...oh god I shouldnot be behaving like this...and that to usske liye jisse mein theek se janta tak nahi...but jab bhi usske saath hota hun...why I feel a strong pull towards her...as if I can rely on her for anything...jaise...bohut purana rishta ho humara...what is all this?i have never felt this before...

Just then the door opens and in the same time the power comes back and wallah!!!the most shocking surprise for the most important two people in maniks life and the biggest heart attack for varsha as they see manan hugging each other...

Mukti- bhai...(shocked)

Cabir is standing with wide eyes totally expressionless...

They break the hug realising their situation...and akward...but now its already done...and they cant go back...(at least manan fans wouldnot want that!!)

Varsha- nandu...!!!

Then they not to make them feel akward change the topic...but how can cabir baba leave manik after watching them as in manan inthat state...so now basically a bigger toofan to come for manik only as he is going to have a really hard time making him shut up...

Mukti on hearing the name nandu looks at her and becomes so happy that in an instance she hugs her tightly...

For once nandini also becomes surprised...but then realises that is is none other than MUKTI MALHOTRA...her muku...

Nandini hugs her back manking everybody confused including manik...

Mukti -omg!! Nandu tu yahan...oh god I am so happy...so tune bhai ka office join kiya hai...I and very happy yaar...now we can meet regularly...

Nandini-(confused)bhai ka office??

Mukti- (breaking the hug)aarre pagal yes mere bhai yani manik malhotra...mere bhai...

Nandini- ohhh...(surprised)

Manik- muku...mujhe kuch bataegi...

Muti- arrre bhai she is the one remember meine jiske bare mein aapko bataya tha about the camp thing jab mein bimar thi...isse hi toh mein aapko milana chahati thi...

Manik- ohhh..(surprised)

Cabir prov-

Wah!!!indono ka yeh accha hai...kya connection hai...

Varsha- par nandu tu yahan pahunchi kaise???

Mukti- han bhai...yteh sab kaise hua ...how come aaplog store room mein...

Manik- long story muku ...ghar jake bhataun...

Mukti nods...

Varsha prov -

I just hope ...ke kuch hua na ho in donon ke beech as nandu aisa nahi karsakti...kahin aagar usse manik sir se pyaar wyaaar hogaya toh bahut mushkil ho jayegi .,...jaise kismat inhe bar bar mila rahi hai...plan toh kuch aise he lag rahe hain...mujhe jald se jald nandini se iss baare mein baat karni padegi...hey wait manik ...inka bhi naam manik hai and jiju ka naam bhi manik hai what a coincidence...

Mukti- achha fine...chalo now lets leave already bahut raat ho chuki hai...

Everybody agrees...and they leave but manik finds cabir very silent...he hasent said a single word since then...

Manik prov-

Yeh kamina itna chup chap kyun baitha hai...hmmm...yeh itna chup baitha hai matlab manik beta...aaj toh tu gaya...yeh toofan ke aane se pehele ki khamoshi hai...zarur isske demag mein kuch khichdi pah rahi hai...arre khichdi kya am sure pasta ,lasania,chocolate mousse sab kuch pakraha hoga...

Writers prov-

Boss...you r absolutely right...cabira jab silent hojata hai tab samajh lena chahiye bhi wo bhaut jald violent honewala hai...no no mar pitai wala violent nahi...tujhe taunt mar mar ke tere le lene wala violent...so bete manik...be ready...kyun ki ab jo goga...wo kisi ke haath mein nahi yaha tak mere bhi nahi...