Collision - A MaNan Fan-Fiction Ch-11, pg-31

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moonstonespirit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Loved the bro-sis bonding!!

So Manik n Eric are friends? Best friend and his little sister!! Wonder ho eric will take it.

Thanks for PM

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HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

I just loved the conversations between the bro and Sis...her insecurities and his asusrances and vice versa..I am some how confused abt Manik...is he friend to Eric...is he the one who was there at the door...

if so, it will be interesting to see how Manik will try to be friends with Nandini or more , and Eric is in between..

Thank You so much for narratign Nandini's current situation and now waiting for Manik's

Loved it and u penned it amazingly..thank you 👏👏👏

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Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Manik is a friend.. Isn't he? It's so well written
Loved it! Specially how they refer to each other

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..
Okay so you finally wrote Manik's POV and here too Manik wears a mask. Nice update Shenz😊
I am just waiting for them to meet again, i wanna see Nandini's reaction coz she is still apprehensive if she really wanna meet him again or not😃

P.S Sorry for unreserving late. Stuck with padhai😳

Thank you so much. I will be hopeful that you get to see their encounter soon.

Bold- No worries about that at all. Personal life and studies, for sure comes as the first priority to any human being.

Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..
Shenz, it was great😃
This kind of brother sister relation is very cute and yes Leo and Manik both are jerks😆
I wish that the guest is Manik with his signature grin sticked on his face😉😆

Sigh! Thankfully, it turned out to be worth the read.

Well tell me who isn't the jerk in the male population? *eye-rolls*

Oh! I won't comment anything about who the guest it.. but I love the assumptions and guesses that are been thrown out here. Well, he had a signature grin, I will try to get that incorporated as well, in case I can 😆

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Interesting..

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Well Written Update..

Thank You :)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Deverap
That was lovely
I just loved it
Please update soon
I'm waiting

Thank You so much! :)

Originally posted by: Deverap
That was awesome.
Thanks for the pm
Lol I hope it is manik at the door and he is Eric's best friend.
It will be too much fun that way.
I really appreciate your writing girl
It is very nice and refined
I want a lot of manan scenes
Missing them badly
And I want you to try a little bit of humor
Your story is a little serious
Just a little suggestion hope u won't mind bye

Thank You. I am glad it was good enough, and also that you find my way of jotting down the thoughts nice.

I did expect that. I knew people would miss MaNan. But that's how this was supposed to be. I will try to keep it in mind though I cannot assure every time MaNan being there around, in all the chapters. But I will certainly try.

You found it serious, sorry but I surely didn't intend to, it's just the way the two siblings are.. you know they are strangers and suddenly been put under the same roof.. the air thickens. But I will do make the upcoming scenes lighter and more of humor intended to it. AT least to the level I can try, I will.

Thanks for the suggestion, I surely don't mind any of it. I never do. 😊

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Smiley_23
Hey...
It is very entertaining to read the entire stroll from Manik's point of you...enjoyed reading it...

Please do continue writing and post next update as soon as you can...

Thanks, And you surely are updated for the future updates. 😊

Originally posted by: Smiley_23
ahhh that is a very interesting update... loved the bonding between Nandini and Eric...
so who is the Good morning guest?? Leo, Shelly or THE MANIK MALHOTRA???😆😆😆

waiting for the next update..

Thank You so much. Ah! The Morning Guest, let it be for you all to guess and find out in the next chapter. 😆

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: 19dishayadav
It's always fun to read viewpoints of both the protagonists. It was a lovely update!

Thank You. I am glad you enjoyed the way it's portrayed.

Originally posted by: 19dishayadav
Frankly, I think the pace of the chapter was a bit slow but necessary at the same time.

We would have to wait longer for the next update, hai na? :(

I am sorry if the pace seemed unjustified and dragged. I will try to improve on it.

Well, not really to wait long.. but the updates have to wait for a few days time. I am in a mess of a situation and need to schedule things before I kick start or announce any formal schedule for this story.

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Standingstill
Hey,, 👏 awzm start,, eagerly waiting for the next chapter.. Continue soon

Thank You.

Originally posted by: Standingstill
That's Manik hain nah?
I luv d bro - sis bonding. It's really adorable.
I hope Eric get to know abt Leo n punch him hard
Bw ua story z refreshing dear, waiting for next update

Am I suppose to reveal before the chapter does it to you? I don't think so.

Poor Leo would be so heartbroken to hear things like this about himself. 🥺

Well, I am really thankful you find it worth the read and your time for sure.

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: gauriangel
Oh u started a Ss on it..cool
loved manik s pov..

Yes, I did 😆

Originally posted by: gauriangel
I had almost forgotten abt this story..
Good u r updating it...but pls be regular...

Eric n nandini cute bhai behan...

N no guesses for who the uninvited guest is??

Manik

Sorry about that. Okay! Now that's a problem because this one gets uncertain updates due to my uncertain schedule.. but I will try to get back to it.

That's a cute reply. Anyways, Thank a lot for letting me know all of this. I will certainly work on being more 'regular'.