FF: RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS updated Pg159 - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Thanks for the PMs dear !

Oh your updates ! Chhotu but regular updates !!! They are sooo sweet ! And I SO love the Rajveer you have created ! Atleast your Rajveer is quite vocal about his feelings.. The perfect blend of shyness and straightforwardness !!! Looking forward to plenty of such cute, sweet, subtle and may be some "ahem ahem" RN moments too ! ;)


No problem about the PM! 😊 Thank you for liking the updates. 😊 Thank you for liking the Rajveer I have created. In fact sharing a secret with you, I was actually analyzing today about what kind of Rajveer have I created so far and how do I wanna mold it. I am surprised that you pointed it out today itself. 😳 Well vocal yes, may be not wholly but certainly he is vocal! He is vocal only with Naina, not with all. Because he knows that he has the right to talk out his heart in front of Naina and only Naina. Yes he is going to be both shy and straightforward. I guess that's what I would have loved to watch in the original series. Whereas they only showed his shyness when it comes to 'love'! For sure you'll get many more of your 'ahem ahem' moments 😉 Thanks again! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sakha_sakhi

Nice update dear... I wish naina will go with raj in fresher's ball.. unlike the story line of LRL where a teacher cannot go with student... Ritu is always upto something


Thank you so much for liking the update. 😊 I wish it too 😉 Yes if Ritu won't be up to something her role will go to rest then lolz.. And although I know all RN fans want exactly the same, but its not possible so soon! 😉Come on give her chance to enjoy changing into a vamp! 😆🤬
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover


I am sorry but unable to understand this! 😕

I was taking to Naina and how is irritated that Raj is always questioning her.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNgirl

I was taking to Naina and how is irritated that Raj is always questioning her.


Ohh hahaha! Alright 😉 lolz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome
thank u for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover


<font size="6" color="#ff0000">Hahaha! 😆Thank you so much Megha. 😳You know what, original LRL was far better than my story.😊It's just that Rajeev left the show at the correct time, I mean at the wrong time!😉Jab kuch shuru hone wala tha😡bus aagey nahi bol pa rahi kyunki jab bhi main sochti hun iss barey mein to gussa aata hai bohot! 😡But anyways can't deny that my feelings for Rajeev are still intact!😳❤️If I comment about my dialogues, it comes straight from heart, something I would have loved to hear from Rajveer and Naina in the original series!😭Yes, bohot wait karwaya tha unke relation ka glimpse dene mein, and that was my main motive ki main wait nahi karwaungi. I could have taken it slow, but I guess me, along with all RN fans have waited far tooo long to actually see a relation building up between them, apart from a MENTOR and a CADET! I am glad you like the RN dialogues of my story😊Hahaha! I know I give late updates. I am trying to give quick updates these days because I'll get busy around December, won't be able to update for around a week or two!😕😭Oh god, I am happy to know ki mere likhe dialogues reminds you of RN. I hope you picturize the scenes exactly the way I want my readers to picturize them.😳Tumhari har line mujhey itni achi lag rahi hai, I am unable to word my feelings! Main bus hansti ja rhi hun, as I am typing this.😳 Thank you so much, for making me feel like this!😳❤️Well I just hope tumhare pyar RN ke liye kabhi kam na ho in fact badhta rahey!😳</font>
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<font size="5">Thanks sweetheart for making my LRL all the more adorable</font>

<font size="6" color="#ff0000">No problem!😳</font>
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<font size="5">and yes muje RN ka dance dekhna hai Fresher's ball me</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="6">Your wish is my command Ma'am! 😳You'll get that for sure!😊</font>



Itne pyare se reply ke liye to I love you Ria!!! And yes I will reiterate that ur fic is better than original LRL love track!! Tumne RN ke pyar ko Amar kar dia meri jaan..yaar tum Dec me 2 week apni fic update nahi karogi aww I will miss it badly 😭 but I trust you that koi important kaam ke liye tum do week ke liye humse dur jaogi to jao tumhe maaf kia 😉 hehehe...

Plz update soon...dying to read nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful !

Thanks for pm!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update 😊😊😊 I hope raj and naina will be together in fresher's ball !! Hmm... plz ritu ko dorr rakho unn se 😆😃 plz continue soon 😉😛 haha i a waiting !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 31

Captain Rajveer opens the door and finds Naina standing there. "Yes Cadet?" asks Captain Rajveer, surprised and secretly happy to find her there. "Ahmm... wo Sir, main Dr. Mishra se milne ayi thi!" they keep staring each other. Rajveer-Naina tune starts in the background. "Yes Cadet!" Dr. Mishra's voice breaks their eye contact. Clearing his throat, he gestures her by his hand, to get into the room, in all gentleman style. "Ma'am..." as she starts saying, after getting into the room, the mess on the bed, makes her to halt in her process. She finds Dr. Mishra's dresses scattered all over the bed.

Turning her attention to Dr. Mishra she says, "wo ma'am Dr. Shalini apse milna chahti hain, I guess wo confused hain ki wo apne dress ke sath konsa earring ka pair choose karein!"Discovering that again it's all about ladies' stuff, getting confused while getting ready, Captain Rajveer smiles and rolls his eyes. " Li jiye Dr. Mishra, pehle apne mujhe iss kaam mein lagaya, ab apko khud iss situation se deal karna hai, kisi aur ke liye..." Unable to understand what does he mean, Naina gives him a quizzical look, waiting for him to elaborate. Understanding her look, Rajveer replies, "Main bhi yahan isiliye hun! Actually I was helping Dr. Mishra in choosing an outfit". Rajveer feels that he is feeling relaxed, after having explained her, the reason of him being here with Dr. Mishra.

"Cadet Singh, ab jab aap aa hi gayi hain, to please help me out in choosing an outfit" says Dr. Mishra, picking up a new outfit from the bed. Picking up a new outfit from the bed, walking towards Dr. Mishra, so that now she is standing between, Dr. Mishra and Captain Rajveer, Naina picks up a red saree kept amongst Dr. Mishra's collection. Handing it over to Dr. Mishra, she suggests, " I guess according to the theme, the color is 'red' for the women and black for men, so this goes perfect". "Oh my God! Main to theme ki baat hi bhul gayi thi!"exclaims Dr. Mishra, then continues, "And Captain apne bhi mujhe yaad nahi dilaya!" she scolds Captain Rajveer, mildly. Naina stares at him for fraction of seconds, then drifts her attention to the dresses kept in front of her on the bed, just to avoid any kind of forthcoming eye contact with Captain Rajveer. "Dr. Mishra, aap jab samne hoti hain, to mujhey kahan kuch yaad rehta hai?"Captain Rajveer gives a shy smile, after uttering this flirtatious line. Dr. Mishra and Naina, stare at him, shocked! Captain Rajveer lowers his eyes, feeling immensely shy in front of the ladies. Laughing a little, Dr. Mishra says, " Captain you are hopeless at being a flirt!Apko flirt karna bilkul nahi aata",her statement makes him to feel shy, even more.

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At Boy's hostel

Cadet Yudi walks in a speedy rhythm - left to right, right to left and repeats it innumerable times."Abey kya hua Yudiye? Tu bhatakti aatma ki tarah idhar -udhar kyun bhatak raha hai?"asks Huda, entering the room."Dude aaj Freshers' Party hai!""Han to? Parso decide to ho gya tha, ki tu kya pehnega!" "Dude baat wo nahi hai""To fir?""Freshers' Party hai, aur mere saath wahan jane k liye koi nahi hai!" exclaims Yudi, putting forward his problem. "Abey kaise koi nahi hai? Main hun, Usool Bhai hai aur apna Qaidi bhi to hai?" "Chi... Bro I am talking about lady, you know koi ladki!""Ohh ladki... kyu apni Punjaban aur Phoolan nahi ja rahe kya?""God help me!" utters Yudi, getting irritated. "Abey kya hua bhagwan ko kyu yaad kar raha hai?" "Huda main keh raha hun ki mera koi date nahi hai, aur tu pata nahi kya kehta ja raha hai..." says Yudi, getting irritated, putting forward his problem. "Abey Yudiye, kar di na parayo jaisi baat? Tu mujhey bol k to dekhta. Ek kya dus ladkiyan khadi kar deta tere samne". Then scratching the back of his head, in hero style, he whispers to himself, "haan unn mein se tere saath kon jana chahta, ye dekhne ki baat hoti""What?" "Nahi kuch nahi. Tu ruk, deta hun tujhe partner", saying this Huda leaves.

After sometime he brings a girl cadet of KMA, who introduces herself to Yudi, but Yudi doesn't like her and rejects her. Then Huda brings a few more girls, but he rejects them all. In some cases the girl rejects Yudi. One girl comes, who straight away hugs Yudi. Feeling awkward and uncomfortable, Yudi breaks free the hug and even goes upto saying, "Sorry behn! Main kisi aur ko dhundh lunga"

Hearing the word 'behn' the girl cadet bursts out, "Main tujhe behn dikhti hun?" Then turning towards Huda, she warns Huda "Huda aaj to kar lia, ayinda aisa mazak kia na mere saath, to tu pitega mujhse"! Warning Huda and giving a last angry look to Yudi, the cadet leaves the room. "Arey! Arey sunn to kudiye...", Huda runs after her.
As Yudi gets alone in his room, he punches the wall hard, out of frustration. After doing so he shouts "aau... aau..." in pain. Sitting on the bed, he almost starts weeping out of frustration, that he has no date, to take along on Fresher's Day. Suddenly Dr. Shalini enters his room straight away, without knocking and starts saying "Cadet Yudi..." before she could continue, frustrated Yudi grabs her by her arms, looking into her eyes, he says in a romantic way, "kya aap mere saath Fresher's Party mein chalengi?" The sudden assault makes Dr. Shalini to stop breathing altogether, for almost a minute. It's after Yudi snapping his fingers in front of her eyes, that she gets back to her normal self.

"Cad..." clearing her voice, she closes her eyes. Opening them, she says hesitantly, "Cadet main apke saath..." Before she could complete, Yudi joints his hands in front of her and starts pleading "Ma'am please mana mat karna aap"! Unable to decide what is she feeling more - happy or surprised, Dr. Shalini hides her smile and holding his joined hands that are pleading her, she says "Alright Cadet! I'll accompany you okay. Don't worry." Having heard that, Yudi embraces Dr. Shalini into a warm hug, in excitement. Then leaving her, he says "OK Ma'am main chalta hun, bohot sari tayari karni hai" and leaves excitedly. Dr. Shalini smiles as he leaves, then suddenly creases her brows, a slight smile on her lip. She touches her arms, where Yudi had held her, thinking it's how long since someone touched her like that, someone's touch made her feel like that! Smiling, she shakes her head.

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Walking through the corridor Pooja speaks to herself "Pata nahi Ali manega ya nahi. Agar usne mana kar dia to? Pooja tu soch bhi kyu rahi hai ki wo mana karega ya nahi, tujhe to pata hona chahiye ki wo pakka mana karega. Chal tu darr mat. Jo bhi ho bus bol dio. Tu to sherni hai na apne mummy-papa ki? To bus, jaiyo aur bindaas bol dio ki 'Ali tu mere saath...' " as she was about to complete this line, Ali collides with her outside his room."Arey Pooja ji aap?""Haan... wo... Ali... main... wo... hum...""Arey Pooja ji aap itna atak- atak kar kyu bol rahi hain? Kahiye na kya kehna hai?" "Wo Ali... Tu Fresher's Day pe jayega na aaj?" "Nahi Pooja ji humara bilkul mann nahi hai" "Kyu? Kyu mann nahi hai? Arey ye koi baat hoti hai ki mann nahi hai? Maine jo itna soch-soch kar, itna time lekar tujhse pucha ki tu jayega ya nahi, uski koi value nahi? Tu ne to seedha keh dia ki time nahi hai. Hadd hai!" Pooja almost shouts at him, getting irritated. "Arey Pooja ji aap to gussa ho gayin. Hum to bus soch rahe the. Agar aap kehti hain to chalte hain na hum". Smiling Pooja says, "tu chalega na matlab?" "Han...han hum chalte hain na" "Ali..." shouts Pooja in excitement and was about to embrace Ali into a hug, then hesitating, she drops her hands down, feeling shy, she lowers her eyes. Then again looking at him, she says, "Tujhe pata hai Ali, agar Rohit se main pyar nahi karti na, to pakka mujhe tujhse pyar ho jata. Tu itna cuuutteee... jo hai", she says, pressing his left cheek in excitement. Feeling shy, Ali lowers his eyes and says "chalein?" Smiling, Pooja indicates a 'yes'.
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaha...Captain Rajveer..how sweet..Naina ko sb clear kar dena chahate he... So there will be no MUs😆😆..Vaise we have ankhen band karke barosha on u captain😉..naina ko bhi ho jayega..but Naina superb timing..
I m seriously enjoying ur updates including Dr Ritu.. And as u said this time she will handle with almost care 😉😉.

Yar I have to learn new words.😉.tareef karne ke liye is ff ki😆.




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