General SS - Belong Part 4 on Page 5 - UPDATED !!! - Page 5

Brilliant update.

what a fabulous update.. Now we know maan's sideof the story and the past... Fabulous ..loved it.. Would want to know how the story shapes up

updated my comment maddy in the prev page.
i didn't forget😆

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

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sooo sorry for the delayed comment maddy.
was out on a vacation. but yeah, finally back and read it.

it was so sad (well, can't complain at that for it happens to be your forte) but its sooo beautifully sad maddy. just so beautiful actually.
there were no dialogs but your simple words were enough.
they had a stillborn baby and now when she thinks of it, she traces back the events that slowly tore them apart.

it happens between couples when they lose their precious child, a distance comes up.have seen something like this very closely. so can really relate.
they became strangers in their own house. and when the drift was too much, it came out as pain and hurt. kudos woman. you have really touched a very sensitive nerve within people these days.

they both r hurting. i would have blamed maan had he not confessed her truly about what he did. but he did confess... and that is his love. i cannot blame him. he was cheating. yes, a mistake it was, but from my pov, it is something that can be forgiven over time.

geet is distressed and when is despair, the mind thinks up of events of the past and related to the present and it breaks us apart painfully.

just too emotional maddy
am waiting for the next!!!
pls do updt on weekends yaara.
looking forward.

don't thank me. ur updates r enough😳
u deserve every bit of those words n more.

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

don't thank me. ur updates r enough😳
u deserve every bit of those words n more.

Originally posted by: iMadz

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so, next updt kab?😆

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

so, next updt kab?😆