FF: Itna Karona Mujhe Pyaar-2|Part 3|11/11

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All the chappals and whatever is coming by my way, please change the direction to that of Vani's. I just casually told her that I am reading my old FF, Itna Karona Mujhe Pyaar and she is like write a sequel to it. And I am as always as, like a good friend agreed to her and am posting this.

Well the idea is quite old. I got this idea when I saw the episode where Arnav forced Khushi to marry him and now I am penning it down. Uske Liye Thanks, Angel.

So I hope that you will like this FF as you liked Itna Karona Mujhe Pyaar, which still remains to be one of my most popular FFs. Thanks a lot for your love and support.

Love,
Yagya

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Sneak Peek of Part 1
Part 1
Sneak Peek of Part 2
Part 2
Sneak Peek of Part 3
Part 3




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Prologue

" You will have to marry me, for 6 months with no physical relationship." demanded Arnav Singh Raizada, who was nothing but an over-protective brother and a ruthless business man at the moment.

" I know you are bad at jokes Arnav, but this bad, I just realized." laughed out Khushi Kumari Gupta, who thought this was one more memorable moment which Arnav was creating for her as he was doing since the wedding rituals of Akash and Payal started.

" I mean what I said Khushi. And if you don't agree to my conditions, your sister will remain bereft of both my brother and his love through out her life. Would you want it to happen, Khushi Kumari Gupta? Especially after you caused her marriage to break before too?" Arnav chose to use emotional blackmail to make Khushi do what he wanted her to. But much to his surprise, there was vague serenity in her face and her composure remained fixed against what he thought of her reactions to be.

" If this is the case Mr.Raizada then so be it. I have neither regretted the fact that her first marriage broke due to me and neither will I regret if this one breaks and you know why? Because a person who cannot take his stand for the person who is leaving everything for the new relationship established between, clearly doesn't deserve my Jiji. And also, how can I be assured that my Jiji will be happy, even if I marry you with you and Shyamji around?" Khushi said as even the mention Shyam brought disgusted emotions on her face.

" You love being double-faced don't you? Telling that loser Shyam Manohar Jha to divorce my Di so that you can get him and pretending to hate him in front of me? Not bad, Khushi Kumari Gupta. You are quite manipulative." Arnav said with disgust while moving close to Khushi, while the confident look didn't leave Khushi's face.

"I thought that you love your sister Mr.Raizada. But you proved me wrong. You want your only sister to continue being married to a person, who can get engaged to another girl after feigning his bachelor-hood and staying at her home as a paying guest? I thought you were smart Mr.Raizada but you proved me all wrong." Khushi stated with a slight sarcastic smirk on her face, hiding her tears in it.

" What do you mean?" Arnav questioned, startled at the new piece of information.

" Your great and amazing Jeejaji aka Shyam Manohar Jha, stayed at my house after lying about his relationship status to be single and got engaged with me. But unfortunately for him, I found out the truth about him, being the husband of your sister and broke the engagement. I thought that he will become a better person after that lecture of mine but as they say, a dog's tail can never be straightened and your Jeejaji's cunning nature cannot be altered. And today when I saw your message to come to the terrace, I thought you were calling me, but instead I found Mr.Jha there, who tried to force me get married to him or else he will get Anjaliji killed.

You both don't have a lot of difference, do you? Both of you tried to forcibly marry me by threatening about the people whom I love. But the only difference was that I hate Shyam more than anyone else in the world and I love you more than anyone else in the world..."

Khushi's word automatically came out of her mouth, but as the realization dawned upon her with Arnav's gasp of shock, she immediately corrected herself, "...but you yourself chose to become the person whom I hate more than Shyam now. Thanks a lot for making me realize that I lost my heart to a person who knows only how to break it with his words and actions and trample it under his feet. Ab Mohabbat Inn Ankhon Mein, Jo Aap Ko Doondh Thi Rahi, Unn Mein Dard Bann Kar, Nafrat Bann Kar Reh Jayenge. I hate you Mr.Raizada more than you can imagine, for doubting my character and playing with my emotions." Khushi stated while leaving Arnav in a confused state. His heart told him that the person whom he have fallen for couldn't have done that but his mind, only thought of his Di.

But this time Arnav Singh Raizada's heart won by breaking itself and drowning itself in the sea of remorse and guilt. All the excuses of Shyam in the name of work completed the puzzle. His Harvard mind could remember seeing the hatred and disgust in the eyes of Khushi when they met with Shyam. And he also knew that a girl as idealistic and moralistic as Khushi can never snatch anyone's husband especially of the person whom she saw as her sister figure.

There was realization and there was redemption. There was willingness to correct the mistake and the love to provide the strength.Will Arnav be able to win over Khushi?

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How was it?

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WHY IS IT INCOMPLETE WHAT IS AFTER "you love being" ???
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Originally posted by: PinkPenguinxo

WHY IS IT INCOMPLETE WHAT IS AFTER "you love being" ???



I am still writing it!
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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni



I am still writing it!

ok lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...
that was
:O

the best prologue u ever wrote👏

"cant more" 😆 update sooonnn ohmg
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Originally posted by: PinkPenguinxo

wow...

that was
:O

the best prologue u ever wrote👏

"cant more" 😆 update sooonnn ohmg



I knew this was coming! You and your 'can't more'! It is also the longest prologue I ever wrote! Thanks a lot, re!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesomeness Di,
what a awesome prologue

i love khushi scene were she shut arnav

i don't have a word for you

because i'm speak-less😭..

i'm very engaged to read next coming updates

please continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue and good start.
Wished Khushi would have stood up for herself in the serial ike in this prologue. Loved Khushi and her guts for speaking the truth without scumming for the blackmail and shuttting Arnav.

Continue soon. Looking forward to read this.


Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
Can't wait for chapter 1

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