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Originally posted by: bablubli

Jennyyy..you tease...you tease...how can one go on with work all day when you drop lines that hijack the brain & imagination completely? Dr. Raizada was hot even without all this...forget Khushi...we are out of breath here...

I have a request - Please don't give us any more 'teasers'...and p.l.e.a.s.e post the next chapter as soon as you can...ab saha nahin jaata 😒

Originally posted by: bablubli

I have to agree...what were you watching Jen when the epic scene was on?! I mean how could your attention even go to an obscure gold fish bowl amidst all that action?!!

I can't recall anything from that scene except Mr. & Mrs. Raizada...😉

Originally posted by: IPK007

😆 @Bold se yaad aaya...Rehne do Khushi...tum seh nahi pao gi😉

Originally posted by: canapoem

Jen, one straight question.

Is the update ready?

Being patient is becoming tough Jen.

Originally posted by: IPK007

Will try my best to post tomorrow night. Will know for sure in the morning depending on how the night goes.

Originally posted by: bablubli

Khushi ko rehne do Jenny...main seh nahin paaongi!! Yeh Thursday kab aayega?!

Originally posted by: IPK007

Jokes apart, I find intimate scenes hardest to write...almost everything I write makes me cringe...😲

Originally posted by: bablubli

I can understand your apprehension Jen, but allow us to tell you that you write them beautifully...they are sensuous & classy.

That there are so many readers waiting (actually badgering!) for you to post your next chapter, should tell you how highly we rate your work and that includes the way you portray the intimacy between the lead pair. That intimacy is not just in the lovemaking scenes but is a constant in their interaction with each other...and that is one of the many reasons that makes your Arnav & Khushi so interesting!

Originally posted by: bablubli

I can understand your apprehension Jen, but allow us to tell you that you write them beautifully...they are sensuous & classy.

That there are so many readers waiting (actually badgering!) for you to post your next chapter, should tell you how highly we rate your work and that includes the way you portray the intimacy between the lead pair. That intimacy is not just in the lovemaking scenes but is a constant in their interaction with each other...and that is one of the many reasons that makes your Arnav & Khushi so interesting!