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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Awesome update
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Update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Nice start...:)
Different n interesting...:)
Do update soon next part...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
awesome concept⭐️⭐️
definitely continue this😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
ohh starting me hi mystery
good
I like it
kria n her bros convo was good
n then when achanak se rey uske saamne aaya tab.uske expression
were too good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

finally got to read the story on kr...so love the story

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Originally posted by: ramya.reddy

omgg another new Kr story yaaayy
another fab concept
tittle looks unique
and kria and elliot conversation was nice
the way they bickering was so cute hehe
and when he said rey name and said how much he miss old days tab kria chup hogaye
that means something big happened in past
reveal it soon :p
and when kria lands and searching fr Austin tab suddenly kria ko rey ki awaaz sunaai de
when she get to know ki its not her imagination reyaansh sach mein haii
she is shocked to see him
waiting fr next update
waiting eagerly
this one is wow

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Edited by KrazyRedMary - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: don girls

Awesome
Nice start
Update soon

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Originally posted by: --megs_arsha--

res
unres
finally... 😛

Awesum story sissy...
Elliot n kria's convo was amazing... Such a sane convo I can never imagine me n my bro talking so sanely... 😔 😆

hmmm.. tou kria n reyansh have a romantic past... I think so... I know ki aisa he hoga... 😛 😆

N m sure upcoming episodes are going to b full of kriyansh romance.. 😛

Yar USA... Fir se... Mujhe b aana h vahan... 😭 n reading stories of which characters live there is adding fuel to my wish... 😔

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Originally posted by: Dead_Nightmare

Nyc start
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Originally posted by: krarshanaval

READ THE CONCEPT AND CHAPTER TOGETHER OF KRIYAANS SS IT IS FABULOUS
AND WONDERFUL... THEY WAS ALL SWEET TALK OF HER SISTER KRIYA AND BROTHER ELLITOTE... AND AFTER TRAVEL FOR 4 HOUR BY TRAIN AND WAS IRRIRATE
BY NOT FINDING AUSTIN AT THE STATION AND MEET THE PERSON WHOM DID NOT WAS
EXCEPT TO AARIVE IS REYAANSH AND TWO CLASP UP AT STATION... WOW
AWESOME AND AMAZING... DO CONTINUE SOON

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Originally posted by: anjali22

Awesome update

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Originally posted by: anjali22

Awesome update

Like it
Update next part soon

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Originally posted by: grungta11

Nice start...:)

Different n interesting...:)
Do update soon next part...:)

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Edited by KrazyRedMary - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriYaansh-ArSha

awesome concept⭐️⭐️
definitely continue this😃😃

Thanks! Will update soon.

Originally posted by: kriapatel

ohh starting me hi mystery
good
I like it
kria n her bros convo was good
n then when achanak se rey uske saamne aaya tab.uske expression
were too good

Thanks! Will update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Outside Seattle Amtrak Station...

"H..how.. are you here?" I finally asks looking back up at him. I find him looking at me with an amused expression. "Why? I am here to pick you up. Elliot told me to do it," he replies as he frowns, "Do you have any issues, Ria?" he ask as he takes another step invading my space. "Not at all, " I say quickly as I grab my bag and walk out from the shade right into the rain.

"Shit!" I cursed as I felt the raindrops hit me and immediately soaking me. For the first time, I was glad I was wearing black so I won't be transparent. I was trying to find his car without him. I have no idea how I am going to survive the hour-long drive home as we don't live in the downtown. As I was lost in my thoughts, I suddenly felt a cold hand around my waist that I felt till my skin because of my wet clothes as I got plaster into a hard chest. Ready to fight, I look up to see Rey looking down at me.

His eyelashes have rainwater on it making it exquisite as he looks down at me blink again and again to unblock his vision. His black shirt was soaked kissing his chest. He runs one hand through his hair pushing it off his face. "What do you think you are doing?! Look you got us both wet!" he exclaims as he drags me to his car and beep it open he first motion me to get in and then he puts my back on the back seat and come back sit on the driver seat.

He pulls a box of tissue from the back seat and put it on the dashboard. We both pull a bunch of it out and start drying our hands and face. I couldn't do it much as the tissues fell on my lap as I shivered from the cold. I felt his gaze fell on me. He put the key and turns on the engine, "It will heat up soon," he tells me as he turns the heat on. I nod as I look out as I forced my walls to come up again with him.

I felt him shook his head as he holds my seat from his right hand. I turn to look at him and freeze as his was inches away from mine. I saw his gaze travel from my face full of water droplets to my red nose to my quivering lips and then back to my eyes. I immediately look away ahead. "Let's go, Elliot must be waiting for us," I say my throat suddenly got dry.

I saw from my side vision that he nods and pull a jacket from the back he hands it to me. He moves it towards me, "Wear it or you will get sick," he says without looking at me. "No, thank you. I am fine. Let's go, please," I said with a desperation in my voice as he sharply looks at me. "Why are you so intent on going back ASAP?" he ask looking right in me though I continue to look ahead.

"Please, let's go," I repeat as I continue to look at the rain walloped the windshield and fast as if making sure that I stay here and have this conversation than letting me run away. I felt his anger come out in waves to me as he grip my chin in between two of his fingers and turn me to look at me. "When I am talking to you, look at me!" he says furiously. "Elliot will be waiting for us," I say as I look right in the eye refusing to let my feelings come out.

"What is wrong with you? I am Rey! Your friend!" he says almost in disbelief like he has no idea what is wrong. "No! You are Elliot's friend! I am Elliot's sister! I just his dumb stupid sister who has a stupid crush on you and runs around you all the time irritating you," I say bitterly as I look right in his eyes hinting at something in the past. I saw the shock and maybe pain that cover his face but still continue, "So, to answer your question Mr. Sandras, nothing is wrong with me. I just don't talk much with strangers," I end as I shove his hand off me as I turn to look out the window.

I felt his eyes on me for the longest of time. Slowly, he leans close, and I turn to him and give him the coldest look ever. He stopped and kept staring in my eyes. I was the first one to break it as I couldn't take it anymore. A second later, I felt his jacket being dropped on me and he sit back and starts the car and pull out the parking lot As he drives through Seattle traffic, I open the window and put my head back closing my eyes feeling rain drop hit my face. I slowly slip back into the past.

Naina nu pata hai
The first time when they met at her dad's funeral.
Naina di khata hai
She was hugging her brother when she opened her eyes and met his eyes.
Sanu kis gal di phir
His eyes held compassion for her as he felt her pain.
Mildi khata hai
She closes her eyes and open them, and he was gone like a broken dream.



Nind ud jaawe, chain chhad jaawe
Her eyes snap open as if woken from a nightmare.
Ishq di faqiri jad lag jaawe
As she runs a hand down her face, she turns to her right and sees him.
Nind ud jaawe, chain chhad jaawe
Feeling eyes on himself, he turns to her, and their eyes met.
Ishq di faqiri jad lag jaawe
This time he turns his gaze away back on the road as she turns her gaze out also.

Aye mann karda ae thagi thoriya
"We are here," he says as he waits for her to get off.
Aye mann karda ae seena zoriyan
She snaps head to look at him never realizing when they got home lost seven years back.
Aine sikh laiyan dil diyan choriyaan
She nods and mumbles a thanks as she grabs her suitcase and runs to the house.
Aye mann diyaan ne kamzoriyaan
As she runs in the rain far and far away from him, there is a part of her that wants to run back into his arms.

Aye mann diyaan ne kamzoriyaan
He sighs as he lets her run away from him without a fight. He slips his hand into the jacket's pocket that he gave and pulled out a friendship bracelet made of white and red thread with initials K.R as he press a kiss on it and watches her slip into the house.



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Edited by KrazyRedMary - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
nice update
nxt update jaldi dena
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
awesome update so they both have deep feelings fr each other bt there is a past issue reveal the mystery soon n really loved the update update nxt prt soon

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