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Barun_Superfan

@Barun_Superfan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Amazing prologue...pls start the story soon 👏

& wow, Arnav is so cuteee

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

awesome ...can't wait to read more...

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@.LadyHitler.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Ohmg!!!! This is... Wait! Let me first tell you how much i loved your narration style!! You've got readers in this? Wow! I mean it just got me hooked to this instantly! I was excited reading every word of the update!
Good idea!
Coming to the prologue, interesting!
Only thing that shocked me is that Khushi was adressing Arnav as her brother! I can't even imagine that in my dreams! Lol
So Arnav has feelings for her! Good! Ye Khushi toh buddu hai! Samajthi hi nahi!
How can she ignore such a handsome man?
Excited for the next one yaar!!

Edited by .LadyHitler. - 9 years ago

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

What an awesome prologue. Absolutely loved it! I like that they know each other and that Arnav is already in love with her and had a different avatar. As much as I love ASR, it's nice to read about a softer Arnav who apparently is a good baker 😆 Oh and Khushi has already 'bhai-zoned' him? 😆 Looking forward to this.

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Awesome update
Loved the start
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

oh boy ...

this story looks like its gonna be a whole lot of fun to read

Arnav likes khushi

but shes completely oblivious

n thinks of him as a bro figure?!?!?!?!?

now hes had enough n is gonna make her see

looking forward to u continuing

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Dadi is a minus

nani is a plus

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: KUMARIASHI
interesting...plz update soon...bt i m confuse...how can manorama be chachi and mami at the same time...if she is garima's sister then she will be khushi's masi na...plz dont mind i was just confused so jst ask you...sorry if you feel bad...

are they married to brothers from same family

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: rk2127
The CS and sory line sound funny and interesting.

Just one question, isnt should be 'Masi' mom' sister rather than 'Mami' mom's brothers wife? Just thought to clarify.

Looking forward to this new journey.

need more clear info