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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER 5 (a)- THE UNREVEALED TRUTH

MANGALORE-

amms- aiyappa ka shukar hai ki meri nandu bilkul sahi salamat hai...

varsha- (to cheer up her mood) aare amms aap bhi haad karte ho...hamari nandu ko kabhi kuch nahi ho sakta ...(amms looks at her confused) aare mera matlab hai ,apko toh pata hi hai humari nandu kitne rondu hai ki pura ghar pani se bhar jata hai (giving a naughty smile all along)aur i am toh damn sure tab bhi wo panik kar ke rone lagi hogi jiski wajha se bus mein baad aagaye hoge aur isse liye wo chor bhi uss baad ke sath hi behe gaya hoga...mujhe toh taras un bicharoon par aaraha hai...(faking a sad face)wo bhi soch rahe honge ki kisse pala pada hai...(and again gives a naughty smile)

amms- (hits her playfully)haat!! badmash!!...achha aaj tujhe 4:00 baje mumbai jane ke liye nikalna hai na...toh nandu ka kuch files and papers mere cuboard mein rehe gaya hai shayad use zarurat pade toh tu ja dekhle le aur sara zaruri saman apne saath le ja...

varsha- jee amms...(smiling)

she entered the room and opened the cuboard and started to empty the drawer when suddenly an old file fell down which was kept... actually hidden beneath the cloths ...it had no name on it...so she out of curiosity just to check out ...if it was something important to nandu ...she opened it... and she got the biggest shook of her life wich shook her from the core...it felt like the ground had slippet from beneath her feet... just when amms enters...

amms- varsha..var...(she s stunned when she sees that file in her hand...)yeh tumhe kahan se mille??(in all this caos she had forgot that she had kept the file inside the cuboard ..and now she had sent varsha here and she saw thw file now no one can stop the truth from coming out...)

amms prove- aiyappa yeh kya ho gaya sachai aise bahar niklege meine aisa kabhi nahi socha tha meine toh socha tha ke sahi samay anepar nandu ko aur sabko sab bata dungi lekin...

varsha - amms kya yeh sach hai !!!!!( shoving a photograph which was inside the file)

amms had no answer.

varsha- amms mein aapse kuch puch rahe huin...kya yeh sach hai...???am,ms kya yeh sach hai???

amms- han han yeh sach hai ...yeh sach hai ki ..ke NANDINI KI SHADI HO CHUKI HAI !!!!!!!(and she sit on the bed crying)

to be continued ...

i am sorry guys i know ke this is a little chotu update but cant help it as i am out of town so could type this much onle on my cell phohe ok ...but i will complete this capter soon hope u guys dont mind by the egarly waiting for your comments...😆

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Didiaish

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice update

But it's shocking nandu ki shadi ho chuki he
Aur ye bat nandu ko pta hai ya nhi
Khi uski child marriage to nhi hui
N why this thing kept as a secret

So many que
Next part update soon
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abhilashaS

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CHAPTER 5 (b)-

varsha- itni badi baat apne nandini se itne saal chepake rakhi...par kyin???(crying) kya usee appne zindagi ka itna bada saach janneka haq nahi he ???kal ko jab use iss saachai ka pata chalega ke uski bachpan mein he shaddi karwadi gaye thi...child marriage hui thi uspe kya betegi ?? aur agar usse kise aur se pyaar ho gaya toh ?? tab kya hoga aapne kabhi socha hai??kya usse haq nahi ki wo khud apne marzese aapna husband choose kar sake ...???aur yeh sab toh dur ki baat hai pehele toh wo ladka kon hai ,kya karta hai ?mein jitna aapko jante huin aap nandu se toh appne jaan se zada pyaar karti hain ...toh phir aap ne aisa kyun kiya ???(with a helpless expression with tears continously rolling down from her eyes she knees down before amms holding her had and asks helplessly)kuch toh boliye amms mujhe sach janna hai ...

amms- socha tha sahi waqt ayega toh mein sabko sab sach bata dunge lekin kair ek tareh se achha hi hua ke tume pata chal gaya ...mein yeh bojh ab aur apne dil pe lekar nahi rehe sakti...lekin varsha yeh jo bhi sab hua hai iss sab ke piche ek bohut badi wajha hai...baith mein tujhe sab batati huin...

varsha sits beside amms holding her hand

amms- jis din sarika aur rajveer (nandu's parents) ka accident hua uss din shekhar malhotra aur uski family bhi sarika,rajveer,rishab aur nandu ke sath uss gadi mein thee.shekhar malhotra sarika aur rajveer ka childhood best friend tha .bachpan se he unhone har kaam sath mein kiya karte the .shekhar malhotra bahut he rich or elit khandan se belong karta tha ...leken bahut hi seedha sadha aur dil ka bahut achha insan tha...aur appne doston pe toh apne zaan izhar karta tha ... moorty industries ko khada karne mein ussne appne je jaan lagadi thi... sab kuch acha chal raha tha ...uss din wo sab milke holiday manane ke liye goa ja rahe the by road ..aur raste mein unka accident ho gaya ...nandu us shock ke karan accident se pehele ki kuch baatein aur appn zindegi ke kuch pallon ko bhul gaye ,doctor ne kaha ke use partial memory loss ho gaya hai...,sab log bach gaye sivaye sarika aur rajveer ke...(again starts crying)sarika ne hospital aate samaye raaste mein he dum tod diya leekin rajveer ko kisi taraha se hospital laya gaya lekin wo bach nahi paya lekin appne akhri saans lete waqt usne hekhar se nandu aur rishab ka khayal rakhe ko kaha aur usne usse wada kiya ke wo unka khayal rakhega...leekin badkismate se usse din pata chala ke moorty industries ke share gir gaye the aur hum barbad ho chuke thee... humara ghar aur baki sabkuch humse cheen liya gaya...aur tab shekarne humare madad ki aur usn rishab ka sara kharcha uthaya aur usse padhne ke lye bahar bhej diya aur nandu ka futue secure karne ke liye ussne mejhe nandu ka haat appne bete ke liye manga... ussne rajveer se jo wada kiya tha wo nibhaya... ussne mujhse kaha ke ''nandu meri bhi bete hai aur mein cahata hun ki nandini ko mein humesha humesha ke liya appne bete bana kar aapne ghar mein rakhoon...mein cahata hun ki aap nandu ki shaadi mere bete ke sath kar dein...'' uss waqt itna sab kuch ho chuka tha aur ...mein cahate thi ki meri nandu khush rahe usse kabhi koi kammein na ho aur khaas kar apne amma appa ki wo shekhar ke sath bohut khush reheti thi aur wo usse bilkul apne bete ki taraha pyaar karta tha ...balki nandu uske ladli thi ...iss liye meine han kar di...aur usske bete aur usske shaadi karwadi...lekin nandu bahut choti thi isliye unlogon ne kaha k jab nandu bade hojayege tab mein uss yeh sacchai bataun ...aur wo mumbai shift ho gaye...aaj bhi mein unse haar rozz baat ksart huin...

varsha - matlab nandu ko accident se pehele ki kuch chezein yaad hi nahe hai...achha yeh saab toh theek hai leekin wo hai kon jisse nandini ki shaadi hui ??

amms- MANIK MALHOTA...malhota industries and enterprises ke malik shekar malhotra ka beta ...yeh hai usk bachpan ki photo(shows her the photo)

varsha- (seeing it) ...awww kitne cute the jiju...lekin mein pachpan ki poto dekhkar kya karungi ?? abhi ke koi photo dikhaye na pata toh chale ki mere jiju dekhete kaise hain ...

amms- abhi ka photyo toh mere pass nahi hai leekin mere shekar se do din pehele hi baat hui hai wo mujhe kuch dino mein bhej dega ...actually manik kafi sallon se US mein padhai karne rehe aha tha leekin abb wo wapas aa raha hai...achha tu yeh saab chod aur tu nandu yeh saab abhi maat batana ...waqt anne par mein khud usse bata dungi...

varsha- are amms appko to apata hi hai na ki mre peth mein zada deer tak koi baat nahi rehe sakti par phir bhi mein puri koshish karungi...aap tension mat lo...(smils)

amms achha acha bohot sare baatein ho gaye aur vais bhi flight ka time ho raha hai toh jaldi kar warna nandu tujhe kachha chaba jaye gi aagar tu aaj mumbai nahi pahunchi...

To be continued in the next chapter...

Sorry for the spelling mistakes and yes early waiting for your comments😳😃

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Guess what will happen ??? Next chapter is IS IT COINCIDENCE OR DESTINEY ?😉

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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interesting..

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Didiaish

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey nice update
I knew it ki vo manik he hoga jisase nandini ki shadi hui he

But the que is ki ab aage kya kya hoga
It will be fun n interesting to know how their journey will start

Next part update soon

N yes I want you suggest that k I have friend manwara n kajal they also are fabulous writer like you n their ff it's love, dheere dheere n inhaniyate etc you can write your ff name n ff link in comments there n after reading your story you reader will increase

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Didiaish

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey when gonna update next part

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abhilashaS

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Posted: 9 years ago

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sorry for the delay guys actually i was sick and was having fever from last few weeks after that as i was not well so missed a lot of classes hence the workload has also increased due to which i am not able to give you regular update .but somehow i am giving a part of this chapter as i was only able to type this much and this is a long chapter so hope you guys understand and yes one important thing that my exams are going to start so may will not be able to update for 2 months as it is very important for my career ..but still i will try to update ...hope you guys will support me..😳

CHAPTER 6- JUST A COINCIDENCE OR DESTINEY ? (a)

5:00PM - RESIDENTIAL SOCIETY

nandus prov- finally i reached ...uff what an eventful day it was... any way i am so happy that i am her for a new beginning...

she came ot of the cab and there was a person who was from the company for sure ...

rahul- hi maam ...i am rahul plz to meet u ...(forwarded his hand and i took it)welcome mumbai maam here are your flat keys and as per the notice you will share your flat with anothe intern i.e miss .varsha agnihori...so ...here..

nandini -(taking the keys) thaks...

rahul- its ok maam ...and further if you need anything company has arranged a maid for you so she will get it for you...ok maam so now i have to leave...have a good day ahead..

nandini entered the society and took the life her flat was on the 5th floor...she reached there and opened the door with the keys and she was stunned the flat was huge and lavish after all it was the flat given by the largst company of asia...it was well furnished .after opening the door she entered the coredoor wich directly took to the living are which was decorate vey beautifully in the left there was and open kitchen with dinning table and in the right side it had two bedroom with attached bathroom and if we walk straight there was a huge balcony with a swing attached with the living room which had a flower garden in it...the flat had all te possible things which a person needed ... and even the kitchen was well stocked.

she happily walked inside and went inside a bedroom and settled her things in the cuboard.just then her cell rings

nandini- (picks up)varshu !kahan hai tu ?? tu toh idhar 5:30 pm ko pahunchne wale thi ?

varsha- aree mere maa stop stop todhi saans lele aur han mein pahuchne wali thi but flight delay ho gaye thi so.. anyways mein abhi just airport se nikle ...tu mejhe address de mein pahunch rahi hun ok ... tension mat le...

nandini- ya ...just a min...(and gives her the address )accha jaldi pahunch kitna sara kam hai ,room mein sab kuch set katna hai...

Varsha- ok ok just pahunch ne wali hun ( hangs up)

After a few mins the bell rings.nandini runs and opens the door...

Nandini and varsha both shout in excitement seeing eachother...

Varsha and nandini together- aaa omg omg omg finally...(and hug eachother)

Scene shifts ...

MALHOTRA MANSION-

Manik just enters the house and mukti comes running down ...in excitement

Mukti- bhai...

And hugs manik with so much force that for a moment manik almost looses his balance ...

Manik- aare doll dheere ... abhi gir jati toh bhai ko dekh ke itni khush ho ?(asks cutely)

Mukti- bohooot kush hun !!

Manik- awww...

Suddenly mukti hits manik on his arm...

Manik- arre mar kyun rahi hai ?(surprised)(but she his him again )arre meine kya kiya ?

Mukti- mujhe aapse baat nahi karni (and turns around )

(manik smiles on her cuteness and decides to play along)

Manik- kyun nahi kani? kya doll bhai se gussa hai ?

(she bobs her head cutely)

And manik goes all aww on her cute antics

Mukti - aap bohot late ho bhai ...aapne kaha tha ke aap yesterday aaoge but aap nahi aaye ...this is not fair aap aise kese kar sakte ho and turns around (and suddenly her eyes fall on the small wond on his forehead and she paniks...

Mukti - bhai ye..yeh kaise hua (and she starts crying )aa..aap theek toh ho na mei ..mein bhi kitni pagal hun aapse aapka halchal puche bina meine aapne bakwas chalo kar de ...aa..aap idhar baitho (and drags him to the couch in the living room..

Manik- aare mukti ...doll mere baat toh sun ...(but she was least interested she was more concerned about the fact that his brother was hurt

Mukti- (shouts)ramu kaka...jaldi se firstaid box lekar aayeye..

Manik- aare mukti relax ...mein bilkul theek hun..

Ramu kaka give her the firstaid box

Mukti- chup! ekdum chup!

And manik obeys obediently and puts his finger on his lips and sits quietly...

While mukti aaplies the antiseptic cream on it and blows air on it ...manik just keeps smiling throughout ...

Mukti- dard ho raha hai...(worriedly)

Manik - aab meri doll me medicine lagaya na toh ab yeh bilkul theek ho gaya ...

And suddenly neyonika malhotra enters the room ..

Neyonika- aagar bhai behen ka milap ho gaya ho toh thoda aapme mom ko bhi yaad karlo...

Manik gets up and hugs her ...and they all sit there while he narrates the whole journey to them ofcourse leaving the nandini and soha wala part...