Arshi TS - Desert Rain/ Part 2/ Pg-21/(Completed) - Page 11

Originally posted by: sunitikapoor

Lovely concept...good start.

Waiting for next chapter.

Originally posted by: -Dellz-

Lovely and amazing

Loved the first update

Superb

Thanks for the pm

Continue soonish

Originally posted by: sohara

Nice innovative concept.

Very beautifully written.

Originally posted by: whitelily

superb start

Originally posted by: sukanksha

So beautiful and heart touching

Originally posted by: kimnana

u took us to fantasy land

how khushi will convince him ,his prince charming

looking for next part

ty for pm

Originally posted by: potomac

Oh my goodness mahi .. Why didn't u tell us about this ... I am going to res .. Will get back once I read it

Originally posted by: akai

Hey just read it today. Sorry was not able to read it before and thanks for sending me pm.

Your introduction made me LMAO

Arrey no problem sweetie, if you'll say sorry i'll spank you, so no sorry okay! 😈😆

Welcome Shobana dearest! 😉

It's really superb, I liked the description about the sand.

It was nice to read the flashback in the middle of her thinking.

Desert has a hard side, it's difficult to survive their. You have written it and explained saying Kushi dried lips and her need of water.

Thanks dearu, happy to know that you liked it! 😉 The idea was roaming in my mind from a long time, i am crazy about arabian movies from childhood, so when i watched one again many days ago, decided to finally pen down a story on that idea! 😉

It's really amazing. Waiting for next update.

Thanks dearu, your comments means a lot to me! 😳 Will update soon! 😉

Originally posted by: caur

Awesome TS sweetie👏👏

Loved it!

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Amzng story
Loved it