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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Great start :)

Read both the chapters :)

Awesome :)

Very nicely written :)

Loved it :)

This is something fresh and new :)

Amazing :)

Update soon :)

Thanks for the PMs :)

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Simi and Nil are cute :)
Oh wow! Finally Taani saw Rey
Now I can't wait for Taarey to come face to face with each other
Lovely update

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sonali

@Sona_loveVD

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

awesome ...
loved the chapter
waiting for taarey meet
updt soon

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sneharjun92

@sneharjun92

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

awesome update. loved it.

rey is now kind of friends with simi n nil..

he was remembering his moms reaction when he told her that he wants to join army. but she did not recognized him. it pained him.

his uncle is clueless for reason behind rey's decision.

rey was looking for taani...

taani saw rey when he introduced himself.

she is guilty n wondering how to face him.

waiitng for next part.😊

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Shrisha

@...Shrisha...

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

awesome story

this is beyond amazing

army boot camp my favourite genre

i always loved reading such stories

and this plot is amazing

loved each and every line of it

Taani's love for her father

Rey's nervousness everything was just perfectr

update soon

thanks for the pm

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

damn interesting dear

loved it all scenes

are beautifully portray

lovely too good

exited for next

update soon n pm me

take care

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Mon_tr

@Mon_tr

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

superb update
waiting for taarey meet
update soon
sorry for late commenting

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TR_lovebirds

@TR_lovebirds

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Both updates were awsum...
Taani and rey's emotions were beautifully described...
Liked simi and nil's fight...
Waiting for taarey meet...
Update soon...

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CrazyForAmar

@CrazyForAmar

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

amazing prologue

it is really mysterious

and concept looks interesting

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CrazyForAmar

@CrazyForAmar

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#90

chapter-1

great start

felt bad for taani

finally taani reached her destination

lets see what happens next

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